Reviews by beachlover
The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36679
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

Emmett and Edward are both a couple of douchbags

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

Whats up with Bella? She still coming to grips with the whole Edward thing?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Took Bella long enough to come around! At least she did!

Summary:

 

Jasper feels the pull to one of his human students at the Seattle Art Institute where he teaching a class on photo Journalist. Does his student feel the pull also and will he dominate her?

Banner moved to chapter 1 to meet google policy standards :-(


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4159 Read Count: 1204
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2011 Updated: 31 Jul 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Once again, I love your Jasper and Bella.Not that I read too many of those.

 I am reading "Night Janitor" and like it very much; but look forward to another Edward and Bella story. Your writing has definately blossomed and I so love a Hot Edward story!!  Just saying.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. There is a sequel to TNJ that is not finished yet... Even reading the books I fell in love with Jasper, so I tend to write more of them, but I will say I also have a poly with A/B/E/J, which I will be posting here.  Besides being a huge Jasper person, I'm huge on poly's.

 

Hugs

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Information

Wow you passed 500 just like that! You go Girl!



Author's Response:

I had to think for a minute about what you meant!  I love keeping in touch with thereaders, not so much the number of reviews, but the interest and comments that I get.  It keeps me writing!

Wish I ws at the beach!  really . . .

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)

Well this should be intersting. Is Edward always going to be a douce?



Author's Response:

He really is quite the arrogant jerk isn't he!  lol  Let's hope he learns something as he matures!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)

Well a little less douchward! Will it last?



Author's Response:

Ha!  i like that description!  Hopefully he will get better with time!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan

What about NYU?? Will he go?  Will she go?



Author's Response:

Keep reading . . . .

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)

Was this a duplicate or am I seeing double Edwards? LOL



Author's Response:

Duplicate deleted!  Double Edwards would be fun, though!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)

Its probably Mike again. I hope Bella applied to NYU!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)

oh no a cliffy. Hurry Edward!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Caring (V)

Thanks so much for improving Edward.

I tried to post feedback for the last 2 chapters but it wouldn't let me...Sorry

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 New York (V)

Where does Charlie think she will be living?



Author's Response:

Charlie thinks she is in the dorms - he has some surprises coming!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)

Thanks for writing tonight. I washoping to be able to read a few good things and this fit the bill.  Edward is being so charming. I hope it lasts!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the compliment!  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)

I so hope he doesn't screw up! And I hope they start to talk and show love for one another!!



Author's Response:

He isn't going to screw up - - - yet!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Private (L)

ah oh



Author's Response:

Yep.  I agree.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)

Wow, that was quite sad, I don't think Edward is gonna like this. Please post more.



Author's Response:

It is very sad, in a way - but there never was a baby, so one didn't die!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Presents (L)

Oh NOOOO



Author's Response:

Yea . . . I know . . .

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)

Oh please pst more!! My heart is breaking for Edward! I can't take it!!  He needs Bella bak and she needs him!

 



Author's Response:

They really do need each other, don't they!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)

Did Bella see him?  My heart goes out to poor Edward!

 

 



Author's Response:

They are getting closer to seeing each other!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Helping (V)

Its me as promised. Is this different or am I just lost in an Edward induced lust??



Author's Response:

No trance, just different numbers and smaller bits - - - shhhhhhhh . . .

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)

Finally he has found her!!!!!



Author's Response:

They really NEED to talk!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)

Please tell me this is not a dream.

They have 4 years to make up for!!



Author's Response:

No, not a dream!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Empty

OOOPS Hi jasper.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Hard to hold a conversation when naked!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 Explain

I just wanted to be sure you got 400 reviews before you added more.

Keep it coming! Love it



Author's Response:

You're awesome!  Thank you!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78 Toy

Good luck with all that!  Where in Fl do you get to be?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83 Babies

We are getting closer!!  WOOHOO

Summary:

 

Edward is pissed off with the direction his life has taken. He's now determined more than ever to put right what once went wrong. Will he be able to before it's too late? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8090 Read Count: 1107
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2011 Updated: 06 Aug 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story. I hope he knocked her up again!!  Just saying

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

A Kingdom Reborn Banner 1

Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Flaunting

Oh thi looks like it may get ugly!

Jessiaca, Lauren and Bella?



Author's Response:

You are the only one that has pointed that out so far. I thought some people would angrily reject the idea of his mistress flaunting her daughter to try and become queen. Yes there will be some tensions because of King Edward's choices. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding

Will Edward have any love or compassion for Bella in this story?



Author's Response:

King Edward will grown to love and care for Bella and there will be an HEA.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

Tanya and Bell frieds  Hhh

Cottage in Canada



Author's Response:

Bella and Tanya as friends is an unusual concept I'll give you that, but my Tanya isn't completely superficial and as there is no jealousy (currently) it makes it much easier for them to have companionship with one another.

