Reviews by Alabastdelf
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I will miss your story but I can`t wait to read what you`ll write next.Thank you for your talent.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

I hope for my sake that Bella and Edward will be together;yes, I know I sound stereotypically romantic about those two, but you`ve succeeded in constructing a very interesting story.I`m going to watch out for every new chapter you are writing and posting.



Author's Response:

I'm a very romantic person myself, so yes, they are definitely going to end up together :0)

I want to apologize to my readers for the wait. I'm not responsible for it but I don't want to blame my beta if she takes 2-3 weeks to edit my chapters. She's just a very busy working girl.

 

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

AMAZING!Thank you.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254878
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Their reunion is so sweet.Amazing chapter.Don`t stop from your path.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

I`m not a big fan of big words or long speeches.So,first, you are not alone,second, you are incredibly generous with a piece of fictional writing that in my opinion is amazing, and third,you have your path in life,so even if I sound cheesy, keep walking.



Author's Response:

Thank you...louise

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Reading this chapter I was fighting the urge to smack Edward if he  was in my presence.But,I understand your point.And you are the writer.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389603
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Awesome chapter.Hope to see a HEA Edward and Bella in your story.Meanwhile I`m following every chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

I didn`t expect that, but I can only hope Edward and Bella will find a way to be together.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review sweets!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

I must confess that I can`t wait to read what you write next.Your collaboration seems to be the proof that talent is a precious gift that sometimes can be shared.Keep going.Hope to see Bella and Edward together.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad you are enjoying the story =)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138710
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I am still reading and even though I didn`t like it when Bella stood in Jacob embrace I respect your vision.I think your story is amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I don`t think that Edward is confusing or milktoast.What he is now is a father of twins.I think it is absolutely natural to change a little his way of thinking about fis relationship with Bella, his lover, the mother of his children, his submissive, and so on.I would aspect a change in the dinamic of their life.About Claire,I believe that she is too young for begining a BDSM life,but I also believe that it is your story and I apreciate truly the way you write,you are the author.

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89170
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts

That was intense to say the least,but extremely well written.And I can only have hope and trust your skillfulness.So I`ll wait patiently.Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Pants

I like what you are doing with the characters, I hope that Edward and Bella will find a way to be together forever just like they want.

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79458
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

They should get married right away,they are meant to be together.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

A very interesting story and very original I think.You`ve succeeded in portraying the character of Edward in a very unique way, very endearing.Thank you for a very captivating reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 43189
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Passionate Dance

It was.Very.I wonder what will happen next?Can`t wait to read.

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I understand,I think, why you chose to write their struggles in this chapter the way you did.But I must confess that I wish they will overcome everything that is in their path and finally be happy together.

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

She must decide if she loves him still.I know how that could be interpreted but, if you love somebody you must learn to forgive.No one is perfect.It might be a cliche but forgiving is quite liberating.I think this story is amazing.It is very near to real life.Congratulations for your talent.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo Here´s a little sneak peek at the next chapter:

 

“Hey there, buddy,” I cooed softly while I swayed Parker back-and-forth in my arms.  “Daddy sure did miss you.  Did you miss me too, P?”  I asked, sitting down in the glider that was in the corner of his hospital room.

 

I´d stripped, and took a quick shower in the on-call room, donning a pair of dark blue scrubs and a yellow disposable hospital gown before I entered Parker´s room.  You could never be too careful, and I didn´t want to expose my little guy to any unnecessary germs that could possibly prolong his stay. 

 

I knew that Bella was anxious to our little guy home, but for me, Parker´s release would be bittersweet.  Parker going home meant that I wouldn´t be able to see him everyday.  I hadn´t realized that I was crying until a tear splashed against his little blue cap-covered head separating into what seemed like a thousand individual molecules.

 

Feeling the need to explain to my son why I wouldn´t continue to see him every day, I slipped my finger in his tiny hand, relishing the way his little fingers wrapped around my large one, and started to speak.  “Well, P,” I paused, fighting with the lump that was clogging my throat.  “You´re getting so big, daddy´s so proud of you, sweet boy, proud that after everything he did to your mommy that you´re healthy, growing big and strong, and soon you´ll get to go home.”  I bit the inside of my cheek, trying in vain to hold back my sob.  Unsuccessful in attempt, “I´m so sorry, son” fell from my lips in a broken cry.  “It´s all my fault that you´re in here; I will never be able make it up to you, but by God, I plan to die trying.”

