Reviews by Roon1
Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 226501
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it.  So glad they made up.

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow Carlisle and Esme have taken to this shit like ducks to water. LOL.  Yes please, I would love to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

hey there sweetie, I'm glad you liked it

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
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Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Loved the chapter.

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Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 THE BOX

What a fantastic chapter I loved it.  Lion turning up was brilliant. How is he going to take it when he comes round in the morning. lol 

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
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Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

Wow Bella is one bitter and twisted bad ass.  Makes a change from whim and moaner.



Author's Response:

She won't be doing acting that way in this story. Thanks again, Diane

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Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Room

Wow nasty Bella - I love it.



Author's Response:

She's got to get bitter at some point, huh...thanks for the coffee..... Please stay in touch so I know what your thinking, Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
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Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What a lovely chapter.

Summary:

Taking Bella swim wear shopping was suppose to be easy. But what happens when Charlotte gets more than she bargained for? One Shot for now

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2849 Read Count: 1663
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2010
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Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a hot little number LOL.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Seven- Preaching To The Choir

Brilliant hun. I feel sorry for poor Edward, if I were he and someone broke my dick I would be really pissed at them. lol    I am so looking forward to the next chapter.  In the meantime, I will  just have to imagine Edward with a splinter on his dick. lol  Hugs



Author's Response:

ROONSTER!!!!

Hey gurl! Thanks so much for reading. LOL! Yeah, I think his dick is too numbed and drugged up to be mad. OMG! That image is hysterical. A splint? Really? 

~K

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Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Four - Chutzpah

Poor old, too young Edward. Poor Bella, traped between a rock and a hard place.  Aro needs a good hard whipping. lol 

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Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six - Around and Around We Go

She broke his dick and then laughed her head off. Poor Edward. lmaoooooo



Author's Response:

*snort* Why can't I stop laughing at his expense. It's not funny...a broken dick is serious....LOL

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight - Tread Lightly

Hey hun, this just gets better and better. I am glad Edward's peen is on the mend. lol He is still such a petulant child, he needs his bottom flogged. ;-))

Hugs.



Author's Response:

Roonster!!!! Thanks for reading, sweets! Yes, subward peen is on the mend and will be in working form very, very soon. I'm sure Bella will be more than willing to flog that bottom..God know, I sure as hell do ;))

xoxo

~K

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Twenty Nine- When it rains, it pours

I think Bella should flog Nana! Poor Edward he really is such a wuss. Wonderful chapter hun. 

xx



Author's Response:

Hey, Hon!! yeah, I know...whenever he drops his fear of being judge, he'll be a very good and strong sub!

Thanks for reading, sweetie!! We'll porn later? Yes? ;)

 

xoxo

~K

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Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

Hilarious hun. I cannot believe they just turned up "Bella's a dude?!" bwhahahaha Edward did flip his lid but what I really could not believe was Bella outing him. He should have called Red. lol   Excelllent as always.  

 

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Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne

I loved the chapter.  Edward is hilarious bless him. :)



Author's Response:

Hey, Roonster!!! Thanks for reading, babe! Yes, he's very sarcastic and has such a dry humor about him. He's fun to write!!! 

 

~K

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Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning

Oh no, poor Edward.  I really was not expecting this. *Wipes tear* 



Author's Response:

:( 

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Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Two - Morbidity is the Omission of Sorrow

He was such a big brave boy.  Wonderful stuff hun.



Author's Response:

Thanks, hun!! Brave boy, indeed. 

 

~K

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Epilogue

Awesome hun, totally awesome.  Thank you for sharing.  Hugs.

Summary:

Isabella Swan couldn't care less about Edward Cullen's perverted perception of her relationship with his teenage son, Seth. And yet she keeps finding herself on the defensive with the need to change his mind at every given opportunity.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116998 Read Count: 25021
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 26 Aug 2010
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Date: 05 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am loving this story so far.

