Reviews by Cleos Cooper
Summary: Past Featured Story

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ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814525
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Well ref, I think she'll freak out at first...until he explains where he's taking her.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Run, run, run...as fast as you can!!  Like tonight...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this is garnering.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It's like the 'Twilight-'Zone!  I have no idea what's going to happen to them...she's got a week to figure it out.  Run Bella Run!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing our story, we love that you all have taken the time to leave us some love.  Please Google and check out The Glory Awards, our story His Cimmerian View is up for an award against one of our favorite stories Better Than Pie ... Since we are up against such an outstanding story we ask that you go vote for one of the two, because they are both great.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and showing your love to DDKC.  Kasi & Nikky~

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

At least she has Alice for support.  A cushion is only good for a bit...until the cushion starts tomget thin.  I hope she succeeds quickly.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hate the term chubby chaser! I think both girls will be good for one another.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm in Wilmington NC, and coffee is pretty much the same, depending how fancy you want it.

Bellas a smart one and I'm glad she is thinking rationally.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yeah!  I married him!  11 years of marriage later..20 years total!  He is my best friend and biggest pain in the butt!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

No luck and yes please!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ass manager?  Wow, what a job he has to have!  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hey she comes!  Looking good.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Here we go...can't wait!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Here we go!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow..rabbits!  Love it.  I hope he gives her a chance.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Begging....hmmm, it could work!  Or maybe not...if it doesn't, this is going to be a much shorter dribble story!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Good for her.  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm glad jasper is genuine in his interest.  I think Bella will help...she has to!  Chubby chaser is an awful term, but I married my chubby chaser....love is wonderful thing.  I still have my issues too, still fighting the weight issues...it's a never ending story!  Thanks for the update...I do love this story.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Funny does not cover it!  I laughed out loud...thanks.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Jasper is awesome!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow....go girl!  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

He'll be pissed!  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I hope she goes off on him. 

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

She can't let him get off this easy!  Looking forward to the next verbal whipping!  I think he'll try to interrupt, but I think she'll give him a what for!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Makes me think he is a little bit interested in "the kid"!  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Jealousy is a wonderful thing.  No way those are the same rules!  well we will see what he's up to soon...I hope!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Well, that's interesting.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I think it was his head hitting the desk!?  So funny!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

My mother use to honk her car horn in a certain way...everyone know when we were around.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

I seem to write this a lot...wow!  She's awesome and a better friend!  I hope this doesn't come back and bit her on the firm butt!  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Of course it's Edward.  But what is the connection between Edward and Angela?

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Yeah, I don't know how guys walk around with those things!   I tell my husband that all the time...he just laughs at me!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

She will not impress Edward any time soon...he is trying to resist!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

How dare she.  I guess her and Edward own the club?  I think jealousy is getting the best of Angela...competition.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I love how she speaks her mind, and she is oblivious to shallow stuff about her.  I love that Rose set her straight, but what is Angela's deal?

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I am so happy rose is on her side...she is usually a baddy!  I like a good Rose, thank you.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Soon.  They have to.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Yeah, don't hold anything back Bella!  I guess she has to play by his rules...until the month is up.  I think he's being a little protective...even if he doesn't know it.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

She rocked it!  I am so glad...you know Edward it totally watching from the back!!!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

They say the way to man is through his stomach...maybe a steak would do her cause some good.  Althought, I would back off if I were her...he seems like he's ready to explode and she will be the casualty.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I think maybe he is trying to protect Bella, I'm sorry, Isabella, from Tanya.  She seems like she may be more trouble then Angela...especially since her daddy is with the police department.  Tricky bit of stuff there.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

LOVE HER!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

She is never going to be able to look him in the eyes again!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

But isnt he pro Angela?  He may have something to say about that...

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

I loved it!  I love a confident Bella and a self conscience Alice.  I love that jasper is anything but mean..to pretty much anyone but Edward, because he deserves it.   I love this story, and reason behind it!  Silver is awesome.  Thanks guys!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

I hope someone else, like Jasper or Rose, stick up for her first.  There maybe fists, but I don't think it'll be Bella's...maybe even Alice's??  Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

She started it!  Way to go Bella..she protected herself, that's all!!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

I always told my husband he gossips like an old lady!  That is really what ESPN is...gossip!  I love the banter, as long as they keep it light and not too personal. Good luck today.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

I hope they make Charlie see some reason...will it work?? Who knows until tomorrow!  Can't wait.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Head on the door is better!  He is a man after all...he can only handle so much.  Thanks for the bonus chapters, I appreciate the back story, and can't wait for the next adventure.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

I am happy Eleazar isn't a possessive daddy...he's realistic!  Now, I love rose being the good guy too!  When are they all going to find out who told Charlie and Jacob where to find Bella...I think it may have be Angela, no??

