Reviews by catseye1769
Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

Banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15692
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Age of Innocence

Oh I have a feeling this isn't Edward she is talking about. It will b very interesting to see how this all turns out. Please updsate soon and keep up the great work.

                    Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Paradise Lost

So it was Alice that rescued her. Sounds right. Now to meet the rest of the family. This sounds like a winner already.

                         Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Brave New World

This story is addicting. I started it before I had to get up for work and cou;dn't stop reading it. I want to see her eventually get the life she deserved. Please keep the updates coming.

                Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Idiot

Oh poor Edward. I can see why he would be bitter. After going through all of that I would give up on love too. I can't wait to read more.

             Marguerite

My Prodigal Son by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Carlisle POV. Takes place after chapter 10 and before chapter 11. If you haven't read Edward's Clan it may not make much sense. How does Carlisle REALLY feel about Edward and Bella?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 775
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh shit his kind of love is sick and twisted. Awesome chapter though.

The Piano by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake Esme's REAL feelings towards Edward, Carlisle and Alice. Best to read AFTER chapter eleven. If you have not read Edward's Clan this won't make much sense.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2239 Read Count: 665
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another life destroyed by Carlisle. SH eis one messed up woman. I understnd her a bit more though. 

Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Jasper's History. Takes place during Chapter seventeen, it won't make sense unless you have read Edward's Clan first.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2848 Read Count: 546
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh that was friggen great. Maria deserved what happened to her. I want to read more of these. Is there any way to put them on alert so I can resieve updates to these one shots too?

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Um, I think you can add authors as favourites and then change your settings under your bio to receive updates? Does that sound right anyone? Thanks for the review too. :-)

Summary:

Edward's Clan Outtake. Tanya's POV - what was her relationship with Edward really like? And what did they do to traumatise her friend?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2253 Read Count: 1151
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think Edwars is as sick if not sicker than Tanya. But damn is that man eatably hot.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh yes I reall yloved this chapter. He deserved the punch. Now for her self rightous prick of a father to get one. Keep up the awesome work.

  Marguerite

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315702
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

I am very glad I followed you over from ff. Why did they boot you? This story is one of my Favorites. Please keep up the very awesome work and update soon.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

YES YES AND YES!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally they realize they belong together. Now if they can just work things out and stay together. I almost think Jacob is worth something for not screwing Bella. HE almost deserves to live. (NOT!) Please update soon and keep up the awesome work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Thank you for Edward's pov. It makes the story alot more interesting. Plus shows what he feels. I am very glad I found it on this site. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

Oh i like where this story is going. These are two people that belong together. Keep up the great work and update soon.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Oh no this is most defiently not the ending. I think they will both crack at the same time. Please update soon. This is one of my favorites. 

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

Why isn't she happy about being with Edward??? Maybe she is still scared it;s only a bet. Please update soon as this is one of my very favorite stories.

  MArguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

I think Rosalie is lieing her ass off, I think James will try something with Bella and I think Bella is scaredof being hurt. Keep up the awesome work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

Oh what a shit storm. I can see those two fighting a lot but they should be honest with each other. I really hope she doesn't leave Forks with out him. Keep up the awesome work.

   Marguerite 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

Oh this was epic. I didn't think they could/would go that long without seeing each other. And of all people to give him info on Bella- Jake!! Well Jake does care for her. And I'm glad she found some peace. She deserves it. So does he. And Esme is a treasure. She was there when he needed her and didn't push him to talk. Very wise woman. I am glad he went to see her. Even if they don't get back together at least they will (hopefully) make peace with each other. Awesome story. Not just smut either. It has a very real story there along with great characters. Please tell me you are planning a sequel. Keep up the wonderful writing.

    Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Oh this was the perfect ending for this story. With these two nothing has ever been neat and tidy so why should the ending be. They are together and that's all that matters. They are meant to be. Maybe in future there could be a sequel. Thank you for one hell of an amazing story.

