Reviews by Nannyjojo
You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241002
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

I have a feeling 'Jimmy' could be part of this mafia.

Yeah what is the saying a lepoard don't change his spots. I think the same could be said for Alec.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Yeah, I am not sure I am trusting Mary of Lily. (Although could they be the middle names of a certain Alice and Rose?)Time will tell.

Go Bella, she finally stood up to Alec, not that that will stop him.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

mmm, Not trusting anyone at the moment.

Alec is out for Edward.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Yeah not trusting Mary or Lily, they ask too many questions.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Oh, James is back.

Can't be good. Yeah put two and two together Edward come on.

I am not fully trusting Aro either at the mo, I just hope he isn't setting Edward up too.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

OMG! What had Alec gotten them involved in.

I knew Lili and Mary were up to something. They said Uncle C so I am presuming Carlisle.

I am also going to go out on a limb and say as I think Mary and Lily are Alice and Rose, I think we could have a family union forming when they all get to the bottom of it.

I think Jacob is more involved too.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Yeah, I thought as much from Alec.

It does appear that he could see Edward wanted her. No wonder he got in there first.

Seems he was always waitng for something to be able to take Edward out. Something to use against him.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

I think that Edward is connecterd to the Leonis.

The man knows him as a Mason, has he always been connected to the mafia without even knowing it.

Is that why his mum and friend were killed?

So looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Yeah, things really don't go to plan. I am not sure they will be getting away in two weeks.

Looks like they knew who the 'snitch' was, but was it Aro or Alec that put up the hit on Angela.

Well that was some chapter. Aro knows about Edward and Bella, and we find out that Alec is trying stitch Edward up.

But why didn't they tell Aro about the whole 'Masen' thing, maybe they would have some answers already.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Even Caleb says it is on his blood.

And why did the name Masen save him that night.

Is Antony his father? Is that why Elizabeth didn't want Edward getting involved in the fighting?

So looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Looks like Alec is going to have a long list of names that are after him. Aro how much longer are you going to let it go on.

So it looks like we are going to meet the big C.

I am not sure what is better. Reading it as a complete fic or as a WIP. lol

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Wow.

Yeah, I guessed right.

Carlisle, Rose and Alice. But just how is Edward connected to them, Carlisle obviously knows his mother.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Oh wow.

Poor Bella. That is so much to take in.

But what will Edward do now.

Will the Leoni's and Volturis join forces.

How tied will Edward be??

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

I feel sick.But that is good that you got that emotion out of me.

He is crazy, good luck with that Alec.

Not only is Bella protected, but you just kicked the shit out of a top dog. haha.

Ciaus may believe you, but I am not sure Marcus will.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Well it is all out in the open now.

Damn I can't believe that the believed Alec.

Well I think they will have a shock coming.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Loving it so.

At least they are safe for the moment, but has James resufaced and implicated Jacob in coming to get Edward????

Will they now be looking for the Leonis too?

I love the Leonis.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Wow.

Yeah, he is a leader alright.

I think even Edward shocked himself.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Gee, that was a little HOT!

Now it is time to perpare for a battle.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Go Brawler.

Oh yeah, Alec will sure know now.

And Edward never thought he was a true leader.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

I think that would be a great job for Bella.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

I wonder if Marcus really believes that Edward did it.

Not sure Bella is going to be too pleaesed.

Yeah, Ben needed to know the truth, hopefully he wont be not trusted by Alec.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Yes and no.

This has me so hooked and yet I can't beleive it is all coming to an end.

Glad it worked out for Edward.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Go Edward.

Looking forward to seeing Alec and James being brought down.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

I am getting more and more nervous.

They are going to strike soon.

Loved this chapter.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Phew,

I had a feeling that Alec was going to crash spme part of the made party.

Edward wasn't going down without a fight.

I think Marcus knew deep down, but Alec played a good bluff.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Hell yeah, go Bella. She sure gave him what for.

Loved the chapter.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

Ha! Yeah I knew Alec only went after Bella cause he knew Edward wanted her.

He got his karma in the end.

Loved Edward's bonding time with Esme and Carlisle.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: You Own Me

So glad you have continued.

I have loved every minute of this ride.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717458
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I would imagine, Bella is thinking maybe Edward doesn't want her like that anymore after seeing her that way, and Edward doesn't want to push like he said, but time will tell.

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Looking forward to seeing where this will go from here.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Not liking Emmett. He has really listened too much too Jake.

Carry on looking, you wont find him, carry on and you could be next.

Bella has a lot to deal with, but I so tend to agree with Jasper, she needs to concentrate on herself first.

 

Loved the whole Bianca thing. 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow.

Looks like they think they can pull something on Edward, yeah think again.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Oh, I am with Edward, what is going to go down???

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Erm, isn't he meant to be laying low

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Love how they just connect in this chapter.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Looks like they could be finally getting somewhere with each other.

Loved the whole Jasper/coffee incident.

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Loveing his inner remblings

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Loving it.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

CJ made some good points, will Edward listen???

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Mixed chapter.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I was worried for a while they might dodge around one another, but I think they made it clear to each other.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Oh dear Bella, were you a little flustered????

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Hmmm, wonder what that is all about???

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Things seemed to have calmed down a little.