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Date: 05 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am surprised she was not fired on the spot but good for her.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward is obviously after her himself.  Awesome.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It looks like Bella should look for another job. lol

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh boy. Brilliant stuff.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Bella looks like she is coming down with something.  Another very enjoyable chapter, thank you.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

A human Edward is nice to see. :D

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very moving.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yeah progress.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sweet chapter.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ooooh jealsous Edward is a right hand full.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh boy, will she stay or will she go?  I canot wait to find out.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor Bella but I wonder if Emmett is setting out to deliberately get Edward jealous, just a thought.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What a mess.  Brilliantly done though.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Will Bella run?  Perhaps not, this is Edward afterall.  I keep waiting for the horrid James to turn up.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Maybe this time its a new start?  I get a feeling the road will still be rocky.  Brilliant stuff.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

She won't be able to walk by the time he is finished with her. lol

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Very enjoyable chapter, thank you.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Poor Seth is really scared of it all blowing up.  

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Seth is being a real pig, a good kick up the bottom would do him no harm at all.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

So, so sad. 

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Seth deserves to be hit. What a horrible mess.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am glad that Seth finally pulled his head out of his bottom.

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

JAKE?  Where the hell did he come from.  Yet another complication?  

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh no Edward jumps to conclusions again.  Talk about star crossed........

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Date: 07 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Nice make up.

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Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Powerful stuff.  I wonder if she will ever tell Edward about James?

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Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh boy, Dimitri is scary.  I love the scene with Edward.

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Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So sad.

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Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Nice chapter.  She seems to have enjoyed getting the tatt.  Since she was asking about spanking, is she thinking of trying it?

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Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice chapter.

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Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Good Chapter.  I loved the bit at the end.  I do hope this is not going to turn into one of those heavy BDSM things.  I can never get my head around someone liking being hit and humiliated.  

PS.  I meet Thumb boys little brother, Pinky finger boy, very disconcerting!

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh no...pinky boy?? lol lol

As far as BDSM, this is a D/s story, they do go to the playroom, however it is not what I would call heavy. With the story I wanted to show the relationship between the two. How they grow in mutual trust, respect, and ulimately love. Edward's need to control and dominate is fulfilled by Bella's need to submit, they are both a little kinky. Check out Bella's limits my extra's page, it's listed as a 2nd story under my pen name, It might give you a better of what will and will not occur. Thanks for reading my story and leaving a comment...lml

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Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good Chapter.  Bella seems to like all that sub stuff.  I cannot help wonder why there are such harsh physical punishments for minor infractions of such made up rules but then I suppose that is where the D,S&M comes into it.  I also wondered about the clamp, surely to have that attached to you esp., with weights for any length of time could cause serious damage?



Author's Response:

...ok. the clamp is just that, there are no weights....she is not ready for that. the dangly things are two little strings with tiny beads that leave a feathery felling across the skin. also remeber that they were only at the club, less then an hour..and he knew she was getting uncomfortable in the car. thats why he wanted her ready upstairs as soon as they got home... the chocolate was her reward for the way she behaved at the club and for taking the clamp as long as she did. it bites when it goes on and stings like hell coming off...but he was there to sooth it....also remember the whole piercing discussion...and toughing up those areas....ok, perhaps i gave away too info.....thanks for reading and as always i will answer what ever questions you have..

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not too much info.  I did ask so thanks for the clarification.

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Nice family event.  Is Edward really going to force to eat foods she does not like, is that not abuse?  What if she is sick?  Damn, you have to be rather committed to the BDSM stuff to put up with all that. However whatever rocks your boat.



Author's Response:

It won't hurt her, and it gets to the point that she belongs to him, it's not abuse becasue she didn't mark it as a hard limit...so that means anything goes..BTW I would have chosen 'You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' for the men to sing...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I cannot in all honesty comment about punishments because as far as I am concerned they are abusive.  I do not care if you agree to them or not.  No one has that right and if you give them that right, I fear for your sanity.   Having said that I liked the other bits of chapter, it seems that their relationship is growing in all sorts of ways.  

PS enjoy the film.

 



Author's Response:

Even that punishment? Think of Bella like his child, he instructs, corrects and rewards.... He's her daddy...lol ....thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wonder what Caius & Irina are up to.  Jane's explanation sounds about right.  I have no idea who Alex is but I am looking forward to finding out.



Author's Response:

jane is a smart cookie ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Good chapter.  At some point she is going to have to talk to Edward, or he'll make her anyway.  She should tell him she cannot stand the sound of the cain, belt or what ever, not that she minds getting hit with whatever.  Maybe he can come up with something.   It will be interesting to see how this thing with Tanya plays up.  Will she get in cohorts with James.  That would be a hellish duo.

