Reviews by acw1
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 145047
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great chapter. entertaining story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

wondering what the heck happened.



Author's Response:

I am too!  Yikes!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

good chapter. wonder if he will show up with a live rabbit at some point or if he will figure it out soon. funny



Author's Response:

We'll need to put him out of his misery soon.  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i can understand her having trust issues unfortunately it maes her appear really self centered and or bitchy at times. glad they found a compromise.



Author's Response:

It does make her appear childish, but at the same time--we all have those days.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

good chapter. are you trying to redeem edward??



Author's Response:

Possibly.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well at least edward appears to be wising up.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it looks like Edward's brain may actually be functioning again.  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well i hope she will get changed now and then she and amanda will be evenly matched in case they meet again



Author's Response:

God, I hope she can get changed.  What if she doesn't survive her injuries?

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  A big smile for ya too.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

good chapter



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

:)

Author's Response:

Thank for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Hope your holidays were merry!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

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Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  I'm glad you liked it.  XOXO

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

that came out of nowhere for me. interesting turn of events.



Author's Response:

More events coming out of nowhere in the next three chapters.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74057
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart

good chapter. made me cry for her a little.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Bella has been through alot.  Thanks so much for the review.  Tissue warning for the next one.  I will try and get it out ASAP.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

Definitely did not survive with out tears. There were many and a runny nose even. :)  great chapter.



Author's Response:

I promise, that was the hardest one.  Now we can move on to better times (but I wouldn't put the tissues in the cupboard yet).  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

happy tears with this chapter. love the story



Author's Response:

I'm sorry this brought on tears, but at least they were happy ones.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

thank god he spoke up.



Author's Response:

Nothing like waiting till the last minute, right?

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Yes

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  The next chapter is up now.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

:)



Author's Response: TY Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop

:)



Author's Response:

TY!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a bestselling author who lives in seclusion.  Edward is a has-been actor with no penny on his name.  When Bella picked up a homeless Edward on the beach, she is determined to get him back into acting.  Edward is doing his best not to get into Bella's pants... and also help her get out of her shell.

 

All things Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer.  The rest of the story belongs to me.

Thanks, TKegl for the awesome banner!  

 

dreamofstar

Thank you, SoapyMayhem for this awesome banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67093 Read Count: 19867
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting idea



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found it interesting. :-)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

like the fast pace of the story



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

good chapter. wondering where her friends or family while this is all happening. Is she really that much of a recluse that she has no contact with others?

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

glad to see she has some family

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

enjoying the story but it seems very confusing at times.  I couldn't figure out how long she and jacob had been apart at one part it seems like several weeks then later it seems like a couple years. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the constructive criticism.  Duly noted.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so glad she wanted to talk about her past with jacob but again the writing was very confusing. I got the gist of the relationship but her description was very jumpy and did not really explain a lot. The writing just wasn't clear.  This is not a criticism, just an observation based on my reading of your story.  It seems  a lot was left out, her job, his job, the blame, the ambitions, just so many details seem to have been left out.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the constructive criticism.  I'll keep this in mind next time I write a new fic.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ok although I liked the fast pace at the start of the story I think it is too much now.  There have been obvious huge changes in his life since last chapter and you don't seem to have adressed them causing even more discontinuity in the story for me.  The gaps are too large now.  I think I have to give up on the story.  Good luck and keep writing.  This was a great idea for a story but it just became to unplausable for me.



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving it a shot.  I'm sorry that my writing discouraged you from reading.  I'll keep in mind that I jump quickly from concept to concept.  I'll certainly keep on writing because that's the only way for me to improve.  Hopefully, you'll read one of mine that would be more plausible to you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.

Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Cooch Confessions

yeah, I would have to say that she is really obsessing in a vindictive way and has taken it out on him a bit more than called for. Hope she sees the error of her ways at some point.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Road Blocks

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Midnight Rendezvous

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Auditions

:)  unless she has his child hidden somewhere i have to think she is really being hateful and vindictive w/o justification.  bottom line she should not of slept with him, she knew how he was.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Feeling Frisky

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Intervention

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Deals

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The AVNs and Admissions

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Epilogue

:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

BS Banner

 

Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support by reviewing.

Here is your teaser

A knock on their door stopped Edward from answering her. Bella looked surprised when she opened to find Emmett on the other side. He had a wide grin on his face.

 

“I’m here for Edward. He’s going to help me finish the fence.”

 

“Oh,” Bella said, and then turned to see if Edward was going to come out of the room naked. “He’s just…”

 

“Don’t worry about us,” Emmett’s voice boomed, “I got it taken care of.”

