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Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123450
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later
There are tears streaming down my face. Thank you so much for this beautiful story, its a gift.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Wow I just read your whole story in 6 days and there are so meny things I could tell you that are awesome about your story......your Edward is just amazing I read slot to ff but you Edward just might be my new favorite :DDD ....... Ant to be honest (seriously, I'm not just saying this to be nice) I think your wrighting has great balence you your not over wordy but you use enough words hat it makes sensand I think this story has a great balence of sadness, smut, love, and a litle bit of d/s th "spice things up" lol can't wait until you update :)
~wascas
Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.
Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.
A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89177
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Present Tense
Well banerday I should NOT be speaking to u because that was a pretty evil way to end a chapter ;) but if you update before 5:00 pm on Wednesday There may be hope of me talking to you again ;) mahaha c 2 can play the evil game!
Author's Response:
Oh Wascas, bb!!!!!!!!!
I'm so sorry I couldn't hold to your ultimatum! ;) I had such good intentions! But then I had a really sick child and although usually fanfic-world trumps family basic needs, when a child is ill that's something even a fanfic mother can't ignore.
Anyhoo...I think you just might like the next chapter. I planted a sapling---it's a sapling of the citrus variety. It's got to grow and blossom before it will bear actual fruits...but it's going to be lovely watching it flourish.
I hope.
Thanks for the giggle and the review and I'm so sorry I was so slow.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans
You better hide ; ) but it cute I don't think they were ready yet any way :)
"I was up right now. I was actually so up I was pretty fucked up, if the truth be told."
I laughed out loud at that and my dog looked at me like I was CRAZY but I probably am :)
Wow! This story keeps getting better and better! so excited for next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
Sorry I am so far behind on replies...it always seems to get away from me...but I always catchp up eventually! :)
Sorry about the ending of chapter 34...it had to be done. ;) And you are right...they are still so new to each other...this was only their first date and I think it's important for them to take things slowly.
Your dog and I are both so disappointed about you laughing at poor Dateward's "predickament" during the course of his date with Bella in her hot little Miss Fire Bomb dress.
Glad to hear you like how the story is going. I'll update chapter 35 today.
Thanks for taking the time to review and give me a laugh! :)
-bannerday
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: This Is Not the End, Part 1
Aww so the next ch the last one?...... :,( so sad
This story really has gone by super fast
This ch. is so sad though it really does happen to the best people I mean I'm siting here in my living room w/ my iPad crying my eyes out!
because Edward is just so sweet is such the gentelman i realy feel terible that he is blaming himself and I don't know how Bella dosen't see that? but I just have this nagging feeling that something is wrong........ I meen it's very unlike Edward to not text her at all? :( ........ I probably just worry to much though
~wascas
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: The Transfer
Hey bannerday did u skip a chapter or did I maby miss one? I only read part 1 that was part 3......?........? As always though you don't disapoint! And I have very high expectations of my Edward! In fact, everyone my phone says new email I get so ecited! Then so disappointed when it's from facebook and not this story :( Lol
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Inquiring Minds Want to Know
Hey bb
how's it hangin'? Lol
Perhaps "straight as an arrow" ?
"No, you idiot, not ‘praise the Lord’! More like… damnation! Eternal damnation!!!
But it’s just a harmless little blue bikini!"
It may be harmless but it demands ..................? Attention perhaps? Or something else? Either way it WILL BE EDWRDS DEMISE...... .............hopefully ;)
I laughed out loud at “Somehow I don’t think Edward will be titillated so much as he will be cock-elated.I blushed furiously and Alice rolled her eyes. “Rose, you spend waaaaay to much time in conversation with Emmett. I would say ‘He’s beginning to rub off on you,” but I know that would just lead us down a road we really don’t want to take. So, puh-leez, just don’t say anymore.”
Then My husband looked at me like I was crazy (hmmm.......a pattern perhaps?) and when I tried to explain he looked at me like I was totally crazy but that's ok because he's crazy 2 ;)
Lol
Any way, thanks for all the wonderful chapters so far, this awesome chapter, and of corse for all the amazing lemon filled chapters to come!
Love it bb,
bye 4 now
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!!