    Marguerite

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Junior

Oh they will be so great together. And I would high five her if I could for putting Tanya in her place. Awesome update keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

Oh I really like this story a lot. Much different from what you usually find here. I can't wait to see how they get along with each other. I suspect that there will be fireworks. AS for suggestion maybe proof read a bit more. Keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning

Awesome update. I like how independant she is and she's not a whiner. I laughed when she called Edward an ass thinking it was Carlisle. Funny. Them working together should be fun. Keep up the great work.

  Marguerite 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

Oh no this was perfect. I loved when she was with Rosalie. Sounds just like Bella. I so want to read the next chapter to read how she deals with that ass of a boss she has. As fro suggestions maybe get a beta reader. Keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

Damn I like Bella. She isn't afraid of anything. And she puts Edward in his place even though he is her boss. Awesome chapter keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Bring Me Life by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

After an argument, Edward decides to change Bella in the heat of the moment while making love to her in the meadow.  Canon OOC one shot.  Lemon!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2444 Read Count: 841
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bring Me Life

Oh I really liked this one. I think you should write more like this. MAybe one shots about their life together.Keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Summary:

For daddys little cannibal's contest. Emmett, Edward and Bella all play a simple game of truth or dare. Not very cliche, rated for some innuendos, but nothing too bad.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3192 Read Count: 348
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was hilarious. I think you should really do more of these. MAybe one with the whole family.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373208
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

Oh man I have a feeling her "Tony" is Edward. Man I can't wait until they meet. Please update soon and keep up the awesome work. Tahnk you fro such a wonderful and addicting story.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Do not worry about writing in the 1st or 3rd person. This story is wonderfully addicting either way. I just can't wait until Bella and Edward realize that they know each other. Awesome story and I look forward to reading more of it.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

I like Edward. I think he plays around because he thinks he will never find true love. Will he ever be shocked when he sees Bella. Keep up the awesome work And I look forward to reading much more of this, Or maybe a sequel.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Oh you are so good at cliffhangers. I could feel her pain over losing Tony. I think she will all of a sudden be a very happy woman when she finally sees Edward. Keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Now I really like Edward. He tuned Jessica down and wants to be a real man for awhile. I bet the wedding will be beautiful. Please update soon. 

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

And the suspense grows. Lord I can't wait to read more of this. Please update soon.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Yes yes yes. About damn time someone put that pompous ass in his place. I just hope he allows Angela to go with BElla. I can see some drama in their future but I hope they overcome it. Please keep up the excellent work.

    Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

I like how you wrote this. Very romantic and funny. Please keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

stories/1036/images/edwardsclan_Banner_by_evilangel813.jpg

**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

Oh what a cliffhanger. You are very good at those. Awesome chapter I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon and keep up the awesome work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

Finally they did it. I think they both needed to so they could find some measure of peace. Her so she could move past the dead dog Jacob and Edward so he could feel human for a bit. Awesome chapter please keep up the great work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, I'm happy they finally did it too. LOL. I like a happy and relaxed Edward. He hurts my head less. LOL

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

Oh I really love Edward. He dealt with slimeball and fucktard. a.k.a. Demitri and Felix. No one messes with what is his. I bet Aro will have something to say to them also. Bet he won't be as nice as Edward was though. This may sound sick but I was cheering when Edward dealt with the skinheads. They had no idea who/what they were dealing with. I guess they found out too late . Aw what a shame. NOT! I'm glad Edward had mercy on Jasper. Please keep up the awesome work. One of my very favorite stories.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

I have a very bad feeling that this is a set up by Carlisle or the Volturi or Tanya. I can see bad things happening to him. I just hope it all comes together for them. Keep the updates coming.

     Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

Oh wow. I think Edward is starting to change and doesn't realize it or is fighting it. It will be a loud explosion when he finally confronts Carlisle over Bella. He is so much in love with her. However I have a feeling this will have a sad ending. Keep up the awesome work.

   Marguerite

    P.S. I tweeted you. Approve me.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

Oh shit trouble in paradise. At last Edward is stepping up to his father. Someone needs to. What scares me is who the Clan member is that approached Aro. I really hope it isn't Jasper, Emmette, Rose, or Edward. Yes I am on the clans side. Aro's family is very sick and I really want someone to kill Alec slowly. Keep up the awesome work.

    Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Oh Demitri is a very sick fucktard. However I really want Edward tot do to him what he did to Jacob only make him suffer more. As for Felix he should be burned alive. I actuallt felt Edwards pain. I can wait to see it unleashed. Plus I want to know how Dimitri knew about them. Awesome update.

     Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Well I must say I would never want to piss you off. If you can pull this out of your mind then You would be mean when angry. However I really liked this chapter blood and all. The reason is because this is what it would really be like in Edwards world. I also hope he gets his revenge on those two sick fucks. An Edward type of revenge. Keep up the excellent work. And yes I am the geek that looks forward to daily updates.

    Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

Oh holy fucking shit. Esme is the tratior??? I can see why though since she considers Edward dead. Weird though. And I absolutly loved it when Edward killed Felix. Very sweet. Would have been nice to be there to see it. Now I think Edward should have slit Demitrie"s jugular vein open and let him bleed out. Since he is alive it will be hell coming. I have a feeling there will be some clan deaths. I hope it's just Esme's. Awesome update. Keep up the excellent work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

Edward wants to get married. So normal for him. But I believe Alice is right. Once he does that and realizes that being in love will make him stronger everything else will fall into place. I laughed at Edward being nervous when she asked him why he wanted to marry her. I can't wait for his reaction. Demitri is a very sick individual. He needs a lobotomy and I'm not even sure that would help. I can't wait to see how this all turns out. Keep up the wonderful work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

This was funny and sad at the same time. His father really did torture him. I can see in a way why Esme says her son is dead. I hope that actually get married. Keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

I think what Bella did was honest. She wanted to show him that he is human and that she can and will take care of him. And the ring is beautiful. I am glad they had some fun together. They both deserve it. Demitri REALLY needs to be executed. There is no curing/helping that man. Please update soon as I have a feeling we will see a side of Edward that will scare Demitri.

    Marguerite



Author's Response:

Glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Im sorry I didnt respond to you earlier on twitter, I'm still learning the ropes on that one.

Greenaway

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

Oh Edward was so smooth. Very professional. However he should listen to his instinct. Something bad is coming. Bella was sweet when she wanted to rescue that woman. Edward helped her in a way. Now for the drama. I know you have this all planned out and I don't expect you to change it. I just want to see the whole Clan happy at the end. Minus Carlisle & Esme. Awesome story no matter what.

    Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

Oh man Edward will unleash a new kind of hell. Esme will be first then He will very slowly torture Demetri until he begs for mercy which of course Edward won't grant. I do not hate you for this chapter. I knew there would be a lot of pain beg=fore there could be a happy ending. It is part if Edwards world. He should have listened to his gut. Now it will eat at him for a very long time. Please update soon. Amazing work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thanks for the understanding. I appreciate it and I apologise for the lateness of this response. The next chappie is up now. Thanks again. :-)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

Oh this was sad. And not because of Esme's death because of the way Edward reacted when he saw Bella was pregnant. Like he could accept anything but that. I'm glad they took Kate with them. Her own fucking family left her like she was trash. And Carlisle watching Esme die was heartbreaking. Even though I didn't like her she died trying to make amends. What I do not understand is why was she even there. Last we heard was her telling Edward she knew where Bella was.  All I know is I cheered when I saw an update in my inbox. Keep them coming. Excellent as always.

      Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

Now this explains a lot. I never got an email update for this one so I never knew what happened. I like how Edward took charge & came back to life. About time. Now I wonder if he will be bitter towards Bella when she finally sees her. She did leave but had good reason. Oh I can't wait to read more. Any chance you will be writing a sequel???

     Margueritre

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Oh this was sad. Edward is struggling with so much but then so is Bella. Betrayal, love, anger, sadness and the upcoming birth of their child. I am very surprised at the change in Carlisle he actually seems to be trying to help her. I like that. It shows his human side. Didn't know he had one. As for Kate still not sure I trust her but she is trying to support Bella. I like how Alice stood up to him. PLease update soon & keep up the excellent work.