 

Parker´s eyes fluttered open, staring up at me as if he was offering me a tiny piece of absolution.  Though some may not agree, and argue that it was gas, I´ll swear to my dying day that he looked up at me and smiled.  Beaming up at me with rose-colored cheeks, and a twinkle in his eye, in me, my son saw no wrong. 

 

I was his hero! 

 

Just the mere thought of that made my heart pump wildly in my chest.  Not that it was even remotely possible, but in that moment, my love for this tiny innocent creature in my arms seemed to quadruple in its intensity.  Clutching his delicate little body to mine, I held him as tight to me as could without causing him harm.

 

All too soon, my phone was vibrating.  Without even looking at the screen, I knew that our time was up for today.  Once Bella returned, she and Mac would be here for the rest of the night.  Bella was such a good mother, making time for both of our children. 

 

Even though it was against hospital policy, she insisted that Mac be allowed spend the night in her brother´s room; having me for a father and  Carlisle Cullen as your grandfather came with many perks that we had no problem using.

 

Parker´s suite was state of the art, and if not for the obvious knowledge that this was a hospital, you would think that you were staying in a suite at the Fairmont Olympic Hotel.

 

Being a children´s hospital, we had several rooms that were setup for long-term care, making families feel like they were at a home-away-from-home when their child was hospitalized long-term for chronic illnesses. 

 

Bella and Mac were able to sleep in a comfortable queen-sized bed and the room even had a small kitchenette complete with a microwave and nice-sized refrigerator.  That way, Bella had plenty of liquids at her disposal to keep her hydrated for breastfeeding, and Mac could have juice and snacks to tide her over during the day.

 

Like I said, it was the perfect set-up!

 

Reluctantly, I stood to my feet, trying not to jostle the sleeping infant in my arms.  Taking care with his wires and IV, I placed a lingering kiss atop Parker´s head and gently laid back in his bassinette. 

 

The door opened, and I didn´t even have to turn around to know who it was.  I knew that when I didn’t immediately respond to my mother´s text, she would send my father looking for me.  A strong hand gripped my shoulder, giving it a light squeeze.  “I´m sorry son, but it´s time,” he whispered solemnly. 

 

Even though he didn´t agree with my actions, he was still my father. 

 

And when I hurt, simply put, he hurt too!

 

Leaning down one last time, I brushed my lips against his cheek.  “I love you son, be a good boy for mommy and sissy tonight.  I´ll see you soon,” I promised, praying that it was one I could keep.  “I hope...”  Unable to stomach the look of pity that was sure to be in my father´s eyes, I turned and walked out of the room without so much as sparing him a backward glance.

 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

I can only hope that Edward and Bella and Mac will found true happiness, because they need it.Your story is captivating.



Author's Response:

it´s going to be a bumpy ride, but we will eventually get out HEA!  Thanks for reading and reiviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Natural, just like in real life.That`s what I felt when I read this chapter.So, congratulations and thank you.



Author's Response:

That's how I try to write all my stories...real. I'm not a huge romantic, with rainbows and puppies spraying out of my ears, just real. In real life, shit happens, people misunderstand, and there is heartfail everywhere you look. Though, I don't see ever writing anything that doesn't have an HEA!  lol  Thanks so much...loved your words!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Simply beautiful, with a B.



Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Very happy you liked :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136 Content

I like the way you wrote about the twins being heard for the first time by Edward.So sweet.I can`t wait to read about Masen`s reaction.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bella

I think they should talk more and even if I see and understand Bella`s point of view,Edward isn`t human, therefore his emotions are intensified more than a human.I think their love is stronger than anything and will overcome everything.



Author's Response:

Good point, well made.  I think you are exactly right.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

Very well written,extremely romantic in my opinion and, what is the most important,forever true love being stunningly portraited.I think your effort will be most appreciated.Thank you very much.



Author's Response:

WOW!  I appreciate the kind words VERY MUCH!  THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110 Plans

I think you should add chapters.It feels more natural this way, for me anyway.



Author's Response:

You may ve right.  I just don't want to scare someone off cause there are so many chapters!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90 Tracks

Yes,very much so,but the suspense is not good for my poor heart.



