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Ever wonder what Bella dreams about when she calls out his name? Not my usual type of story was written by request. It was written for a fan for Christmas and we decided to share it with everyone who like this sort of story. Rated NC-17 for major mature and major sex ooc au/reg pairs EXB this story is not light and fluffy so readers beware. NO INCEST, RAPE or MULTIPLE ENCOUNTERS. Vulgar language please dont read if you dont like swearing.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36388 Read Count: 17524
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
See? Practice makes perfect! You keep writing these dreams and pretty soon your face won't be red anymore!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
That sneaky little Alice! Whatever she has to do , I guess!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Several things come to mind. Tanya being the one to help Edward and not being slutty about it was a nice sueprise. The baby being saved by Kate's shocking it was cool, and it being a sonwas great. Now, if Carlisle was in time to save Bella, then all we have to worry about is finding Jacob and killing him! The dumb bastard almost killed the girl he supposedly loved and broke the treaty to boot!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
It figures, Carlisle being the peace-maker that he is. There definitely should be some severe punishment for what Jacob did to everyone, including the child.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
That's my girl! Bella wakes up hungry for Edward before she's hungry for blood! That was a different gift for Masen to have, tracker instead of shield or mind-reader like his parents. It's good that everyone is healed and in good health again. It was a close thing for a while. Jacob damn well ought to be guilty over what he did!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Wow, that was quite a resolution to the whole treaty deal! Charlie knows about his grandson and Bella being a vampire and the wolvws have to look out for the family! Talk about poetic justice!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Bella is doing really well, being around her dad. The whole family is prepared to accomodate her "condition", especially Edward. Those nomads are going to be a problem, I can tell.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Good thing vampires heal from horrendous injuries like Bella's! Also a good thing Masen is a tracker, so he could help rescue Aunty Alice. Loved hoe Jasper ripped off the head of that vamp that tried to steal Alice. It was great to see the wolves help out in the reacue, too. Now they all need to find that red-haired witch and kill her!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I'm so glad the newborns and their maker are no longer a problem, that has to be a relief to the family. The amazing thing was Demetri and Leah! Who knew a Volturi guard and a female wolf would imprint? It didn't hurt my feelings when Felix killed Alec and Jane was demolished, either!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Your story was surely different and a lot of fun to read! A most unusual condition you visited on Bella, by the way! I'm off to read the outtakes now!
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108993
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm already picturing the tattoos on them both.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really love when they meet like this! Very promising beginning.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Though it's awful for Lily to be feeling so bad, you're right, they have met! I hope she goes to lunch with Edward and his father!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I think Carlisle having tats is great! I can see that Bella and Edward need to meet and get to know each other. Since they have Rose and Jasper in common, that may be a possibility.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
That really was a perfect birthday party for the twins, as well as their daddy!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Sounds like everybody had a real fun Halloween!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
The timimg was right and they truly are a family now. That was beautiful!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I'm glad Bella told her boss what to do to himself, and I'm glad she knows how wealthy Edward really is. They ought to just quit dancing around and get married!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Good for them, it makes perfect sense to me!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19
The nursery sounds like baby girl heaven, and it was so sweet of Bella to sell her house to the pregnant war widow! I'm thinking that maybe she will get her book published?
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue
Loved the epilogue, and am only sorry you quit writing fan fic several years ago! I think I will read the five chapters of the sequel to this story, though.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Yes indeed, time to fish or cut bait!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I'm glad they enjoyed their trip through the haunted house, that sort of thing gives me nightmares!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Guess Bella is better at girl talk than she thought. That, or maybe it was the company!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
As close as Rose and Emmett are to Bella and Lily, it figures that Em would warn Edward like he did.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Such fun at the pool, but even more, I thought, when Esme and Alice told those jerks where to get off! What is wrong with some people? It was so sweet when Carlisle told Bella she was one of them!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Looks to me like everyone is pleased with Edward and Bella meeting and getting to know each other. It was fate that poor little Lily had the colic when she did, since it led to all kind of good stuff for her mama!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
So many people think Seattle is constantly rainy, not knowing how beautiful it can be on nice days! I live in Central Washington, so I really appreciate that view of the city at sunset. I think it went real well for a first date!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
This is a really good start for the two single parents, abandoned by their respective spouses! They truly do have a lot in common.