     Marguerite 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Authors note

I am very glad to see you found your passion again. I can see how it could stress you out. I hope things are going well for you.

            Marguerite

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is tortured by Mike Newton's thoughts about Valentine's Day. He decides to mess with him a little by inviting him and Jessica on a date with himself and Bella. Hilarity ensues. Set after Breaking Dawn. Human Mike and Jessica and Vamp Edward and Bella.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3493 Read Count: 1221
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my lord. I haven't laughed that hard in a long time. Priceless. Please tell me you are doing more of these? Thank you for such a hilarious story.

Summary:

To keep Edward--a freshly graduated police officer--from getting underfoot in a break in, Charlie sends him to 'baby sit' a barely legal Bella. Love ensues. Lemons. Lots and lots of lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130777 Read Count: 21097
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Mar 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh wow what an ending. I know why i marked this one as a favorite . Thank you such a beautiful story. 

Marguerite

Summary:

banner

 

Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Ahh they are so hot together. I can never wait for more of this story. Jane seemed like a spoiled brat. Aro is scary and I wonder about him. I absolutly love Esme. SHe is the mother we all wish we had. Please update soon and keep up the wonderful work.

    Marguerite

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29485
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The News

Awesome start. I have a feeling I will need a lot of tissues for this story. Keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You

Oh damn what a first meeting. WOW!! Now why can't I find a coffee house like that?? PLease update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

Oh holy shit this story is hot. Funny thing is I can totally see the characters in these roles. You make them come alive and seem very real. Please keep up the awesome work and update soon.

  Maeguerite



Author's Response:

I have thouroughly enjoyed each of your reviews, it makes me so happy that this story is being enjoyed...I have never written before this so it is nice to hear that my efforts are appreciated. If you would like to see the costumes, you can get to the links on my ff.net account or on my blog: lailab-faithfully.blogspot.com.

Again thank you for reading and for your kind words...it makes it so much easier to keep going!

I look forward to hearing what you think of the next one!

Laila

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

Very damn good chapter as always. I so want this story to never end. One of the best. And I have reviewed ALL if the other chapters but for some fucking reason I keep getting a message saying error code 3 already been reviewed. Just wanted you to know that I have been sending you love. Keep up the great work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you! and i truly appreciate the reviews...Laila

Sin City by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is a vampire who preys on the filth who pollute his city. She is his one weakness, her innocence calls to him like nothing else on this earth. Can he stay away from her to save her or will she be his downfall?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19693 Read Count: 2748
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome story. Absolutly perfect. I didn't miss the werewolf angle at all. I think you should write a sequel with your own twist.

Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing, the first chapter eight i posted had a whole werewolf angle to it, a little different to twilight but i have just too much going on to do it justice. A sequel might be a good idea in the future when i don't have so many stories going round in my head lol.

Chrissie x

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

Oh my lord. I bet Bella will be shocked when she sees Edward. Oh well that's what she signed up for. Hopefully it will work out in the end.  Hopefully it will work out in the end. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

   Marguerite



Author's Response:

Yeah, she's in for quite a shock! :D 

Thanks for the lovely encouragement and for giving our fic a try!!

~Di

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

Oh lord I think Bella had a crush on Edward too. So why didn't she realize the letter was from him? This is getting really good. I am now hooked on it. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

Oh I cannot wait to see the reaction on her face when she finds out it's Edward. Lucky lady. So far this is my favorite story. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

She thinks he just did it to humilate her. I can see why she would think that. I just hope they can work things out. Please keep up the great work and update soon.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

You are very evil women for leaving the ending like that but I am sending you looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooots of love so you won't do something horrible and replace Edward with (eww yuck barf worthy) Mike Newton. That would be just too cruel. Now pictures of Edward in nothing but  towel or naked would make up for your evilness. Put your eyebrow down it was just a thought. 

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Wow I need a cold shower after that. Maybe I should find an auction like that. Please keep up the great work as you are very evil ladies for ending it like that.

I tried to vote for this story but the link said website not available.