Author's Response:

Well, I hope you take your meds regularly . . . I do!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129 Leaving

I would like to see Tanya being punished soo thoroughly that she would not be able to revenge herself and harm Bella or Masen.And I hope that Masen is strong enough to defend himself if someone or something were to harm or threaten him to do so.



Author's Response:

Ha!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Verona

Yes,it did surprised me a little,and yes I enjoy the story very much.I hope you continue to write it.It`s an incredible story.

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I truly hope that Edward and Bella will be together again.They deserve one another in blissful happiness.I think.Thank you for your story.



Author's Response:

Don't worry, darlin. Edward and Bella will find their way to each other again. It'll just take a little time. Their story is definitely just beginning. So I hope you continue to like the paths they take to get back to each other. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...let's sneak a peek at Bella's life:

"Bella." Lizzy's voice and touch startled me.

I lifted my head to see her kneeling in front of me. She handed me the handkerchief I always kept in my bag. Edward's handkerchief. It added further guilt to rest upon my heart.

"Are you okay?" she whispered.

I shook my head. "I can't stop thinking about him."

"Me either." She hugged me. "It's hard enough for me to handle. I can't imagine what you must be going through. You two cared about each other so much."

I pulled away. "What?"

"The two of you really had something good, but me and Johnny will make sure to get you through this."

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This story is so intense and so interesting.I can`t wait to read what will happen next.Thank you.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: An Eternity to Love

Interesting Bella,I hope she realizes that Edward loves her.I hope she will make amends for what she did to Edward,past and present.You have talent and it shows in this story.Keep writing.

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I think this chapter was full of tension.The angst I felt reading was due to your writing.So congrats for your work.

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74921
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This chapter was extremely real, amazing writing.

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)

She  definitely should,she loves him,he loves her.They should be together.

Hopefully.



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Learning

What an improvement in the King`s behaviour.Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 427886
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 **Plans**

He loves her so much thay he will know to comfort her and be by her side after he tolds her.I`m confident in your talent to put that love he feels for her in words.And I think she loves him so much so that she will find solace in his arms.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532880
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

Sonny is just like his father, it is kinda funny, but if it should be real life I think in our days Sonny would be in trouble.I really love the way Edward loves Bella in your story.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

I wonder how much time Edward will tolerate Aro`s "friendship" with Bella.Or is it just my imagination?Either way, great chapter.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity

It was incredible, at least this is how I see it.I think you have true talent and you should be proud of yourself.Thank you.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest

I don`t think you could lose your readers.I`m an Edward and Bella fan and I`m hoping you will write for them an HEA and no cheating, but I really enjoy everything you write in this story, because this is an incredible story.Thank you for it.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Bitter Fruit Part Two

I understand why you have to write like you do, because it is your story.I must say that I worry about Edward and Bella, but as long as I know that in the future there will be a HEA and that there will be no cheating I don`t see myself not reading your story.I think the plot is inspired by life, or I see it like that.I realy don`t know, and it`s better like that.Follow your gut and your heart.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit

First of all allow me to thank you for your writing.Because I enjoy reading stories with a subject like yours.Second,I believe that laughing is good too, it makes the entire body feel more,be relaxed and, most important, when I laugh I see that life in general can be beautiful.Third, I should encourage you to always follow your heart, but I know that you will do that anyway.What I wish for you is to take a deep breath of fresh air.Sometimes it`s enough.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone

Keep going we`ll follow.Very intriguing how you managed to postpone a talk about "mommy and daddy time alone".Nice.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn

Incredible.It`a all I can say for now.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two

Maybe you can begin the chapter with EPOV and continue with the business.Even though I`m curious about Aro`s POV when he talked with Bella.It`s just a suggestion.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Briliant, I liked this chapter very much.It`s an amazing world you are imagining with your writing.Thank you.

The Parachutist by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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It is 1943 and WW II is devastating Europe. Edward Masen is a 23 years old American parachutist sent by the OSS on a secret mission, meant to help the partisans fighting the Nazis in Northern Italy. There he meets a girl concealing a terrible secret. They fall passionately in love and plan to marry as soon as Italy is liberated. However, while going back to the Allied lines and trying to reach Anzio, where the Anglo American forces are struggling to break through Germans’ opposition, Edward finds his nemesis, in the form of two Volturi warriors.