Edward and Bella have loved each other since they were kids but never said anything. When circumstance brings them back to Forks will they get their chance at forever or will the memory of the past be too much to live up to? Originally written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44128 Read Count: 16278
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: I Remember When
Fate has a way of stepping in at just the right time, at least for these two! Falling in love with your best friend is always a good idea! Sure makes life a lot easier. Bella has a lot to deal with,her dad being the way he is. Edward needed to see Bella to figure out what was missing from his music. I'm thinking this coming home at the same time was meant to be!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Stare at You
Poor Bella, what a burden to shoulder! I feel so sorry that she and Charlie have to go through this! It's great that she'll have Edward to help her and be there for her! The view from his apartment is great and I like the kitchen too!
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Way You Look Tonight
Their celebration was perfect! The clothes, the dinner , the show, and that gorgeous song! It brought a tear to my eye, as they say! I have my fingers crossed that Charlie will be a little better, and Bella and Edward get their happy ever after!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: If You Go Away
I'll bet money that Lauren and whoever the new singer is are up to no good where Bella is concerned! They probably have designs on Edward or something similar. Can't say as I blame Bella for wanting to be more important in Edward's life, either. Just hope this doesn't mess things up permanently!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Where Do I Go From Here?
So, Emmett has met the awesome Rosalie and Alice is deeply conversing with Jasper! All is right with world once again! Edward and Jasper working together and starting their own company sounds like a great idea. If he can convince Bella he's changed, all will be well in Edward's world, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Step by Step
From the sounds of it, Bella is getting what she wants, a life of her own , and Edward is determined to be in that life! Good for both of them! I want them together, too!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Dirty Dawg
I'll bet you were getting a lot of bad thoughts on this one! Bella in a burning building, and no Edward around to rescue her! I know you said the next chapter was coming right up, so I will go there now and read it!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Never Let You Go
Hell of a wake-up call! Now that she's where Edward wants her, Bella will probably never leave. It must have scared him bad when he found out how close he came to losing his Bella! I'll bet he won't let her out of his sight real soon!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Baby, I Believe in You
What a lot of stress and pressure there is in Edward's life! Good thing he can decompress in the evenings. It's probably a bit scary getting the new company off the ground at the same time, so he has double stress! Poor Rosalie, she really got the shaft, as sometimes happens to women in a male-oriented profession, I understand.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Tonight
Looks like the show is a rousinf success, so Edward can take a deep breath. Their lives will be even better when he and Jasper get their project up and running. The only fly in the ointment is Charlie's health, which is not sounding too good.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Let's Play House
It just isn't going to get any easier with Charlie, poor Bella! After that lovely dinner party, with the excitment of her new responsibilities at work, and the surprise of Alice and Jasper's marriage! With all the fuss and feathers, it's so great that Edward and Bella have each other.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Keep on Smilin'
Jane isn't so bad after all, at least in this story. The girls will be thrilled if the guys win big on Tony night! That was quite the conversation between Edward and Bella , about the possibility of her having dementia in the future. Scary thing to contemplate, for sure!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Keepin' My Fingers Crossed
Had a feeling that the boys would be big winners at the Tony's, and that Volturi Productions would try some smeaky thing. Good old Caius, what an ass!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Outta Nothing At All
What a unique way to propose, and how very lovely, too! Jane turned out to be a blessing in disguise, saving them from what would have been a really awful situation! Life is looking good for Edward and Bella!
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: This One's For the Children
You are absolutely right, that was the perfect way to end this story. I enjoyed reading about a way of life so different from the one most of us have, and about such nice people living it!
A canon one-shot about Edward Cullen's first human kill in 1927.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1395 Read Count: 94
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Thanks so much for the glimpse into Edward's past, and how it affected the way he viewed himself. All kinds of guilt there, more than enough, even for a vampire mind to deal with. His penance, sending reparations, so to speak is just so Edward! His conscience has always been one of the things I've admired about him!
