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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!
Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.
As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin. Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back. Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush. Damn, she was 26 years old. When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?
A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner
All Human/Alternate Universe
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85885
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It's really nice that Charlie will go to Canada with Billy and Jaco to ice-fish. It's even better that he will spend what will probably be Billy's last Christmas with him. Looking forward to Friday night's date with Bella and Edward!
Date: 17 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I can already tell this is going to be a fun romance to read! Love their initial meeting and reaction to each other!
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
What do you think it means, you silly man? This is just going to keep getting better and better! Can't wait until they both admit how attracted they are to each other!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Despite the joy they felt at the miraculous news, they cried with happiness and so did I! This couple and their story are so touching and I just love the whole thing!
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake 2: Jacob & Victoria
Jacob was rewarded for his patience and caring, that's for sure! Victoria deserved such a great guy, just to make up for the hell James made her live in for so long. I had to admit it made sense for Jake to want to beat him to a pulp, as I felt the same way, even though the guy was dead!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
This will put Edward over the moon, if I'm not mistaken!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
The dizzy spell gave it away, making me wonder if by some miracle thy were pregnant! Edward did say there was always a small chance of his sperm regenerating!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I'm beginning to think this man is perfect! Nearly so, at any rate, with all the romantic, sexy things he does for and to his Bella! He even likes her exuberant mother, so that proves what a sweetheart he is!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Those are the nicest, kindest most generous people and Victoria is lucky to find them! I hope Charlie makes sure James bumps into a lot of things, especially with his face! Bella really needs to get away with Edward. The trip to the concert and to see her mom will be so good for her, and probably Edward also!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Poor Jacob, it's such a painful thing to lose your parent, there's just no good way to get through it!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Nice that her mom is happy for Bella finding her love! I'll bet that's the last Christmas they spend apart since they miss each other so much!
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
One can only hope there really are men out there as wonderful as this guy! I think they both hit the jackpot when they found each other!
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Let the good times roll! These two are sure striking sparks off each other! Sure is a lot of fun to read about them, too!
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Practically tragic about the Johnson girl, so young and foolish and easily persuaded. Thirteen is too young for such adult experiences! Bella, on the other hand, at twice that age is more than aware of what she wants to happen between her and Edward, and soon!
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
If your experience with miwifives was anything like this one, I can see why you think so highly of them! Looks like Bella and Edward both are feeling a tug of attraction and think they can just ignore it! I'll bet that doesn't happen!
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
That sounded like the greatest New Years celebration! Makes me wish I could have been there! It's so nice to read about these two falling more and more in love with each other! I did have a thought, though. Edward needs to have checkup in case his sperm have gradually come back to life. With them not usung condoms, there could be quite a surprise coming in this new year! Wouldn't that be something?
Winner of the Bella's Lullaby of Broadway contest. All Human. Bella and Edward are cast opposite one another in the New York premiere of Phantom of the Opera. As romance grows behind the scenes can Bella and Edward keep things professional on stage and off?
Blinky made by A Cullen Wannabe
Banner Below was part of the prize for winning the BLoB contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10804 Read Count: 2392
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Point of No Return
This was great! Who doesn't love Phantom of the Opera?
This is an AU/AH one shot. Bella is a thirty year old stay at home mom of two young children. She’s happily married to Edward and her life is happy and complete…but when a certain song begins to play on the radio while she cleans her happy home, the memories of her painful childhood come back to haunt her. Based on the song THE RED by Chevelle.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4868 Read Count: 2808
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Red
The really sad thing about this story is that it goes on, every day all over the world. Never happened to me, but I know it's true, heartbreaking though that is! It really is different from your usual stuff, but very interesting.
Set during Breaking Dawn from September to December, this is my story of Edward and Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery from the first night they go to their cottage in the woods. Follow Bella's first night as a vampire after her tumultuous introduction to vampirehood, motherhood and meeting the Cullen family as an equal.
Told mostly from Bella's POV, it will take you on their journey of learning about each other, loving each other as they've craved since the beginning. Watch their tender bonding with beautiful Nessie and their interaction with the Cullen family through the weeks that follow until the arrival of the Volturi. All the Cullens are in the story, helping them adapt, as is Jacob's wolf pack.
Rated NC-17: Explicit lemony scenes and language almost from the start.