I hope Edward doesn't blow it and he takes her to his home, not hers.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 240: Chapter 240

He can't let her down now can he!  A promise is a promise!  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 258: Chapter 258

What a sad story.  But it is unfortunately one that isn't just a FF story, it's real and devistating.  Can't wait to hear what the rest is...how he got involved with the club.  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 266: Chapter 266

Sometimes you have to hit the bottom and then work yourself up.  He has to finally realizes what a great kid she in order for him to go on...some small town talk is not what you should base your decision on!  He needs to be slapped!  And what happened to Alice in that same small town!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 267: Chapter 267

Obviously Charlie doesn't get hints...he needs to get hit hard.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Isabella is a magazine writer, whose life is thrown into disarray when her husband leaves her for another woman. To escape her routine life, she accepts an assignment to interview a Parisian Madame, whom she believes is running a brothel. But Isabella will soon discover that there are more facets to love and romance, especially when Madame Esme selects her as her next project.

WRITTEN FOR THE 2013 JANUARY DRABBLE WARS

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83682 Read Count: 124964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 26 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Learning Experience

That's quite compromising, and too funny!  Thanks for the update...I just started reading and couldnt stop!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Second Chances

Yeah Esme!  It's about time one of her 'girls' help her out!  I'm so glad Bella could get this done for her!  Thanks for the multiple updates...love it!  

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A couple of thoughts...where has Bella been?  And what happened to rose?  I guess that will all pan out in the story, but I will wonder.  Ten years is a long time...and Edward is still feeling the effects.

Black Hole by addict_writer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

New attitude. New job. New friend with benefits. What started out as casual takes on a whole new meaning when things twist and turn and sink into the abyss of reality. One big mistake changes everything.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121478 Read Count: 119278
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Same thing happened to me.  I had just had my premie...then a wild puppy showed up at my home.  Apparently, my hubby was talking to a guy who bred dogs...the liter came along, and we got the dog my hubby 'asked for'?!  I was so upset, but it was so darn cute, I couldn't say no.  But, she didn't stay with us for long...too wild!  After she took my daughters Halloween costume out into the back yard and ran though the mud with it...a white duck costume no less,  I was done!  On to better things.   Thanks for the update...loved it.

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

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Banner made by  vamp_luvor

My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112988
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I can't believe these people expect so much trust from her soooo quick!  Everyone she loved, let he down...she needs to be able to trust before she can open herself up.  Edward may have bought her, but I think the love and trust will need to be shown, not just assumed.  I just caught up!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She is so 'in to her submission' so easily...it hurts my heart at how hurt she was by her family...I hope bad things come to them!  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow!  She is really stupid!  She has no idea what she did, and is just now trying to find out what's going on??  What is Charlie up to on the reservation...was her threatened too?  Can't wait for more...thanks.

Mr. Househusband by ADAdancer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

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Banner made by: Candykizzes24

Raising three children wasn’t that easy, especially when your wife is working long hours as a famous television chef. Some may think I have the easiest life, but spending your days cleaning up after children and running errands is anything but that. I was a househusband.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19206 Read Count: 9881
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2013 Updated: 27 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love these two together.  Compared to the other couples, they are awesome!  I hope all is well when they get home...thanks for the update, love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here is your teaser! Unbeta'd

The guys and I decided to visit the park, so I could tire Lizzie out. I still had to go grocery shopping and do a shit load of laundry at home.

“So, did you and the missus rekindle the intimacy?” Emmett wiggled his eyebrows.

“Jeeze Em, might as well ask him if they had wild and crazy sex?” Jasper laughed.

I looked over at Lizzie who was now playing with her doll before answering. “We were alone for a whole week without kids, what do you think?”

“Hey man! Rosie and I haven’t had sex in quite some time. She always tells me that I have to call her assistant and pencil her in! Who the fuck has to schedule sex with their spouse! Oh that’s right, me,” Emmett complained.

I felt bad for my friend. Two key things men loved more than anything were sex and food.

“Dude, you have to call and schedule an appointment?” Jasper slapped his hand against his thigh as he laughed.

“Oh yeah! Laugh it up, fucker!” Emmett pouted.