Marguerite 



Author's Response:

*delighted giggles*  Glad you liked it! ;D  We may be offering ourselves (either together or individually for The Fandom Gives back, and for the Aid for Nashville) if that helps to know!

We were evil!  We couldn't resist a short journey to the dark side for a change. Pretty well satiated that impulse!  lol

Thanks for letting us know about the link, I'll go check it out now!

~Di

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Yowza. I really need to find a man like that. And yes we love reading lemons. I must say you ladies are very talented. Please update soon or I will send James after you. You are the best.

 Marguerite

 P.S. I tried to vote for you but that link doesn't work.



Author's Response:

You and me both! LOL  At least I can dream (and pilliage the good parts of my own experience)!  Thank-you so much for the tremendous praise.  We appreciate the kind words of encouragement so much! 

And we'll keep the James threat in mind.  ;D

I fixed the link, and voting opens June 1, I believe.  Thanks again!

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now why in the hell didn't I have teachers that looked like Edward when I was in high school?? Life is so unfair. Great story by the way. Keep up the good work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh man 2 loves at first sight. See that's why I like this story. I can't wait ubtil all of them reveal that they are old enough to act on their feelings. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am all for Edward too but damn there aren't any ugly men in the Twilight universe. I repeat if there had been teachers that looked like that when I was in high school the entire female population would have had perfect attendance.  Please update soon.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my Bella now Edward is even more interested. Damn good story please keep up the great work.

 Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well damn. What a ride home. I laughed mt ass off when Bella went off on the two ho bags. You go girl. James sounds very dangerous. Bee careful. Awesome story. Keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OK so now the truth is out. And what a truth it was. hopefully they will be able to have some kind of relationship.Alice and Jasper too. PLease update soon.

  Marguerite

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135416
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my lord poor Carlisle. I would be a basket case if that happened to me. Strong man. Knowing more background on him helps a lot. One of my favorite stories. PLease update soon and keep up the great work.

   Marguerite 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

About time those nasty assholes understand her. Now I want to know how Renee is connected to the Pentagon Chief. Keep up the great work and please update soon. Wonderful story.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh well now this will be so very interesting to read. Somehow this story has me hooked. PLease update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OH HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!! Now that is one hell of a revelation. I think Charlie deserved to be punched. I can see why James is a bit "off". Now the really good stuff happens. I hope everyone lives through it. Keep up the great work and update soon.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yeah. They saved her. I would have punched Charlie in the face for being such a worthless dickhead. Awesome story. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

   Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I agree with you 100%. Esme is my hero. That nasty bitch Renee got what she deserved. I can feel a bit sorry fro her sisters because they seem to feel bad fro how they have treated her but her parents can rot in hell. Please update soon and keep up the great work. Awesome story. One of the best.

  Marguerite



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow a lot of emotion in this chapter. I fully understand why she doesn't want to see Charlie or Renee. Her sisters are another story. I hope she recovers and finally gets some happieness. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I think the prick is pressing assault charges on Bella because ogf the restraining order and because she won't see. him I hope he rots in hell along with Renne. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh yes I did a happy dance too when Charlie and Renee were arrested. Fuckers deserved it. I do think though that Bella needs to do some apologizing to her sisters fro not understanding what they went through in school. It works both ways. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Excellent chapter. You could feel how happy Izzy was to see Bella. Please keep up the great work and update soon.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

All I can say is Bella is way more forgiving than I am. I hope it all goes well. Please keep up the great work and update soon.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

It's not going to be instant forgiveness, I can assure you.

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh I am sad to see this one go but a sequel YAHOOOOOO!!! i cant wait .

   Thank you for a wonderful story.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A one night stand she can't remember is the perfect kind of one night stand in the eyes of 23 old cleaning lady Bella Swan, but when she falls pregnant she will begin a life journey she never expected to take. But hold on, what does her boss Mr. Sex on Legs Cullen have to do with all of this????????

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159830 Read Count: 58916
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Realisation

So far I like this. GReat characters and I like the way you paired them up.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Recreating

WOW!!!! Very steamy and i loved it when she said "We have already gone too far". Great sense of humor. She was right about making him fire his help. He does need to learn how to take care of himself. keep up the great work and update soon.