 

Edward becomes a newborn vampire, fierce, desperate and bloodthirsty. Will he succumb forever to his inner monster or will he be able to recover at least some of his lost humanity? Will he see his love again and resist the urge to kill her?

 

The Parachutist got second place in the Shimmer Awards 2011 as Outstanding Story

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65856 Read Count: 9944
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2011 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Carlisle

Very happy.Amazing portraying of Edward and his point of view regarding Bella and their relationship.As for a sequel,why shouldn`t be one?



Author's Response:

The sequel is coming, as soon as The Parachutist ends. (a few chapters still left, and a few turns!) I am so glad you liked  this chapter. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Reality check

I don`t want to sound childish but in the end Edward and Bella in the books we know are together,so, I hope very much your Edward and Bella will be together.They more than deserve it.Very good chapter,Edward`s thoughts were amazingly put into writing.



Author's Response:

I pester authors demanding an HEA. Real life gives shit enough. So, don't be overly worried. And thank you very much for your review!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Vampire Gigolo

Incredible chapter if I may say so.Heartbreaking and simply glorious in it`s normality.Amazing writing.



Author's Response:

What a wonderful thing to find when waking up! Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Bella's blood

I`m very glad Bella returned.It was an interesting reason you chose for her to leave after what she witnessed.You wrote Edward`s suffering brilliantly in my opinion.A great chapter.



Author's Response:

In fact the ethical issues connected with Bella choice had to be addressed. Thank you very much, I am glad that you liked the chapter.

Cougar Town by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 451]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Never underestimate the appeal of a seventeen year old boy. Bella Swan is Emmett's mom and Edward's teacher. What happens when she crosses the line with her son's best friend? E&B, AH, OOC.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74678 Read Count: 72986
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2011 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 The Letter

Interesting chapter, it seemed to me like real life, especially in these days when the differences between ages are blurry, mainly because of good genes or successful surgery.I respect very much your opinion about your work and I think that in here there is something for everyone.Somewhere it was said"keep walking", so you should do just that.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Statuses

Sweet, I hope they end up together, call me a hopeless romantic but they deserve it.Great chapter.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Half Truths

He must pull through,he must.You made him to be a fighter, at least he seems like that.And I think Bella will see that what she had with Edward is unique and wonderful.And she needs that in her life.My humble opinion.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 Options

I trust that Bella and Edward will find their way as one.So much angst in this chapter.But a great chapter.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Adult Time

Nice, to say the least.I think I can safely presume that it is time to see Edward naked.It was enough teasing from your part.I like how you`ve choose to let the story progress.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out

I think that  the society in which we are living now is the most hypocritical af all times.I`m going to hope for the HEA you mentioned,because love should overcome all difficulties, if only here.Great chapter.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Friday

I think you have every reason to be proud of yourself.This chapter was more exciting than I expected.I wonder and can`t wait to see what you`ll write next.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting

It must go well in my opinion.I`m not a mind reader but I would like to think that the age difference in our times is not an issue, so I hope they will be together in the end and the week they`ll spend will help their relationship.About Scumbanner,I think he must be somehow punished,he must learn his lesson.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul

A very fulfilling chapter,from the emotional point of view.As it should be, in my opinion.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 False Explanations

She must answer because she loves him.And they will be together one way or the other.Emmett is not innocent so, he shouldn`t blame Edward or his mom.Maybe Charlie should hear about everything;I think he loves his daughter too much to not understand and accept eventually.And Carlisle and Esme...well...they should care enough for Edward to accept who he loves.This story is very captivating.

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31181
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

I think Edward shouldn`t stop to win Bella back and I think what you are writing is simply to good.Thank you.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

It was an amazing end to an amazing story.Thank you for writing it.

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire

I wish Bella and Edward will stop pretending and start living their love.Great chapter.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Nice and Not

FINALLY!I hope they will be happy from now on.Great chapter.:)

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Breaking Point

I don`t like Riley Biers.Not now, not ever.But, it`s your story.Bella,hopefully will find what she needs to be happy.



Author's Response:

Well, I had my reasons for choosing Riley. It sure as hell wasn't going to be JB. Eew.

And I hope, despite your dislike, that you bear with me. It will be worth it, I promise.

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!! 
Click to visit & vote!

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**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery!  Click to visit!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88750
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That was very intense,I hope Edward will be safe.And Bella will escape the nightmare she`s living.I like the way you know how to make the reader feel the suspense.