See you in two weeks!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I've always said to my husband that they gossip worst than women sometimes!  Edward totally needs to focus on his family and his drama...not the others and their drama!  Can't wait to see what your going to do for us on the final chapter, but what ever you choose, we will love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
 
Here is your unbeta'd teaser!
 
“So how’s the divorce moving along?” Jasper asked Emmett.
 
Emmett sighed in disappointment. It had been a hard year for him, after our family getaway at the zoo last year, Emmett and Rose had a major talk. He found out that there had been many “meetings” with one of her colleagues, Royce King. She even shared that he had kissed her, but it meant nothing. When Emmett asked if she still talked to him, she admitted that she was very close to him, but she promised nothing romantic would ever happen again. However, a couple months down the road, Emmett came to surprise Rose with a romantic dinner and found Rose and Royce in a rather indecent position. Emmett was still taking care of the twins; Rosalie saw them on the weekends.
 
“It’s moving along slowly. But I am telling you both, it is hard as fuck, being a single parent. Rose barely even talks to the kids. She’s always traveling with that son of a bitch or working. Has she even spoken to Bella or Alice?”
 
“She called Alice once a couple weeks ago about a dress design she wanted for a work function, but that’s about it.” Jasper shrugged.
 
“Bella hasn’t heard a thing from her.”
 
“Man, my life sucks. I’m a thirty-one year-old divorcee with two kids. I work at the fucking McDonald’s, who would want that in a life partner.” He groaned. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, first of all, Edward should just break it off with Tanya...finally!  Of course Tanya will be making a lot of trouble for Bella...it's in her nature.  Bella will be 'shy' again, and will probably be out of the loop...an emotion such as fear will do that too you.  Her family just moved here for this job, and she can't be the one to screw it up.  If Tanya's father is Charlie's boss, things could go either way.  Thanks for the update. 

 

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow!  Tanya is some piece of delusional work.  I think she needs to go away before she really causes big problems.  Maybe Tanya will be seen for what she really is when Edward shows all the wonderful video she has...she shouldn't threaten a man in love and his girl!  I hope B and E can talk about this and Bella can handle it.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Hi.

Thank you so much for your review. i love reading them all

 

fiona (Robsessed73)

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102289
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Caius is going to be a big thorn in every ones side.  How could he think Bella would marry his grandson?...because he missed the first generation?  I am so glad that E and B are already married.  I feel bad for Aro, I hope he gets to impart his wisdom on Bella and Edward.  Caius will not leave this be...I can't wait to hear Bella's pov, I want to know what he had to say to her.  It's not like he can threaten her and have it not have any repercussions.  Can't wait, thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Sexy guy!  Can't wait to see what's up in Edward sleeve for Paul...very interesting indeed.  Billy seems to be very delusional -the rolling stones once said...you can't always get what you want.  Thanks for the update, always wanting more.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh no! Aro is dead and the crap is really going to hit the fan.  It'll be nice to have Bella's whole family together, in a way!? ...poor Bella, talk about an up and down couple of days!  Her highs and lows are very extreme.  Thanks for update, I loved it and love this story...always hoping for more, soon!

Summary:

Banner By: Ro Normann

When seventeen-year-old Bella is kidnapped while out with Alice Cullen—she taken as a prize to be awarded the winner of an underground fighting tournament.  Will Alice’s adopted brother be the unlikely hero to save the day?  All Human/Rated M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 137 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15976 Read Count: 315390
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

He's got to play along...right?  Maybe he'll have Tanya and the other girl have a go, and stay out of it!?!  Hmmmm sounds like he has to play along or something will be considered odd.  

The whole Renee thing has me stumped!  I hope she didn't sell Bella to pay off a debt...that's just a off thought.  Can't wait for more...I love the rapid fire chapters.

Summary:

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When you're homeless, you have nothing. When someone opens up their heart to you, you gain everything, even if they've physically given you nothing. Sometimes kindness is enough to save someone's life.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15377 Read Count: 1037
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's amazing how small the world is.  Full circle so to say.  I liked in the beginning you weren't sure whos head you were in.  I loved how strong Bella and Alice are/were.  They made it by having some hope for a future...how they all come together is a wonderful thought.  She now an actually start living a life.  Thanks for an inspirational and wonderful story.

Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 127111
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Misconception

Well, that was a roller coaster of a chapter!  Funny...serious...angry...funny...serious...happy!  The name of the chapter, really fits the ring!  She's funny when she tipsy!  Thanks for the update!  Love it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by DeeBell1

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30188 Read Count: 106949
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 12 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I do think his charm is on her person...somewhere!  This should be a fun read.  Thanks!