  Marguerite

Summary:

Edward knew he loved Bella from the first day of pre-k.  Bella's loved everything pink and carnation since Edward gave her one for her birthday.  Remeber a simpler time when your biggest worry was getting your favorite crayon and our booboo's could be kissed away with the promise that it would be better before we got married.  Originally an entry for the Crayola Contest.  My crayon, Carnation Pink. 

Warning: this story is rated K for cavity causing sweetness!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 897 Read Count: 8999
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 05 May 2010
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this is very sweet. Made me smile all day. Young love is the best. I think you should write more of these.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

I'm glad that it made your day.  I love it too!  Thank you so much for reviewing this.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

Oh man. I really want to know what happened to her and if anyone is looking fro her. I hope they both end up off of the streets in a safe home. I am hooked on this story because of the reality of their cituation. People don't see or ignore that this happens everyday. You make it seem so realistic that I can picture it like I am there. Excellent work. Please update soon.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review, and what a sweet review! I hope you like the next chapter, here’s a little teaser from it :) 

 

“Thanks man,” I say as I brush past him, wanting to find Bella even more now that I know she’s alone. I’ve gone through the building three times and around the outside as well, but I can’t find Bella anywhere. I have a rock in the pit of my stomach, and I’m scared as fuck that whoever she has been hiding from has found her. I stand outside the Mission, cursing myself for being late. 

 

I don’t know what to do. I feel sick. If something has happened... or some fucker has taken her - I don’t even fucking know her real last name to start to look for her. I’m pacing back and forth in front of the Mission, and the sun has set. I don’t fucking know what to do. I decide to go back to the motel room to get the money I have stashed and do whatever I can to find her.  

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

Oh wow I really like this one. It makes me want to cry because so much of it is true. There are people like that on the street that want to work but no one will give them a chance. PLease update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

Oh man this story has me hooked. I really want it to end well fro them. PLease update soon and keep up the great work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

Man I can't wait to hear their story. I so want them to end up together and have a peaceful life. Please update soon and keep up the great work.

  Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

Oh and the surprises keep coming. I wonder what other ones will come out next Monday? I think/hope Edward stays with her at the motel. They need each other. Please update soon and keep up the great work. This story is awesome and I really want to see how it all ends.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

Thanks for the sweet review, hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

Damn this story is addicting. Please tell me you are making it a long one. The feelings between them are so good. Like they need each other to be alive. Keep up the awesome work and please update soon.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

So glad that you like the story so far! As of now, I'm thinkin it will be about 25 chapters, but that could change as we go along. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Drama, love, sadness, anger everything that would make a wonderful novel. They are both damaged but want to protect each other. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep up the excellent work. And maybe when this is done with you could write a sequel.

  Marguerite



Author's Response:

What a sweet review, thank you so much! I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

Oh damn you you made me cry. That story was horrifing. She endured it for 5 years. Way stronger than anyone I know. WOW!! That explains so much about how she is. I loved that Edward was so protective. She needs someone in her life that really loves her. I so hope Edward gets to do to Alec what he did to Bella only 10 times worse. Please tell me they end up happy together!!!!!!!!!!!! This is my absolute favorite story. It is real with things that actually happen to people. It would make an awesome movie. Please keep up the great work.

 Marguerite

  P.S. Sorry about the day late review but For some reason this web site has been down for 2 days.



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm sorry I made you cry! Thank you so much for the sweet review, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

I really love this story but each time I read it it makes me cry. That is a good thing though because it means you are an excellent writer that touches your readers. PLease keep up the awesome work.

   Marguerite

Reviewer: catseye1769 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

Oh damn you you made me cry. That was the sweetest thing when he bought the tickets and the lip gloss. Little things mean so much more. He really does love her and I have a feeling she loves him but is just scared to trust. Can't say that I blame her one bit. I have a feeling though that there will be a lot of drama when they get to forks. Like Alec or her dad. Keep up the awesome work.

    Marguerite



Author's Response:

Aw, I'm sorry you cried! So glad you like it though, thanks for the review bb!

Katie