Reviews by jessabellew
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One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315852
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

I am so glad I found this story over here.  I have been looking at different sites to find my favorite stories.  I go to twilighted often but it is nice to have more then one place.

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay I am so glad you are not pulling your stories I love them and am looking forward to reading more.  Thanks for keeping your readers who appriciate you in the loop.  I look forward to more.

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have been following your stories on ffn and would love to see them updated.  It makes me made when people are critical of a story that they are mostlikely not going to keep reading.  I love this story and look forward to reading it here. Thanks for giving me the chance to keep reading it and keeping us readers informed of were you are posting it.

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Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752950
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

 I read this story from begining to end and feel in love with every chapter and was sad to see it end.  I love Bella's strength in the face of danger and her ability to let her weekness show when she can't hold it in anylonger.  I love how Edward screws up alot in the begining to finally get the girl.  I am also over joyed that they got to be happy together for most of the story.  It kills me at times when I fall in love with the characters just to watch them strugle through sadness.  Great story. thanks so much. 

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 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Torture

You know I have had some sick fanatasies of torturing people.  Not that I have followed through with them but a girl could dream.  I am pretty sure you are sicker then I am and I love it.  I so loved this chapter.  Thanks for the update and I can't wait to hear what Bella is thinking about after this,

Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Hungry Like the Wolf

I sat down yesterday evening (well friday night since it is sunday now) and started reading this story.  I have a tendency to get really involved in good stories.  I finished catching up just know and I have to say that you have caught my attention in the best way.  I am a huge Jasper/Bella fan.  At first I was so heart broken over the losses that these two had went through and how Bella had been cursed then it all started falling into place and I am so ready for more.  I love your spin on the whole story.  I love the extra characters that fit right in with the old ones and the new ideas that you haave incorporated with everything else.  What a great story.  I look so forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you like it so much.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Brothers in Arms

No those dirty rotten S.O.B.s.   I hope they get whats coming to them and more.  thnaks for the update.  Paul's healing was truely great.  I can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - It all comes tumbling down

Oh ya torture the other two and make them pay.  Very good chapter.  Thank God Jasper saved Bella and thankfully Emmett saved Rose.  i hope not to many people got hurt.  Thanks for the update and I look forward to reading what is going to happen next.

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG.  That poor girl can't win.  Other then her bitch like attitude, I feel bad for her.  I hate mixed signals and I have had my fair share.  I truely hope Jasper can to her rescue soon. Great update thank you so much and I look so forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Yea, Bella's all mixed up and doesn't know which way to turn. Good thing Jazzy will be there to help her out!

I believe there's some good action on the horizon, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Some how I have a feeling that isn't jacob this time.  hehe. Well for having writers block you did one hell of a job.  back ground is important when you are trying to have the reader feel how much the characters mean to each other other then lovers.  thank you so much for the great up date and take your time you are doing great.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the encouraging words. I was worried that you guys wouldn't appreciate the back story and see how important it is to the development of the characters. But I see that I was worried for nothing. Thank you for easing my fears. :)

More action on the horizon, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh I am so glad he finally said that.  I would think that eventually Bella is going to crack with all the horrible stuff that is happeneing.  I am also wondering what Edward will be doing next to get to Bella.  I can only imagine.  I am so glad you are doing better with your writers block.  I loved this update.  Great chapter and I look forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts.

Lemons on the way next, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Very hot and steamy.  some how I didn't think about Bella being a virgine.  I liked a lot very nice tub scene and i am so glad they talked things through that tension can kill a relationship.  I always love J & B lovin.  As a matter of fact it is my new addiction.  I would love for Bella to walk in on Rose and Emmett that would be a great way for Bella to break the bews of her and jasper together.  Stalker action is good as long as no one else gets shot unless it is the bad guy.  Thanks so much for the update and I am looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and sharing your suggestions.

Hmmm...Bella walking in on Rose and Em, that's a good one! :) I may have to add that in somewhere. Thanks!