CTA Dreams by Daphodill Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 112]
Summary: Past Featured Story

He's watched her for months; she doesn't know he exists. A train delay offers him the opportunity to make his dream a reality.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 99 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52934 Read Count: 60017
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I love a smart Bella.  Emmett is absolutely a blast!  Carlisle, well I have no words for.  I have a feeling, little Miss Alice is going to be lurking around a corner somewhere...she is a special one.  I love the rapid fire updates...always looking for more!  Thanks.

too quiet by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

tq

 

 

Banners made by MinaRivera.

Summary: Edward left to give Bella a better life. A life full of beautiful noise. This is what she was really left with.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49311 Read Count: 49542
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2013 Updated: 16 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OK...I must admit, I have to read these a couple at a time, just to understand the flow...I can see where Rose is trying to have, for lack of it, a heart.  Maybe she is trying to make restitution for her terrible attitude toward Bella.  I thing it may be a big reason why, and I'm guessing, that they felt the need to run.  Billy was out of line...guilt is a awful thing, and there seems to be a ton of it.  Will Jake kindly back away long enough to let Alice show Edward the 'now' Bella?  Or will he be a shadow over her existence to Edward?  Thanks for the updates,  love them...but I need to read several together to run them right.  Waiting for Edward to show...and the rest of the family...

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I love the flying Dinali sisters act!  Too bad their act has been cancelled...permanently!  Thanks for a laugh in this chapter.  The fetch and puppy!  That's too much!  Hahaha

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Well, I hope all the Denali's are dead. They are not to nice of people, no wonder Rose always got along with them.  But Rose may be changing, she did, after all, change Bella for Edward.  This story is getting deeper and deeper.  Thanks for e updates...till next time.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm glad he came back without prompting from the others.  Can't wait to hear what is going to happen with them...rose has some explaining to do.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Mom ALWAYS come first!  I'm glad she could work some aggression out on his butt!  When is the rest of the merry crew showing up?  When will Jake phase back to human?  Rose and Emmett are really hitting bells last nerve...it's like PMS for vamps! Thanks for the updats, see you next time.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Does anyone ever think before they speak?  Even smart people are really dumb.  See you tomorrow.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I'm glad Bella didn't crumble.  The family has to see what a mess they crated and that THIS Bella is not the one they left.  I think I got the gist of your chapter...the key is to always read your story in quiet, no distractions or anything.  That way you can follow a little better..at least that is what I have found!  Have a great day.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Ahhh...we find out about Charlie soon.  Bella is really torn in so many directions...her emotional well being is so fragile, and being a new born!  PMS is othing compared to this!  Read you tomorrow.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Wow, that was a big bit into Bella's trust bun...he wants the 'honor' of making Tanya go away!  I hope he is doing it because he wants to, not because he wants to make it up to Bella.  Till next time...thank you.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Pie and a dead Tanya...can't wait!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334737
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

I really get the feeling that Bella does believe her parents.  Why wouldn't she?  Can't wait to meet Charlie...he needs to have a reality check.  The roommates are a piece of work. She needs to get out and quickly.  I hope Edward can get something fixed for her and take over her self preservation...she has had an awful life so far.  Why is no one in her corner?  Edward has to get to the bottom of this and soon before something even worse happens to Bella.  



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

Wow!  What a bunch of wonderful people that are associated with Bella's life.  Why is the big question.  Can't wait for more...I love this Bella.  She has nothing to lose.  What is the deeper issues with people from Forks???  What and why are my big questions...hmmm.  Edward is an awesome character here too.  



Author's Response:

Well it seems like more and more of you are hating Bella’s parents.  That is quite understandable, but you haven’t even met them yet.  Yeah you get to meet them.  Form your opinions after you do.  The back story of what happened at Harvard will come out, soon.  You will also get to see more of the sweet side of our DomWard in upcoming chapters.

We had people worrying about throwing Bella right into scenes and such, we want to assure you that there is no way we could write that, because there is no way she could do that.  This story starts in September, and they will be friends first.  Edward has feelings for her, but he knows she is quite broken.  Have some trust in us, we are not perfect but we do try to provide a decent story worth reading.