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Contact

Can I slap him?Can I, Can I?Huh?Because I really, really want to.:)Amazing writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks :0)

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Infernal rise

I don`t know what other of your readers will think, but after reading this chapter I had the sudden urge to see Bella bring Edward to his knees by seducing other man in front of him,or rather in his face.Maybe because I can`t easily accept  an inferior Bella, or a Bella in an inferior position?Anyway, great story. Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, right now it looks like Bella has the lower hand, but appearances can be deceiving...

Thanks for reading and reviewing :0)

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Murderous thoughts

I think Edward should have a taste of his own medicine.In my opinion he deserves some sort of punishment.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

I would like to read a combination of no 2 and 3, and also see Edward groveling.Or,maybe see Bella with another man,because until now this Edward is one giant asshole.But, it`s your story, you decide.



Author's Response:

Well actually it's not my story as I'm just the translator...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112984
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Slipping

I would like to see Edward grovel in order to be forgiven for the bet.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :) 

I would also like to see him grovel. I think more than groveling will be in order, but ..... well, you'll see. ;)

Thanks for reading! 

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Maybe that he`s not going to abuse Charlie`s trust in him.Or maybe Edward thinks he`s not worthy of Bella.Even if, I think he is head over heels with her.Great chapter.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

It`s too short!:(.What was in the drawer?



Author's Response:

A prophylactic (condom) was in the drawer.

The next chapter will be much longer.  Promise :o)

xoxox

Summary:

Banner for Desktop Desires

 

Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think you started very well.You should continue.Bella seems to be a feisty girl and Edward, well, just say that he makes an impression,a big one.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Three days before Thanksgiving newly engaged Bella gets some surprises from her fiance Edward. What is his secret and will their relationship make it? And what happens on Thanksgiving day with his ganja loving brother meets her chief of Police Dad?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12410 Read Count: 14263
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Funny your Bella,hihihi, very funny.I hope she and Edward will find their way.I like how you chose to picture them.Keep going.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

All I can say is:HIHIHIHIHIHIHI!Very funny, I can`t stop laughing.It`s so sweet the Edward in your story, and Bella is a real sweetheart.I wonder what wull happen next.

Summary:

This is a sort of follow up/sequel to Confessions of an Overworked, Underpaid Peen. This will be little one shots of snippets of his life, little happenings, and such. EPPov AH, OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11811 Read Count: 9265
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Dancing Peen

It was a funny chapter, very enjoyable.And not just this chapter.All your work is.Keep writing.

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Ghosts or Goats

What an incredible chapter!Amazing.I was laughing so much reading some of the adventures.You have talent,no doubt about it.I can`t wait to read what will happen next.



Author's Response:

Hi there, Alabastdelf

I'm glad you loved the chapter and thanks for the compliment - I want to be a professional writer.

I'm writing chapter 22, so stay tuned sometime this weekend.

There will be more adventures ahead, but perhaps some that aren't so welcome!

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Intereseting story, I almost wish Jimmy would be suffering some tipe of injury or something like that for what he did.Very good begining.Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Hi Alabastdelf, Jimmy will get his comeuppance. What goes around comes around. Thanks for reviewing. Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

So much tension!Amazing writing, as usual!Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Hi Alabastdelf

Thanks for your review to chapter 27. I'm glad you like my writing.

Look out for chapter 29 this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - One down, two to go

This chapter was particularly full of tension,and even if I found what happend extremely cruel I must admit that you handled everything amazingly.Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Hi Alabastdelf

Thanks for your review to chapter 28.

I surprised even myself with the scene that I wrote, but I thank you for saying I handled it well.

Regards, Jkazzie

Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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BANNER BY READERGOOF!  THANK YOU, LOVE!

“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime…mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed. –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: To Read, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125792 Read Count: 33644
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 May 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Although I am a Bella-Edward fan,I must admit that your story is captivating.I can`t wait to read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263184
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches

I think Edward is definitely going in the right direction;perhaps Bella will mature with his help and realize that she needs to look out for herself not just for Leah and her brother.



