Reviews by crazymama
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923286
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Ho, boy... her consummation "ceremony" is liable to be a lot more painful than expected!  I'm really hoping that was some kind of tattoo, but who would mutilate her pussy the nightbefore her de-virginization was to take place? That is wrong in so many ways!

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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

hmmm... nature? or nurture?  or both?  Either way, he's one sick puppy.

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Damn straight, Aro should have the decency to be insensed on Tanya's behalf! And Vlad is Gianna's son? The one she doesn't want to abandon? Or is he Anna's son? What a tangled web you weave! But if he is Gianna's, run, girlfriend! Run fast! and don't look back!



Author's Response:

Vlad is Anna's son. Giana's son is tiny... like a few months old i think.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh, shit! seriously?  I pick now to catch up on this story RIGHT BEFORE they finally make love?  Ugh! I hate waiting!  But I am glad I found it again! I hadn't noticed how long it'd been since I'd seen an update from FF. I am glad you hinted to me to come on over to the non-sonsoring TWCS.  So much had happened since I last reviewed! All I can say is... I really hope Edward gets an opportunity to do to James what his Gramps did to Aro!

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Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Finally!!!!!

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh heavens, no! I meant Vlad the torturer is the total creeper! sorry!  I agree with your reply whole-heartedly. I just meant that the blood play thing is really on the very fringe of acceptable period. I mean... not like this, clearly, but I gather that it can be a consensual form of play, but I think even so it would be hard for an outsider to ever accept as being within the range of normalcy. Have you ever heard of anyone actually enjoying being on the receiving end of that kind of pain? 

I am so sorry for the misunderstanding!  I have nothing but the utmost respect for your bravery in putting yourself out there with your stories.  Speaking of which, i am eagerly awaiting the sequel to Midnight Caller! hint hint...



Author's Response:

ive been looking for u to clear that up. you have no idea how much it bothered me. I can't stand blood play, which is why it was not very detailed, and you can ask my betas, i kept saying, "is it turning you on? I dont want it to be sexy."  I need to get midnight caller on amazon first, then the sequel!  Thanks so much for the review, and come join the wreck room. 

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think this kind of sadistic play is what gives BDSM a bad name. Creeper!



Author's Response:

I suppose this is because some people don't know BDSM from torture. There is no BDSM in this fic. Do you not read the author's notes? and please tell me that you didn't get to chapter 51 and not enjoy this fic? Perhaps I'm reading your review wrong. I hope so, because it sounds like you are calling me a creeper.

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Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Finally! Knight? Check. White horse? Well close enough....

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

Good for Rose! And good for Jasper!

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Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Ooh, yeah... Edward will get to kill him afterall!

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Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

Finally! Communication is a good thing!

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

Damned straight! Way to go, Eddie boy!

I have to say, though, it would be SO hard to just live your life after something like that. I would never trust people again! I would constantly be looking over my shoulder! It certainly helps that Aro and James are out of commission, but what about the guy whose baby Esme and Carlisle are now raising? And all the others? You would always need to remain vigilant.

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

What the... ? So someone related to baby Bree's mom? Sent by Bree's former owner? Or the father? Or are we going with ghost Bree?

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Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 76

Ha!  The butler did it! Or was it Colonel Mustard with the lead pipe?



Author's Response:

soooo funny!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028942
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 235: Chapter 235

OK... you're right, Noc, it is WAY better here on TWCS than on FF.  Hopefully I can actually review, though... I've had trouble with that here....

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

Yes, please! That's my kind of lunch break!

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Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

Mmmm... if only it really was vanilla and hazelnut!

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Ha! That's some "personal brand of heroine!"

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Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

I wonder if Edward will consider actually fucking her after she's consumed some of his cum and has taken on vampish qualities....

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Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 252: Chapter 252

aaaw... poor broodward.  He totes needs to hear Bella's profession of love.

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Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 257: Chapter 257

Hmmm... I wonder whp owns Murphy's Florist.  Alice, perhaps?

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

Ha! I think that's as close as Jake's ever gotten to Bella's holy grail.... Poor Jake. He just can't handle the temptation!

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

Wow! first punishment and she has to safe word!

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

The anticipation... it's killing me!

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

Squee!

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Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

Unsure-of-himself Edward is so cute!

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

Yay!  I'm so happy for Edward. He needed that!

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Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

Silly little Butterfly... Trust!

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Oh for shitssake! You. Are. Killing. Me. The slow burn is fucking excrutiating! Sooooo cloooose! But not quite there!  Pleeease, Mistress!  Pleeease let her see his face tomorrow!

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

Nice place to end. Sweet closure to this part of their relationship. I can't wait for the sequel! Clearly this changes everything for her, for them.