How long will that last.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Glad he and Jasper had a talk.

I expect Jasper has read between the lines of what Edward said about Jake.

 

It would seem that Carlisle may not fully trust his own son, with having Riley 'babysit' him. Time will tell.

 

Poor Jasper though having to see his sister like that, and not really know, even that it was going on way back then.

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Bella is so used to it, she still doesn't really know the difference to some extent. I mean this by her saying I'll be fine tomorrow.

But deep down she wont be. Edward will be gone for a few days, he seems to be her anchor at the moment, so not sure how she will cope, hopefully, opening up to Jasper.

Jasper has a lot to accept also at the moment, so this is going to be just as hard for him.

Sorry to hear about you ffn crap, I will follow this fic whereever you post it. I am sure some just like to complain.

Looking forward to seeing what will happen next, and esp what people think of Jake's sudden disapearance.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I think Bella will be even more full of emotions, and maybe fear for Edward's saftey, and maybe think this trip is more payback. Time will tell.

I also just hope Edward will be able to keep his mind on the job, while he is away.

 

Looking forward to finding out.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Oh dear Riley. lol

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Oh yeah.

I can see why the all seem to want Edward

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I would expect they both are not sure what  is going on, and I expect Bella maybe feels that Edward wont want her now, he see all that.

 

Thanks for the updates.

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

They both seem to be waiting for the other to make a move.

Bella seems to still having so much going round her head.

 

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Somnetimes I just want to shoot Alice and Rose.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Oh my!!!!!

So looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

They have let it go on for so long, neither on knows what to do.

Damn, why can't people just talk these days. lol

Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Oh no, my heart is breaking for these two.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I am maybe thinking he is jumoing to concilsions.

Time will tell

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Oh!!! I have no words I just want to keep reading.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Oh!!

Not good, but I have faith in you. I trust you, but I still want to run and hide for a while.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Well it is a start.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

That was an up and down chap

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Oh, how long can Bella go with out telling him.

So does Jasper know, or did he find out about Tanya????

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Oh Jasper, maybe you should have listened first.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Wow, what a way to find out.

So lookihg forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Crazy, crazy, crazy, but I love them.

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Well looks like Jazz and Edward made up.

So looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Aw Bella was sweet, looks like they just want to take care of each other.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Hehe. Loved it.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Leave it to Alice to tell the pair how it is.

Seems CJ and his crew are the ones who didn't get the memo, looking forward to finding out more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Oh I think I fell in love with Edward a little more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Hehe.

Loved it.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I loved it.

It puts more puzzle pieces down for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Loved it.

I understand where Bella is coming from. They may have talked, but she is still going to feel like that after Jake. He was after all putting it about.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

The plot thickens.

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Wow.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Oh. Has he set up his own son????

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Loving it.

Looking forward to seeing what will happen now.

Carlisle stopped Edward from goind to CJ'S, he could have been caught up in that. Hence why Carlisle told him to wait a while, he knew this was going down.

He took the bait with Joey and Edward didn't, but Edward not turning up at CJ's did that just make him an enermy???????

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

I had wondered if they would consider Edward the snitch.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

So now we know for sure.

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Looks like Edward hasn't found the balance yet.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Go Edward.

Will there be any comeback???

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Oh dear.

I thinik he needs to take a step back,

They have gotten through before, they will again.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.

WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Adieu Paris

Well, found you on here, and looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Choosing Battles

So can't wait to find out what it is.

Looks like people have noticed the change in Bella, wonder what Peter will think.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Last Stand

Yay, Go Bella.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Amusing Surprise

Haha, Oh Edward, that was funny.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Game Over

Wow.

YEAH, I would be so smug if I was Bella right now with Peter.

Karama really is a bitch.

Edward is full of surprises.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Saying Goodbye

So loved it

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Toujours, Paris

Oh, so loved this.

He went to so much effot and it was perfect.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 62: EPILOGUE

Loved it.

I had a feeling she may have been pregnant at the start of this chapter.

So glad it all worked out for them.

 

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am here for the ride.

So Esme is the sister.

Looking forward to more

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479009
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I'm intrigued. 

Confused. Kind of but it's the start of the story so plenty of time to go.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Still intrigued. 

Edward is kind of like a lost soul.

I want to hug him.

Bella is a character. 

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This could be interesting. 

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmm, that was interesting. 

I first instinct is to not trust her.

But I'm sure there is more to it.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She sure knows about them. 

It's a mob fic it should sounds alarm bells which in a way I guess it does, but it's also intriguing. What has Bella got up her sleeve.

Not trusting Jessica.

Kids aren't always wrong. I'd go with the kids instincts in this situation. 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really not trusting Jessica. 

Maybe Bella could be the new nanny.

Let's face it the kids seem to like her.

As for her taking them. I think he needs to be more grateful and up his security for his kids regardless. Bella obviously knows who he is.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So is the little cabin the same one Edward took his kids too?

Seems there was more to Charlies death. Could it be mob related.

Edward is feeling a little guilty now.

 

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That's gonna go down well.

Not.

Seems there is just as much for Bella to loose as their is Edward right now.

Reviewer: Nannyjojo Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm sure he didn't mind coping a feel. Haha.

No matter how much they try and stay away they just keep bumping into each other.