Reviews by Jane3105
Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different

Of course we still read! How could we not, when every chapter is such a treat.

Poor Bella, she's so frustrated but all good things come to she who waits and I'm positive you'll make sure it's good when it does!

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Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Things

I love this Edward too and Bella, she's finally beginning to acknowledge his feelings for her run just as deep and are far from brotherly. She's a pure soul, that's why everyone loves her immediately.

Great story

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: All Work and No Play

Grrr, with friends like Rosé, who needs enemies?  She is so negative about Edward, is it because they were both very promiscuous but when Rose saw someone she wanted more with she was rejected unlike Edward?

Great story, can't wait to find ut what he's up to.

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Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: From the Ground Up

Noo.... Jasper may be an overbearing, obnoxious ass sometimes (well, most of the time), but don't kill him off. Isabella would be devastated, her world would implode if she lost another brother, and she's so happy right now.

jasper doesn't stand a chance against the combined forces of Alice and Isabella, he WILL see what's good for him, they'll make sure of it!

Great story.

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Imperfect Timing

Gah!  I wish he'd stop dithering and get on with it, much like Bella.

Great story

Summary:

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Just a taste : "Control, sweetheart. I like it. I won't have mercy on you when I want it. I want you to learn how to endure it for me. I promise you will be rewarded for your efforts. When I see fit, of course."


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 243560 Read Count: 35216
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Feb 2014
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Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Grand

Beautiful chapter.  He's surrendering slowly at his own pace but can't give up control.

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Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Plans and Interpretations

 I've missed this story, good to read another chapter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 : Held

Fantastic piece of writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am truly honored by such a compliment.

  Mel

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 : Listen

What an emotional rollercoaster for Claire and Jaimin and us!!!



Author's Response:

They are complete chaos. And I love them beyond words. Thank you for reading.  ~CM

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 : Vulnerable

I'm on the edge of my seat again!  Please update quickly - the suspense is killing me!!



Author's Response:

I suppose it was a bit wicked of me to leave it there... 

Thank you for sticking with us. :)  

  ~CM

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 : Milk

Claire finally allowed herself to accept everything Jaimin offered.

When is he going to accept what she offers?



Author's Response:

I love that man, but bless his heart, he is exhausting.  She's a saint ;)

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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 : Warm

Hasn't the poor girl been through enough without a near death experience?  Or do you just like playing with our emotions? No need to answer that, I think I know already!



Author's Response:

Ooooh! Believe me, I love her more than I could express. It kills me to hurt her in any way, and I mean to torment no one. There's happy ahead, I promise.

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Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Everything

What a moving chapter.  Your words paint a scene in my mind so vivid, it's almost as if I'm in the room with them.  You are truly talented.

 



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you so much. I don't know if I deserve such a tremendous compliment, butI am honored. 

 

xo, Mel

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Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Welcome Home

And the control freak is back!

I think I like him better this way.  ;) 



Author's Response:

Well, the control freak is who won our hearts -- and perhaps other things -- to start with, so...  Rawr.

 

The man owns me, what can I say...  ;)

xo, Mel

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Switch

His mood swings are like watching a tennis match.

Super writing, as always.  Your talent astounds me



Author's Response:

Well, as always, THANK YOU. 

As for his mood swings, yes, they certainly are. I should get Claire a neck brace. She sure is a tough little thing ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Oatmeal

They exasperate me, infuriate me then...yes, I'm mush.

Thanks for updating so quickly.  I love your stories, especially this one.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm sorry my replies sometimes take so long. 

And I assure you, they do all of those things to me too. They're perfectly imperfect, as I always say about them, and I couldn't love them more. I'm glad you're mush with me :)

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Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Together

Yes!



Author's Response:

HeHeHe ... I couldn't agree more :P

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Blind

When will he ever learn? Oh Jaimin, she wanted you to show them that she's the only one that matters.

I've missed these two. Please be a good girl and share, update soon. Please

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Real

Oh my, he went to a very dark place.

I think Claire has just had a major epiphany.

Please update soon, I need to know that he comes back from this.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Thankful

His mood swings still give me whiplash. There'd never be a dull moment living with someone like him.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Gifts

Beautiful chapter.

It's so good to see them again. Thank-you for sharing.

 

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27183
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Clawing

Naughty???



Author's Response:

I suppose that depends on how you define naughty ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words

It's not Norman Bates, It's Norma!  



Author's Response:

THIS made me lol ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope

Hmm. Is it a fluffy tale about a kitten or something much darker?



Author's Response:

Sorry for spamming you... ummm... the fic or the bedtime story? hehe ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella

It's taken her long enough to stop crying



Author's Response:

Spamming you out of order, no less. Sorry I'm not better at this, but I try to respond to every review. They all mean something to me :)

As for the crying... it took me a year once. It was a rough one. And he sure as well wasn't worthy. If only I could get some of that time back...