 

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Can I have a Jasper to please? :)  that really worked for me.  Hot damn I had to read it again.  I can see Emmett Being mad at first but sees how happy Bella is with Jasper and then gives his blessing after threatening Jasper with bodily harm.  That would be a tipical brother responce.  I am so lovin this story the suspence and lovin are wonderful. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the suggestions!

I hope to update by this weekend.

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh ya i love car sex.  With four kids it gets really hard to find time for that but some how we manage hehe.  James should be an interesting addition to the story and I really hate Alice already.  thanks so much for the update and I can't wait to see how things go with Emmett.  I hope there isn't to much blood when Bella kicks the crap out of him (wishfull thinking on my part) Till next time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Chapter 15 has already been sent to my beta's, so hopefully the update won't take too long!

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

No knitting it is boring, writing is way more better for your wonderful imagination.  I am thinking that Emmetts reaction was right on the money.  Oh boy and Rose let lose and what a shock that Bella actually had proof of Emmett and Rose's little love affair.  What the hell is Edward thinking, he hates himself alot doesn't he.  Jasper is going to literally kill him.  I had such a sick feeling in my stomach when Ana Marie was crying when Bella came out to help.  I so hope he doesn't mess her up any more then she already is and do something stupider then Oh i don't know kidnapping her.  Idiot.  Thanks so much for the wonderful update and I mean it no knitting your hands have much better things to do.  Thanks again. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and your support!

Ok, so no knitting for me!

And we haven't seen the last of the Em/Rose drama! *hint hint at more to come*

Here’s a little teaser for the next chappy:

 

 

Emmett dropped his head with his own guilt.  “You’re right, I didn’t even think about it. I thought she was safe with the new fence....”

 

“Em, I c-can’t live without her, I can’t…“

 

“I know…I know,” he said, tears in his own eyes. “We’ll find her. We have to.”

 

My phone chirped indicating a message and something told me that I needed to check it. It was from Edward.

 

I have taken back what is rightfully mine. Her body will belong to me. - - EAM

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have no doubt that something will happen to get Jasper into that house, weither it is just Jasper or if he gets help he will get in.  I am so scared that Bella will be scared even further by this.   I get that you want assward around in to the end but I can't help but really want that boy shot in a very sensative area.  I can see Jasper flipping out and having to be pulled off of him by Peter and Emmett.  That would make sence.  Near death wold work for me.  You could knit Edward some new support undies for his hospital bed.  (haha)  I am just glad that Jasper is so close.  It would be even more fitting if Bella managed to get away and beat Edward up with a blunt Object and Jasper had to pull her off of Edward.  That would be good therapy for her.  I am so frantic for her to be resued that I would be good with just about any situation that would make him stop hurting her and have her back in Jasper's arms.  Thank you so mych for the update and I will be waiting by my computer for more on how you handle this ugly situation. 



Author's Response:

Knitted support undies! That is funny. LOL

Thank you for reading and supporting my story!

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love that Jasper got to beat him up and that bella got to wack him in the head and knock him out.  I am loving the fact that they tied him up in the basement and gave him a bowel of water to drink from "like the dog he is".  love it.  The fact that Jasper got her to talk was so good for her now it might be easier to tell her story to everyone else.  If you are still knitting you could knitt him a collar and a matching doggy sweater. As for Jasper from behind hole cow that boy could spank me anytime.  Thanks so much for the update and I am so looking forward to Hearing Bella's story.  I have wondered from the begining what exactly happened.  Maybe it will help them all figure out who it was that did that to her.  As for Bree I love how you wrapped that little part up and made it all happy.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I really look forwad to reading your reviews; you always tell me exactly what worked and that's encouraging.

Thanks so much for your support.