Miss Lillie runs a male escort service called Naked Cullen Boys, Incorporated. Come watch as they make every girl's dream come true!; AU/AH; Nominated for a Bellie award for Best Multi-Chapter Smut!
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/OC, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33425 Read Count: 6544
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Tammy, Jasper and Edward
That was quite the gift Tammy received for saving Miss Lillie's life! Both Jasper and Edward, what an embarassment of riches!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Lea, Emmett and Jasper
Lea seems to have gotten the best of both worlds! Wild and rambunctious with Emmett and slow and sensual with Jasper! Lucky, lucky Lea!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Jill, Emmett and Edward
What a great way to become exhausted! Even if Lillie and Edward are kind of angry at each other, I see it didn't stop him from thoroughly enjoying himself!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Juliet, Jasper and Edward
Edward told Juliet not to confuse sex and love, and then makes love to her in the rain! What could be more romantic? Jasper is no slouch, either, so Miss Juliet had such a wonderful evening!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Cella, Jasper and Edward
It was almost mystical, how Lillie swapped the guys for the painting that looked almost like them, with her!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Angie, Carlisle and James
If he wasn't having such a good time, I might almost feel sorry for Carlisle. It's no fun to be alone because you can't trust anyone to love you for yourself!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Miss Lillie and her NCB boys
What good friends to give her a gift as fine as this one! Happy birthday, indeed!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Tasha, Fats, Carlisle and Jasper
I kind of like that it is Carlisle that's into the more exotic practices. It is a different slant on him, for sure!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Kiara and Jasper
Sure can't disagree with that statement! It was a fabulous first time, perfect in every way!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: The Wedding
While it may not have been the usual way to relax the n ight before the wedding, it seemed just right for Lillie, Edward, Jasper and Juliet! Marrying on the beach in Bora Bore was the icing on the cake! A lovely ending to all these little gems!
My version about what happens between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn. Bella and Edward push the boundaries of their relationship, while Emmett, Jasper and Rosa must go abroad to keep the Volturi at bay until after the wedding. Alice is the only person that knows everything. B/E/Emm/APOVs. Rated M for future chapters. Canon.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84289 Read Count: 10852
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: The End and The Beginning
Edward had to have one last fit of angst, I guess. Lucky for him his love gave him the best wedding present I ever heard of. It probably meant more to Edward than anything else Bella could have given him. There will be problems ahead for them and the rest of the family, but that's just life. Being vampires, they just have more interesting problems. On to Polar Night!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bachelor Hunting Party
The guys can see clearly how much Edward has changed, so their sacrifice was not a wasted effort. Edward's reception of that tale was probably a shock to both of them. Alice was correct in all she set in motion, even though it was so dangerous. Emmett's declaration really touched Edward mostly because you don't expect that kind of thoughtfulness. On the other hand, Emmett loves his family as much as any of them do. I think the training with the dragon fighters changed a lot in his mind.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Reunion
I'll bet Emmett got a shock and an eyeful, looking in Bella's window. Nearly as big a one as Edward is about to get when his brothers tell him the truth about where they've been.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Confessions
Good Grief! Alices's work is never done, so it's a good thing she's a vampire because she's got more stuff in the air than a juggler at a circus.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: The Long Night Redux
Those pesky brothers! Wait until Edward finds out where they have been and what they've been doing. He is going to have a major cow! Danger from the Volturi is just what a guy wants the day before the wedding. Poor baby, he just had to ask one last time, if Bella really wanted to marry him and become a vampre. I knew he couldn't resist.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Last Night Part II
It was kind of cute when Carlisle told Edward to be safe and his thoughts went to babies. He wishes such a thing was possible for himself and Bella. The wedding looms ever nearer.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Last Night Part III
What a voyage of discovery, for Bella and Edward! All I can say is how he loves her is beyond description, and it's exactly the same for her. Wonderful, wonderful,as in full of wonder! You do such a great job!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Payment
Thank God for good friends! I really had my doubts about the outcome of that battle. It sure didn't end the way Aro intended it to! I'm so glad the're on their way home and the wedding is in three days. Now they just have to figure how to stay away from Volterra.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Last NIght Part I
How astute of you, Edward, to notice you've been a bit distracted lately! Now that the visions have turned out right, Alice is euphoric. I'm pretty glad they made it back too.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Why
Alice is so strong, mentally and emotionally, it's scary. She has so much faith in Jasper, in her visions, it's amazing. Not to mention the faith Carlisle and Esme have in her. I wonder if Edward will ever find out what a gift his sister has given him and Bella?
