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3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222305
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up

Hoping we get Alice in on this triangle soon so they can be with the appropriate partners.  

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Date: 24 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Well, that went better than expected!  

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Date: 08 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Date Nights

They need to be careful or they are going to get outed.  

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Date: 26 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2

Bear spray?  Too funny!

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Date: 29 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3

I’m so glad his parents were so accepting!

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Date: 31 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 -Occasions

Sure hope they listen to Rose.

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Date: 31 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2

Glad he realizes he loves Bella more.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

I like that Edward doesn't really want Jasper to be with Bella without him. 

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Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

I like that Edward doesn't really want Jasper to be with Bella without him. 

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - She's Gone

Glad they are going after her!  

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Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2

Awww, he bought her a phone!  

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Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3

Love how BeLla jumped right in for Jasper.  Do we get to meet Alice in this story?

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Date: 14 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Take Me Out to the Ball Game

I like the shorter chapters

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Date: 18 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Take Me Out...Pt. 2

I was a little confused by this chapter.  I thought Bella was going to be Edward’s girlfriend and Jasper’s agent but she was introduced as Jasper’s girlfriend.  

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Welcome Home

Love that they plan to,beat up Bella’s former BF!

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

I never read slash,but I really like your stories so I'm going to give this a try!

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Date: 01 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

I'm liking this more every chapter.  

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Date: 31 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2

Glad he realizes he loves Bella more.

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Date: 08 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

The plot thickens!

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Date: 28 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Road Trip! Pt. 2

Sounds like it’s going to be an interesting Thanksgiving dinner.

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Date: 03 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions

Hmmm, wonder who is after them?  I m wondering if it’s not Alister

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In

Well, that was unexpected especially after Esme and Carlisle were so supportive!  

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Date: 07 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2

Well, glad he got his head out of his ass so Bella could hand it back to him!  

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Date: 11 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Date Nights Pt. 2

Hmmm, will be interesting to see Alice’s reaction!

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Date: 18 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2

I’m interested to see how they are go8ng to work the baby thing in.  

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Date: 12 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3

Well,that was an interesting twist!

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Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Spring Fling

Loved the disclaimer at the end!

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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - The Keys to Happiness

Edward really can be a dumb ass!  Glad Alice found someone she could love!  I was, of course hoping it was Jasper!

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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2

Poor Edwar!  He really didn’t want to know that!

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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3

Loved their surprise for her!

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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours

Jacob is back????  Ewwwww!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2

Could she be pregnant?

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3

What has Edward done now?

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Fallout

Now why would u have Edward behave like this?

Summary:

Sometimes in life things happen that are beyond our control. Two couples, separated by different experiences, struggle to be happy while alone. Can the help of family and friends heal broken hearts? M for lemons. AH, B/E and J/A.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6428 Read Count: 23314
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Aug 2012
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Looking forward to reading this 

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806407
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Charm

Liked re-reading this to remind me how Maggie and Sonny got together. 

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Date: 28 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Reality

Love reading about the kids.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Baby Blues

Poor Sonny!  

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Date: 28 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Santino

Loved the first time and am enjoying it even more this time around!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Talk is Cheap

That was somewhat confusing.  

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Date: 06 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Change of Pace Part Two

I love these characters!  

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Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Edward

I love how skip is with his children!

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Date: 31 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Change of Pace

I feel bad for poor Maggie, but she’s better off without Damion

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Kylie

I’m so glad she got Back together with Gio.   

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Date: 05 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 4: The Skip

Such a great story!

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Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Damion Part One

That was certainly o tense!

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Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

My all time favorite Mob story!  

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Date: 17 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Damion Part Two

Poor Damion!

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Date: 19 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Baby Girl

It’s so hard for little girls when Daddy is mad at them

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Breaking the Habit

I’d forgotten so much of this. It’s great to re-read it.

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 23: My Girl

I love Sonny and Maggie together.  

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 24: A Rock

Wow, lots of drama in this chapter!  Way to cover sexual abuse and the lasting effects it has on the victims.

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 25: A Hard Place

I just love these characters!

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Titanium

I’m glad they plan on having another ceremony!

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Date: 10 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Shaky and Jack

I love Maggie with Sonny!

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Date: 10 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Gotcha

I love reading about Bella and Skip’s kids!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

These characters are so real. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Lies

I hate Damion’s behavior!

Glass by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three women develop a close bond despite having never met face to face. When tragedy strikes one of them, they band together to help her heal. A story about friendship, loss, and love.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29708 Read Count: 33974
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2012 Updated: 23 Apr 2013
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah!  Loved this chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Finally!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great story. Thanks for sharing it with me!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Nice ending. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Way to go Rose. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am so very glad that you continued this wonderful story!  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, great chapter. 

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Date: 10 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Boy, she was on a downward spiral!  

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Date: 10 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love that they came to help her. 

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Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Leave it to Emmett!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting turn of event. 

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Date: 03 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good riddance!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think it's great that Edward reached out to Bella

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Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hope they find her soon!  Maybe she went to fashion week to support Alice. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I sure wish writers would put translations at the end of the foreign phrase instead of the end of the chapter. Many say they feel it ruins the flow, but I feel it ruins the flow if I either don't know what is being said until the end, or wait have to scan down to the end of the chapter to find out what is going on. JMO

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Seems like she is having a great time in NYC. Too bad she can't be transferred there so she could leave all the bad memories behind. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hope she gives him a chance. 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717301
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Great couple of chapters. Love that he's being more honest with Bella. 

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Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another great interaction between characters. 

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Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So the plot thickens. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Like the pace of this. Not too fast, and not too slow. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Poor Bella, but I wonder if she ever would have told him!  

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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Crazy kids indeed. Love this. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

So glad she was there when he came home. 

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Poor Edward is sure getting an education is pregnant women. 

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Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Wow, that was intense. 

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Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Sweet 

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Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I love these two. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

They still can't just talk can they?  

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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Something is telling me that Alice spilled the beans to Jasper. 

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Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Very interesting. Glad u had Edward turn down CJ. 

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Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

So sweet. 

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Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Great chapter. Glad they're all friends again. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I love this story although it is more difficult to read on this site than fan  Fiction.   Thanks for the update. Once again, it was great to see HollettLA in Chicago. Please tell her hello and thanks as well. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Glad they're finally talking. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I agree with you! If people don't like the characters they should read something else!  Great couple of chapters. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Great couple of chapters. Very intense. Great job as always with a difficult subject. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Geez, just talk to each other already!!  Lol

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

So great to hear from u again. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I like how u r having them take their time getting to know each other again. Wonder how long they can last.