Loved that last review of yours. And if you're asking me, "How's it hangin'?" it might actually be more gender-correct to ask, "How're THEY hangin'?" Age and gravity and all considered, you know? I'm no longer the perky, nubile waif I never realized I was until that era was over. ;)
Glad to see you were able to laugh at Edward's internal struggle regarding Bella wearing the Peacock Blue Postage Stampkini. Surely the mere name of the color must have given away and foreshadowed some of the coming torment for our dear boy. Perhaps his balls matched the color of that suit at some point that morning.
And you liked Alice's take on Rose and her perverted mind. Now we get a little glimpse into what Rose and Emmett must share. ;)
Sorry that your reading this is helping your crazy husband to focus on the fact that the woman he married is crazy and is reading crazy fanfics written by similarly crazy women. We're all in this together.
Thank you for the kind words and I'm glad you are enjoying the read. I'm enjoying your reviews. Now...I'm just going to go and post the next chapter... Hear from you soon, I hope.
-bannerday
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Leave Them Wanting More
wow great story im dying for the next chapter!
and i was just wondering how often you update and when you update?
:) thanks!
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
I'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying my little fic. The next chapter (31) is posted. I can't wait to hear what you think...it's kind of all over the place. ;) I've been updating about every other day--the story is mostly written I'm just fine tuning things as I go.
Thanks for reading, thanks for the question and thanks for the review!
-bannerday
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World
How could u post such an evil cliffhanger? you must be pure evil! Lol just kidding! no one pure evil could wright such a great story! But seriously update before I spontanisly combust from the anxiety! :)
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
Sorry about that evil cliffhanger at the end of chapter 33...Edward...shaking in his boots. ;) I'm so glad you are enjoying the read. I will continue to update rather quickly, so you shouldn't have to worry too much about spontaneous combustion. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Putting The Move On
Hey bannerday we miss Edward and Bella!
Please update : )
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
Edward and Bella from The Transfer are coming right up! Hope you enjoy chapter 35. Let me know, bb!
-bannerday
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows
Banerday, you evil person, I can't take this delicious torture! The story is so good! BUT I SIMPLY CAN'T WAIT MORE THE 24 HOURS TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! SO PLESSE I BEG U WITH EDWARD ON TOP PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY, I always am impatient but please I need my Edward fix And the Edward in this story is like my own personal brand of heroin ;) "The hair? Really? We’re discussing the hair now?” Of corse were discussing the hair, it's always about the hair duh, come on get with it Edward, that's ok thought your still to adorable for words! Love u banner but the faster u update the more il love u ;)
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
I got really far behind on review replies.
So to chapter 35...I AM an evil person as you stated. I can admit it. In fact I belong to a 12-step program and have been working on it. I am just so flattered that you are loving my little fic. Sorry about making you wait for your dose of update. I love that you love my Edward and find him to be your own personal brand of heroin. And I'm glad you liked his comments about her comments about his hair...he's just too cute, right? I know I want to jump him. ;)
Thanks for the review. Sorry I'm a lagger. But I sure loved this review of yours.
-bannerday
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Past Tense
Wow! Really Great insight into ther love
I miss the Edward Bella time! ;)
If Jacob tries anything I may have to jump into the story and beat him with my bear hands! Lol
Great as always bannerday!
Can't wait for next update :)
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
Somehow I skipped over a review you wrote me for chapter 36. I'm glad you liked the peek into their love and the way they are figuring out functioning as a couple...especially since they are pulled apart by Jake and Billy's accident. I loved your line: "If Jacob tries anything I may have to jump into the story and beat him with my bear hands!" That's audience participation at its very best...straight out of life and onto the page. ;)
Glad you liked that chapter. There's a chapter 41 updated now for your reading pleasure. :)
Read you soon, I hope. Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Heating Up the Pool
"locking the door behind us" hmmmmm it seems that whenever he does that god things follow? ;)
lol
And your right there is something strangely familiar about E&B the shower.............. but I just can't put my finger on what it is .......hmmmmmm Well I girl can only wonder
Speaking of wonder I can't help but thinking that your sapling......(you know the one of a certin "citrus variety").......will reach it's next stage of life and ......dare I say it .........bloom?...???....in the shower because you know saplings need a lot of water ;) Hmmm.... so much to wonder about.....
