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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I have loved this story from start to finish, you really are an excellant writer keeping the reader on the edge of there seat wanting to read more and more.

I cant believe that this story is almost finished, i am going to miss jack.

i will keep you on my favorites for any more story you may post.

Thanks again for all your hard work, this stroy was one of my favorites.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I loved this story from start to finish, you really are an amazing writer.

I look forward to you new stroy, thanks for all your hard work time and effort.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty - Feliz Navidad

anouther brilliant chapter, love this story and how Edward and Bella come across. keep up the great wrting, cant wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for all you hard work that has gone into the story



Author's Response:

Awww, yay!!! Thank you so much, Hun! I'm stoked that you're liking it! I'll keep it up if you keep reading...deal? ;)

Xoxo

~K

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254888
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

love this story always keeps me wanting more. the relationship between the two is growing and i cant wait for more. happy christmas hope you have a good one



Author's Response:

Thank you... Merry Christmas to you ...Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a yeaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Anouther briliant chapter, can't wait to see what trouble she gets up to at the club.

The relationship between Edward and Bella is growing with each chapter and i always look forward to your updates, to see what these two are getting upto and how far they move forward with each day spent together.

Thank you for all your hard work and effort that goes into wrting this story, you are an amazing wrting and i wish i had your talent.

Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Another brilliant chapter and I love this story it is not to long, each chapter is well written and emerges you in the life of Isabella and her master. Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you for all you hard work and effort that goes into the story. I have been reading it from he beginning and well stay with lib till the end. THanks again see you next time



Author's Response:

Thank you...I'm glad your still with me

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28910
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I have loved this story the up's and down. Bella is a really strong character and I loved the conection between her and jasper. it has been one ride from start to finish and i always looked forward to reading the next chapter.

Thank you for all your hard work that you put into writing this stroy it was one of my faviourietes.

i look forward to any future stories that you may write, and will keep you on my faviouries. thank again



Author's Response:

Thanks Chickie! It's hard to stop writing THaTH, but it was time to end the story... Now that Josh is there, they are complete!

I will be writing another story, just not for a while! I am working now, and tax season doesn't end until April 18th, so it will be after that!

Hugs~Izzy

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: One for the Money

I know how you feel my father has just been diagnosised with throat cancer and it's in the lympth nodes he has just started chemo and diets going to be a long road head with more chemo and radio therapy. We are all trying to saty strong for him and my mum and he is ready for the fight, but it still sucks right now. Christmas will be rough with dad being feed through a tube. Hope you are still staying strong and need to keep fighting I know it's not easy but some times there is now other choice, keep fighting this horrible disease stay strong, good luck with you treatment. 

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923172
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

 Can't believe we have finally got to the wedding I love this story and have been following it from the beginning. Thank you for all you hard work that that has gone into writing this story. I always look forward to your update. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks again keep up the great writing 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

An amazing chapter can't wait to see how she reacts and how he is going to say sorry as he has misrepresented her. Monday can't come soon enough keep up the brilliant writing love all you stories. 

Summary:

Altered Paths

 

 

 

What happens when Jasper makes a discovery he simply can’t ignore?

 

Will contain: language, violence, explicit sex, drinking, smoking, gambling

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Family, Horror, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119498 Read Count: 17474
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 – Shackles, Ropes, and Chains

Thanks for the update love this story can't wait to see where you take us next keep up the hard work looking forward to the next update

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157706
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I love this story and have voted for you so good luck I hope you get through

Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Amazing I have read it from the start loved this story and have always enjoyed your regular updates. I love this Edward and Bella they are a great couple. You are an amazing writer I can’t wait to see what you do next thanks for all your hard word and effort on the story.