I have never been to Canada but I have friends and relatives there that love it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. The next update will be next week.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Departing

Bella really is not going to like Edward in this story.

I wonder if and how you will fit Alice in this?



Author's Response:

Yes it will take a lot to persuade Bella to like King Edward. As mentioned in Chapter One, Alice is the sister of King Edward and married to Sir Jasper. She hasn't yet made an appearance but will be in Chapter Four. Thank you for reviewing.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Resolving

She seemed to do okay with him taking her for a walk all things considered and her mother won't give her a choice
Cafe Mocha by the way

Author's Response:

The walk was quite neutral for Bella. He still showed the same self-arrogance all men of that time show, but he did also open up a little more to let her see the Edward behind the king. Next chapter will be an angsty one. Thank you for reviewing!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

Good luck with your move. See you soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Sorry you have to wait for your update.
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427976
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 **Meetings**

Anxious to read more! How often will you post?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Yes, Ready to meet Isabella. Anxious to read more.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

Yes I hate Charlie! Based on your teaser it isn't going to take Edward as long as I was originally thinking to get Bella to his hive! Thank goodness

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Expectations

Definately ready for Isabellas POV but not anxious for the Pixie to get wound up.     Give her some zanex!!  Also ready for a little more sharing between Edward and Bella!

Reunion by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Reunion

 

Former high school sweethearts Bella and Edward didn't end well. A bad break up before going off to college caused their parting of ways. Eleven years later Bella unexpectedly is reunited with the man who she has never really gotten over.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9045 Read Count: 7483
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah oh Is this not a HEA

Author's Response:

It is a HEA :0)

Summary:

After getting caught disobeying her Master, Bella must suffer the consequences of her actions. Rated M for adult content and BDSM material. My entry for the Edwardgetsfic'd contes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2999 Read Count: 5099
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Continuation could be awesome

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31184
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Fuck!! Don't wait too long, I'm dying here!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

Floving it! What a great couple you have here!!!! Hope the storm goes easy on you!

In Florida I can relate

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

You will need W.P. They are a perfect couple, what the help were they thinking not talking to Bella first. I sure as hell hope they are going to his house. And have Jasper keep the family away not even a phone call!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

9 months. I think I would be pissed too. Thanks for not dragging us through that, this is bad enough!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Take Two

Shit they both cried for 9 months! This was perfect!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

I still FLOVE the story! It doesn't seem like only 1 chapter to go?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

Sniff...sniff* is right! But they are together!

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drafted

She is a sneaky minx!

Author's Response:

HeHe... love her! ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Like it Could Be Anyone Else?

How do you always manage to make your writings seem like poetry?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Imperfect Timing

You have written further ahead than I can read so no worries :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 : Ruin

What that was all interesting. So what is wrong with Bella that she is so protected?

Author's Response:

Thank you, answers coming soon. A little at a time.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Shame

Interesting start!  What did he do???



Author's Response:

I have it on good authority that he'll 'do' plenty before all is said and done. Thank you for giving it a chance.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 : Shattered Comfort

Thoughts no....Questions!!

What happened to her brother Ethan?  Has Edward always been a ManWhore? Why? Has Bella ever had a boyfriend?

Most importantly! Does this have a HEA?

 



Author's Response:

I hope you don't get too frustrated, I promise you will have all of the answers in time, and perhaps some of them will even make evryone happy. I hope you stick with me  :)  ~CM

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 : Strategy

I'm glad you have a strategy, otherwise this is going to take forever!!



Author's Response:

I promise I do. Now, as for how long it takes... I promise nothing. Patience, darling. :)  ~CM

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart

I thought you had a plan???



Author's Response:

I promise I do. Patience, my sweet. :)  ~CM

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice

Good chapter! I loved Bella giving Slutward what for! The Game needs to be ON;  Too much sexual frustration. Bella needs to tell Jasper to worry about his own love life while she is at it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Go Bella! As for Jasper... even if she tells him, I'm not sure he would listen to her. It is NOT an easy road ahead!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 : Masochists

Please let him keep it in his pants!



Author's Response:

Until Isabella is ready for it! :P

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

Hi Jasper. Knew that was coming.

Author's Response:

Hmmmm.... maybe. Maybe not.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing

Damn all 3 of them!

Author's Response:

My boys are getting NO LOVE in this one... Not even Emmett, which is rare. But I understand, of course ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: For Her

Still lots of questions, but you will get us there!!

Author's Response:

I will, I promise! Thanks for sticking with me :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Lost

When will all this end? Or start?

Author's Response:

Well, it's what it is. 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

Oh fuck

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Trouble

I will take a chapter of this story anytime!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different

Don't be an ogre :-)
The UST in this story has reached radical levels! :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Things

Edward continues to redeem himself!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: From the Ground Up

Wouldn't want Jasper to die...but he deserves Alice's grief :-) And you just keep doing what you do!!!!