Well great as always bb
Lovin' it
Author's Response:
Hi again, Wascas!
So after I responded to your bb question I got to wondering to what age group you belong? Closer to mine or closer to Bella's? ;)
And I would say "locking the door" can only be a good thing, right? And showertime fun for B & E...they were rudely interrupted last time by Jasper bursting in on them in the dorm. Wonder if they'll be interrupted this time?
And I truly believe if you throw a little water on a fire you'll definitely get something steamy. At least a little steamy. Don't forget, they want to take things slowly. It's a more delicious read that way anyhow...I love a slow burn, a steamy burn. And who knows? That sapling may like that steamy, quasi-tropical environment and begin to flourish. ;)
Thanks for the review, bb, and of course, the love! Hear from you in a couple of days!
-bannerday
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Reorganizing
Hey
This may be a stupid question But um.... What does bb actually stand 4?....... Is it like best buddy or.....???
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi bb!
I think bb just means "baby." I could be wrong. I should probably just ask my younger and so much cooler daughter. ;) But my regular reviewers who write a little more than the average couple of lines of a review are my bb's to me. ;)
-bannerday
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: You Call That Dancing?
Actually u will hear from me now
I'm closer to bella's age group in fact, I am in collage currently and I text like any Normal collage girl so I really should know what bb means lol. :) oh and when I said husband a few reviews ago technically he is my "fiancé"
Author's Response:
Hi again bbbbbbbbbbbbb! ;)
LOL It's funny, writing and getting reviews from readers it is so hard to gauge someone's age. Sometimes I am right on, other times way off base. I think that's funny. And I'm sure my readers would flip if they knew just how many decades I've racked up. (5+!) Your reviews do read a little older than college age to me. Which just means that you come off as mature. I think it's great that women who might not have a whole lot in common with each other find that we do, indeed, have a lot in common when it comes to our hearts and the way we look at romance. This Twilight thing has become a real sisterhood, you know?
Thanks for the reply. Do you have a wedding date set? We just celebrated our 25th anniversary on December 21st. And his name really is Edward...and he really did give me orange roses...not red...without knowing transfer Edward did the same. ;)
-bannerday
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Cleanliness is Next to Ohmygodliness
Omg bb (I have decided that I don't care what society thinks it means...... I will use it as baby lol) but was that a shout out to me in the beggening or are u having an affair with another reader?!? ;)
"Rose was disappointed that there had been no wild, sweaty animal sex. Truth be told, I was disappointed too." i don't think I could agree more w/ Edward here " We were all laughing at that point but I was still secretly hopeful. It's good to have goals." yes, goals can help you be very very productive indeed
"Alice’s experimentation in nude poetry readings. Or reading, singular, if you were to believe Alice, and I really wasn’t so sure I believed her. I bet it had happened more than once." lol no comment necessary
" That click was so fucking loud!
It kind of made me feel like a dick.
What was she thinking of me right now? Did she know she didn't have to do anything she didn't want to do? She probably thinks I’m an idiot because I locked the fucking door." no she does not Edward stop being stupid we are all so excited about that lock :)
"Did she think I was going to jump her?" oh. Edward please... please ......please jump her
Very very amazing as always bb
Oh and if the shout out was to me then I'd have to say that an"Earth shattering orgasm" offers some relief ;) but u can never have 2 much Edward ;)
Ttyl bb
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas, bb!
Glad I've got you using the slightly enigmatic, yet affectionate "bb." ;) I just happened to get a strange, wayward thought in my mind...happens a lot, actually... How about if we begin using some other new abbreviation of our own making when we email others? We can use it often throughout the correspondence without ever really explaining it and see how long it takes to catch on??? Maybe even incorporate both lowercase and capital letters?? Maybe add a number and an ampersand: Ig2r&rFF. I kind of like it. ("I'm going to relax and read FanFiction.")