Author's Response:

Well we knew that you all would have some sharp feelings about the behavior of Alice, Rose, and Siobhan.  We were excited to see that a few of you mentioned the seemingly difference in Esme and her attitude.   Have faith in Jasper and Emmett, they will be having words with their wives.  As for Siobhan, I think she has worn out her welcome around the table completely.  So what did you all think of Charlotte?  She will be important in the coming story.  A lot of you are guessing that the witch in the next chapter will be Sue Swan, but I assure you that it is not her.  There is a lot of super exciting chapters coming soon.  We want to tell you all just how much you reading and reviewing our story means to us.  This is the first story for either of us, that is getting this kind of attention.  It is completely amazing to us that we are averaging over 100 reviews per chapter.  We want to be very clear in saying that each and every review you have left for us mean so very much to us.  Thank you for taking time to not only read our story, but to also leave us your thoughts.   Thanks, Nikky (&Kasi)

Teaser for Chapter 14: Subject to changes, during Beta Process.

She looks perplexed. “Edward, aren’t you expected to be at the college; I mean, I thought you have classes today?”

I chuckle.  “Yes I do, but I got this morning off.  I am using some of my vacation time.  I would like to take you to see Charlotte today.  She is the one that sells the girl stuff; remember I told you I would take you to see her?  She was sitting on my right at the ball.”  Bella nods her head at my explanation, but I see she is biting her lip again.  I know she is worried, so I do my best to reassure her.  “I will be there with you. I am not going to leave you, I promise.”  Bella nods again as we begin walking to the bus stop.  We take the bus and arrive at Charlotte’s store a little after half past nine.  Charlotte had texted me earlier and asked that we enter through the back entrance.  She was going to leave it open for us, as she had the front locked up so that no unexpected customers arrived.  I hold onto Bella’s hand as we walk thought the door. 

Charlotte sees us as soon as we enter; she smiles and makes her way toward us.  “Edward, Isabella; come on in.  I already have a bunch of stuff laid out for you.  I have done this for a few years, so I am pretty good at guessing sizes.”  I rub Bella’s hand and smile at Charlotte’s obvious excitement.  “Isabella, I am so sorry, sometimes my mouth runs away with me.  It’s very nice to meet you.  My name is Charlotte, but you can call me Chas; all my friends do.”  Charlotte gives Bella a big smile, but keeps her distance from Bella for now.

“It is nice to meet you. I am Isabella, but you can call me Bella.”  I squeeze Bella’s hand, trying hard not to jump for joy.  This is the first time that she has openly asked someone, apart from me, to call her Bella. 

Charlotte smiles at her.  “Well, I was thinking that this stuff would be perfect for you.”  I look at the collection of bras and panties that Charlotte has picked out.  They are mostly plain white ones.  There are some with lace, but none them are overly sexy like the stuff that was in Alice’s bag.  I am both relieved and somewhat disappointed about that.  “Come with me, Bella, so I can take your measurements to ensure that we will have the correct size.” 

Bella looks at me and I nod my head at her.  “Bella…” I clasp her face between my hands.  “Baby, I’ll be right here. I will not leave you.” Bella whispers a low thank you, and strokes my hand before giving it a squeeze at the end.  I watch as she walks away with Charlotte.  

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Making Amends

A great improvement on Edward`s behalf.I am impressed with your style of writing and the thought process that is clearly behind your work.Especially in the segment where Edward speaks his problems to Jasper.Brilliant.I wonder if you`ve read some psychology books.



Author's Response:

Nikky, nor I have read a lot of psychology books, but I personally have a daughter who has adhd, ODD, depression and anxeity disorder.  She is only 12 and she has already be pre-diagnosed as Bi-Polar since age 7.  I for certain have my hands full with her.  Nikky is amazing with her thought process and I give her a BUNCH of credit for it.  We do a lot of research and we have a wonderful team of girls helping us keep our I's dotted and out T's crossed.  Thanks for the compliments on our writing skills.  Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  This story is not always easy to write, just as parts are not easy to read.  Edward does not know yet of course, but it is very true Isabella cannot read nor write.  She has never attended school.  Bella was never allowed to be a child, or experience a normal childhood, in any way, shape, or form.  Bella has nothing more than a glorified slave all of her life since her birth mother passed away.  We don’t want to give away more of her story than that, but feel free to keep asking your questions and we will continue to answer what we can.  Edward does have a long road yet to travel, and part of that is to get him-self healed enough so that he can love someone and trust someone.  Edward’s view is very tainted and with great reason, there is much more to learn about him.  He will continue to improve, but he will have his moments.  Keep in mind as of right now, Isabella has not lied to him, but she has withheld very important information.  She doesn’t correct him on her age, because she fears his reaction. 
Kasi (&Nikky)

Here is the teaser for chapter 7…Subject to change during BETA process as always.