We’ve had a lot of people asking about chapter count, and posting time frames.  At this point we are saying around 25 chapters.  There are 14 written and once we have it fully written we will post much more often.  We could easily post up to chapter 12 right now, but then you would be stuck waiting for 13 and on up.  We would rather put you on a week wait now, than have to say, sorry we got writers block no chapter this week.  We purposely started posting after we had 10 chapters written for a reason. 

We’re going to start giving teasers like we did for His Cimmerian View, and this is the first teaser and it is unannounced, so enjoy.

Nikky and Kasi~

 

I chuckle, before leaning in to whisper to her.  “These are exhibitionist submissive and Dominants that are in these. There are many showing different scenes—new things—teaching methods.  Some have sex in them, but unlike porn these, or most of them I should say, are collared pairings, who have been together for a long time and both agreed to do this.  There are some that are of a submissive that is into humiliation.  They’d meet with the Dom several times and build a trust between them, before these filmed scenes take place.  There’s always a contract between both parties, and both are screened for STDs beforehand.”

Bella looks at the DVDs and then back at me.  “Are you in any of them?” she asks, her voice is soft and low.

I look at her shaking my head.  “No, I’ve never done that.  Well, I never had someone taking pictures or a video of it anyway.  I have done a few scenes with my sub at the time.  When I’m not with a collared sub, like my current situation, I’ve done scenes with submissives’ whom I have a good relationship with from my club.  I’m due to do a teaching scene about rope bondage and spanking at the club three weeks from now.  No matter how many scenes I participate in, the one thing I don’t do is have sex during a public scene.”

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can't wait to find out the whole sordid tale.  As for growing up...my mother was/is very selfish.  My older brother is 5 years older...a different generation in my mind.  My mother was around one day a week, and my brother was either taunting me or he wasnt there.  I tryed to self motivate, but ran into some trouble freshman year in HS.  A girl I grew up with, well let's just say, she was never watched either, she had some great ideas and no one was going to stop her...I was always dragged along because I was the 'good' one!  She would get us into some real trouble...police etc.  I always want for my child what I never got...so that is what I am doing.  Loving her and being around and in the same town, always!  Anyway, I can't believe...or maybe I can...people disregard your story as untrue...then they shouldn't read it.  I love it...hope she gets revenge.



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was a lot of highs and lows again in both their lives.  I'm glad Edward came clean...told her the truth.  But I also understand she wouldn't know how to bring up her past...how do you start that conversation?  I can't wait to see them both come together and grow together..they will definitely be a force to be reckoned with..  Charlie is coming to town, I hope his true colors show...he's an ass to abandon his daughter.  We all know there is something more with that whole dynamic, but we leave it up to your capable hands to let us know what we should, when we should. Bella letting Juliard call him as opposed to her family, that's an awesome jump of trust.  Thanks for the update, as always...wanting more and wanting it soon!  



Author's Response:

Many of you are questioning how Jessica knows so much about Bella.  Bella and Jessica are both from Forks.  Jessica is jealous of Bella, because Bella beat her out for valedictorian.  Jessica was always the smartest of her class, until Bella came along.  Several years younger and doesn’t even have to try in order to surpass her academically.  Bella got all the best scholarships and awards, all things Jessica wanted.  When the stuff happened at Harvard, of course Jessica heard about it, and being from Forks she certainly knows Jacob.  A lot of you want retribution in blood or however it can be gotten.  Rest assured that what comes around goes around, but as long as Bella is close enough for them to hurt, Edward will keep his cards close to his chest. 

Things are progressing well, and where this is a slow burn thing will heat quicker now that she lives there.  It’s still a slow burn, but no longer dragging feet pace.  For the record, Edward does want her to go to supper and meet his family, but he is tense about it because his family is very in your face caring and loving and Bella is not used to that type of family interaction.  Edward doesn’t know it yet, but he loves her.  Be patient and you will see this, I assure you.  Next chapter will post on Sunday, see you then. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Yes, my girl performed a special dance for me earlier. She said she would, with our approval, teach something similar to Sulpicia.” Aro gets a dreamy look on his face and grins even wider at me.

“Yes, there have been talks about that dance your girl performed since I arrived earlier. If you are in agreement with your girl doing this, then so am—” Aro gets cut off with the ringing of his cell phone. “Speaking of my pet,” Aro says before he answers, “Sulpicia,” he says answering the call. 

Before he says another word he looks to me as if he is concerned. “Yes, I’m with him right now,” he stops talking and has a look of anger coming across his face. “Keep her as calm as you can. Edward and I will be with you both soon.” I look to him as he talks and close his cell.