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Reversal
This was the epitome of lust, love and romance! You wrote a hell of a chapter here, and I loved it! Edward and Bella forever!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Discovery
The lying, cheating, miserable bastard, Aro must have known there were twice as many newborns. How the hell can the three Cullens fight fifteen vampires?
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Arabian Nights
I'm not bothering with a long review, just telling you how absolutely beautiful those words were, from Edward's heart to Bella's. I'm in awe!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Penance
It amazes me that Edward can't see what a truly good man he is. Just going down the list and trying to make things right for the heirs of his victims, that's not what an evil person would do.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Arabian Days
The Cullens can make friends anywhere, and it sure pisses off Jane! That evil little bitch can't stand goodness, I guess. It was very good of Chun-tao and Dong-mei to teach them all some new techniques and to make friends. Too bad it got them in trouble. Poor Jasper, he needs his Alice-fix, bad! I wish they could fight the newborns, win and get back home.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Faith
This is what every engaged couple does, or should do, anyway. Get to know each other, their hopes, dreams, fears and foibles. The more you know each other, the easier it is to live with another person.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Sunset
I definitely want to go on a picnic with Edward! That was lovely to read. Alice knew just what to have Bella wear. It tickled me to hear her talk about Bella looking like a Vargas girl, as I'm well old enough to know what that is! I wonder how much longer Alice can contain her misery over Jasper. She must be able to see the hard time he's having, resisting Sehkmet. Maybe he won't be able to?
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Arrival
That Aro is a sneaky bastard for sure. Sahkmet has hit the nail on the head, Aro wants to break the bonds of the Cullen clan. He knew how Sahkmet would covet Jasper and try to draw him to her. No wonder Alice asked him if he loved her and would come back to her. She must have seen what was to happen. Poor Alice, and poor Jasper. The only happy one is Emmett, he can't wait to fight.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Temperature
The truth is there are hot springs all over that area, so Edward knowing of one far from humans is perfectly believable. They had a great day and Bella never had to worry about being too cold. Of course, now he knows where to take Bella for their honeymoon.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Acquiescence
Charlie is a typical, loving father, worried that no one is good enough for his daughter. His caring extends to Billy's son as well. He's got the search all organized, not knowing how little it will matter. Jake will come back when he wants to.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Italy
So, the Cullens are off for Arabian Nights! Oh joy! I'm not surprised Emmett lost his cool and ripped Valentino's head from his body. It was a close thing, but hopefully all will be well! Too bad the escorts have to be Jane, Alec and Valentino. At least he may be a bit leary of Emmett's muscles and temper now.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Alone
Bella might as well take a deep breath and wait for Charlie to get his mind wrapped around the fact of her approaching nuptials. He loves his little girl, he'll come around. Bella has so much on her mind right now, she might give thought to yoga or meditation. Just in case Edward can't be there 24/7, you know.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Stuff of Legends
Looks like Alice will get away with hiding where Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie are going and what they are doing. At least Edward has made up his mind to go along with Bella's plan, to become accustomed to each other. Smart boy!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Offense
Here's hoping this mission, as Emmett refers to it, will go well. Jasper can manipulate emotions, alright, but who knows what the three of them will encounter in Volterra? This may be a bit tricky, as they say.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Considerations
That was quite a nice, brotherly conversation between Emmett and Edward. Em does have his surprisingly commonsense, caring moments. Edward is perhaps too aware of what he doesn't know and needs to. I'm curious, too, about what is upsetting Alice enough that she wants Jasper and Emmett's help, right now!
