Reviews by celtic
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Oh Shit, I hope Edward is part of the deprogramming team. Charlie needs to get his ass in gear and save his daughter. Renee can stay there for being so god-damned weak, senseless, useless and stupid. I can stand women like her and I've met a few in real life, they are worthless.

I love TTSS and all the other stories and now I've found another to hook me as well. I've read everything you gals have written including all the O/S. You ladies totally rock. I guess you ladies never write anything bad, which is fantastic for us readers.

Will be waiting patiently, but anxiously for the next chapter.

celtic   ooo

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

I got my alert.

What a sick fucker. I just keep chanting, please please please let Charlie rescue Bella. I am proud of her taking so long to get brainwashed. It's too bad Edward is a part of the evil, as Aro's son. I wish he was one of the good guys to help get her out of there and de-program her.

This is one hell of a mind numbing, gut clenching story. I love it.

Thank you so much for sharing, it is greatly appreciated.

celtic

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Gawd, this story has got me on tenderhooks. I keep hoping and praying someone is gonna wake up and realize what a demented pervert Aro is. I can't believe he is going to take Bella's aka Elizabeth's virginity instead of Edward. He is definitely a sick old fart. Come on Charlie come save Bella, she needs you desperately, cause apparently Edward is looney toons as well and won't or can't help her. Jeez, you think I actually got involved with this story and the characters or what, hahaha.

Thanks for sharing your awesome talents as usual.

celtic ooo

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Gawd, I want to kill Aro. He's a disgusting perverted dirty old man.

I absolutely hate the thought that he is going to be the one to take Bella's virginity. I so wish Carlisle, Esme, Edward and Bella would escape from there. Surely they all know this is wrong and what Aro is doing is sick and twisted.

This is such a mind grabbing story. It is definitely one you can't stop reading. I become more anxious for each chapter to come. This is without a doubt one of my favorite stories.

Volturi Order and Hit By Destiny and are in a tie for 1st Place in my list of stories I'm reading, and that is a huge list.

Thank you for sharing your amazing story.

celtic     ooo

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Oh come on, someone has to kill this evil bastard.

Where the hell is Charlie????????? His only child is being abused.

I sure hope to hell Carlisle wakes up and sees what's really going on.

This is one awesome, deranged story. I look forward to each and every new chapter.

Thank you both for sharing your time and talent. I really appreciate it.

celtic    ooo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

I love love love love this story. It has torn my heart to pieces and then stitched it back together again repeatedly. There is a part of me that is glad there is only a couple of chapters left so I can see how it's gonna end, but then there's a part of me that is sad that there is an end coming. These characters have become a part of my heart and mind for all time, just like family. I be back again and again to re-read this amazing story.

Thank you for sharing all your amazing talent and imagination with this wonderful story. It is greatly appreciated.

celtic   ooo

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

WOW!!!!

What an incredible beginning. I really hope you're one of the authors that update quickly, because I am already hooked. I love the whole story idea. I really love a bad-ass Edward, he is so f*cking hot. I really think it is f*cktastic that you made Alice a little bad-ass herself.

Thank you for sharing what I think is going to be an amazingly fantastic story.

celtic   ooo

 



Author's Response:

Aw! Thanks so much. The second chapter is all edited and ready to post, Im just having some problems uploading a photo to go with it!!!

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

OHHHHH!!!!!!!! I so love this Edward. He is so fierce and protective and loving, it just makes me melt.

I was reading this story on FF and was up to Chapter 10 and noticed you had 24 chapters posted, so now I'm having a fit cause I had to start all over and my curiousity is killing me.

Thank you so much for sharing such an incredible story with us. Your character developement and scenarios just blow me away. You are one massively talented writer. So I am going to be waiting anxiously for the coming chapters. I'm in for the long haul.

celtic   ooo

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76140
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

First of all , please let me explain I am in love with  and obsessed with this story. It is so awesome. I am praying fiercely that you will be kind enough to finish it.

I adore Domward and this Bella is innocently mesmerizing.

Question please. When did Bella find the playroom.  It was a huge jump from chapter 10 to chapter 11. Because there was never any mention of her exploreing Edwards house.

