Reviews by jonzie
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923439
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

!!!!!!!!!!  Face splitting grin :-D. Can't wait!  I've been wondering what's been going on back in civilization too.  I've had a migraine since yesterday, and you just made my day!

-jonzie

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Oh, my gosh... this had me crying so much that I could barely see to read.  Can't wait for the next update.  How much longer is this story going to be?  I still love it, but it seems like there's a while to go still.

-jonzie



Author's Response:

There is a lot more of the story... but as for the time on the island... no, not that much longer, two or three chapters depending on how I break it up

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

WTF!  What is he doing to her?  I hope it's just some kind of tatoo.  (Wishful thinking?)  I dunno if I can wait two whole weeks to find out what happens next!  So don't feel bad if you feel the need to post sooner.  I'm sure we'd all understand.  :-D

On another note... is Edward gonna figure out that Alice is actually his long lost baby sister?  Will she help him along by remembering something from her first three years of life?  And has anyone ever asked how Alice is Aro's daughter if he can't personally father any children and has no other family besides Edward?  (Well, Edward and Carlisle)

 

-jonzie

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

So I'm finally caught up!  But sooooooooooo ready for the rest.  I'm not really a patient person.  (well at least not when I read your stories)  I got sucked in on ffn, (I thought they were completed fics), but then when I got here and realized they weren't all finished I was already hooked so I had no choice but to read.  Now I'm all anxious n shit waiting for chapters to come!  So here I am now, on my knees, begging for more.  Please???

 

-jonzie

p.s.  do you have an update schedule, or just write when you have the time?



Author's Response:

I was trying to do the every other tuesday thing. Hope I can stick to that.

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Is it wrong that I axtually like the tat??? 

Glad that the wedding is finally done.  James was starting to scare me with all his 'creative' ways of torturing Bella.  Hopefully he won't get his hands, or any other body part, on her again.

I'm wondering what Bella was thinking though.  Knowing her, she's probably still thinking Edward doesn't want her anymore, which is just fueling HIS insecurities.  I hope they clear the air, and soon.  This chapter wasn't long enough for me.  I want more.  :-(

-jonzie

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

Of course he would run off and assume.  smh  C'mon get it together man, you're raining on our parade.

So glad the gang's alright.  Now we just need to find those rat bastards and make em pay!

 

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65

Jasper is a hoot!  Lol 

I'm scared for Edward tho.  I just wish he wasn't going searching on his own.  I mean... what exactly is he gonna do if he actually finds James?  I don't remember him having any fighting skills.  But then again rage and revenge are powerful motivators.  

And when are we gonna find out who that mystery pov was???  It's easy to assume that it's James, but there were other males in that house that weren't named.  Soooo, give us a hint?  OR... was it Edward on his new burner phone, putting his plan into action?  Naw, can't be.  He was accounted for during the explosion.  But I do think that one of those FBI agents is a mole!

Okay, okay... no more conspiracy theories.  Please feel free to update sooner than two weeks.  :-)

-jonzie



Author's Response:

The mystery POV was one of the agents or police officers on the island communicating with James.  You should be scared for Edward, he's not thinking straight. I did promise a HEA for our couples on the island, so don't worry too much. :)

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

Aww, so happy for A&J.  And poor Bella going through it all alone.  Edward sure is gonna feel stupid when he realizes that Bella's still preggers.  Then he'll have something else to beat himself up over.  I get that he's been traumatized too, but he knows that Bella had genuine feelings for him before the island, so I still don't get why he would think that would change???  Well, he has so many beyond illogical ways of thinking that I just can't keep up anymore.  I hope when he does finally figure it out that it sticks, because I hate when they repeat the same asinine behavior over and over again.

Anyway, this chapter was funny and sweet.  I can't wait for the next one to see what's up with Tanya and Bella.



Author's Response:

thanks for the sweet review :)

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

I'm really starting to question Edward's intelligence.  First of all, even if he was upset about Bella's supposed abortion, after EVERYTHING that they'd been through how could he seriously not even have one single conversation with her?  Instead of him assuming that she wanted nothing to do with him, he should've at least confirmed that.  Especially with everyone telling him that she needed him.  For all he knew, even if she did have an abortion, it could've been because she COULDN'T carry a baby.  After all the physical trauma that she endured on the island, that was a real possibility.

And secondly, does he seriously think that he'll be able to track down his targets by himself?  He barely had the mental capacity to function on the island and figure out things.  Jasper always had to intervene and either calm him down and/or point out the obvious.  So strategic planning is definitely not Edward's strong point.  Add in the fact that he hardly knows anything about Aro and his network, how does he really expect to figure anything out?  And the trail is getting colder and colder the more time passes.  Well, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for him.

Glad to see Tanya adjusting.  I vaguely remember Garrett having a crush on her back when Edward first met her.  I think he's single-handedly restoring her faith in the male species.  It's nice how he's becoming her companion and not pressing the issue.

Once E&B finally figure things out, I hope Edward doesn't plan on moving them back to his apartment.  It feels too tainted to me.  He needs to show her that she is his only priority and special to him, above anyone else.  She was already struggling with not being wanted by him before the island, then him being with her out of obligation on the island, and him completely deserting her the minute they're off the island.  And it seems like he puts everyone else before her.  So it's gonna feel unrealistic that he wants her now.  She'll probably think he's there just because of her pregnancy.  No one wants to feel unspecial (I know that's not a word) in the eyes of their man, so he needs to go above and beyond to show her what she really means to him.

