Reviews by rachaelmalfoy
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

really! you end it that wayyy! thats just cold..lol update sooon soon soon pleaseeeeeeee..

 

btw great chapter very sad but good none the less



Author's Response:

thank you, and you know I will

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

thi story is amazing and addicting.. every monday and thursday morning i get on here before i even get out of bed and read the new chapter and then get readyy.lol. very sad i wont be able to do that this monday but i can completely understand..

rachh



Author's Response:

Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a yeaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*whiness* thursday is too far awayy pleasee update b4 thennnn...

great chapter very 'hott'.. cant wait till the next onee..

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review ...lml

Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

its missing its missing its missing!! i cant see the storyy all i see it the authors noteees! what can i do to see it??



Author's Response:

the whole site is down...i can't get any stories

Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

thats just an evil way to end the chapter! lol cant wait till thursday noww

Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I love this story and I just spent the last 4 days rereading it! Please finish it!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268906
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

you ended the chapter like THATT.. thats just evil..lol i cant wait for the next chapter nowww im obsesed



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm quite cruel ;)

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i love this storyy.. i am hoping it ends up being more than a short story and ends up being a full one cuz this is amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was just sitting here thinking about that! i was not sure if people would want me to make it a regular lenght story. I have some pretty exciting stuff starting in chapter 5, a whole lot of twist and turns! i really don't think i can jam it into another chapter or two. This is my first all human story so i was not sure how well people would like it. Thank you for reading it and reviewing! Nails233

Love is the Master by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Levi Daniels comes to speak to Ember Collins' roommate about a case.  Sparks fly instantly and they waste no time getting to know each other.  Levi is looking for more than a sub and Ember seems to be exactly what he wants.  She is new to being submissive and wants to learn as much as she can from the sexy older Dom. 

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When feelings start to emerge can they hold it together?  Will Levi be able to balance his love for Ember with the Dom that she needs?  Can Ember understand that love and submission can go hand in hand?  What happens when another Dom shows an interest in the couple? 

 

Follow these two through their adventures and see where they will take it.  How long will it take for them to learn that Love is the Master?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101977 Read Count: 24754
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2016
Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good so far I feel bad for him but still he abused her trust and kinda deserves it



Author's Response:

Yeah that's how I feel too! 

I can't send private messages so to get Ember's pov you'll have to go to my Facebook page and join the group Frogie48's Extras.

facebook.com/tracy.hancock.1291

Thanks for the review!

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

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My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112978
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: rachaelmalfoy Signed
Date: 17 May 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This one was okayish



Author's Response:

thanks for being honnest