I am also reading PSO and it is good, but I think this one is better. So I am seriously dying for an update. Domward could have me anytime, hell yes.

You are an amazing writer who really knows how to draw your audience into your stories. Your character developement is amazing and so realistic. Showing their strengths, insecurities, confusion, fears, desires, etc. Very, very, well developed and written.  So I am completely frothing at the mouth just waiting for the next update.

Thank you so much for sharing your Awesome story with us, I sincerely appreciate it.

I tried to review at FF, but all I kept getting was an error message. So I guess FF is at it again. In case it isn't obvious Domward is my favorite. Along with Darkward, Mobward, Inkward, etc. I like my Edward dark and dominate, that is very, very sexy.

Keep up the fantastic job and again Thank You.

hugz

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whoopee!!!!! I was afraid you were going to be one of those authors that decided they didn't want to write anymore and just leave the story hanging. This is one fantastic chapter. I loved it that Edward and Bella finally got to make love, that was so sweet. Go Alice, damn that little pixie can get down right vicious, haha. I also love the way Jake was able to control Stella when she woke up, damn that boy is smart.

Thank you for continuing this awesome story and this wonderful chapter. I hope Santa was good to you.

Happy Holidays to you and all your loved ones.

hugz, celtic



Author's Response:

Never! i care too much about my fans to torture you like that. I was just too swamped with my first original story being published in February to get anything else done. there was also the issue that i have 12 or 14 fanfiction stories running so i had to catch up on all of them one at a time. I also have two more orginal books that are scheduled to be published in the next year, but i plan on stocking up on the chapters so i have them to send out slowly once my break is over.

I promise more to come real soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Happy Holidays to you and yours as well!

Michele / Nails233

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh My Gawd, please you have to continue this story. I love it so much. This has been the best chapter yet. I was laughing so hard I cried, "Alice and the fruit". Esme comments and Edward's reactions had me laughing so hard I had to hold my stomach. Your description of their facial expressions and inner dialog are hilarious, I love it. This is such an awesome story, different from any I've read. I really, really like that everybody is friendly and gets along. Although, I feel horrible for Seth. I hate that his father has treated him this way over something that isn't his fault.

Thanks for sharing your time, talent, and wonderful story with us. It is greatly appreciated.

celtic

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a wonderful review! Rest assured this story will be continuing, the next two chapters are already being beta'd so when I get them back I will post them immediately! Thank you again, it's nice to hear when people like what I write.

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That vision of Alice's can't come about, nonononononono. Since Bella is a mental shield someone needs to change her to a hot fierce vamp, then maybe she can throw her shield around everybody to protect them. Or maybe she can just whip the shit out of Jane, yeah I like that idea. Some payback on an evil vamp after what Alistair did to her. I wonder why Alec can't just destroy all of Jane's feelings and senses to give someone a chance to destroy her? He can do that with other vamps. Especially since Jane will destroy his mate if she gets the chance.

Thank you again for such an awesome story. Now I am waiting anxiously for the next breath-catching and/or jaw-dropping chapter. Or maybe another gigglefest like chapter 15.

celtic

 



Author's Response:

The only reason Alec hasn't done anything to her is he hasn't seen her to do anything. Alice cant see what he will do until he decides and he is trying not to think about destroying his twin sister. So we have to wait for them to confront each other and then when he decides Alice will see it.

Next two chapters are done as soon as my beta sends them back I will post them. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story!

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I fall more and more in love with this story with each chapter. I love it that Esme rocked Victorias world, that's a HELL YEAH. Your character creations are incredible, they could be real people. I love it that you have made Tanya a friend in this awesome story, instead of a rival for Edward as most stories do. I hope Jack tells someone soon that James looks like the man who was with Victoria. Cause I know Jack remembers him, by Jacks reaction at the Gala. Bella needs to tell Edward about Jack's reaction.

Thank you for sharing your time, talent and amazing story. It is appreciated. One of the best stories I've ever read. I am now waiting anxiously for the next Awesome chapter.

hugz, celtic



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?

I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.

"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.

"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.

"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"

Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."

The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.

"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"

"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.