Summary:

Clear and Bright banner

Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : In An Instant

Hmmmm You could go a lot of directions with this. Post again



Author's Response:

I've been writing this story since December. It's 23 chapters in, I just have to get them posted here. And I promise it gets better. I know the start is 'rough'. Thank you for giving it a chance. I hope you stay with me, because Clear And Bright is my heart. I think that will come through.  ~CM  

Sex Machine by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

In the year 2029, bio-mechanical engineer, Bella Swan, has created the perfect machine for Whitlock Robotics. Masen can be anyone or anything you desire... but who does Bella want her Masen to be?

 

This is a O/S

 

B/E M for Lemons/Language

 

Banner made by the fabulous Time_Lights

 

Special Thanks to Carsen Choi!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9105 Read Count: 4482
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Machine

OMFG Two Edwards!!  Who woulda thunk.  Heaven I say, Better than an Edward/Jasper sandwich!!!

Summary:

Edward writes a message and puts it in a bottle. While on vacation with his family, he drops it in the ocean. Hoping to find his soulmate the way his grandfather did. Will it end in love or in nothing? Sometimes you just have to believe in fate.

 

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27091 Read Count: 5149
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yeah Emmets a dick



Author's Response:

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't believe Rose tried to do that! What a bitch.

Author's Response:

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100874
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Second chance

Milk? No he said black. Don't mess this up Bella!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions

Another great story! Write more!!



Author's Response:

Ha ha. I'm writing chapter 36 of Slave right now :0)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: New impact

What is NYE? Sorry not from NY. Love the story so far. Will you only post once a week or so, or more often since it is already written?



Author's Response:

N.Y.E. stands for New York Event's, but it's not specified until next chapter, but sorry I didn't think of mentioning it in the chapter's note. It is a fictive company anyway, so even people from NY wouldn't know about it (at least I think). I'm afrraid updating every other week is the best I can do with this story. I'm working on 5 other stories, and some of them get much more attention, which compels me to update more often. Should this story have received the same attention than some other very popular on this site, I would have made it a priority to work on it and only it for a couple of weeks, but I didn't get the incentive for that. I'm not complaining here, I'm just explaining. If I have time to update just one story during any given week, it will be the one that gets the most reviews, and it is not this one...   Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Trapped

O waited till you had another posted till I read. Still with you

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: On the wire

Can't imagine what would have her return to him on her own? but who knows :-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Alcoholic showdown

Ah you are killing me :-)

Author's Response:

:0)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

He has to be ready to crack

Author's Response:

And he will...

Summary: Past Featured Story

For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.

The Banner was made by Christag Banners...She is phenominal...Thank you, Christag.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35248
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Crazy stalker story! More please



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, we are glad to have you on board to read the story.  We look forward to hearing more of your thoughts.  Thanks, Kasi(&Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Meeting with Billy

Crazy Crazy stalker

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing...The crazy has just begun!  :)  Kasi (& Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A New Design

It got quite a bit more interesting. Renee is obviously a piece of work

Author's Response:

I am so happy that you are finding this more interesting.  Wait till the next chapter posts and you learn a little more about a few of the people in the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  And yes Renee is so fun to write, because she is portrayed as a kind hearted, but air head almost of a parent.  I love writing her with a fun side.  Just love the way this story is turning out.  Jess and I will have a lot to be proud of by the end of this story.  I think anyway...  :-)

Kasi (& Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: A Realization

At least he has realized he might have a stalker



Author's Response:

He still is not convinced that the stalker is dangerous though...The next chapter will give oyu a few more suspects, and an insight into the wonderfully crazy life of Alice, and the laid back life of Edward.  throw in a little Bella who is on duty and the chapter is KICK BUTT...even if I do say so myself.  Look forward to hearing your thoughts on it.  See ya Next Wed.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Lunch With Alice

Now maybe she got his attention!



Author's Response:

I am sure that the stoalker will garner more attention from him before you know it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and see ya next Wed.

Kasi (&Jess)

 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Bella's Night Out

Renee is a real piece of work. Very different that you made Tanya her stepmom. I like the twist.



Author's Response:

We are both really enjoying writing this Renee and both agreed from the start that we wanted Tanya to be a nice person, and a good support system for Bella.  We hope that you continue to enjoy the story, it will update again on Wed.  See ya then!

Kasi &(JESS)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: This Changes Everything

Alice isn't helping any. The crazy bitch has everybodys keys. This is going to get ugly

Author's Response:

Yes I think you are correct....Oh heck, I know that you're correct.  I love it.  YAY!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Stalkers Revenge

There is no way crazy bitch was here when all the cops were here.

Arent the Cullens smart enough to put some extra security on and around the building?

Its basically them and Mrs Cope!

