Reviews by Roon1
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

I totally loved this snapshot of their lives together.  A typical happy family.  Totally wonderful.  Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust

I love your story so.  Hearing about Alice's kid and Esme's words to Bella was rather emotional.  Emmett is still a scream and such a bad influance on Jack. :-)

Edward is still growing up but then he is a man. LOL.  

I like strong Bella very much.  I am glad she knocked some sense into Edward and Emmett. Poor Carlisle, does he not have enough to cope with?

Until the next time.

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

Oh I am fairly sure Bella will touch him again, eventually.  Another wonderful chapter and a surprising one.  Loved it.

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

I shed a tear for Esme.  Other than that the chapter was wonderful.  Dear Edward can still act like a 5 year old, bless him.  Bella is great and is totally right to encourage Carlise to find someone else.  He doesn't want to be alone and why should he?  I am really going to miss this story when its done.

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Lovely ending. A new generation joining in on the fun. So glad Bella and Edward are still together.  I have loved this story and will miss it.  Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

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This is Edward's side of Dreaming of Edward. Many have wondered what was Edward thinking when he would visit Bella at night, well here's your chance. Be warn like with Dreaming of Edward, this is not a light and fluffy story. It has bad langueage and sex as the main theme! So dont read it if you dont like that sort of thing! These chapters were originaly sent out as a reward for reviewing but now I have a stories worth. Cannon couples, no incest or slash or rape!  OOC

This story doesn't stand alone you must read Dreaming of Edward to follow it.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15544 Read Count: 5155
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2010 Updated: 08 Jan 2011
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Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well I am glad to see his evening ended well:-)

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Contract

Does this mean what I think it means? "To achieve this, He may have unfettered use of my body any time, any place, in front of anyone; to keep or to give away, as He will determine."  If it does, this means he is likely to share?  



Author's Response:

Bella questions that herself and makes her opinion known, and Edward explains why that is in there, this all happens at their coffee date in chapter 7.... check it out...thanks for the question ,,,lml

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Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment

I am submissive, hear me roar can of vibe going on here, as long as its in a respectful quiet manor and when allowed to speak.  I am sure Edward was delighted.



Author's Response:

I think he was ...thanks for reading ..lml

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Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Bella's journal - 2nd entry (punishment)

Bella will try harder next time as disappointing her Master stings worse than the physical punishment.



Author's Response:

Yeah...it sure does. Thanks for leaving a comment ...lml

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: photos

Loved the pictures.

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions

You are funny.  Being Irish does not mean you get bound with rope and get your arse whipped.  Being a submissive means that you have agreed that a Dom can do that to you, if they wish.  A woman may like a man in control of the relationship.  It does not mean, she wants him to come at her with nipple clamps and dildos.  See the difference?  Bella chose to be a sub, it was something she actively chose by signing a contract agreeing to all sorts of control and kinky fuckery.

So let me get this straight. Edward, the Dom thinks harsh lessons need to be learnt by the sub but when he messes up its ok to feel a bit guilty and hope the woman who is subservient to him won't mind too much.  LMAO

Again I had to laugh.  When talking about control. "Does a devote Christian or Vegan have difficulty taking responsibility for their life?"  It is different, we all live by rules and regulations but the unless they are into BDMS, neither a vicar or vagan will come at you with a whip, or ejectulate in your face because you did not obey.  Again see the difference.  A Dom's control is personal and how he exercises it depends on his personality.  Its not the quiet the same as religious or ethical beliefs.

Moreover BDMS is about SEX and CONTROL its purely carnal in its function and expression or are you going to tell me its has a spiritual aspect?    Is subspace the subs equivalent of prey and mediation?  Is bondage a form of pilgrimage?  The butt plug and dildo, navana.  Maybe it is but not on a spiritual level.  

Thank you for this I really enjoyed it but maybe not for the right reasons.

 

 



Author's Response:

Not all D/s relationship involve what you would typically call BDSM. There is always some form of control, that could be in a mental capasity such as "Keep your arms over your head"  or  "Don't open your eyes"  .. It usually is in a more physical way, by the use of restraints. Either way the sub agrees to it and enjoys it.

When pain comes into play that can also be a wide range from simple hair pulling and spankings to bull whips....also the sub agrees and enjoys it.

Everything else that come into play within the confinds of the relationship is totally done for mutual pleasure and gradification. When he says "come here my little slut" those five words make you wet...(i'm not kidding) four words that make you even wetter ..."get on your knees" ...  the three words are .."Now, service me" ,,,,two words ... "good girl" ...the single word isn't even a word it's just a grunt and when he looks down at you with a look of pure contentment and lust, you are ready to cum without him even touching you...