 

Bella pondered for a moment before she decided to just trust Edward and Emmett and go. On her way out though, she couldn’t help laughing when she heard Emmett yell, “What in the tarnation? Put some pants on boy!”

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

:)

 

Thank you for your review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Bella didn’t know what to expect when she opened the door to her apartment, but when everything seemed to be still intact, she let out the breath she had been holding.  Edward was still on the couch but he had managed to get out of his clothes again, clearly preferring them gone. Now he was perched on the edge of the cushion, staring intently at the television.

When Bella came around to see what was on, she nearly choked laughing. Edward was watching All My Children. The couple on screen was locked in a melodramatic embrace as he told her how much he loved her.

Edward stood up and came behind Bella while she chuckled at the screen. He grabbed her and spun her around, wrapping his arms around her like he had just seen.

“Yooou arrre ev-ery-thing tooo meee,” Edward repeated the same words the protagonist had recited, but this time, it didn’t sound so dumb to Bella. In fact her breath caught and she suddenly found herself very warm. Common sense told her he had no idea what he was saying, but it still sounded wonderful coming out of his mouth.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great chapter.



Author's Response:

<3 thanks

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hope she goes back soon.



Author's Response:

Soon-ish.

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I hope you had/are having a super awesome Easter!

 

Here is a teaser.

The buzzer on her intercom sounded and Bella grabbed her keys, opting to just meet Michael downstairs.  When she opened the door, she was surprised, she had expected him to be dumpy or balding or something, but he was in fact a very nice looking man. He had short, cropped blond hair and a charming smile. Surely an evening with this man wouldn’t be too bad, Bella mused.

“You look,” he paused, searching for the right word, “nice.”

Bella made an effort not to blanch at his lackluster compliment. Bella knew her dress wasn’t the most up to date style, but she was doing him a favor.  She tugged once more at the top of the dress and regretted it instantly because it brought Michael’s attention to her bust line. He looked away quickly but not before she noticed his disappointed face.

“Thanks,” she replied as she followed him into the car.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great chapter.



Author's Response:

The support you all are giving me is amazing. Thank you all so much.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter, I think you all will enjoy. *winks*

 

Bella felt herself lean into Edward even though she made no conscious effort to do so. He was like a planet, having his own separate gravity that pulled her in whenever she got too close. Edward began to lean in, too, bending his head down to meet hers. She waited, holding her breath for his kiss, but he moved unbearably slow. So just before he finally reached her lips, Bella gasped in a quick breath for lack of oxygen, and then her mouth was covered with his.

Edward was pressed up against her and Bella could feel his hardness on her stomach. What normally would have embarrassed her, made her moan, and that made Edward push his lips harder to hers. Bella lightened the kiss, so she could playfully peck at his lips a couple of times before bringing her tongue out to sweep it across his lower lip.

 

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great chapter.



Author's Response:

 

I feel like a broken record, but you’ve all been so amazing, thank you!

 

Here is your teaser.

Bella nearly turned around but Edward’s anxiety seemed to drop a little once they reached the open grassy area.  They’d kept their hands locked together the entire walk, but once the open space was in front of him, he let go of it and took off running. A couple people took notice of him, not because it was that odd to see a man running through the opening, but because he had dropped down onto his hands to do it, galloping like a wild horse. Or in this case, a wolf.

Bella took off after him, not shouting out as to not draw any more attention to the odd situation.  She found it surprising that she couldn’t catch up to Edward on her feet, just assuming there was no way he could run faster than her that way.  He turned abruptly and Bella skidded to a stop as he approached her.

“You’re very fast,” she said, huffing.

Edward made a noise Bella could only classify as laughing, and she scowled at him. “Oh you think it’s funny to make me chase after you?”

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter.



Author's Response:

I can’t say thank you enough. So I’ll say it with a naughty teaser.

 

Once his hands were clean, Bella debated on what to do next; she made the mistake of looking up into his dark green eyes and found herself lost. She hadn’t known him long enough to feel such a pull to him and yet she found it harder to deny every minute they were together.  He was already the biggest part of her life and she felt more at home with him than she had ever felt with anyone.  And yet some part of her felt like she was taking advantage of this innocent man. How could he choose her when he didn’t even know there were choices?

Shaking her head, Bella brought the soap to Edward’s chest and went to work on his flawless physique.  She was so lost in her thoughts about what was right and what was wrong she hadn’t noticed how low the soap in her hand was dipping until Edward growled.  Or was that a moan? Either way, the sound was fantastic, and it shot right through Bella like a lightning bolt.  Bella dropped the soap just as Edward grabbed her hand; his grip was firm but not forceful.  He lowered her hand to him and she looked up to him to see his eyes pleading with her.