Note: This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now up to date.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93814 Read Count: 13398
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - NIL BY MOUTH
I have followed you here to the coffee shop, from Twilighted, as you have more of your story here. Still have you favorited on both sites, so just reviewed chapter 31 over there. Hopefully I won't get confused! I wish you as much happiness in your new love as Bella and Edward have in your story.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - LOOKING IN THE EYES OF LOVE
Bella thinks her daughter is amazing, but isn't giving herself enough credit in that department. All the changes she has undergone and come through with flying colors, so to speak, I think are remarkable!
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - CHASING CARS
Hi there! When the update notice appeared in my email, it was puzzling. After investigating, it turns out, I've been reading and reviewing this story on twilighted.com. So glad I found out you have two pen names. Such a good, lemony chapter, too! I'll just chase you around and find more of your writing, Glad to hear you are happier than last year, hope the pain is bearable, and you and the cats are happy with your true love!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much K, for your continuing support on the various sites and for your good wishes. I am facing Xmas on my own as my beloved cannot join me, for cirx outside his control. The pain? Ah well, that's a story and a half on its own lol.
Meanwhile, I hope that all is well where you are.
AU. Taking place after the events in Eclipse, Bella never formed the bond with Jacob that led to the wolves teaming up with the Cullens to learn how to fight Victoria’s newborn army and they were all defeated. Jasper was the only survivor due to his exceptional knowledge and skill with newborns. He’s left alone and heartbroken as everyone he’s ever loved is gone. A series of choices leads him on an interesting journey through is past to discover his future.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27740 Read Count: 2171
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue: Ten Years Later
I would ordinarily not read a story without the Cullens, but this was sure a great exception! I missed those who were destroyed, but enjoyed meeting Jasper's first , and last wife!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: My Turn
Hey, I was just tickled he got there in time to stop her! I love a happy ending!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Overload
It nearly made me cry , reading the letters Alice left behind! She was so brave and selfless to arrange all this! Hope she's in Heaven with the rest of the family, she sure deserves that! Now Jasper and Ginny need to work this out between them.
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Ginny's Tale
I knew it, I knew it! Now comes the really hard part, when he finally remembers, and he will. It could play out a couple different ways when he realizes who Ginny is!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: The Writing on the Tree
I think I just figured out what Jasper's middle name is!, and why Ginny named her children what she did! It's a bit surprising that Jasper hasn't figured it out for himself!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Redemption for a Monster
More and more I'm thinking their lives are intertwined, and this must be the reason for Alice asking Ginny's help!
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Frozen In Time
This is getting more and more intriguing, the more they share memories. It fascinates me that she has kept track of her descendants all these many years!
Date: 14 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Web of Fate
What are the chances of Jasper meeting the descendant of his old friend from his human life? How about the odds of Alice seeing what part Ginny would play in her beloved Jasper's future, the one without her? Just a fleeting thought, what if this was his wife, before he was transformed? Wouldn't that be amazing?
Date: 14 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Choices
Bless Alice's sense of fairness and love for her Jasper! I too, am curious as to the connection between Alice and Ginny! I'm also glad he decided to see what the mystery is!
AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer. Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174121
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Vignetting
Amazing, the music you had them dancing to, loving Ella and Louis the way I do! Their first official date was wonderful. Now if you can just get Bella to relax over the differences in their economic circumstances!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Candid
You sure can't accuse them of rushing into anything, they have really taken their time, but I'm thinking it's about time!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Fogging
Sounds like a really fabulous day!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Sharpness
Just as most of uswould be, Bella was rather star struck. Edward keeps trying to tell her, but she still thinks too little of herself!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Ambient Light
It figured that Charlie would be all protective of his baby girl, so it was no surprise that he had checked out Edward! It was a pleasant one when he proposed to Sue, and even better that Bella realized that she was going to be in the same position soon! I really liked the holidays with both her folks, since they seem to approve of Edward!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Close Up
What a really wonderful holiday! Now I can hardly wait for Christmas and Edward meeting her crazy family!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Dominant Object
What amazingly good news and a really great reason to celebrate!Life is looking rosy for them both! The family dynamic and the love between these two are really wonderful!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Negative
It's so sweet how his family is becoming hers also! Alice's exciting news was unexpected but not as much as him showing up at the door, meeting her on the way to him! That was just darling!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Diffuser
I really like Renee as much as you did! Their time in Florida was great! Now, on to "Shotgun" Charlies!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Infinity
Thanks for the recipe, it sounds good! Loved the proposal even more!That's the way to start the new year!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: The Perfect Background
The two women are quite the pair! It's a real kick to see them get so excited over their impending weddings!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Contrast
Just a truly wonderful chapter!Kind of choked me up, just a bit!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Conflicting Shadows
That was probably the best story of a bidding war I've ever read!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Subordinate Object
Bella is really having to fight tooth and nail to realize her book turning into a movie she can be proud of! What a treat to come back after a long day and find Edward waiting for her!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Aerial Perspective
It was a possiblr bump in the road, but actually turned out great!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Los Angeles Edward Style
She really staked her claim and made her mark, so to speak!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Montage
What an ugly experience to have to live through! At least some good came from it, Jane ridding herself of representation who cared nothing for her!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Angelic Phantom
Fabulous, fabulous wedding! You couldn't have made it any more romantic!