I have written out everything, when I look at my watch seeing that it’s ten after ten.  I know that being on time is something she is normally good at.  I rub my face, fuck maybe she changed her mind about the job, or she just lied to me just like every other fucking woman I’ve ever known.

Or maybe you scared her, and she said yes to the job thinking that you wouldn’t let her leave the room unless she agreed.

Knock. Knock.

Thank god, she is here finally.  “Come in Isabella,” I say to the closed door.  The door opens, but it’s Taylor who is standing there. 

I frown at him.  “Hello, I see you beat me here,” he says smiling at me.  I wave at him to come in, but I am still frowning.  “I take it I am not who you’re waiting for?”

I shake my head.  “I was expecting someone, but I don’t think she is coming.”  I sigh, and throw my pen on the desk.

“Small pale girl, brown hair, looks a little lost?” I look at him, and nod my head.  “I think she is standing outside,” he says motioning his thumb toward the door.  I move toward the door, and Taylor stops me.  “Here, take this; it’s really coming down out there.”  He offers me his umbrella and chuckles as I take it and head out of the office.

I head to the front, and see Isabella standing outside in front of the window in the rain.  I open the door.  “Isabella,” I call to her standing in the door way, she turns and looks at me. I wave at her to come in.  “How long have you been standing outside, and why didn’t you come in the restaurant when you got here?”

She walks up to me, clearly worrying I am mad by the look on her face.  “I thought that…you said to meet you outside.  Didn’t you, never mind, I am so sorry…sorry.”

Looking at her, I see that she’s drenched to the skin.  The jacket she is wearing is paper thin, and clearly very old and well used.  I know that she been outside a long time.  I close my eyes, pinching the bridge of my nose.  “I am sorry I meant for you to come in, if I was not out here.”  She walks through the door; I know that she needs to get out of her wet clothes.

 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Walls We Build

He really must make amends, very big amends.And for making something, he should find Bella a new job, for starters.



Author's Response:

Edward has a lot of sucking up to do!  Thank you for reading and reviewing our story.  Nikky and I are very proud of this story and it takes a lot to write things sometimes that even upset us.  We really needed to show just how darkly tainted Edward is, and unfortunately right now many of you hate him.  I know it will take a lot for you to relinquish those hatred feelings, but we hope that we are great enough writers and story tellers to achieve making you like him again.  We know it is always easier to burn a bridge than it is to rebuild it, but we promise to put forth the effort in doing so.  We want to thank you in advance for your votes, support, rec’s, and for just being on this twisted journey with us.  This story will be somewhere around 30 chapters when all is done and said.  We hope that you continue to read and review and share with us your thoughts.  From the bottom of our hearts, and to the moon and beyond... Thank you.

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 6 Teaser… All Subject to change during the beta process…
The shitting feeling is still there, and I have no idea what the fuck I can do to get rid of it.  I head over to Jasper’s office hoping to see him.

“Jasper says that you can go in now.” I look at the woman speaking, and I give her a curt nod as I head into his office. “Edward,” I look at him and he stops talking, and tilts his head to the side.  “Okay, what is going on, what happened?” He asks as he waves at me to sit.  I sit down on the seat across from him and rub my face.  I sigh unsure where to start, so I jump up and start to pace the floor.

“I screwed up, and I mean I really screwed up this time.  Jazz, I fucking hurt her, and I mean really fucking hurt her.  I don’t know how to fix it.  How I can get her to forgive me for what I have done?  I mean, fuck I’ll be lucky if she even speaks to me again.  Well really I know she will because she, fuck, I don’t want to say she is weak, but if I talk to her she will reply. How do I make right Jazz, without putting myself out there?  I don’t want to get hurt again, I could with her and I can’t go through that again.  Fuck, but I don’t think she do that, to anyone really.  She’s not made that way, but I have really gone and hurt her bad.  I never gave her a chance, I was still. . . no, I am to fucking scared.  In this case I think I made a new friend, but the dream. . . and I thought she stabbed me in the back like all the others.  I see her face in my dreams, the last two nights have been worse than all the rest.  I can see how much I hurt her, and the bad thing is she did nothing to warrant my anger.  All she did was fucking help me, time after time.  So many times, and she has been so hurt before and I know it’s been bad.  I can see it clearly in her eyes, the pain and the fear.  What if I push it what if she can never let anyone in ever again because what I did.”  I am still pacing and pulling my hair, I am so upset.  “Fuck Jazz I was a real fucking prick, and complete asshole to her.  Tell me what I can do?  Please I need to fix this, tell me how I can fix it please?”  I beg him as I feel my breathing speed up.  Jasper who was still sitting in his chair looks at me and suddenly comes out of his trance, as I feel the cold sweats start.  “Please Jazz you need to tell me how to fix this.”