That is a D/s lifestyle and your right it is purely carnal but it is also deeply ingrained in your nature. Some people would want to try a D/s relationship for the (kinky) sex, but quickly find that they just don't have the nature to give up control ..so they only take part in the kinky fuckery (thank you Icy for the term) and that's ok. It's all about mutual pleasure, satisfaction and fulfillment.

Edward beat himself up - more for his lack of judgement, (remember he didn't break any rules, only his own sense of proper care) ...Bella not only broke but dismantled the rules and she had to pay the price for that, and a Dom is only as good as his word. Once it's said he can't take it back (without good reason)...Cuming on Bella's face was necessary, if he would not have lived up to his word on that point how is Bella going to know that she can trust him at his word on anything else he says?

You are correct the vegan will not come at you with a bullwhip, they just shout at you with a bullhorn and call you murders for eating meat. The Christain will not restain you with rope but they will restrain you from enjoying your life with all the guilt they try to throw at you and the rules they seem to feel the need to impose. Make no mistakes there are rules and regulations in any lifestlye.

Sit next to a vegan and eat Veal, (smiles...) see what they say.... Tell a  Christain  that you support same sex marriage (grins..) you had better watch out because in both those circumstances those nice people are going to turn very nasty and would wish they had a bullwhip so they could beat you literally and not figurativly ..and even then how often has violence erupted over such things?

So my friend you and I will have to agree to disagree on these points. I'm glad you like the story and believe it or not I'm glad you voice your opinion. A little contraversy is a good thing ...Anyway a new chapter will be up later this morning. have a great day ..lml 

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella seems to be in a state of near panic most of the time.  If she is so afraid may be she should try a be a bit more careful so she does not cut herself.



Author's Response:

Yes, poor clumsy Bella. lol She will have to be extra careful when she's in school. Hopefully, her fear will start to fade over time.

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Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I know Bella has a right to be worried and anxious but I have to admit she is starting to get on my wick a bit.  I wonder who will save her from the vampire (bet its James).



Author's Response:

LOL. Don't worry, she'll change or there wouldn't be a point to this story.

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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Bella just as she was calming down and getting to know Edward and the Cullen's.  Lets hope Tanya gets her ass kicked and soon.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, I agree. Tanya needs a serious ass-kicking. LOL 

Thanks for reading/commenting =)

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just love Edward.  Glad Tanya got told to stuff it.



Author's Response:

Glad you like Edward! Thanks=)

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What an exciting chapter.  Looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm relieved that you liked! I had mixed feelings about this chapter.

I'll update sooner, most likely will be a smaller chapter tho...this one was a monster to write. lol

Thanks for reading/commenting/liking

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great and crazy chapter:-)  Who is killing Bella lookalikes?  I think its James.  I wonder what Edward will do to Victoria when he finds out it was her that hurt Bella.

I am glad Peter and Charlotte are in your story.  They are always good fun.



Author's Response:

Thank you! =) I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.

I agree, Peter and Charlotte are always good fun. =) *lips are sealed* about the vamp killer. lol  But I will reveal soon, and maybe throw in some clues beforehand. Edward is going to be sooooo furious when he finds out about Victoria.

I hope you'll enjoy the next chapter too.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

I have no idea what he should use on her next but if they are going to be doing that everyday her bits might fall off. LOL.  Glad to see Esme and Edward starting to make up.  Looking forward to finding out what Edward does to Bella.

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

If you ask me those attackers got away lightly.   I enjoyed this chapter but I think I am with Esme on this and that Edward is being selfish regarding Bella.  I cannot wait to see how things work out.

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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

This was enjoyable.  I hope Edward is not going to be too rough a dom.  



Author's Response:

He's had enough years of research to know not to hurt her in a nonpleasureable way. Thank you for reading it and I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

Dear me, they both lose their v card and both become upset because of the punishment.  It looks like they were made for each other LOL.



Author's Response:

I truly feel they were made for each other. Thank you for reading and reviewing. More to come real soon!

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Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Awww this was rather sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! More to come real soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! More to come real soon!

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

Wonderful chapter.  He is proving to be a rather good and kind master so far.  I hate BDSM stories where there is a lot of whipping and spanking.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You dont have to worry there will be no excessive whipping or spanking in this story. I have been talking with people who live this lifestyle and I want to portray it acurately. The spanking done for pleasure is one thing, but too much of it makes the lifestyle look bad. That's not what the life is about. So you can count on me to keep it real and not abusive! Thank you again!

