Reviews by maria2906
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315860
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: maria2906 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

OH.MY.GOD!!!!!! I've missed youuuuu!!! And your Bella and Edward soooo much!!

This chapter was absolutely amazing!!! I tried not to gag a lot with the Jacob scene, I barely succeeded :P

I loooooove how the chapter developed, and OH.MY.GOD the B/E interaction slays me, for real!!! Such intensity, so many feelings that make them so scared!! But I love that they're finally both brave enough the explore them! I'm so proud and happyyyyyy!!!

Thank you!!

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Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

awwwwwwww our baby is growing up!!! I love how he treated Rosalie and how he's starting to see through all the pretencies and the games! He knows what he wants now!!!

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Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

awwww they're so cute!!! "You and me against the world Swan"!! Died!!

I so hope they stick together until the end, I'm afraid of Bella's insecurities and self-destruction characteristics but I really hope Edward will keep her afloat and relieve her of those terrible feelings inside..I can't wait for the next one!!

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Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

awwwwww the entire chapter was amazing!!!

I am so happy they're starting to realize that they want to be together for real!It seems that Edward is a lot more concious and determined about his choice, which is a good thing, because Bella is still struggling with self doubts so she needs Edward to be her constant in this. She's so used to being treated as a means for pleasure that she's finding it difficult to understand how someone can actually care about her..that is just so sad :( I'm so happy that she finally has someone :)

The last sentence just shows how scared she still is, she's afraid if she lets her feelings grow that someone will get hurt..I only hope that she doesn't make any decisions based on her fears, every relationship has risks, it's the fact that we take them that makes us live our lives..excellent chapter!!