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Cleaning House

Hip hip hooray! She should have done this months ago



Author's Response:

Some of us have difficulty with the 'moving on' stage. Men suck. They never do. ;)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy

She's one cool cookie, cooking breakfast as if nothing had happened.



Author's Response:

A bit twisted, perhaps ;)

Summary:

BannerFans.com Aro laughed again and his smile returned although it was more menacing than inviting. "That is where you are wrong, dear child. I'm quite sure that you could be persuaded. Are there not more members of the Cullen family?" A horrifying AU ending to New Moon...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Alec
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3816 Read Count: 751
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2011 Updated: 21 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting twist on the original.  Well written

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35416
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Standing Appointments...

Wow!  More, more.  Please?



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Our Humble Beginnings...

Great chapter.  : )



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Remembering How We Got Here...

Great insight into their early relationship



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

Tie Me Up In Tinsel Banner

 

WINNER OF THE 24HR SMUTMAS CHALLENGE!!

 

Edward has always had it bad for sweet and innocent Bella, but avoided her due to his kinky nature. This Christmas could change it all when Bella surprised him with an extra special gift. Merry Christsmut! AH EPOV. Written for the 24 Xmas oneshot contest.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3298 Read Count: 3400
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 02 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Merry Christsmut

Wow, that was hot



Author's Response:

glad you liked it! thanks for the review!

Sugar Cookies by Emmamama88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Opposites attract, and sometimes crash into each other, literally. Come along and experience a little 'Christmas magic' with our favorite couple. This story has been expanded from the original holiday One-shot. All-human, cause that's all I write.



Thanks to Coleen561 for the great banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50299 Read Count: 14691
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas - The Beginning

Sweet, like sugar cookies and cupcakes.



Author's Response: Thanks very much! glad you liked it.

Popsicle Sticks by Emmamama88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:


'That which does not kill us, only makes us stronger', at least that's what they say. Bella and Edward meet as children while on vacation with their families. A lifetime of summers follow, and their relationship is tested beyond its strength. Follow their story through the years as they come to learn that each day spent with someone we love is a gift not to be taken lightly, but to be cherished forever.

Thank you to Coleen561 for the lovely banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94085 Read Count: 9100
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great prologue.  I'm dying to know what happened for Bella to collapse and have Carlisle sedate her.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Thanks for posting this chapter so quickly.  I'm intrigued to know where Edward is.  Lovely tale of how Bella first met the Cullens.



Author's Response: Thanks! glad you like it

Summary: Past Featured Story

CFoW

 

Lily O'Brien is a hopeful child. Will her special cups of hot chocolate and a new friendship with Dr. Edward Cullen make her greatest wish come true? Aaaaaw moments ahead.

 

*Edward, Bella, Alice, Charlie, Angela

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28639 Read Count: 8913
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wonderful chapter

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Heartwarming chapter

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonderful storytelling

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Beautiful story. Excellent writing

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a beautiful scene with an adorable little girl. Who could resist her?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Beautiful

Summary:

 

Sequel to ‘Virgins & Villains’ and ‘Love Rescue Me’. Follow Edward, Bella and the rest of the family as they survive pregnancy, childbirth and anything else that life throws at them. Alternates between BPOV and EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52678 Read Count: 14112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2012 Updated: 23 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Nicknames & Lake Placid

Great chapter. Will Bella get frustrated enough to enlist Carlisle's help?



Author's Response: she will just have to teach Edward a little lesson. Thanks!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Christening Gowns & A Careful Man

Lovely start. (I predict he's going to win the Oscar)



Author's Response: If you want a sneak peek of Oscar night...read the future take posted under Outtakes: Lullabies & Eternal Love. I wrote it for a charity, and eventually it will be incorporated into chapter 4 of this story. Chapter 2 should post later tonight. Thanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

third time

 

Summary: Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity.  ~Henry Van Dyke

 

Thanks to EddieBell69 for the banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6320 Read Count: 778
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2012 Updated: 16 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Fourth Time's a Charm

Beautiful. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks very kindly.  I loved writing this one.  :)

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Will she tell him about the car now?

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Great writing

 

 

Glad Cayden's a little better

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Just a random thought - when she turned herself in the car did she turn on the bed?

:-) 

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Oh, I like the attitude, your words portray her feelings perfectly.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

What a cliffie!

UPDATE, PLEASE!

:-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Great story

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Did her heart rate increase because she's afraid or because she's attracted? The latter, I believe.

great story

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Just when he thought she was opening up to her feelings the shutters slammed back down. 

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

She's let him in again!

great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Great chapter.

 

Hope your son is feeling better soon. Severe allergies are so frightening, going from perfectly healthy one minute to life threatening the next. I have a girl in my class and carry her epi-pen wherever she goes.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Is Edward going to have his first wet dream?