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Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

Wonderful chapter.  Its good that he does care for her so well.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wonderful to have you back. I loved this chapter and am so looking forward to more. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

I have to say I found Tanya trying to rape Edward very funny.  Poor Edward, nevermnd, Bella washed him clean.  Does Bella really want a 24/7 D/s relationship?  Its not what she signed up for.  Liked the lap dancing etc.

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

There seems to be quite a mystery there.  Will Jasper come across the scent of James and co?  What of Bella?  Will he get over himself and change her or leave her in a couple of years?  Cannot wait to find out.

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

Wow a jealous Edward is a hot Edward but he is not being very fair to Bella.  Is it reasonable that she cuts her friends for him?  Hmmm

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Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

Loved the chapter and was very happy to see an update.

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom

Loved the chapter and the outtake.  Its really nice to see Edward and Bella, moving closer to each other.  Maybe that will ease some of their fears and insecurities.  Until the next time.

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved this insight into Bella's history. It was very illuminating.  Thank you for sharing.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Anytime you can update is a pleasure.  I can hardly wait to find out what has happened but understand you have other commitments.  Off to Amazon now.  until the next time.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this is scary LOL.

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow just wow. Any chance of someone putting a bullet through Emmett's head?  



Author's Response:

Eventually...

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Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG what a chapter. It was heartbreaking. 

 

 



Author's Response:

At least she sees now that he's more than just an abusive husband.

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Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Its so lovely to have an update.  After Emmett, Jasper is a prince amongst men!



Author's Response:

Thanks for being patient. Jasper is kind of yummy isn't he?

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

One's heart breaks for Bella but she has at least found a safe place, for now at any rate. Fantastic chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Welcome back and with such a lovely chapter, a slightly jealous Jasper is such fun.

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my Emmett is an evil git. A great chapter, thank you.



Author's Response:

Yes he is. Glad you like the story!

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was a lovely Jasper and Bella moment.  Lovely to have an update.

 

I am so sorry to hear about your mother and your own ill-health.  When life decides to stick it to you, it doesn't mess about.  I wish you and yours health and happiness.  Until the next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135059
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That's some story Lauren and Jessica told.  If they knew who took Bella they should have told someone.  Its inexcusable

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Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this is dark.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is:)

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good lord, the poor girl.  I hope that monster is getting his just deserts. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is so sad. Thank goodness Bella has Emmett.  



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is not easy reading but its rather addictive.  I hope there is some light at the end of the tunnel for Bella.



Author's Response:

There is but it's going to be very long tunnel and it won't get any easier for a long time :)

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is indeed a difficult read but you deal with the subject really well.  Poor Bella needs help but what type of help and from whom has me stumpped.  One thing I am sure about, she needs to worry less about other people right now.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Again this was really well done.  The a-hole that did this to her died in a shoot out. That was too good for him.  Poor Emmett has quite the burden in looking after Bella and thank goodness he is.  Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter.  Its good to see your Bella make even baby steps.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I suppose this chapter was almost light and fluffy, in comparison to what has gone before and what is to come.  A little respite before we hear the dreaded truth.  



Author's Response:

Yes, compared to what is to come and what laid before us, this was light and fluffy:(

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Her story is horrific.  Edward's support means so much to her and hopefully will be one of the things that help her recovery.  Looking forward the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

EPOV was good to have.  It also shows much this has effected both families.  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am glad we got to see some of the reasons Bella had such nightmares.  Her desire to keep Edward safe while she was suffering was really sweet. 

Until next time.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Its  really forunate for Bella that she has such good friends.  This was even more important to Bella, as the first teacher was a little thoughtless.  At least the Head and Peter Davies seem a lot more understanding. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor Bella, she is going well considering.  



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Your Bella is certainly a brave one.  It was so sad to see her hurt again.  Jessica and Lauren are both nasty peices of work.  Lets hope they get theirs.

Looking forward to the next update



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What is Carlisle planning for Bella?  I am sure its in her best interest but it sounds as if its going to be really bad.

I cannot help wonder how Will & Cat would think that Bella was a "loose cannon" who would harm their children.  I can understand you want to protect your children from the world's nasties but they know.  I hope they do not get their way, it will harm everyone.

The "kids" at least are 100% supportive.  

What a mess.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Will and Cat are more concerned with Bella becoming violent with Rose and Jasper. :)

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I wonder how Rose and Jasper are going to react to their parents trying to keep them away from Bella.  Not well I think/hope.



Author's Response:

Not well at all!

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh no.  How horrible.  What is the matter with people?



Author's Response:

It's amazing what fear of the unknown will make you do.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You would hope people would be more understanding. 



