Reviews by QuueenElizabeth
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is actually only the second story I read here on this website you can usually find me at ff.net but it has been total fail for the past couple of weeks. You know haters and all. *sigh* Anywho...I actually can't remember how I came to bookmark your story but I just started to read it. First chapter is interesting. I can't wait to see where you have taken this. The gang are all rich I'm glad Bella isn't overly conceited I don't like when she is. I hope Edward isn't THAT much older than Bella cause she'll probably be turning 18 and hopefully Edward is right out of college. I guess we'll see sooo...On with the next chapter!

 

-QE

PS: I tend to have rambling reviews that the authors over at ff.net can confirm for you. Sorry. lol

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hmm...interesting. Edward Fucking Cullen. ha!

18 years old might not be jailbait but she is still a student. I'm glad the age difference isn't larger. Now THAT would have been creepy. lol I like this I'm glad he noticed her from the beginning even when she was only 14 years old. Now THAT would have been wrong lol. I like it. I'd be a little scared of Charles though. Sounds like he could be trouble later on. I guess we'll see. I'm still here bb!

 

-QE

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LMAO great ending! I'm surprised Bella hasn't been able to read him better. I love overprotective big brother Emmett. I always have. It's so cute. Except when he is trying to tell her what to do. lol other than that he's too awesome for words. I don't want either of them to get into trouble for this. I really hope you have some fuckawesome way to make that happen. I wouldn't want Edward to lose his job or for Bella to have this written all over her damn record. I can't wait for more bb!!

 

-QE

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

lol I like his internal banter. It cracks me up. I'm starting to get really worried about him losing his job. They seem to be focusing on that one thing. I know there is a lot of other drama that you are just building us up to and honestly I'm scared it's like the calm before the storm right? I'm biting my nails here. Bella is mean. I can't wait to see what she has planned for the afterschool session! whoo!!

-QE

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

bb you have nothing to worry about. Of course that wasn't bad. I won't be surprised if someone heard them. I mean they did it in his classroom. I'm surprised no one walked in on them! lol That was hot. I'm so worried about Rose though. Cocaine everyday is not a good thing. I hope she's not that one that has the problems later on. Bella wanting Edward is a bad thing. They can't keep it a secret forever it always comes back in the end. I can't wait to find out what happens! I want to know what Edward was thinking. Ahh! Next chapter please...I'm so glad I don't have to wait for updates! lol

-QE

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aw shit, Rose gave her coke. So I guess Bella's the one that's going to have the drug problem. I hope it doesn't get too out of hand. I'm so pissed at Edward for what he did to Bella but I mean I can't blame the guy. He does have to protect both his job and his parents reputation. I just feel so bad for Bella especially cause she didn't know she was going to get so attached. *sigh* I'll just have to keep reading.

-QE

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay! So Edward did notice. Unless he heard it from someone. I can't believe he told her it was more than a fuck. I'm anxious to see where it goes from here. I'm so pissed at Rose for making it so easy for Bella to get addicted. *sigh* I hope Em doesn't find out.

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the lemon. I'm want to know what Edward is hiding from Bella. I hope it's good!! I can't believe they ended up fucking again. lol But he likes it when she's mad so I guess it made sense that they would lose themselves again. Can't wait to keep finding out all the secrets! eep.

 

-QE

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315856
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

Fucking Edward! I swear. I'm gonna smack Edward because he is soo in denial. ugh men! I'm so pissed off at him. I'm kinda hoping she has fun on her date with Jacob and Edward runs into them but I know Jake won't want her like he does his GF. They'll be friends still I hope. Can't wait for your next update. I just figured out how to use this site so I didn't know about the update. lol Great chapter though. How many chapters is this story going to be anyway?

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

lol I wasn't ready for this story to be over anyway! I love Bella and Edward. I'm glad they are finally getting their shit together. I guess I can see why Edward is mad at Daddy C but I hate that he won't even think about giving Esme a chance. *sigh* Thank you for the update! This was a great chapter.

 

Ellie

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Oh jeez, I hope Edward cracks first. hahaha Thank you for the update. Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

WTH is going on?! Why is she feeling this way?! Did I miss something here??

Reviewer: QuueenElizabeth Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

Ahhh! That was so mean! I can't believe this chapter ended this way! lol They are both so freaking stubborn its unbelievable!