 

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

I really loved this chapter. I like the way you had Victoria die, she had a chance to redeem a little bit of her lost soul before she did. I also love the fact that you had Bella take James out instead of Edward. That was hot. All in all this is one fantastically awesome story. When it's finished I'm gonna have to go back and re-read the whole thing again.

Happy Holidays to you and all your loved ones. And Thank You for sharing your time, talent, and awesome story. It is appreciated.

hugz, celtic



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

OMG!!!!!!! You just made me squeal like a little teenage girl with her first crush, hahaha.

I love, love, love, this story. I'm torn in two. So sorry it's ending, but glad that I'll know how it ends. I hope that makes sense.

Thank you so much for sharing. This story has the right amount of everything, angst, sexy lovin', tension, romance, hilarity, and moments that just take your breath away. It's so good that when it's finished I'm gonna go back and read it again.

hugz



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG!!!!!!!
I am so in love with this story. It is so different and the characters are amazing.
Thank You for sharing your Awesome story. I really appreciate it.
Since this one is so good, while I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter, I'm gonna go read your other story " Living Amongst Hell ".

hugz

Author's Response:

Aww THank you sooo much!!! You've totally made my day =)  I really apprciate you taking the time to read. It means a lot to me. I'll post the next chapter(hopefully) ch 14 and 15 right after the other asap.

Thanks again,

Jells

Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gawd,,,,,,, I am so in love with this story. Edward just keeps getting hotter and hotter and better and better. Bella is one fuckin' lucky human.

Fantastic storyline. You never disappoint.

Thanks again for sharing, I really do appreciate it. I'm already anxious for the next chapter.

hugz



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Your comment made my day! I'm So happy you like.

Ch 16 is complete. I just have to finish editing and send to my beta. I hope I won't disappoint. lol

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I so love, love, love this story. Each chapter just keeps getting better and better. Nice cliffhanger by the way, hahahaha. Now I'll be on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.

hugz



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Your comment made my day *big hugz*

I'll have ch 19 posted today or tomorrow at the latest. My poor Beta is having some RL issues si i'm self editing a 15k chapter myself lol

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so in love with this story. This Edward is the hottest vamp I've read about and I've read a ton of these stories. 

What a nice little cliffy, hahaha.

I have only one real concern regarding this story and that is that Edward will have to go to jail and leave Bella, that she won't be recognized as his true mate. She has already been through so much. So please don't separate them.

Plus I can't hardly wait till we get to the part where James dies, I hope, I hope, I hope.

hugz



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! Your comment made my day =)

This is def a HEA and Bella and Edward will stay true mates. And James will get what's comin' to him.

I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I had to rewrite what I had, first draft was lost. =(

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This is such an amazing story. I am so happy that you have updated. I was afraid that it was going to be one of those that never get finished and leave the readers unsatisfied.

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

This is one amazingly fuckhawt story. I love this Edward and Bella. I can't wait for their next lesson on the touching. I hope that the other four show up again for the lesson, cause that was hilarious, gawd I love Emmett. I am really really really disappointed in Esme. I kind of hope Bella gets the chance to chew Esme's ass out for what she did to Edward.

This awesome story is so addicting that although you are so good at updating it never seems to be fast enough for me, hahaha. I'm not complaining, just letting you know how good I think your story is.

Thank you for sharing your incredible story, talent and time with us. It is appreciated.

hugz, celtic

Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm sorry you have writer's blues. You're such an incredible writer, I hate to think you might have writer's block. I'm reading several of your stories and am loving them all. Like "The Third Wife" & "When The Missing Come Home" & "The War Of The Worlds" as well as this one "Be My Sub".

I'm not much of a reviewer, since all my reviews would likely sound the same over and over again. Please know that those of us that are reading your stories are loving them so much.

You have some other stories you're writing but that I haven't started reading yet. I don't want to have a whole list of WIP's that I need to keep up with. Because then the stories all start to run together and I get confused. But rest assured, I do plan to read everything E/B you write. I seriously wish I had a talent like yours.