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....
Absolutely the most perfect wrap-up to a very wonderful love story! I laughed, I cried a bit and loved it all!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Zoom In (by Nikteche)
Seems like the lady doth protest too much! What is this woman's problem? Plus, what is so fascinating about her to him?
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)
I really don't understand her attitude towards him!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Blurry (by Nikteche)
Women keep doing that to Bella, not giving a damn that Edward asked her out, not them!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Backlighting (Collaboration)
I'm liking the way he is drawn to her and she's nor quite sure about it!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Focal Point
If they sat and talked for that long, getting to know each other, there is definitely something going on here!
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Composition
Sounds delicious, smelling of cherry blossoms and all, but mostly that he wants to spend more time with her, and she with him!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Overexposure
Interesting curse Edward works under! If it keeps happening, Bella is sure to give up on them!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Definitive Beauty
I love when Edward becomes obsessed with Bella!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Observational Distortion
Bella just refuses to see herself as he sees her! Makes me wonder who stomped on her self esteem? The inner monologue thing isn't doing her any favors, either! She ought to listen more to Alice, I guess.
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Illumination
I just knew if she listened to Alice, things would become more clear!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Shadows
Boy, I sure hope Emmett gave Edward the right advice and finding out she is his muse won't scare her away!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Latent Image
Who would have thought that Bella could be such a coward? She's really afraid to let herself believe what he told her!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 13: More Latent Images
What would Bella do without Alice to help her see the light?
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Shutter Lag
This conversation they will have is going to be both funny and painful, just not too bad, I hope!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Complimentary Colors
Wow! How much more romantic could it get? That last part blew me away!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Flash Fill
Sounds like tons of fun to me too!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Additive Color
That was fun to read, I could just picture those three little girls having such a good time and Edward and Bella enjoying their delight!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Fixation
That was beautiful! They took their time getting to this moment and it was well woth the wait!
Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood. Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver? Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?
This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over). Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
You have restored my faith in Edward and Bella! I'm just really glad it turned out to be a story she was writing and was all made up! I really hated the way the vampire treated his poor abused captive! Guess I'm just a wuss!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Maybe Edward didn't cause a tumor to grow in Bella's brain, but I'll bet the stress of being his captive sex slave did her no good!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Thank God, she finally got sick enough he was forced to call in Carlisle!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I think he's still a self-centered, selfish asshole, that's what I think! If he really had a care for Bella, he would listen to what she's saying, instead of making it up in his head!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Hey, Edward! Pay attention to what you just read! This is a wonderful girl you are slowly prssing the life out of!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I'm starting to think Emmett ought to just rip his head off and make him wait to put it back on. Maybe that would get him to evaluate this awful thing he's doing to Bella, taking away her every freedom.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Edward definitely needs to watch that dvd again and again. He also needs to listen to Alice before he kills the one thing he wants. He really needs to change his ways of thinking about his treatment of this poor subjugated, trapped creature he claims is his.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I'm wondering how Edward would like to be treated exactly the same way he treats Bella? Somehow don't think he would care to be in her position!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Poor Bella, she's found a way to escape into her mind, just to get away from him. She better be careful not to lose the way back!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I'm kind of glad Emmett came by and raised hell with Edward. At least he tried to make him do the right thing. I'm really glad he got rid of that damn whip!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Dare one hope Edward is beginning to feel just a little shame for the way he has treated Bella? And, who's at the front door?