Okay, my review is officially too long.  :-D. Sorry. Lol. can't wait for more!

-jonzie



Author's Response:

ooooh I hope I can write it well enough for you. Im gonna do my best. 

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Oh, shite!  Please let Bella have a gun or something and shoot off his dick.  I know Edward is on his way, but I really want Bella to gain some power back and make James pay.  Then Edward can finish him off, after torturing information out of him.

And I have a feeling that Peter didn't actually commit a murder-suicide.  Hehehe

 

-jonzie

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

I KNEW IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  So excited!!!

 

-jonzie

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 302: Chapter 302

mmmmm, yes!  damn I need a man.

-jonzie

Cover Girl by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 146]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Finishing up his senior year, Edward receives his acceptance letter to UNLV and embarks on a trip with his older brother Emmett to see the campus. Unbeknownst to him, Emmett has other plans for the trip and Edward finds himself face to face with the woman of his dreams, the girl from the magazines, his Cover Girl. Will he keep his cool, or will he crash and burn?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54016 Read Count: 16933
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2014
Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oooh, I think Eddie boy is gonna love it!  More please.  *bats lashes*

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just started reading this.  Loving it so far, and can't wait for more.

 

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yeah, I'm team Edward over here.  I definitely think he overreacted a lil, but he had a right to be upset at the way she handled coming out to him.  If she had done it differently he probably would've been shocked, but he most likely would've looked at it as Emmett did, the best of both worlds.  But the way she threw herself at him made him lose respect first for Rosalie, then for Bella.  It was trashy, and he was never attracted to trashy.  To him it was probably like finding out that your favorite superhero was really just a drunk, who only "saved the day" because he was fighting for the last bottle of booze.  It's devastating to find out that your hero isn't who or what you thought they were.  

But if he can calm down a lil, he'll realize that Bella/Rosalie are exactly who he thought they were.  From the beginning he always said that he liked Rosalie so much because he could tell there was so much more to her.  He saw her intelligence along with her beauty.  I actually think it's his inexperience with relationships that is the cause of his humiliation, and his humiliation is causing him to be overly harsh.  Yeah, Bella handled it all wrong, but she's not wrong for wanting reassurance that he wants her for the right reasons.

Also, it seems like Bella thinks that he is mostly upset about her dual identity, but I think he's upset about her testing him.  He never said anything harsh about what she did for a living, he was pissed that he wasn't trusted with the truth and then she made him look stupid.  The male ego is a powerful thing.  So I hope that he tells her that.  She was far too self depreciating in that letter for my liking.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113980
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Lmao!  Perfect.  Out of the mouth of babes.

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 3 (part 1)

Where are Esme's kids during all this?  She seems pretty full time with Edward.  

I wonder if Bella has started to put the pieces together and is wondering why baby Charlie doesn't have his own personal supply of breast milk.  Ooohhhh, she's gonna hate Tanya!  lol  I hope Edward finally does too.  Because Tanya's actions are beyond inhuman. smh

And as gross as it is, Edward is probably ecstatic to experience his first blowout.  Lol. Things are looking up!



Author's Response:

Esme's children are with their father. She's been there for about 2 days. She doesnt' live far from Edward, though she's spent the night while the girls were visiting Dad. Esme is separated from their father. That's its own story. :)

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (part 1)

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 (part 2)

Lovin it.  I just wish I had the patience to wait for a week so I could read more at once.  But I have no willpower.  :-D



Author's Response:

I've been called the crack queen before...lol...

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 2 (part 4)

I wonder what that wistful look was about... does Esme have baby fever?

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 2 (part 5)

"Bizarre sex game"... lol, I bet she wouldn't mind one of those now!  

And poor baby Charlie, he'll probably smell her milk immediately and start rooting for her.  Hope he doesn't drink too much on his empty lil tummy.  That's if Bella comes out of shock anytime soon. 



Author's Response:

I love your review. It made me giggle. Thanks for responding to it. Hope you love what's coming up. 

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 2 (part 6)

Lol. It looks like Bella just met her celebrity crush, and Charlie is the only thing keeping her from fangirling.  

Are Edward's eyes really brown in this story, or was it a typo?



Author's Response:

They're brown. I didn't realize it when I wrote it, but that's how  see him. Sorry if it messes things up for you :(

 

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 3 (part 3)

Loved the picture of Bella you used.

She arrived just in time.  Well, it could've been a lil sooner.  But baby Charlie is gonna be just as happy as Edward is for his food supply.  Maybe even a lil impatient.  :-)

Reviewer: jonzie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

I know I should have waited until tomorrow to read this update!  Arghhh!!!  I don't like this cliffhanger.  :-(



Author's Response:

Sorry the next chapter will be a.... (cliffhanger response!)

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Wow...smh.  Jasper Jasper Jasper.  Now I would expect that comment from Emmett.  such a pervert.  Lol

Reviewer: jonzie Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Lmao... those pictures had me cackling. Lol