Author's Response:

:) But they aren't always.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

If it helps but talk about tough love.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

You wrote angry Bella really well. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Baby steps in the right direction perhaps?



Author's Response:

Perhaps:)

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Its going to be a long road to recovery.  Looking forward to Garrett's POV.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This was a really good chapter.  It was nice to see her so much happier.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am so happy for Bella and Edward.  I was surprised that they moved so fast but then again it was totally natural for them.  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Obviously her recovery is going to be a long process.



Author's Response:

Yep:)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good chapter.  Are Lauren and Jessica demented or something? 



Author's Response:

Yes, they are. There is a story there.

Summary:

Outtake for Creating A Mate.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5062 Read Count: 1344
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Gifts

I found this explanation of their powers very enlightening and enjoyable.  Thank you.

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ooooh a touch of jealously perhaps?  Loved the chapter.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! yes just a touch..we will see what Edward thinks next time

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awwww this was so sweet.  I am so glad you got Alice to shout some sense into Edward. LOL.  I also love that your Bella is a tree climbing expert:-)



Author's Response:

gotta love Alice! thank you for the reviews

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OMG.  Who would have thought that Bella could be so impetuous?  What a silly girl.   Poor Edward.  LOL

Have a wonderful Christmas.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start to you your story.  I am looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. Next chapter up tomorrow.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Its so exciting to see what will happen to them when they get to town.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh dear, Edward is going to be a pain isn't he?  Why would he loath Bella and he doesn't even know her.  Good job, Emmett and Alice are sweet.  looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review.. you will find out next chap what Edwards problem is

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved the chapter.  Poor Edward is really conflicted and a bit of an ass.  Hopefully he will pull his head out of his..... soon:=)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Obviously, Edward has forgotten how to behave with woman.  Bella has him not knowing if he is coming or going.  He is in so much trouble. LOL.  

I am really enjoying your story and look forward to the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! He really is lost isnt he? Lets see if she can set him straight LOL

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ooh they are talking, sort of.  Wonderful chapter.  Your Bella is so sweet.



Author's Response:

Thanks Roon Here is the promised teaser:

Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.

I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.

 

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Trust the dastardly Newton, to ruin a beautiful moment.  Its really nice to see Edward get his head out of his bottom and start getting himself together.  Edward and Bella make a lovely couple and that is what I hope they will be soon.  A couple.  

This is such a sweet story, I'm loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Things are progressing nicely with these two ;)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

awww another lovely chapter and they kissed yay.  Now Edward and Bella will be courting as will Alice and Jasper. Happy days.  I bet that snake in the grass Newton has not gone too far.



Author's Response:

You never know with Newton that jerk...I loved that he asked to kiss her like that it was sweet

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This was a lovely chapter.  I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aww that was so sweet.  At least Edward will know not to jump to conclusions again. LOL. 



Author's Response:

I know that poor boy has a lot to learn LOL Thank you!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww, that was another really, really sweet chapter.  I just loved Rosalie's point of view, it was so funny.  Bella is quiet the little matchmaker, isn't she?  I wonder who is watching her?  Is it the dreaded Mike Newton?

Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really loved Rosalies POV too. We will see the mystery person next time mwah...should be up Thurs. or Fri

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Another really enjoyable chapter.

Aww Rosalie and Emmett, were so sweet and now they are courting.  

Bella and Edward are very sweet together as well.  How long before he does ask her to marry him.  In those days surely courting was the prelude to marriage.

The dastardly Newton, is going to try and spoil everything for Edward and Bella. Lets hope his horrid plans fail and he gets a good kicking. LOL

Until the next time.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aww Baby Demetri is born and Edward announce his intention of marrying Bella. Nice one.

I did have to laugh a little at the "sex" talk Alice and Bella had.  I remember my mother telling me that she was such an innocent, that on her wedding night she fainted.  It was the first time she saw my father nude and passed out with the shock.  You cannot even imagine that now days can you?  :-)

Until the next time.

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I really laughed when Bella touched his privates.  It’s just the sort of thing an innocent or wanton would do.  We all know which camp Bella falls into.  Poor Edward, he got all excited. 

I really like the idea of James and Angela, hope that happens soon. 

That was some cliffie you left us with.  Dastardly Newton has our girl.  I hope the guys rescue her soon and Newton gets his!

Until the next time.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was laughing as I wrote it.. I couldnt help but think if I was in her shoes and had no idea what I was doing. I am hoping we see Angela again.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Another evil cliffy indeed.   Poor James, for a moment I thought either Bella or Edward would get hit.  I hope James will be alright, after all he has to marry Angela:-)

Cannot wait for the next update.

