Sweet! I bet even Rosalie is beaming at Edward. Love how your characters are developing. Please update soon.

Great to find your story here. I've stopped going to Twilighted after incessent virus issues. Thank you for a very charming trip to the gutter in this chapter. I like it that Bella's in control and owns his ass, because frankly, he needs to grovel more. This Bella seems to live as if every moment is her last, with no regrets or apologies. She draws me in. I have a harder time warming up to this Edward, minus his mad skills in bed, that is. I do love your style however, and will follow every update.

It's a really promising start, I'm curious to read how you're taking it further.

First of all, wishing you good health, because without you happy and healthy, we wouldn't have this mindblowing fic. I feel like a kid in a candy store reading this chapter, it's just chock full of deliciousness, with the decisive way Edward took care of Bella's family problems, to the heat in the playroom. Can't get enough of these two!

I think that you're brilliant in creating this paradox of an Edward who alternates between sweetness and the perverse. Fantasizing about butt plugs, then not even wanting to consider another sub as long as "there's a shred of possibility" with Bella. Keep doing what you're doing and don't change a thing!!!

Please *puppy dog eyes* update soon. From what we've read so far, their first meeting is sure to be explosive.  I really like the flow of this first chapter.

Fave line,"..a damn phyton under the towel!" Yeah, your Edward could charm any snake too. This early update in BPOV was such a succulent treat. The austere schooling has definitely not Bella uptight, she's refreshingly wild yet innocent. Great chap.

Very, very nice seduction unveiling here. I love the buildup and slow burn...just don't know how much more Edward( or I) can take!  The "BUMP" in the teaser sounds promising. Can't wait!

Now I can never read "Red Riding Hood" to my daughter or else I'll think of a different kind of riding. That's ok because this terrific tale is completely worth it. Thanks too for the extra treat of faithful updates!

I'm craving updates for this addictive story like I'm in my first trimester or something. This chapter was so yummy!

Damn, but you're good! I like posessive Edward since is stems from his insecurities, like Peter possibly being a better match. It evens up the playing field, with him much older and influencial than Bella. I think it's hot that the hidden vulnerability manifest as posessiveness.

With every chapter, the grip tightens and I'm a bigger fan. I'm glad that Isabella could see though Tanya's bitter rant, her tears are expected as a sensitive 18year old in a relationship for the first time facing a much more experienced/jaded woman. Would love to see another showdown where Tanya is the one in pieces though.

This is one badass Edward. He serves her a scrumptious breakfast, gives her a lavish wardrobe, plans a magical Christmas, makes music on the piano and in bed...in reality, most women would have died from sheer bliss. Good thing characters in FF are made of stronger stuff, that's why I love FF and especially your fic.

Very hot and addictive, yet nicely balanced with sweetness and vulnerability. That victorian erotica just erased years of Catholic schooling...totally worth it though. Please don't leave us hanging too long with that cliffie!

So much for getting to know him "outside of the bedroom", but yeah, I'd totally jump his bones too. This paragraph, "From the day I saw you in your father's mind, I was enthralled.....the day I was inside you was the best day of my existence, words cannot describe how I feel now that you love me" slayed me. You poignantly expressed the onslaught of emotions that hit this century old vampire and how he's irrevocably changed. I'm sitting at my computer with a big grin, thanks to you.

Whoa! That was infinitely sexier than drinking from a deer or grizzly. No more vegetarian vampires for me! I wonder how Edward is going to solve his conumdrum, he finds drinking from anyone else besides Isabella distasteful, yet he's dying to change her. Hmm, can't wait to savor your next update.

Edward caught in the crossfire between Bella and Tanya is so funny! There aren't that many stories out there with a perfect blend of sexual tension and humor, but you've nailed it! I hope that Edward will settle for some self help in the shower, than go to Tanya to ease his desire for Bella. Like water for chocolate, scrumptious truffles to unfilterd city water.

These two just kill me! great story.

Very entertaining :)