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Happy Place
Bella always felt inferior to Tanya, which was so silly. Why didn't she remember who Edward proposed to and get over her worries? Alice being Alice has got preparations underway and Bella a bit calmer. That go to your happy place deal really works for Bella. Alice should try it on Edward and soothe some of his fears as well.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Restraint
Very well thought out and quite possible dialog, for this part of the saga. Always wondered why this time frame wasn't expanded upon a bit more. The last book was so long anyway, what would a few more chapters matter?
Bella has a great life but she's missing something...Will the new Marine in town be that something? Will she be able to handle the life that a Marine leads or will it all be too much?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93026 Read Count: 23398
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9 Ragoo
They were having a wonderful time, right up until Bella answered that damn phone! She will now have a cow, no doubt, until Edward explains, I hope! Now I know why he hated LeJuene so much. I'll bet this Victoria accused him of fathering her child, when it was someone else.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude
That is a really true sentiment right there in that lovely poem! Makes me wonder who wrote it!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 1 Happy Alone
Green eyes and messy hair, sounds good to me too! He must be something else if he turned her from Jasper on a dime! Well, she was hoping for that something missing, and it looks like he has arrived!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 2 California Waiting
I hope meeting Edward hasn't scared Bella into Jasper's bed! That could definitely cause a problem for both Bella and Edward! They were both rather struck with each other I thought!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 3 Red Morning Light
Bella avoidance, my foot! I knew he wouldn't be able to carry that off! I'll bet Bella was glad she didn't do anything too bad last night! Even better that she said it loud enough for Edward to hear.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine
Oh crap! Jasper does want Bella! Where is Alice when you need her? That dream Bella had was pretty telling, half hot and half ice! Next thing we know Edward and Jasper will be competing for Bella. That ought to be very interesting!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 5 Genius
Nice girls don't on the first date, huh? Since when? If it had been me I would have grabbed that gorgeous hunk of man and had my way with him! I hope Jasper accepts Bella's decision and doesn't feel too bad.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber
Obviously neither one of them was ever a scout, because they sure weren't prepared! How depressing to find a condom box and it be empty! Lucky Edward is imaginative! Too bad Bella's truck died, but they tend to do that if you never put oil in them!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7 True Love Way
Oh yeah the girl has got it bad! Well, actually so does he. Rosalie and Emmett may be getting married, but Bella is pretty happy right now too! I suppose since they are so wrapped up in each other, something awful is about to happen.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8 On Call
I realize this is pretty upsetting news , but I sure wish Bella wouldn't run right to Jasper to unburden her soul about how unhappy she is! It not only looks bad to Edward but keeps giving Jazz false hopes, I think! That's not fair to either of them.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Ch 10 Four Kicks
Please don't tell me Bella is going to piss away the little time she and Edward have left before he deploys! She can't be that stupid, even if she is afraid of being hurt again! Shame on her if she does, and shame on him for letting her!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11 Crawl
I want to bang their heads together, just to get their attention! People, life is too damn short to be acting this way, too precious to waste! Quit waiting for the other to step up and say what's in your hearts! Where he's going, there's a chance he won't come back in one piece or at all!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Ch 12 I Want You
Tough to read about, and unimaginably tough to go through, no doubt! I feel for every woman who goes through it and admire them immensely! Now I'll just cross my fingers and hope the guys come home okay!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 13 Day Old Blues
Just let it be an injury and not a death, that's all I ask!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Cold Desert
Thank the good Lord that Edward is going to be okay and Jasper probably will too! I can just imagine Bella playing nurse to Edward's patient! They are so lucky to be able to do that, it could have been so very much worse!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15 Trunk
This is working out so well it almost scares me! I love that they are living together and Emmett and Rose have their own place. I'm with Bella , now they just have to see about Jasper!
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Ch 16 McFearless
Poor Edward, having those two for parents! At least Esme loved him so he had that much at least.That was a really strange meet the parents experience! Now hopefully it will be better, seeing Jasper.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 17 The Runner
I knew Alice was going to have to show up in Jasper's life and this was the perfect time. It's so weird that Edward's face would be the catalyst for recovering Jasper's memories! So nice that he's getting better every day.