Author's Response:

Keep in mind that it has only been just a few short days in the whole thing since the stalkers presence has been outted, and there was never any real issues to make them think there was a violent stalker before now.  Only the readers are getting a look see into the mind of the stalker.  The building has 6 other apartments besides Alice and Jaspers and Edwards.  The second floor tenants are Bella, Mrs cope, and Emmett, roose and their daughter Bree.  The first floor tenants have been vaguely mentioned, but only one apartment on the first floors tenants was actually named and that is Jessica.  But who lives in the other two apartments?  There is lots of good chapters coming.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Suspicions

He has all kinds of crazies around him.

Author's Response:

Yes, yes he does!  You got to love it though.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  See ya soon with another update.

Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: One Step Closer

Alice doesn't help anything much does she?

Author's Response:

Alice likes to get her nose into things,, but she doesn't mean to cause harm.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hold on tight things are going to get wacky soon!

Kasi (&Jess)

 

Summary:

All Human.
Bella's last words to her mother were words of hate. Now, three years later, December is the worst time of year for her. Still struggling with guilt, she tries to drown her sorrow in a one-night stand with a stranger whose name she doesn't know.
Who knew that this stranger would be the one to make December, once again, her favorite time of year.
Warning: Loads of fluffiness.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19089 Read Count: 3894
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2011 Updated: 24 Sep 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Edward

Next Edward?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Repercussions

Well that was a tease

Author's Response:

I appologize. For some reason, TWCS decided to only show the first few lines of this chapter...

Fixed both chpaters now :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Stranger

Does he know her name?

Author's Response:

No he doesn't :) The story is complete now, so you can go ahead and read what happens in the end.

Thank you for reviewing,
Alley Cat.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Bella Swan's typical teenage life is forever changed, she's forced to rely on a brother she barely knows and the makeshift family that surrounds him.  AH, OOC, ExB

"Darlin’, I have some bad news,” Wes began, and what he said next ripped my world apart.

I knew he was talking, trying to explain what happened, trying to lessen the blow. His lips were moving, but the pain was so loud I couldn’t hear him. My father was dead. Dad, the only family I really had, was gone, and I was…what?

 

*banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17212 Read Count: 7816
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2011
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking the News

How old is Edward?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Facing the Past

Great chapter. Good to see the dynamics of the other characters.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?

I think he has gotten in way too deep and Bella is going to teach him quite a few things beore she throws him the life jacket!



Author's Response:

I apologize for the delay in responding to your review! RL, work, school, and my writing have kept me in the saddle, but I finally have some time now to get to the TWCS reviews! :) 

Thank you for the review! I would have to agree with you, Edward has certainly gotten himself in too deep. And you're right, Bella will teach him a few things, but I think what she teaches him might be a bit different than what everyone expects. AND .... Edward just might be teaching Bella a few things too. Perhaps they'll have to share a life boat? ;) 

Thank you for the review! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines

I like how you jump back and forth in POV's in this story.

Cocky bastard isn't he!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! And apologies for the delayed response! :)

I'm glad you like the change in POVs. I thought that was the best way to get the story across. I know some people have expressed dislike for it, but I do believe it'll continue throughout the entire story. I want everyone to know what's going on in both Bella and Edward's heads throughout this journey! 

I hope you're enjoying the story and how it's continued! 

Thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure

Yes that back story should be interesting!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long for me to get a response out! 

I'll be posting the first two chapters of the back story outtakes on here tomorrow! I'm not sure if you follow the story over at fanfiction.net or not, but they're already up over there! :) I hope you enjoy them! 

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

What a whore!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) 

LOL someone else referred to him as 'SLUTWARD' and I thought that was funny too! He has a pants-dropping problem. Hopefully Bella can help correct that! ;)

Thanks for reading! 

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

Oh they are so gonna fall!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review hun! :) 

Falling, falling, falling ... That they are doing. 

How far will they fall? Well ... You'll see! ;)

Thanks for reading! 

xoxo

Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Fine Line

I can't beleive Edward said that even if it was only to himself.
When the Angst gets heavy I might have to waiit till you have a few posted back to back to get caught up, but I will review back to back. It's a good story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) 

Awww, I try not to go too heavy on the angst! I completely understand though, I've had to do that in the past with the some of the fics I've read too. :) I'll try to keep the next set of chapters light and entertaining. There will eventually be some intense angsty moments, but not for quite a ways. 

I'm glad you like the story! I hope you continue to enjoy it as it goes on! 

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

Summary:

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Edward a recovering sex addict and he opens a tattoo shop.

The new Artist he brings in to work with him is not what he

exspected will things work out, can he make things work,

Will love find a way.....

BETA'D BY RAH07890

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4180 Read Count: 2664
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 08 May 2012
Reviewer: beachlover Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it, Keep going!



Author's Response:

Thank you