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
May I just say it's about damn time? I hope Freudward keeps bugging hell out of him!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
This is not going well for Bella and I'm starting to really dislike Edward. He's what Bella has called him, and I don't blame her one damn bit for telling him so!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
And so it begins, Bella is doing the unexpected and it confuses Edward. He has just forgotten what it's like to be human I imagine. Maybe having Bella aound will remind him, who knows?
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Watch out, Edward, I see a bit of feeling creeping into your cold, dead heart! This little girl may be changing your way of thinking!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Do I detect a tiny change in the way Edward is thinking about Bella? Maybe, maybe not. We'll see, I guess.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Still not liking Edward very much, but at least he's keeping Bella alive, for now.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Thanks for the note about not liking to write a rape scene. It's not much fun enduring one, either. I do see why you did this, so far Edward is a selfish bastard, and being a vampire, could so easily have killed Bella. I'll hang in here and see where this goes.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Edward finds himself reluctantly drawn to this human girl and can't quite figure out why. It will be very interesting to see if he can figure it out!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great, out of the frying pan and into the fire! Rescued from one nightmare and on to who knows what?
Set during Eclipse - Night of the Tent/Snow Storm – Bella, Edward & Jacob – this two-shot story is my version of events, as told from Edward’s POV, while he battles his demons over Jacob’s presence in the tent that night.
Neither of them comes out too well from the experience.
Note: This story is rated NC-17 for language and explicit sexual material.
Note: This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jake/none
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4747 Read Count: 1051
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - DISENCHANTED LULLABY
Knowing how teenage boys are hardwired, it would have been a miracle for that not to have happened. I guess SM was just too nice to write about it. Glad you did, though, it was a great chapter and much more realistic.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - HEARTBEATS
Of course, this was nothing compared to thinking she was dead, but it had to be a really tough night for Edward. Jacob took great delight rubbing Edward's nose in the fact of his being able to warm Bella. The twenty question thing was pretty interesting, as it shared their thoughts fairly equally. You have to give Jake credit for pushing for every advantage, but I thought he enjoyed twisting the knife a bit too much.
What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 67396
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like that Edward isn't plagued with bloodlust for Bella. It would seem the singer connection will be enough for the both of them to deal with!
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
This connection they share must be very profound, as Bella has totally accepted everything without question. A rather life-changing experience, I guess. I hope this routine they have worked out will work for them both.
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Rosalie is always jealous of Bella's humanity, isn't she? Everyone else in the Cullen family thinks she's a wonderful thing to have happened to Edward.
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Poor Edward, he leaves his singer for a day and all hell breaks loose. Not to mention the embarassment of having his father and brothers give him the sex talk! What is puzzling me is why Bella has this extreme reaction to Jacob? What's going on there?
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
That was awful for Jacob to kill Charlie, even if by accident. He's totally out of control, so I hope the Quileutes and the Cullens make a pact to neutralize him. Thank heavens Renee is letting Bella remain with the Cullens.
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Could this get any worse? First he kills Charlie, now Jake wnts to kill Edward and rape Bella! I hope to God some of the vampires and the wolves tear him into tiny little pieces!
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
This connection thing between them is split right down the middle, as strong for the human as for the vampire. I sure hope Jake doesn't continue to be a problem through this whole story. Since Bella and Edward have completed the mate bond maybe Jake will listen to reason? No, probably not!
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Okay, that's a non-violent way to take care of the Jacob problem! He seems to have imprinted on Tanya, so if they're wrapped up in each other, maybe they will both leave Edward and Bella alone!
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I have a feeling that some people may be a bit put off by Edward drinking Bella's menstrual blood, but hell! Think about it, he is a vampire after all, and she is his singer, so it makes perfect sense!
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
If it weren't for bad luck, Bella would have no luck at all! Not really, it just semms like it. Tanya and Jacob are coming back to Forks, huh? That should be a really interesting happening. Now the other two connected pairs are here for their visit, so Edward will have something else to worry about!
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
My God! Poor Edward! That was wierd, Edward ripped to pieces and saved by Jacob and Tanya, of all people! Guess Forrest Gump was right, life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you're going to get!