Reviews by SGed
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

YAH! I found you. Re reading just because I can.... still love it. Smut-tastic xx

Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Geez still great....I loved it....

Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

“So?” she said, eyes wide and sparkling, like a designer-clad bush baby on E.

 

Bahahahaha...loved that line, though I hope others picked up on the Aussie humor there. Fantastic chapter, as awkward as I would expect it to be between them...And its nice that they're 'coming out of the closet'. Woohoo lemons next time, oh how I love the smut. I'll be waiting patiently.

Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

Mmmmmm Smut....I love me some smut, especially hot cars and smut...

Though the ending was a little dun dun DUN... What's with all the suspence lately? Everything I'm reading has a cliffhanger attached! Why isn't Bella so excited about Edward wanting to 'go steady'...Geez 'go steady' thats so lame. Hmm how about 'date exclusively'..'

Now what was I going on about? Thats right... the review, ok, yeah, why isn't Bella shitting gold bricks that Hotty McHotpants wants to get into her poon all the time and still learn her favourite colour and buy her Starbucks Frappes?

I'd be the Golden Goose if that happened to me, I'd squeeze out a gold nugget every 15 mins!

Have fun in Turkey, take time to visit Gallipoli. Its on the Dardenilles (however you spell it). I cried like you wouldn't believe.

P.S. Thanks for the chapter!! Sorry for the epicly rambly review, but I'm pressing that submit button anyway... Here button, button...

Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

Holy angst Kikiblue-man! Geez lay the angst on me...

Brilliant, truely brilliant, its giving Bella a real depth of character. Its changing the story from just a smut fulled spectacle, to an insight into a screwed up teenage girls mind.

You deserve a few 'we're not worthy' bows....

Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

Sorry for the hugggeeee delay in a review from me, but RL has been kicking my arse lately.

I loved the chapter, angsty, poetic, your writing style is growing and its wonderful. I cannot wait for the next one....

Reviewer: SGed Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Sniff Sniff, WAAAAAHHHHH, blubber, flailing arms and all* Sorry its the end of an era, I had to give you an over the top farewell. Oh lovely ending, and now I'm going to miss that story and you. I do hope you keep writing, or at least pop your head in and throws us fangirls some crumbs...

Thankyou so much for writing, your story pulled me into the whole fandom, so this is a bittersweet ending for me. Thank you.