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Bio:
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515222
Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
Hey Amanda,
I don't know if you still get reviews for this story, but if you do, I just wanted you to know that I can't help myself. I had to read it again. I've missed you terribly for the longest time, and I'm so, so proud of all you've accomplished with TWCS! Congratulations and job well done!
Tammy
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255159
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
I'm so greatful for the update. I've just found this story, and I love it! I must say that I've been reading 50 Shades of Grey and I have a great suspicion that it originated as fanfic probably on this site - and the author changed the names. I find myself wanting to review every chapter as I read it. I mention this because I want to tell you that your story is better in every way than that one. Your characters are deeper; your storyline is more complex; your BDSM is better (much); you explain the emotions involved much more thoroughly; and finally the feelings evoked in the reader (me) are much more intense! In conclusion, if she can do it, you can! Go back, change these names, locations, etc., and submit this story to Amanda - TWCH publishing side - and try to make a go of it. I really don't mean for you to try to ride the coattails of 50 Shades of Grey, but my God, girl, this story is heads and tails better that that! Just my humble opinion - for all that's worth.
Tammy
Author's Response:
Well thank you Tammy, that was very kind of you. and you are right ICY (E.L James) did begin her story which was entitled Master of the Universe on FanFiction.Net ...TWCS picked it up and published it...that was a FF story i had started reading and waiting for updates from since almost the beginniing of the story ... and yes she did change the names at this time my story needs to be finished first and then I'm not sure how all the OT's would figure in, although i suppose the story would stand alone ...it's something to think about, but thank you for the praise and thank you for reading ...louise
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108
So, yeah, is "Polished to Perfection" a sequel? I haven't noticed that you name your chapters, so what gives? Please spill.
The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.
*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.
Beta'd by HollettLA
Banner by CaraNo
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717458
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Hey Lexi,
Lovin' it. It's good to hear from Bella. I know she's not all right, though she's putting on a good front. I'd love to see Rose get a hold of Jake. A swift kick with her stilletos would do him a world of hurt. Too bad he's out of commission. Maybe Emmett should take his punishment instead. It sounds as if Rose should put him in his place more often. He's definitely a dick in this story. CJ obviously needs to teach him a lesson or two. I don't think Emmett has quite gotten the idea that Edward is on the inside track. The "my boy Edward" hasn't quite sunk in, yet. I don't think Emmett has gotten the idea that Edward, despite his lack of experience, seems to rank higher than he does at this point. It will be a rude awakening when that fact hits home. I can't wait. Hmmm, seems to be trouble in paradise for CJ and Marie. Stepping out on your wife will do that. Doesn't she know she's a trophy bride? Well, at least Jasper seems to have given Bella/Edward his semi-blessing. Is he appeasing Bella in her mood, or is he for real? Only time will tell.
Tammy