Okay, enough of my nonsense. I know you've got better things to do than read that nonsense and besides, when I'm done with this review reply Ig2r&rFF. ;) Wascas! I would never cheat on you and have an affair with another reader!! Perish the thought. However, it was actually a reference to Edward getting a little action after 3 years of inaction. ;)
I love when readers quote me back to me...I really like to know exactly what strikes you as funny/interesting/worth mentioning/worth quoting back to me. I really like this last chapter and the wild thoughts that are so obviously running through everyone's minds. Poor Edward...if he doesn't calm down he'll just have an aneurysm as he overthinks and overreacts and overanalyzes.
I'm glad you were amazed. The next few chapters should be loads of fun. I love the Cullen compound!
I'm glad you found some relief (along with Edward) after all these chapters. There will be more relief...some relief in nearly every chapter that...comes.... (Sorry, had to say it.) And you are right...you can never have to much Edward. (Actually that would abbreviate nicely: "Ucnh2mE"
Thanks for the review and the giggles and smiles. I'll post the next one shortly. Take care, bb!
Ig2r&rFF LOL :)
-bannerday
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Miles of Aisles
hey bb so sorry i havent been reading+reviewing like a glffr ( hmmm seems i have been reading some things you have writen though :) ---gffr=good litlle fanfic. reader) ANYWAY so iv been super busy taking exams and studying like a crazy person but as disscused im very good at crazy ;)
anyway im supper hyper, so studing was not going well (at all) so instead im wring u a review of a ch. i havent read yet to tell my ffw (favorite fanfiction writer) that i am not leaving u, i promise (serously i dont think i could Quit this brand of edward/heroin cold turkey) anyway when i come back ill write you a GIANT review, i promise
you know the reason im so hyper is probably because im having withdrawls from this edward :o
love u my ffw
~wascas
*notice how i rated the ch a 10 and i havent even read it yet....... LOL ........i have A LOT of confidence in you ;)
Author's Response:
Hi my dearest crazy little Wascas!
Your "review" or maybe it's a "preview" (of chapters you haven't yet read) had me laughing. It's okay when real life gets in the way of being a glffr. I know that when you have the time you will be a glffr again and then you'll even be a glffr&r ) "& reviewer."
I wish you good luck on your exams. It's a crazy time when those assholes roll around.
I'm glad to know you thought of me when you were unable to remain focused. What does that say about our relationship? It says I'm your ffw and you are one of my ffr. I will always welcome you and your reviews with open arms, whether or not you are actually reviewing anything in your review or not. ;)
Anyhoo...I'm glad you are still out there and that you haven't dumped me for some other crazy fffw. Keep coming back for more Edward/heroin/crack, whichever brand of personal drug you prefer. I'll give you your fix. ;)
Thanks for the "preview", my ffr.
-bannerday
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Just Desserts
heyyyy my ffw so i'm almost done w/ exams :D thursdays the last 2!!!!!!!
this ch. was so funny i was rolling on the flor hysiricly it was exacly what me and Edward needed but this specific quote is just.....priceless "It's really hard to do my grocery shopping and listen to your pornography at the same time." OMG edward pornography .....now theres an idea
well cant wait for the next chapter...oh wait? its just a click away! lol
love you mffw
~wascas
oh turns out i already reviewed/"previewed" that ch. well i just merge it w/ this one :)
"Now where was I, before I was so rudely interrupted?" did u really forget edward or r we playing games now...we do love games
wow look at me acting all sexy and using the medical plural ;)
“I touched her melons" oh jazz i'm so sorry would it help if i let you touch mine to make you feel better?.....oh no its no trouble for me....really i think it would help..
love you mffw, awesome sexy chapter
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas! I have been missing you! I'm glad you are nearly done with exams. Yippee!!! I'm winding down the school year myself. One more week to teach then three days of finals. Then grading. Ugh! Then summer. YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
And loads of time to fanfic. That's always a good thing...all that Edward...mmmmmm...goooooood.
Glad you liked the grocery shopping with the Cullen clan. Poor edward...or is it Condomward? No...it's NOT Condomward...he pretty much established that as fact with each male member of his little family/gang.
Edward pornography...certainly something to consider...geez the visuals that conjures up, no?
There's several chapters up and waiting for you as a reward for studying and finishing up your finals like a good girl.