 

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

This chapter was so full of tension I couldn`t breathe.I hope Edward and Bella will find a way to be together forever.I really admire your writing.Keep writing.Thank you.



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Career Move

She`s a bit too much, in my opinion.Maybe an excess of hormones?I don`t know why but maybe she needs Alice to put a stop to her irritation.All in all it`s a very interesting twist from the classic Edward and Bella characters.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 How I Got Here

Great begining, can`t wait to see the rest.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

Very interesting.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home

Funny chapter, especially the last part.And I think the Edward in this story will be interesting.

Summary:

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Awesome Banner made by: vbfb1!  Make sure to check out her great stories and blog to reqyest a banner!

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Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62090
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Krazy chapter, if I could say so myself.But I must confess I was wondering after reading it, how should James suffer, for a longer or a shorter period?

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Frightening prospect even to imagine that J would be near Bella.A chapter well written, seems to be very real.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I hope Tanya and James will pe stopped from harming Edward or Bella.And in my opinion they should be punished, especially Tanya,maybe through divine intervention, for what she did?I like the way you write, it`s very real.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

For a tiny second I was holding my breath,I hoped you were mentioning Tanya`s death.And I was very happy to see Bella lives.An incredible roller coaster of emotions.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coffee, Tea or Me?

This seems to be a very funny story.You`ve got a great beginning.Keep writing.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: One Down

If I was in Bella`s place and I was interrupted in such a moment I would have kicked Rose`s arse to the Moon and back.Great story.Keep writing, I`m curious what will happen to them.

Summary:

Meet Edward Masen, one member of America's 'Greatest Generation'. "...just as fire tempers iron into fine steel so does adversity temper one's character into firmness, tolerance and determination…."



Thank you to Ashes AtMidnight for the lovely banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17666 Read Count: 2794
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2012 Updated: 29 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

A simple and true story,liket the real life stories,but so powerful due to the emotions that the words bring out to the reader.In my opinion it is an amazing and emotional story that honors the memory of your dear father.Thank you for posting it.



Author's Response: Thanks you so much! My Mom liked the story....Dad probably would have thought me silly and sentimental...but between you and me, I think he would have liked it as well. ;)

Summary:

E&B piano-NY

This is The Parachutist’ sequel.

It is the summer of 1945 and the war in Europe has ended. Despite his transformation in a vampire, Edward has found his love again, has prevailed over his bloodlust and they have married. Now he is going back to America with his human bride, where they’ll join Carlisle’s family. How will be their life with the Cullens, when will it be the right moment for Bella’s transformation? Will the Volturi discover them, will they face new dangers?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50387 Read Count: 5177
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2012 Updated: 11 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 26 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Long time no see

I think Bella will be unharmed by Eleazar because her husband is there, by her side.This story is amazing, just like the original.Continue please, your writing is great.



Author's Response:

More than everything Edward fears the Volturi, if they learn he has a human wife, and doesn't know if he can trust Eleazar, the vampire who told his companions to change him ... I hope that what follows will intrigue you. Thank you very much for your review.

The Western by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's a hit-man with one rule; he doesn't do women.  When he learns his next target is Bella, he makes a decision that changes his life - and hers.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84930 Read Count: 22876
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

It was a great chapter,just like all the ones in this story.I hope Edward and Bella will be free to love each other in the rest of the story.The tension is building though.Hopefully all will end well for them.

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123073
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Finally, they are together again.It was so much tension these last chapters.I`m glad they found each other again,as it should be.Congratulations!You are certainly very efficient in keeping the levels of atention very high with your gifted writing.Keep writing!



Author's Response: more to come today! stay tuned. Thanks very much!