By the way, I love all the characters you have created in this story. They are so believable. Edward is to die for. I adore Esme, she definitely loves like a mother. Alice cracked me up at the lesson. Plus I feel really sorry for Bella, now that I know her side of the story. Billy Black is a prick.

Thank you so much for sharing, I do appreciate it.

hugz

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

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Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Leaving Paradise

Please, please, please, let that be Edward's baby. That pathetic crackpot that kidnapped and raped Bella doesn't deserve to have his bloodline continued. After all the bad she has endured Bella deserves to have something really good happen for her. Finding out it is really Edwards baby would be a blessing she truly deserves.

Thank you for sharing this incredible story of yours and your time with us. It is greatly appreciated.

hugz

celtic



Author's Response:

Celtic~

This is one of the nicest reviews I have gotten in a long time...Thank you so much!  I always thank people when I review for sharing their story because sometimes (much like mine) parts are true to the writers life.  Therefore we are really sharing.  I did not live through the extreem stalking, but I was raped by my ex husband after I filed for divorce and ended up pregnant.  I have not decided one way or the other if this will be Edwards baby or Alec's, but I might leave it to a vote, but that will have to be soon...Because I am writing chapter 35 right now.  Thank you so much for reading my story and for reviewing it too.  Reviews make us Authors/ff writers all warm and fuzzy inside!

Kasi~

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hi Cullensgirl90,

I want you to know how much I've enjoyed your story up to this point. You're one hell of a writer.

However, I sneaked a peek at chapter 39 to get an idea if Edward had grown-up at all. Then became very disappointed that it wasn't gonna be an E/B HEA.

So as much as I admire your writing, this is where I get off. I am strictly an E/B reader. I can't stand the thought of them being with anyone else but each other.

I wish you much luck & success with this story and hope you get tons of good reviews. Because this has an awesome beginning. I just don't like where it's heading.

By the way, I loved, loved, loved your story Lord of Authority. It was amazing. I like said, I'm a B/E fan. I won't even read stories that have either one of them cheating on the other. But Lord of Authority really kicked ass. A rotten, mean & sadistic Edward that turns into Gold. Perfect.

hugz and good wishes.

 

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: celtic Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surviving the fisrt day

Interesting story, but please don't make Bella out to be nothing more than a klutzy dimwitted bimbo with over-active hormones and no self respect or control.

I'm hoping you'll have her turn the tables on Edward. Especially since he is being so disrespectful to her. Making jokes about her to other people, that's in very poor taste. Maybe have her quit and then Edward will have to track her down if he wants to torture her some more.

I'd also like to know why Mike Newton decided to send her to this job. He didn't sound like he wanted her anywhere near him or NYE ever again.

hugz 



Author's Response:

Since I'm not the author of this story, I can only make assumptions. Mike Newton must have been asked to rehire Bella because the Cullen Corp. owns N.Y.E. and Edward Cullen might have pulled some strings in order to see Bella again. Now, I can not make things happen one way or the other because i'm only the translator, and if i'm telling you in advance what is going to happen, as there is 22 chapters of this story in French so far, I may spoil the plot for the other readers. But I can at least tell you that Bella will stand up to Edward :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

Another amazingly awesome chapter. You never fail to deliver.

You are driving me completely insane with the mystery POV, hahahahaha. I can't tell if it is male or female. This is really difficult for me, loving this story so much and being completely frustrated at the same time, LOL.

Thank You again for sharing. Now I'm gonna go crawl back up on my pins and needles till this weekend.

By the way, I think you are an amazing woman. To have such a full plate, with 2 kids ( 1 that needs special care ), school, work, home life, etc. Yet you still find the time to give all of us so much fun and pleasure with your imagination and talent. You are indeed amazing.

hugz

Reviewer: celtic Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Abducted

OMG, I just went over CRAZY HILL. You are seriously making me NUTS!!!!!! hahaha.

The only thing keeping me going is my warped sense of curiosity and your promise of an HEA. Although I'll probably be certifiable by the time we get there, LOL. You are so good at TORTURE...................................................................

Now I'm gonna sit here, twiddle my thumbs and pray that the days pass quickly so we can get to the next chapter.

Thanks again for sharing, you are AWESOME...

hugz   xxxxx