I love that you "previewed/reviewed" the following chapter. I'm up to chapter 49 now...just uploaded tonight. It's getting yummy. Edward is just really digging the physical aspect of their relationship. It's fun to think about him finally reclaiming his lost self after his post-Tanya's-death hiatus. I love thinking of him as "back among the living." And for as goofy as Emmett and Jasper have always been...there is that within Edward as well and we're slowly seeing it come out. I'm so proud of the boy! ;)
I'll send Jasper over to your place so he can thump your melons. LOL Better send the bf/fiance on an errand. ;)
Nice to hear from you again, mdfsffrar (my damn fine swanky fan fic reader and reviewer). Keep in touch, bb and good luck with the last two exams. The Transfer gang and I will be waiting for you with party hats on our heads and drinks in our hands.
-bannerday
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: The Food Network
Holy moly bb this story just keeps getting hotter and hotter and i would wright u more but I want to read more so bad so....... On to Edwards dungeon ;)
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
So yes, Edward was sort of in his element, having B at his parents' house for the weekend. Free and unfettered time to play and have fun. ("unfettered?" "play?"...it must have been your reference to Edward's dungeon. ;) LOL
Thanks for the review. :)
-bannerday
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: The Business of Appetites
I don't think it's possible 4 u to love reviews more then I love updates, mffw I freak out every time my phone beeps because it could possibly be an email from TWCS!!
Edward giggles are amazing so keep them coming
Author's Response:
I LOVE REVIEWS!!! I print them up, hold them in my arms and dance around the house with them. Actually that's a lie. But the dancing happens in my head.
I'm so excited that you're so excited when you get the beep that may be an update! Listen for the beep again soon!
Thanks bb!
-bannerday
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
"Cold, my ass, Cullen. It's gotten pretty damn hot suddenly." Edward says it best "pretty damn hot" chapter
Your so right mslg this chapter did make me kinda teary eyed
so when I was reading the last chapter I was thinking "fix you" would be a great song to use because it just fits this Edward so well and then u used it and I was so shocked I never guess anything right! But I guess sswm all think alike!
Amazing sexy ch.
Love it!
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!!!
Glad you are enjoying the pretty damn hotness. There's more on the way of course. I'm slowly bringing Edward and Bella up to a rolling boil of steamy hotness. ;) It's so cool that you were thinking of Fix You as the Coldplay song. Obviously you've been paying attention to the gist of his story. And I'm glad to know that I'm not the only teary-eyed fangirl out there. :)
Thank you again, mfff!
-bannerday
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You
Omgosh bb I am so sorry that I have not ben reading but my life is just so crazy right now you don't even want to know but this chapter was really good and I'm even better is the next one is just a click away...... Love you bb ~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
I have missed you, but I know life sometimes gets in the way of our Edjoyment of fan fiction. Glad to hear from you!
Glad you liked chapter 49. You have some catching up to do, but if you're in the mood to read that's good...there's stuff waiting for you.
Hope RL settles down for you.
-bannerday
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?
So cute bb, and in response to your ? I hate tampon shopping myself, it is so embarrassing and my guy will not do it either so I am forced to make if a very covert operation indeed lol I think Jake gave Bella the black flowers to kind of send a message I know it's kinda out there but I'm good at crazy :D anyway if Bella is pregnant I will be kind of dissaponted
With love 4 Edward,
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi again!
After this many years of marriage my hubs has on occasion bought me tampons and bought them for our daughter as well. The very first time was rather entertaining: He actually bought me pads once, right after I had given birth to our first child. I think it was his way of thanking me for giving him a son. ;)
Interesting theory on the flowers tied with black ribbon.
No...no pregnant Bella in this story. At least not for now...
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Surprise, Surprise, Surprise
Oh yes bb I am right hear and James is just such a baster I just want to .......I dont know exactly......... everything I think of does't sound bad enough but I will make him suffer.......a LOT
Lol
Well on to the next ch......
~wascas
Author's Response:
Could James be any more creepy and gross? You go get him, my feisty little Wascas! Give him hell! lol
-bannerday
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions
Whooooooo! Stalker twist and a cliffy! Nice one bannerday!
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
Glad you liked that stalker twist cliffy! Thanks for the review!