Can Emmett find out and tease him please?  Priceless

great chapter

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Yes, yes. More! Please!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

A vampire wet dream! Now all I need is for Emmett to find out and tease him mercilessly.

great story

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

:-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Something tells me Rosalie is going to be less than pleased.

great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

I hope no-one is home! ;-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Hmmm.... Might need to read the next chapter outdoors to prevent overheating! (It's 4C (40F) here)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

:-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Epilogue

Fantastic epilogue to a wonderfully written story.

Thank-you so much for the time and effort you and your betas have put in over the years, I appreciate it very much. Good luck with your original fiction, I wish you every success. You will be missed.

 

Good to hear your son's feeling better too.

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59280
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good chapter

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923118
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
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Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

An action packed chapter that was very well written.  Even though you kept changing POV the story flowed, it needed different POVs for the whole picture to emerge.

Excellent.



Author's Response:

thanks, I considered writing it as Bree's POV watching from heaven, just so you could see it all at the same time, but I wanted the frantic raw emotions.

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Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Great writing. I was dreading how horrific the wedding and consummation ceremony could be but you handled it well, you gave us the details without being too graphic

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Great chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412089
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter

 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

What are they going to get up to at the ballet?

;-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow, that was beautiful.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great writing.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Truly beautiful.

Thank-you for writing and sharing your work

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661083
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

Beautiful 

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324370
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

What a showdown!  Maggie and Lauren are getting their just desserts but it's a pity poor Bella got hurt in the process.

Great chapter

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Our Countdown

He's worried that she might leave him again in reaction to the frenzy that will follow their announcement.

Great chapter.

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Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

So who is letting Maggie in?

Good to see Edward and Bella making plans.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

Great story

:-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Wow......just WOW!

I think I need a cold shower.  ;-)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Confidant

Wow, that was hot!

Great chapter

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

This is heartbreaking. :(

Great writing

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

Oh dear, I guess the honeymoon is over.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

I hope he thinks to follow her.

great writing, (even though I need shares in Kleenex!)

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - His Lonliness

Great chapter, excellent writing

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Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

Great chapter. Good to see them working things out

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Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Our Betrayer

Maggie and Lauren are going down. That's a chapter to look forward to.

Great writing.

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - His Parents

Wow, I think Bella got some big girl panties for Christmas. She certainly had them on in this chapter, standing up to her classmates and her in-laws (or should that be out-laws seeing as they're estranged from Edward?)

Great chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

That was a sweet chapter.

Great story.

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Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

Fantastic chapter.

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107117
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Victoria???

Great chapter

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

Hope Bella can overlook Jasper's revelations and see the man that he wants to be.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

Edward, Edward....the shit has really hit the fan this time, I don't think this mess will be cleaned up in a hurry, or if at all.

Great story



Author's Response:

Oh, it'll get cleaned up... I always tidy up with a pretty bow before I type in 'the end'...hehe.

Thank you for reading and enjoying!

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

What? Who? But how? So many questions...

PLEASE update soon



Author's Response:

LMAO... oh darlin'... thank you!  I've got the next chapter underway and will post as soon as I get it finished :)

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

What a chapter!

Does she really mean it? She'll crush Jasper otherwise.

Please update soon



Author's Response:

Oh she means it, but he's about to really test it.

Thanks for reading! I'll post again as soon as I have the next one ready.

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

Good for Alice, though Edward deserves a lot more than a slap .

Will Jasper tell her everything? 

Please update soon.

Summary:

Elizabeth is bought from her father to be Aro's bride. She is kept prisoner in his home and has to endure unspeakable torture. This is an out take for Involuntary Rapture.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9621 Read Count: 5260
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Elizabeth's Story

What a fucked up family the Masens are and with parents like Elizabeth's who needs enemies?

Extremely well written. It may be a twisted little tale but it flows so well.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

Fantastic drabble, I've just read it from beginning to end.

Hilarious snarky Bella, I like her!

Summary:

 

 

This is a look into the minds of those who have watched Edward slowly remove himself from his own cimmerian view. These are Outtakes based off of His Cimmerian View. Read through chapter 24 of His Cimmerian View before starting this. AH/OOC

Banner made by the wonderful SoapyMayhem for His Cimmerian View, we just added the word Enduring.  Thanks SoapyMayhem you ROCK!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71046 Read Count: 5928
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

Great writing girls.

Did you have fun thinking up all the evil things she could do?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Summary:

Edward, Bella's Dom, invites their friend, Rosalie, over to fulfil Bella's fantasy. Together they help Bella overcome her fears, and give her the pleasure she's been craving. All human. (Not what i would really class as slash.)

 

Language & kink ahead. Over 18's only!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3483 Read Count: 10710
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Fingers That Make a Fist - O/S

Great writing



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Why does Edward now always refer to himself in the third person? Masters don't usually do that.

If the phone calls are more of the same, it might be best to stick to the original.

Great writing, you've got me hooked.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

OUCH! Doesn't matter how many times, that shit hurts!

Wonder what else is in store and can Kate keep Tanya away?

Love your story