Until the next time.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long to get back to you... all I can say is that Bella has not heard the last from Tanya...lml

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapter.  Her tattoo is going to be huge.  I am surprised Edward allowed it.  I am not sure why he was so unsure about Bella talking to Jane, what was that all about?  Until next time.



Author's Response:

Edwards concern is that Bella will use Jane a confidant and not him. I know it sounds selfish but the concern is that there can't be any information about the way she is feeling or what she is thinking about that she does not share with him. edward needs bella to be very open with him in all things....the tat is long and I will be posting a picture of it when she actually gets it...thanks for the comment ...lml

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Very enjoyable chapter.



Author's Response:

Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8


I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?”

He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.”

“I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.”

Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.”

Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.”

I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.”

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?”

I nodded.

“And it’s working.”

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The abuse was horrfic but Edward telling Bella he loved her was wonderful.



Author's Response:

Yes,,he loves her, thanks for the comment...lml

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Good chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Diamond in the Rough

Hmmm.  I cannot say I was a great fan of this chapter.  Its the nature of their relationship I suppose and she agreed to be treated like that but damn.  I would have walked out and not come back.

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I cannot help wonder why Bella feels the need to be a sub.  Has she not been controlled enough in her marriage?  

As for Edward feeling bad for what he did to Bella, he did it because she needed it? This is a hard concept for me to get my head around.  Kinky sex is one thing but as far as I am concerned, it should stay in the bed/play room and not leak out in to anyone's real life. 

I think in the end, my problem is not understanding why anyone would give someone that sort of control over them.  It makes me think that they have a real problem for a sub is that they have difficulty in taking responsibility for themselves, as an independent adult.  They are willing to be brain washed - ie not looking at your "master", not talking unless given permission,  using the 3 person to talk about themselves, being told when and what to eat/sleep, even when they can have an O etc., some of these are things cults use to brain wash. An example of that for me is when "punished" for doing what comes naturally and anyone might do the sub is more upset for their "master" than the treatment they got because it was "deserved" but do not abused woman feel the same?  The argument that is consensual is nonsensical.  The Dom decides when and what for to punish and the sub has little say as they are the transgressors.  

Moreover, if someone hit you or humiliated you and you felt bad for them then there is something very wrong.  Sorry I have gone on in full rant, its just the idea that someone can and will feel they have the right to punish someone else, makes me as mad as hell.

Sorry, rant over.

 



Author's Response:

she doesn't feel the need to be a sub, she just is one, if it is ok with you, I'm going to use some of your comments for the OT, maybe that will give you some answers...thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Interesting chapter.  The more this story moved into D/s territory the harder I found it not to get mad. 

This whole thing about obedient, what is the sub, a pet, a child?  Will Bella get a nice wheel and new bedding if she behaves?   The "master" is obedient because he cares for the sub but again on his terms.  At the end of the day, from the reading I have done, the only recourse a sub really has is to walk away.  In truth, many would not because they become too reliant on the Master who directs their lives.  I am sorry but this just stinks and again smacks of brain washing.  I keep hearing the phase, sane, safe and consensual who in their right mind agrees to some of the stuff I have been reading about?  Is being hit and humiliated the only way these subs can grow and learn?  Really?

In this story Bella is forbidden to swallow, most woman would be glad of this.  Why is this a punishment, is the Masters cum made of special substances that normal males do not produce?    I don’t know.  Bella find a man that can accept you for who you are and not turn you in to some kind of obedient pet.  Edward, grow the up and learn to deal with women with a mind and life of their own.   

Mrs Rant over and out.



Author's Response:

The submissive is a.... possession. He owns her, she is still a human with feelings, needs and desires. And it is his job to take care of those needs and support her feelings but her desires are his to give into or to deny. and it is not on his terms, the real power in the relationship belongs to the sub. She says what is allowed to be done to her and what is not. she sets the limits as to how far he can go. It's a vert intimate relationship in that they rely on each other. He doesn't direct her life, he sets rules becasue of his need for control and she agrees to them becasue of her need to comply...it's a give and take ...Bella wasn't hit as a punishment, and Edward will not be changing that anytime soon, and just as a child punishment works. (show me a child that is not reprimanded and I will show you a spoiled brat) If you are talking about in the playroom, all I can say is there is a fine line between pleasure and pain and one enhances the other.

Ok last thing,, as far as swallowing his cum...Well it is a reward, and no it does not taste like strawberry cream (lol) it's the satisfion that comes with knowing that you broght him pleasure and that only you can do that for him....A D/s life is all in the mind set. If your mind is not geared towards serving then there is no way this lifestyle would be for you...But if you want to hang in there, these punishments won't last forever, and I asure you they were very necessary for the story line...Thanks for reading, I hope I answered some of your...rant (((lololol))))   and please keep the comments coming, I'll try to answer ...lml

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Hello, me again.  No, I promise no rant and we will agree to disagree because I do disagree with you but that is part of the fun, for me anyway.  I hope you don't mind my making a comment or two.  I will try to behave but make no promises:-)

Well, I am happy that Bella enjoyed her session.  She got taste his cum again, yum  yum lucky girl.  OK I am being tad sarcastic.  I will try tone it down.  The scene with  hot wax plastic knickers seemed to please her and she accepted the intense pain of the nipple clamp as a part  and parcel of the master gift!  So its all good there.

As for the hand signals, all I am going to say is that the difference between your Bella and Icy's Bella is she would have thrown the lasagna at his head.  A right and proper reaction in my book.   I know the expression kinky fuckery is all Icy's, a fantastic expression which says it all.  I also know her Bella is liking the kinky fuckery which is fine.  Its the rest of the stuff, like kneeling etc which she can't handle and again I agree with her.

Take care, until next time.

PS If someone told me to "come here slut", he would get a knee where it hurts, just saying:-)

 




Author's Response:

lol at the knee..lol

The differance between Icy's Bella and mine is that my Bella is submissive - hers is not although she does enjoy a bit of the kink...but who the hell doesn't? ...lol Enjoy your week ...lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

There's an old saying which goes "different horses for different courses" meaning roughly to each their own.  How true it is here but if your Bella gets off on this type of relationship/treatment.  Good luck to her!

Liked the section with the explanation of the abuse cycle.  Was that based on research?

TTFN

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes, research, three years of psych classes and almost thirty years of watching people I love go through it. (PS...Sally is based on a real person) It pisses me the fuck off, but in all honesty Domestic Violenece needs to be treated like an illness, sort of the way you deal with and alcoholic or a drug addict. You listen but remove yourself emotionally. It is difficult to watch and then to see the distruction that it causes on the lives of those involved, especially the innocents (the children)... Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So far the weekend seems to be going well.  That whole bathroom thing seems to be working for them  I, of course, would want to know why it was necessary but then I am no sub.  The panic thing could have been avoided if Edward had been as up front with her, as he is always insisting she is with him but hay ho he operates under different rules.  As for the red thing, she should be able to use it when and how she deems fit. Is that not the "power" of the sub?  Naturally, if she was deemed to use it too often she would no doubt get punished.  Oh look I am off again without even trying. LOL

She should tell him to mind his own business, oh yeah, she cannot.  She should tell him she was about to give Rose a tonguing!

Until next time.



Author's Response:

She would never be punished for saying a safe word if it occurs to often then that would be something they would have to talk about. The safe word is there not as a get out of jail free card ---it's not to be said, becasue she doesn't want to do something...almost anything is acceptable as long as it is within her limits. Now they can and will reajust limits....the safe words are there for safety...physical or mental safety, so that damage does not occur...asking permission to use the bathroom would not cause either .... thanks Roon have a great week...lml

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I am glad he realised that he should be upfront with anything concerning her. It was good to see the girls getting on so well

But what's with making her physically uncomfortable?  What did he do to her nipples?  Why the hell would you put up with that?  Don't tell me having itching nipples is fun.  Yeah right, maybe he should try it.  



Author's Response:

He likes to watch her squirm...and you will see in the next chapter what he did to her....I will also post a picture so you can see what it is...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

 

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Interesting chapter.  Liked the family stuff.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

 "I couldn’t be sure if it was just her or all women. I tried to think of conversations with my mother and sisters. Were they like that?" II must say your Edward is rather dysfunctional, he seems know nothing about women, apart from where their orifices are and what you can stick in them?  Has he never had a normal relationship with a woman, that involved more that discussing a scene or punishment?  How old is he?  He has a mother and a sister, is he just thick or only concerned with his penis?  I am sorry but whenever his brothers have to tell him about some aspect of a woman's behaviour, he is amazed.  What the hell is wrong with him?  He may know about kinky sex but frankly that seems to be about it.  Not a very well rounded man, is he?  As for Bella, well I agree they are perfect for each other, as she loves being treated like a collection of orifices.  



Author's Response:

Sorry Roon ...it took me a day to respond to your comments becasue I just wasn't sure what to say...lol

Dysfunctional? NO...Removed or Disconnected would be a better word. His main use for  a woman up until Bella was  ....   1) What they would allow him to do to them....        2) Which orifice he could stick his dick in....  Did he stand around while his sister and mother discussed shopping, cooking, books ? No why would he, it was of no intrest to him....Did he take notice to the strange things women do ... all the hugging, hand holding, crying together, grooming each other? Some of it he might have, but he didn't pay close enough attention or care enough to let it sink into his brain that these are just normal female traits.... As far as the line ..."I couldn’t be sure if it was just her or all women. I tried to think of conversations with my mother and sisters. Were they like that?"   What he was saying was that - he was so drawn into Bella and her mannerisms that he couldn't look away from her, then he was trying to think if there was ever a conversation with his mothrer or sisters when he was so entralled not only by what they were saying but also by the way they were saying it..... And as far as the way the couples interacter togther, he was never a couple so he would stand off to the side propably trying to think of who's orifice his dick would be in that night,,,lol....And I will admitt there are times when I myself completly love to be treated like nothing more then an orifice....not all the time, but for a specific allotment of time ...it is my way of letting go of all the stress and day to day living that just wears you down, it's like a trip to the health spa, you go into it feeling all - Blah!- and come out feeling rejuvenated and ready to face another week....Thanks for reading and the comments...I'll see you thursday...lml 

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

No, my panties are completely dry.  Anal sex is not my bag at all.  I remember reading about people, who having had too many things stuck up their arse, ended up having to have bottom operations.  This was because their muscles became too loose and they leaked poop.  Not sexy at all.  Was that her reward, it seems it was more like his reward.  Personally, I prefer flowers or jewelry.  

It was interesting however, how she managed to suppress the memory of James beating her with a belt.  No doubt, in time Edward will show she what  joy a good thrashing and can be:-)

TTFN.



Author's Response:

Hmmm...well I teaser for you...

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

 

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Enjoyed the chapter and the mystery. Thanks.



Author's Response:

I have a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Excellent chapter.  Bella really had to let that stuff out and it was good that Emmett had warned Edward to back off.  I am still not sure what Leah's problem is, unless she is jealous that Bella has another focus now?

Until the next time.

 



Author's Response:

Leah has some issues...lml

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Bella is all over the place isn't she?  Well she got what she wanted in the end, so everyone is happy.



Author's Response:

She got something ....lol ,,,,

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

They sure did seem to weather that storm with ease.  A good F**king and a few hits with a hair brush and all is well.  Wish real life were that easy. LOL.



Author's Response:

Me too...life would be so much easier...however I do find that a spanking followed by a good fucking is the best band-aid ....lol ...

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183779
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
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Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

I bet its Jacob on the phone. There is nothing wrong with a little kink as long as its not that sick whipping and hurting shit, I think its kinda hot. Lucky Bella.

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

I enjoyed this chapter even though it was full of drama.  Jessica, Renee and Jacob should be put on a bus for far far away land and left their.  Nasty peices of work.

Poor Bella, called a h00r by her own h00r of a mother and then sacked for saving Carlie.  Not to mention Rose loosing the baby, so sad.

Until the next time.

 

 

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In

Excellent chapter, thank you.

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 2)

Wonderful chapter.  As you say a lot of ground covered and covered very well.  I am glad he wants a more balanced relationship with her.  That kinky stuff should stay in the bed not spell out of it, ever.  Carmen is nuts, Jessica is trouble and Bella is dazed. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Pumpkin Patch Incident

Nice chapter.  Their relationship seems to be moving along nicely.

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

Loved this chapter.  

Really loved the way Bella had loads of attention at the party.  It got Edward all hot and bothered.  

Now that Bella's agreed to move in with him, it should take their relationship to the next level.

Really looking forward to the next update.

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...

Loved the chapter and am really looking forward to reading more.  

Just off to check out your other story:-)

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

What a lovely family the Cullen's are.  Emmett is a big idiot as everyone told him. LOL.

My monies on Edward getting his way.  Glad there is more to look forward to.  Just

love this story.

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Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

I loved this chapter.  Edward and his mom are right slippery characters aren't

they? :-)

I liked the little bit of kink in the bedroom, best place for it.  LOL.

I am so looking forward to the time when they do marry.

Take care of yourself and your broken arm.  

 

All the best

Caroline

 

 

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

Excellent chapter. What a rollacoster of a chapter.  Edward was a king sized ass.  Its right that Bella makes him work for forgiveness.  Maybe he'll think twice before he talks to her like that again.  LOL  

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

Its was good that he grovelled.  I suppose there was no point in prolonging the agony for both of them.  I cannot help wonder if he'd been a sub he wouldn't have had his bottom paddled but good. LOL

I cannot to find out the outcome of the hearing.  I also want to know what up with that Mrs Cope?  

Until the next time.

 

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Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

OMG that is so sweet.  Carlie and Edward both asking her to marry them.  There is no way she can refuse, is there?  LOL.

Hedi you are a star.  I hope Mrs Cope gets her knuckles wrapped but good:-}

Seth and Claire seem good together, wouldn't it be nice if that worked out?

 

Have a lovely Christmas and happy New Year.

 

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

I loved that Carlie was included in asking Bella to become engaged to them.  That was really sweet.   Dom Edward is hot.  I suppose as long as Bella is enjoying it, its all good fun.  Them as a couple though will always beat them as Dom/sub.  

Have a lovely New Year. :-)

 

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Oh no, that is terrible. What a thing to do to us.  It certainly made the New Year start with a bang.  That bang was my heart in my throat. LOL  

I am really looking forward to Jessica, being in an accident and dying suddenly and violently.  

Until the next time

Happy New Year.

 

 

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

In truth, I had hoped Bella had been doing better and maybe even meet someone she could at least go out with.  It would have served Edward right.  However, she did not and suffered horribly and for that I am sorry.

There is no way she should forgive Edward to easily, after all he let her go without even a fight.  Make him pay. LOL

As for the mean reviews, some people are just really silly.

 

 

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

I thought you dealt with this very well and covered the issues that bothered me and others.  I think its right she did not fall back into bed with him straight away.  I wonder if she will say yes?  Is it not too soon?

Anyway I loved it and am so glad you did not let the haters get you to pull your story. Its very enjoyable.

Take Care.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

Lovely chapter.  I am so pleased they are back on track.  Now all she has to talk to him about is the D/s stuff.  If she doesn't like she should tell him.

Take care.

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Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

Liked this chapter a lot.  

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

That was a lovely chapter and I really enjoyed the wedding.  I loved that she topped him. He seemed to love it. LOL Will we be seeing more of Charlotte and Peter?  I am disappointed she did not talk to him because they need to communicate.  When they do talk I hope she will be honest with him.  

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

I am so glad they talked to each other.  What he said to her was so romantic.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter. 

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

I am so glad they made it up.  She was so quick to throw him out.  I can understand why she would be angry but really.  LOL.  I am glad you fixed it though.  I have to say I just loved the note Carlisle sent to Edward.  It was brilliant.

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora

Anther great chapter.  Its not really surprising that Carlie acted out.  A new kid is always hard on the first borne. Thank goodness for Carlisle.  Poor Bella, hope her all day morning sickness ends soon.  My sister had it throughout the whole 9 months.

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper

What an eventful chapter.  That whole thing with Emmett was a hoot.  How unlucky that she had to suffer the burst uterus just then. Anyway it all ended well and that's the best thing.  Wonderful chapter.

 

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Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

What a totally fanastic chapter. Carlie coming home with that creep really had me going.  I totally loved how she dealt with him.   I hope Em gave him a good kicking. LOL.

Edward's talk with Jack was priceless.  So funny and a joy to read.


I hope you put you new story up here as well as Twilighted.net  cause I really do not like that site and never read anything over there.  

Until next time.