-bannerday
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Out of Left Field
I can see y u felt the need to re-wright this ch over and over. on one hand you don't want Edward to seem like a stalker but it has to show that he cares a lot because he does. And James can't step over a certin line or the police will be forced to get involved and james knows that so it really is a rather difficult balance. However I think you did a very good job with the chapter:) on a lighter note, if u ask me Bella should just get a restaining order :) from James the creeper
~wascasAuthor's Response:
Hi Wascas!
See, you got the problem. It's hard to figure out how to make James creepy enough but not go over the line. and Edward has to keep himself in check too. And then that whole baseball game, I thought that was maybe confusing, but I wanted it in there...they can't spend their time worrying about what might happen...they have to live and have fun, but I didn't want it to seem too frivolous, like they weren't taking the stalking seriously, you know?
Thanks
-bannerday
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: The Waiting Game
Cute ch. But I play colege softball and love the game to death so my opinion may be a little biased.....
And of course i love Edward to death so .........yes definitely a little biased........
he would be welcome to slide home on my field any time and slide home other places.......
~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi again, Wascas!
Glad you liked the baseball chapter. Over the Line is a great game if you've never played it. It's fun for people who have no real skills and people who do. I'm not sure I explained it well, but you could always... Google it...if you were interested.
And Edward in a baseball uni...oh. my. freakin'. HOT!
Okay. Gotta go take a cold shower now.;)
-bannerday
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57: So Near and Yet So Far
Hey bb this ch. Was so funny I kept rotfl
"Where do you keep his scowling half-naked gang of homeboys" well edward i could tell you where I would to want to have them but you don't have one of those so.......;)
By the way your new story sounds really good and totally sexy but I hate waiting for updates (I'm the kind of person that can just sit down and read a whole book) so I usually try to wait until story's have like 20ch published and the plot is fairly developed to start reading the begining
speaking of that that about how meany ch. Do u think are left in this story?....... Just curious
~wascas
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: Part of the Build-Up
Oh geez banerday I was all happy and giggles during the chapter then I got to the a/n and I feel like it's almost the last day day of classes and I have to say goodbye to all my friends (all the characters) :'( that may sound a little crazy but I really feel like iv gotten to know all the characters and this is goodbye :'(
Edward forever in my heart,
Wascas
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Supernova
Hey bannerday I'm all caught up now in my fanfic readin and rl seams to have calmed down momentarily so I think I leave u a very nice in depth review First off I just want to say mm mmmhhhhhhh......yum.....Edward.....this Edward is just so cute I'm just such a fan of dorkward <3 to be honest I was a little woried that this ch. Would be kind of disappointing because of my crazy high expectations but it was still really good I did kind of wish u had an epov in there but it's still really good Now it might just be me and the fact that I kind of rush when I read but when Edward was undressing Bella I was kind of confused because I thought she already had the bra off and then Edward started taking it off off her and......I was really confused but alls well that ends well and that undresind defiantly ended well I mean how could Edward undresing someone not end well lol ;) ~wascas
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
I am so behind on my review replies. I'm hoping over the next few days to get caught up.
I love a sexy dorkward. He's sexy when it matters most and he's dorky when it's appropriate. Just the perfect guy! The EPOV...comes next chapter. I think you'll like it. ;)
And no, Bella had her underwear on---both panty and bra, when he twirled her to get the full effect of the special undies set she bought just for him, just for this night. Maybe I should have stated that more clearly. And then Edward slips her straps down her arms, unhooks her bra in back, and voila! BOOBIES! ;)
I'm going to post chapter 61 today, so look for your EOPV!
Thanks for the review!
-bannerday
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: Across the Night Sky
Awww bb it's so cute there little "sapling" has grown into a strong thriving citrus fruit bearing tree!
Great chapter It was so ironic when Bella was like "You're not some fictional character in a romance novel?" lol well it looks like she may have caught on bb. We've been discovered but not for infringing of course :D
~wascas
Ps. Oh by the way did u get my email?
Author's Response:
Hi Wascas!
No I didn't get your email. :( Did you send it off of my profile? Wonder what happened there. Give it another whirl, maybe.
Glad you liked the strong and thriving citrus tree. ;) And my "your not a fictional character..." line. Sometimes I just write things to make myself laugh.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Whooooo...I think it's time for a few calming meditation breaths.............