 



Author's Response:

I know I feel like the queen of evil cliffies....i promise next chap doesnt have one :) Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This was so very, very sweet.  I loved it.  James and Angela, will be the next happy couple.  Yay.  I am so glad the dastardly Newton got his, about time to.  So looking forward to some weddings.



Author's Response: Thank you! I love James and Angela...I cant wait for the proposals. LOL

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh no not more trouble. LOL.  Lovely chapter, really sweet.  I cannot wait for Edward to ask Bella to marry him.  The sooner they are married the better, if you as me:-)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awww, firstly Jasper is getting closer to getting to marry his Alice.  I really like the idea of Jasper as a Sheriff, yeah that would be very nice in deed. 
As for poor Edward, he needs to get married before he dies of blue balls. LOL.
What do you have in store for James and Emmett?
I wonder what you have planned given Edward and Bella's feelings of impending doom?
So looking forward to finding out.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wonderful chapter.  James is such a sweetie with his Miss Angela.  Poor Edward, he went through the wringer a bit didn't he.  I cannot wait until he asks her. LOL.

Here's wishing you and yours a lovely Christmas.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks...I hope you are yours have a wonderful one too...you may not say that after you read the next chapter though...just saying. LOL  Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awww.  After all the misunderstanding and heartache, the proposal was perfect.

Wonderful chapter.  

Happy 2011 to you.

 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This was lovely.  It was so cool that Edward and Bella are now engaged and so happy.

I love that Jasper is so full of hope and plans for the future.  

I can hardly wait until their are wedding bells.  

Who will be the first to get married?  

I cannot wait to find out.

All the very best

Caroline.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing hon! I am serious contemplating who will be to the altar first, i asked on ff and it seems everyone has different ideas.lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

What a sneaky one. LOL  I love it.  So it looks like the sweet, sweet Jasper & the lovely Alice are going to beat Edward and Bella down the aisle.  I don't think they will mind at all.  Your characters are all far too nice to begrudge anyone their happiness.  Its one of the reasons I love your story so.

Now I can hardly wait for the next chapter. (Jumps up and down with excitment.)  



Author's Response:

they are some of the nicest people i have ever read...sugary sweet. LOL Thanks for all the love and support xx

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

Wonderful chapter.  Loved it, loved Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I was afraid he'd seem a little harsh...but that's on purpose.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

Aww this was so sweet.  I liked out loud at the PJs and Jasper's new fish.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Harry loves chocolate cake. Draco loves what happens when Harry indulges. Add in some bondage and a bit of voyeurism.


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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3452 Read Count: 287
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 01 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very good and I am not usually a fan of slash.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389602
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Love the chapter. It was full of humour and sex. A perfect combination if you ask me.  I cannot wait to see what the crazed Tanya gets up to. :-)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Wow doing that stuff in Bella's dad home is a bit much.  What would have happened if he actually saw what they were doing in the car/in the house?  I don't think that is a way for a responisble Dom to behave.



Author's Response:

Though he´s taken a Dom role this weekend, Edward is doing nothing that Bella hasn´t consented to.  It´s his place to anticipate her needs and she needs and wants him to rule over her with an iron fist.  This weekend is more of a test drive, to see if they like the way it rides!!  Lol!  As far as Charlie´s house goes, 1 out every 3 people have had sex in their parents home, that is so commonplace.  What Charlie doesn´t know won´t hurt him.  Just wait until they christen Carlisle and Esme´s place, now that may end up being a bit much!!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

I am so glad you felt like that about the last bit. LOL.  Loved this chapter.  I cannot remember why Edward, who is pining for Isabella, really hard never went after her?  It seems a bit out of character for him not to go after what he wants.  Anyway I trust that they will get together sooner or later.  The question is will she be willing to be a sub?  Not everyone is into butt plugs, nipple claps and canes and who the hell could blame them?  :=)



Author's Response:

Yeah... Tanya give me hives....lol.. She was everything I wanted, but didn´t deserve. I was a monster. I had a room full of devices that I´m sure she would never understand, much less except. There was a side of me that Isabella could never love. this is why he´s pining from afar....the prologue has yet to be introduced, so they have no idea about the other one´s alternate lifestyles... he does go after what he wants, but you´ve got to remember.. he´s 32 and just realizing he wants more than just the casual.. before he wasn´t looking for committment and he loves her so he wouldn´t risk messing that up...Even the most confident of ppl have there weekness... she´s he kryptonite... only time will reveal... thanks for reading and reviewing....


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo