I just found your story and I am so obsessed with this story! I love it and the characters!! Could Bella be pregnant after all? I hope so!!

I have know idea what could happen next, I hope Bella doesn't do something stupid and put herself in harms way or ruin Edward's plan if they have one. I love your Edward and Bella so much!

I hope you are able to post another chapter today! :)

I almost felt bad for Edward, Almost!!! I hope Bella acts like she didn't see that card afterwards, She needs to get a backbone with him and stick with it. He needs a taste of his own medicine. He's been nothing but horrible to Bella. Who knows how many sluts he's had unprotected sex with and Bella has witnessed him with other's and still wants to kiss him and have sex with him without a condom. She is really dumb! She should be getting checked out for STDs. He treats her worse than anyone he comes accross. He's made fun of her every chance he gets and in front of others and the women who treat her like crap as well. You don't do that to someone you like. He ignores her at Emmit's party while greeting others. He makes out with other sluts like it's nothing, yet he doesn't kiss Bella, he treats her like she's nothing but a whore. He treats the actual whores better and yes Bella even has let him treat her like one too. He seems embarressed of Bella as well. He tries to seduce her when they are alone, but when people are around, he treats her like sh*t and makes fun of her. When the heck does this girl start to see this? I'm more annoyed and mad at her than Edward, because she allows him to do this to her all the time, and then whines about it. She needs to quit giving him the time of day and try moving on and dating other guys who actually can treat her better like Emmitt, Jasper, and Jake does.  She should watch how these men treat their women with respect. Let him work for it and prove his wants to really be with her.

Please tell me that the other chapters have Bella remaining strong, and not back to her letting him treat her like a whore?

Thank you for replying!! I love this story and can't wait to read what happens next!!! Thank you for taking the time to translate this story for us and post it, your awesome!! :)

Do you know how much more longer until the next chapter will post?

Author's Response:

No, I don't know at this point, because it's not up to me. I sent my chapter to my beta more than 4 weeks ago, and I'm still wating for her edits, and then I have to send the chapter to the author for her approval, and I have no idea how long it's going to take her to read it and give her okay. There,s nothing I can do about it. I can not harrass my beta, she's kind enough to take the time to edit. People have a life outside of fan fiction, and I have to deal with it, even if I hate to make the readers wait for an update.

I miss this story. It's been 5 months since the last chapter.

LOL, with what happened to James was hilarious!! I hope Bella will be able to defend herself until Edward gets there. Great chapter!

I am so glad I'm not the only one who feels this way. I felt bad reviewing and explaining how I feel about the story as of late. It's just that this doesn't seem to be an Edward and Bella story anymore. It seems like there were only a few chapter of Edward and Bella together throughout the whole story and there has been a lot of chapters. I'm really sick of Jasper's pov's. I don't really care about Jasper and Alice's relationship at all. I dont care about their engagement, or their sex life, etc... I read for Bella and Edward, not them, and certainly not Tanya and Edward. I hate that the most!!! It really does seem like Edward cares more for Tanya than Bella ever since the island. Now Bella's family and friends dote on Tanya as well. Make sure she's sleeping well, needs someone to stay with her, and now Edward's apartment. He really should have offered it to Bella. Saying Tanya had nowhere to go, does not fly with me. Because she did, she could have either stayed with where she was or on the streets. Did Aro pay Tanya for her whole in the kidnapping like he promised her? if so, I'm sure she can get her own place. All the while, Bella could either stay with her parents or Edward's. She has no job, no money, and didn't even get to finish school and now has two babies on the way. I have not seen anyone worried about her, she even goes to doctor appointments and ultrasound visits alone. She might as well have stayed with her parents. Sorry, I'm just a little annoyed that Alice and Jasper are engaged and Happy, and that Tanya has gotten more attention from everyone except the person who should. Tanya put herself in danger, she agreed to work for them. She never told them no when she could have. I have yet to see her feeling bad for what she did. But then again, she got to stay with Edward most of the time. Still trying to forget all the orgasm's he gave her, just because he was mad that James and Demetri got to rape Bella on a daily basises. I'm sure she would have much rather been his his shoes, then being torn apart. Cant forget Tanya's rant about why Edward would want Bella since she wasn't even that pretty as she is. Bella's all smiles most of the time, even after being raped in the butt, slapped around, molested, humiliated on a daily bases and was the least experienced. She didn't seem to know much about sex and yet Tanya's the only one that had nightmares, had people offer to stay with her, all the while Bella sleeps alone.

Author's Response:

awww I'm so sorry you're that upset. I hope I can make it up to u. I just wanted to save the best for last.  

It must be Bree's little sister. She must have found and read her diary. I didn't see this coming. :)

Plumcrzy62- If you have something to say then say it on facebook. I already know who your talking about.

Well even if Bella's son wasn't Edward's still makes Edward an asshole for treating them that way. Like the baby has a disease or something. Then to tell her that it wouldn't be fair for him to be a father to the baby just because he thinks its not his baby. Bella can do better than him anyways, he just told her he could never love or want to love a child that isn't his biologically because to him it wouldn't be fair to his bio children. I guess he only wants to have one so that the other isn't second best with his logic. I hope Bella has found someone to help take care of her son and treats them good. I hope Kate cheats on him and has another man's baby and makes him think it's his.