Ok now that that's taken care of.....holy hell bannerday that was some intense Edward right there and then I was getting toards the end and I was like if we have another cliffy I'm gona b pissed man..... But no your just to nice for that so thank you
Wow that was some really sexy possessive Edward there .... My girly parts were tingling lol
Can't wait for an update
~wascas
Can't wait for
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: Reality for Better or Worse
Omg you cliffy mean-e I can not wait to c what happens.....although I'm sure Bella will c james down by Edwards car then Bella will figue out that Edward was keeping things from her. :( silly Edward, the longer you wait to tell the worse it gets :( anyway really ah .....intreresting ch. ......Edward is just so......creative lol :)
Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.
Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923138
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Ummm... noc? in mc i was promiced another chapter of ir and i dont like to wait... ;) please ...... With a spanking on top? Or bottom depending on your prefrence........ Lol ;)
~Wascas
Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.
Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279
Hi just wanted to let you know your an awsome wrighter! This is really good, and i love the pictures at the end of the chapters! This is tottaly going to be added to my favories along with involantary rapture! :D
Author's Response:
awwww thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it :)
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282
Hi im new to reviewing but iv been with this story a long time, and even though i dont review every chapter i just want you to know that i look forward to reading them every day and you are such a talented wrighter! Even if you are having trouble wrighting like you say just know that we as readers appresiate every word you type and every lemon you create! :) thankyou so much for working so hard at this and keep up the good work!
~wascas
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing. it means a lot to authors. I am glad ur enjoying my writing. I know I didn't post a chapter today. I will right now, just for you :)
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283
Oh, well with a response of a hot as fuck chapter just for me and a wonderful shout out at the begining of said chapter it looks like you might be moldinging me in a reglar reviwer noc ;)
Ps is it a little warm in here or....
~wascas
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 284: Chapter 284
This chapter and picture are so hot i could just eat them up (pun definitly intended).
Lol keep up the great chapters noc ;)
~wascas
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285
Another edorabele chapter ;) haha (someones a little cheesy when there tired) lol great cute chaper noc
I can't wait for the next!
~wascas
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286
Oh you tease ;) this chapter...... Aghhhh i want more lol :)
Just courious b/c im not in the lifestyle but shoud'nt bella yellow, i mean with the emotional stuff going on, she shoudent just ignore it and endanger herself by playing but im not sure?
Thanks
~wascas
(your new regular reviewer) :)
Author's Response:
She probably should yellow, but because they have no relationship outside of the playroom, she isn't comfortable doing that. If this continued, she probably would. As a sub who felt like her for a while in one of my D/s relationships but was afraid to say something for fear of losing the Dom, I get where she's coming from.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 287: Chapter 287
Wow even though there wasent nessarly a ton of "action" in this chapter it's still very forfilling and a lot happened :) i cant wait for more noc
~wascas
Oh and what is this i hear about "coming to an END soon?"
Outrageses roumors i hope....
Author's Response:
ur kidding right... it's got like 12 chapters left... then all done! Its all written. I am working on rewriting it, adding some then writing the sequel... that will be in a few months. Are u on fb? you could get ur info first hand u know.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288
Wow this chaper is really beatiful and for some reason seems heartbreakingly sad, but in the good romantic gooey kind of way ;)
~wascas
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 289: Chapter 289
Wow the pics are buitiful.... The human body is Truly a work of art, a blank cavas!
Good chapter noc keep them cumming even if its HARD lol ;)
~wascas
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291
Wow that was so beautiful im acualy kind of speechless (which dosent happen offten), thanks for finnaly geting us to the big moment :)
~wascas
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 292: Chapter 292
Wow this is poetry, its so perfect!
Im serously speahless agian! It just takes my breathaway ;)
~wascas
Bella hates the circus and yet she keeps going back...could a certain green-eyed magician have anything to do with it?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3519 Read Count: 845
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good original story! :) however, i feel it ends rather abruptly and almost feels hurried at the end. You have so much great build up and anticipation then...... It kind of just skimes over the "relase" (forgive the pun) so perhaps consider an expansion of the ending. All in all though you should be very proud of this, as it takes a lot of gutts to post a creative work for public constructive comment, and i commend your courage :)
~wascas