“Sulpicia is at Bella’s work. From what I can gather, there is some money and belongings that have gone missing.  Her boss checked out the staff lockers and found a laptop that another staff member claims was hers in Bella's locker.”

I nod at him, but I know my girl and she is no thief. It only takes us a short time to reach Bella’s work.  As I walk in my eyes fall on Lauren and Jessica, standing together.  As I look at Lauren, I see she has the laptop I bought Bella.

I smirk and move over to them. “That's my laptop and I don’t believe I gave you permission to touch it.” Both girls look my way and Lauren glares at me.

“No, this is mine. Look, it has my name on it.” I raise my eyebrow at her as she turns it and shows me the stupid sticker displaying her name.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow...that's all I can say.  Anger, sadness and about 20 different other emotions.  What happened to have Vharlie hate Bella so much.  Renee obviously screwed up somewhere.  The rest of that crew is going down...I hope Edward takes them down one by one.  All of them...Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Charlie, sue, Renee, Jacob, Phil, embry, Paul...all of them and maybe some more I just can't remember.   Bella needs to become some one she likes and wants to be.  I hope the Juliard school becomes a viable option for her...or she starts teaching at the club.  I'm back to just wow...I thought some of my family thanksgivings were awful.  Can't wait for the light at the end of the tunnel...Bella coming out of her shell.



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Jacob and the rest of the Swans are like a bad rash.  Renee is getting in the act too?  Jerks is doing a poor job, considering this isn't his first slip.  I think e and b being together is a good thing.  He is grounded enough and has friends to keep him that way.  Bella working at the club is going to be a different leg of their relationship.  I hope she soon realizes she can be what ever she wants, not what her parents want her to be.  Thanks for the update...loved it.



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is going to be toughest challenge for Edward.  How long till he totally blows his lid?  It's a wonder that Bella is still alive and kicking with a dad that hates her and a mom who doesn't like her.  I love the dynamic both E and B have.  They are each others other half.  I love that they do not have and angst...and seem to totally understand each other.  I am really nervous about what's happening with Jake and his pals.  Why are they all out to get Bella...why!?!  Thanks for the update...loved it, and always want more.



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thank you for the story, and happy holidays to you and yours...whatever you believe, too!  I hate to see this story end.  I love it and thank you again.



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Four

I like the fade to black...most of the time I skip sex scenes anyway...most of the time.  I like the romance, don't stop!  Paris is the biggest target for romance.  I like how Bella is trying to share her expirence with Edward.  Most of the time you can go some where and never actually be there.  He's getting his chance too.  Thank you.  I love this story.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159804
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You know the saying...the heart needs what you don't know it needs!?  There's one out there like that.  Edward had in his head he was already married to his job, but he was not looking at the whole picture...he was dating Bella, without realizing it.  He obviously didn't figure that out during his month hiatus from Bella.  Cant wait to see what happens next to the miserable couple.  Thanks for the update, I love this story.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It's about time!  It seems the worst of the worst has to happen for true feeling to come out.  Being stupid and stubborn is not a good excuse.  I wonder, did Bella know she was pregnant?  Or is this another surprise.  Is she going to think he asked her because he knew???  Can't wait for the next installment.  Thanks.

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

allo

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Glad your back!  Great update...I hope it's not Jake.  I think it'll be Tanya, she's been way too quiet.  Thanks.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bree

Edward never thought he would find happiness with Bella, a medium. If only he could convince her to retire... Esme is a devoted mother who would do everything for her daughter Bree, EVERYTHING. Based on Agatha Christie's tale 'The last seance'. EXB OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54601 Read Count: 8584
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love this story...it's getting good.   I love the interaction of the characters together and separately.  Thanks for the updates.  Always ready to read another update!    



Author's Response:

Thanks to you for taking th time to read and leave a comment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

May

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135077
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 06 May 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I stop everything and read your update! I'll be patient for Emmett's punishment, but it's hard.  I love the way the Cullens have taken Bella in as family...no one is suspicious or mean, thanks for having Rose out of the Cullens.  So happy the babies are both home. Thanks for the update, as always.  

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed
Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow!  That's all I can say...it's finally going to fall hard on Emmett.  Renata needed a visit to jail, as does Emmett...my only worry is the people they meet in there, they could be swayed to hurt Bella.  On the other hand, it could go the other way and they get their just desserts!  I leave it in your trusty hand of magic.  Finally Rose is seeing Emmett for his true colors...yuck!  Once a cheater, always a cheater.  Thanks for the update.