Reviews by justagirl1237
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: justagirl1237 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

This story moved here from another site 15 chapters in so it obviously doesnt have a lot of reviews here yet, which is why I am making sure I leave one on chapter 1...if someone is reading the reviews, trying to decide if they want to read the story or not based on the feedback, let me tell you...YOU DO!! I have been reading fan fiction for about a year now and I have only about 6 stories in that entire time that I LOVE...this is one of them. There are lemons but there is also a lot of heart (especially where we are in the story now!) and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!!

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Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

Ok - it's been weeks now since our little Edward ditched Bella "the morning after"....I've convinced myself that a really long chapter must coming next. Put me out of my misery and update Ms Kiki :)

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Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

Yay!!! I'm glad you are doing okay :) It's so good to have this story back - I missed these two!! And seriously? That was a hot chapter. Loved both little hook ups really. I like that Jake stopped because of his girlfriend. That was sweet :) and they can be friends, which of course, is what they should be. I am soooo soooo proud of Edward for apologizing. Good boy. Now hopefully he can be honest with her and tell her how he really feels about her. There's still a lot of baggage for them to get through but I can't wait to read about them getting there. Now don't leave me hangin' for another month pls - update soon!

Reviewer: justagirl1237 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

You made my day!! I was so excited to see a chapter update! I've missed this E&B :) It was fun to see his POV and that the boy is finally admitting his feelings for her to himself. Great chapter, as always!

Reviewer: justagirl1237 Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

another good chapter! Still lovin' this story. Wonder what will happen when they get around their friends? Hmmm... Update soooooooon please.

Reviewer: justagirl1237 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Still lovin' this story! U r the shit ms. kiki :) You have to update more often tho, your killing me with the long wait between chapter! LOL...cant wait to see what happens next. I'm glad she made a move in public. One of them needed to!

Reviewer: justagirl1237 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

No Bella!! I know she's afraid of being hurt but I really hope she doesn't do anything with James :( As far as Rosalie goes, I think she just made that up to piss off Bella because she feels bad about her own behavior. Can't wait for the next chapter (hopefully not too long of a wait!!) Great job, as always...

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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

Yah!! I was so excited to see an update on BDR!! And you did not disappoint. That was a really good chapter. They needed this time apart and are both using it to better themselves. If they'd stayed together, they probably wouldn't have gotten back into studying, Bella wouldn't be in therapy, Edward wouldn't have had time with his dad or to get to know Esme. I'm glad they didn't jump back into their old patterns of sleeping with other people. I'm so glad he's finally reached out to her though. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please don't make us wait so long :)

Reviewer: justagirl1237 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

JC Kiki...I am all tingly LOL. That was sweet AND hot! I didn't expect them to go to it so quickly after they got back to her apartment, but I'm glad they did. It was so THEM. I'm going to miss them though...I hope there will be an epi? Great chapter...Great story...just well done. I hope you will write more. You'll have to give me a heads up on twitter, because I never seem to get the updates from this site :(