Reviews by jrod99
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315827
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Awesome chapter! I think it was exactly what they both needed to better deal with their new "relationship"

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Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

Poor Bella; it looks like she is about to burst the happy bubble her and Edward have been living in. Insecurity is a realy BITCH! Love the chapter I am feeling her pain, as i have totaly been there.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752880
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Such an amazing story. I laughed and cried the whole way. Fantastic job! Thanks so much for an entertaining and enthralling piece of work. This is one I will take the time to read again.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi

I had a feeling she could absorb. I hope she gets to turn all their evil sadistic gifts back on them. Can,'t wait for more.

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39. The Coven

Great chapter. Looks like everyone will get whats coming to them.

Are you going to address the Rose and the baby?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for asking! Yes I am definately going to address Rose and the baby and a few of other things as well.  :)

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

I am sad its over, but it was a nice ride. Great job. I am glad they get their HEA.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

Good chapter. I have a feeling that this trip is not going to go so easy for them. Something foreboding on the horizon.

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Wow! I not sure there is much else to say.

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Charlotte is a smart cookie.

Love everything so far.

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

Great Chapter. I had a feeling from the beginning Charlie wasn't dead, and have been waiting for the shoe to drop. Esme really is a crazy bitch.

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Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

Everyone seems blinded by their own hate and self importance in some way. I wonder if their vacation is going to be as pleasant as they expect.

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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

Edward and his demon can be very entertaining when their guard is down.

 

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

So it begins. Esme maybe crazy but she is not stupid. Vengence is a bitch. Can't wait for whats next.

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

I think you did this chapter justice. I do have to say I am not surprised she is pregnant; to be brutally honest its become a little cliche with these types of stories. I love your story anyway and can't wait for an update.  



Author's Response:

I appreciate your honesty. The idea of Bella becoming pregnant has always been an important part of the story however. As we get further on, it will become a lot clearer WHY a pregnancy had to occur. It's the way the story was always going to go, but I appreciate your view point and see where you are coming from. Thanks again for the review and HOPEFULLY there should be an update this time next week. If all goes to plan and with me, it never bloody seems to end up that way. LOL. thanks once more. :-)

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

Very intense! I hate to think that the journey is yet to be over, and they still have many hurdles in front of them. Can't wait for more.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995728
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG!!! Why does Bella keep putting herself in these situation. I can't help but wonder if it is just her wanting her Dom back, or if her character is that weak that she can't say NO. I am not sure if she is strong will or just stupid; either way I love it its what makes this story great. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I had the same reaction as you - OMG, Bella, are you CRAZY??? I think that she thought it was a good idea at the time - until it wasn't anymore....thanks for the review!!

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Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Poor B. I think her self confidence is going to be the death of her. I just realized none of the Cullen family has seen Jim the research they did on him apparently didn't include pictures. Looks like their bubble is going to burst again very soon.



Author's Response:

we just got to be patient with her ... she'll get there!! ooh you are reading over my shoulder aren't you?

thanks for the review xoxo

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Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Great Chapter! Our girl is still dealing with her issues but I am happy she seems to be able to better analyze her actions. I love that their relationship and their individual growth is a process. So many stories have each character or the B+E relationship all sunshine and rainbows overnight. Your story becomes more relatable and plausible this way. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks



Author's Response:

thank you for your comments and the review - Saturday is update day :)

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Make up sex or Angry sex to make up, are my two favorites. I am glad they are on the right path again.



Author's Response:

they are getting there :)

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Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great chapter. I am glad it wasn't to over the top but just suspensful enough to keep you on edge.

I can't want to see the fallout from this one.

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Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I love seeing the slow growth from both of them. Can't wait to see what happens at Christmas.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review 

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40834
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: jrod99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

EPOV- is really interesting. I find myself thinking it is completely possible for him to keep going based on his personal feelings towards Tanya and his "preceived" responsiblity as a sub. I guess people make similar decisions in their everyday lives; we constantly push ourselves to far to prove a point or some inner desire to please or prove worthiness to ourselves or others.

 I can't wait to see how he and Bella will pull through this event, and how or if there D/s relationship will proceed. 

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

Love their first night. I can't wait to see what the light of day holds.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Love the story thus far. I think you have done a great job. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Glad you've enjoyed it!  Working hard on the next chapter!  Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Pure satisfaction for those that love Andy. I love how Bella and Jasper continue to prove that they can last and their love is real and undeterred.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the end of Alex and Bella and Jasper's love for each other!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm amazed you had time to write at all. I hope you and your family can find peace during this difficult time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, the writing is actaully a great escape at the end of the day! 

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That ended better than I thought. I am glad that little confrontation is over. I like J more and more every chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you're happy, I've had some disastisfied customers over the fight and the outcome, lol!  Glad you're loving J, he's like my dream man!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Sweetness is always good to read.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed, because big drama is on the way!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I was wondering when that was going to happen. I have a ton of what if's now. How over the top will Edward be? I get a little sad when he is bat shit carzy in other fics. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

I hope you'll like what I do with him- I'm not going for bat shit crazy or complete reversal of his character.  I'm going more for the effect that he hasn't handled the last two years well and the changes that Bella has experienced will be difficult for him to accept.  Hopefully, the next chapter will clear a lot up!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Eward always the selfish one and worried about what he thinks is best. I like Malcolm he seems very laid back, and might have a very interesting story to tell.

Bonnie Vampire?



Author's Response:

I always thought he had a huge superiority complex, lol!  Glad you enjoyed Malcolm!

Were you confused with the bonnie vampire phrase?  When I originally wrote the sentence, I used the words 'remarkable vampire', and my Scottish team translated that into bonnie vampire.  Apparently, the word bonnie doesn't just mean 'pretty', it's also a general positive adjective.  Am planning to include more translations next chapter!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jrod99 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So E is really crazy he deserves everything coming to him and more. I fall a little more is love with Jasper with each chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I really went OOC with Edward in my story, but he's so fun to hate this way, lol!  Glad you're enjoying Jasper- I love him too!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I really love the way Bella is developing. Her relationship with Jasper is so great. I love how things have gone with the Cullens, and I wouldn't be the disappointed at all if her relationship with them ends that way. I hope great things are in there future.



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it as we get closer to the end.  Much more on Bella and Jasper next chapter :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

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They must keep their love a secret from everyone. Especially the ones they're married to.

Entry for The "I Love 80’s Music" NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-shot Contest

E/B, O/S, Rated: NC-17 for a reason, kiddies.

One-shot to be continued as a multi-chaptered story with the title, "Anhelo Amarte". Look out for in May of 2010.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9083 Read Count: 1554
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: jrod99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Secret Lovers

Loved it great job. I will be keeping my eye out for the mult-chapter version.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review and I'm happy to hear that you'll be watching out for it.