 

T

 

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: To Keep You Safe

Well hell I hate bugs rats don't bug me as long as they leave me alone but bugs yuk.  Poor Bella that really sucked.  I'm glad she nutted the guy but getting beat up for it rather then raped may have been worth it.  Poor Jasper I want to hold him and make him all better.  that poor baby.  I was laughing at Em and Rose, I am thinking that they are both at fault for this whole mess but Emmett more so then Rose.   Men can be so stupid at times.  I am hating James he feels like a "rat" to me.  I have read very few james characters that have won me over.  I am still lovin the water bowel for Edward. Lol to funny.  Future chapters could be group theropy for bella and jasper or Bella and Emmett hell through rose in there with swim suits and mud and it would be really fun.  that's my style of theropy.  That is so hard though coming up with more to write.  If I was in your head when you started writing it would be easier.  Since  I'm not I will offer my support with a great review and though of naked Jaspers with the eclipse hair and crooked smirk dancing in your head. Till next time.  

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Jasper I hate reading about all mad and sad.  I love it when rose is all caring and logical.  I think they might be on to something.  And what is with Ben's text, I so hope that it isn't Bella getting kidnapped again.  Thanks so much for the update.  I seem to be a day behind on everything lately.  So hope I am finally caught up on updates.  Great chapter and thanks so much for the update.

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

For some reason I forgot to review when I finished reading a few days ago.  So here I am.  I was glad Riley finally broke and I was also glad that Jasper could piece more of who hurt Bella together.  Bella must be freaking out pretty bad about the pregnancy thing considering she is convinced that Jasper is cheating on her.  What will Jasper do.  That is my new version of WWJD.  It seems fitting for this moment.  Thanks so much for updating and I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks for coming back to share your thoughts with me!

A little more angsty B/J drama coming up.

 

T

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanks so much for the update.  I am looking forward to hearing Jaspers explantation of that wrapper.  Great chapter and great punch from bella. 



Author's Response:

Writing diligently as we speak.

And thanks for not flaming Bella, she has a tendency to get whiny. LOL ;)

 

T

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I could never be mad you let them make up and have hot smexy time almost twice.  Bella not being pregnant is probably a blessing with all of hte crap she has been haveing to go through.  The kid would have came out with a nervous condition right from the get go.  As far as Edward, ug, who knows with that boy, I think he wines to much anyway.  He needs a life.  He is  probably all bitchy about Bella wacking Tonya.  I still think she should have hit her harder.  I can't fault Bella for being suspision.  I personally spied on my husband when we first got married.  I got pregnant right away and he worked with so fine skinny girls.  I was so worried he was going to cheat on me I almost wrecked my own marrage.  Thank good I got over that.  Thanks so much for updateing and continuing to share your wonderful roller coaster.



Author's Response:

LOL --> the kid with a nervous condition! he he!  That is FUNNY!

Thanks so much for your continued support of my fic!

 

T

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ya know i would kill that woman if she did that to me.  I mean my in-laws are not the best and we have a few tense moments but they are respectfull for hte most part.  I think I really dislike Jaspers Mom at this point.  i hope Bella doesn't straggle her with her napkin or anything.  Thanks so much for theupdate and as always I look so forward to reading more of this never boring story.



Author's Response:

Oh, there is a cat fight brewing, and it may just surprise ya!

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow well it seems to me that the person who is trying to kill her is very close to home to have been able to plant a bomb.  I hope that everything is alright.  Emmett oh drunk Emmett will sober up quick wont he.  Thanks so much for the great chapter and I love what he did for Bella.  I hope Emmett comes out okay in all of this and I am glad Jasper healed good. Thanks again.



Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the date! I need somebody to do that for me! LOL :)

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: jessabellew Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am rather glad you didn't hurt him to badly.  I almost started laughing out loud when jasper's mom confessed her issues.  I caught myself in time to not wake up kids from their naps luckily.  I so knew there was more behind it then what she was letting on.  That thing with James is to creepy.  I am interested in reading what his office is like and what he has done that is so shocking.  For being a nerdy little thing Bella sure does attract alot of attention doesn't she.  Thanks for the update and I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the Maria backstory!

And you're right, Bella just can't seem to stay out of trouble! LOL

 

T