“Touch,” he said, but it was really more of a question. He was asking for relief.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I think next chapter is the one everyone has been waiting for.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that had been carved with lion heads on the side. The tallest shelves required the sliding ladders that moved throughout the library on a metal rack. The whole building had an almost mystical or magical feel to it, and Edward, with his fluid, animalistic way of moving, seemed to oddly fit in with the feel of the place.

They ventured to the back of the library, to set up station in the research area. There were computers as well as microfiches available for patrons and their research.  Bella let her hands run along some of the books on their way back, enjoying the feel of the spines along her fingertips.  Passing by the nature section, she stopped and grabbed a book, handing it to Edward as he sat down at a table.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

good chapter. I hope she doesn't try and leave him there.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one.

Here is your teaser

The library was one of the city’s oldest buildings and it was a sight to behold, with large bookcases that Bella sat on the stump and watched the wind blowing in the trees. She felt numb, but she preferred it because she knew as soon as she started to feel again, she would be bawling. It had been over an hour since Bella watched Edward take off into the trees, and as much as she didn’t want to admit it, she was pretty sure he wasn’t coming back.

They had arrived at the campsite, and Edward immediately began pacing it and sniffing each stone, tree, and bush in the area while Bella set up the campsite. She had thrown the sleeping bag and air mattress in the tent and brought the cooler from the car. She had been about to call out to him when he perked up as the wind blew across him, and he took off running into the woods.  Bella had dropped the cooler she’d been carrying and ran after him, but it was too late; by the time she had entered the woods, he was out of sight. She’d called out to him a couple times, but with no answer, she found herself back at camp, hoping he’d return.

That hope was fading fast.

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum (This is different, they are combining their updates and teaser forum there so make sure you head to the right one)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:)



Author's Response:

I heart all of your reviews so much, thank you so much!

Here is your teaser

The combination of the hot sun and her torrid fantasies playing in her head, Bella looked at the water as a welcome friend. While Edward lapped at the cool liquid, Bella quickly undressed and waded into the water. Her eyes darted back and forth to him until she was covered by the river.  Pushing her hands though the water, Bella felt better as the chill cooled her ache. She dropped her head back, letting her hair dip down.

 

Edward was stealthy on land; he could sneak up on anything. In the water, however, he became something akin to a bull in a china shop.  He sloshed through the water and Bella pulled her head up out of the water. She felt nervous to his approach, very aware that he was naked and even more aware that she was naked too.  Her nonchalant smile and stance wouldn’t have fooled anyone else but Edward.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great chapter. poor edward sounds like his parents were killed by a bear and he was remembering or dreaming about it.



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella already read about that when she was looking for his family. But now we know that he remembers it in some capacity.

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Here is your teaser

Putting her quarters in the machine, Bella pulled on the handle and grabbed a newspaper. She headed back up to her apartment and found Edward resting comfortably where she left him. Sitting in the chair next to him, she opened the paper and flipped right to the classified ads. Most of the jobs were easy to discount; not her profession, not in her area, and she certainly wasn’t about to be trained as a masseuse to work at a place called Sinderella’s.

 

Sighing at the apparent lack of suitable employment, Bella changed her focus and flipped to the real estate. She found the rural section and perused it, looking to see just how cheap a big chunk of land could get.  Unfortunately, even the plots without a building on them were too steep for Bella to afford. Bella felt overwhelmed, a feeling she was getting sick of. Things weren’t going to just work out magically for her and she was beginning to see just how long the road was ahead of her.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

Sitting next to her, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and pulled her to him. “Bella is sad?” he asked, and she folded her legs up onto the couch to get deeper into the cuddle.

“No, Bella is frustrated, I’m frustrated.” She had taught him ‘I’ and ‘you’ but after speaking in third person for so long, she had a hard time breaking the habit.

“What is frustrated?” he inquired in what Bella had dubbed his studious tone. He was interested in everything, and as soon as Bella had taught him enough to communicate his questions, he had become very serious in learning everything he could.

“It means I feel bad because things aren’t working out the way I want them to,” she replied.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.

Here is your teaser

When woman spoke about her husband and her eyes glowed with both mischief and love.  The look made Bella think of Edward again, causing Rosalie to give her a knowing look as she led her towards the pasture.  They past a small chicken coop along the way and Rosalie informed Bella that she would need to gather the eggs every morning around five so that breakfast would be ready by six for Mr. McCarty.

 

“The cows will go to the barn themselves at night. They are very particular.  They need to be milked twice a day. It’s something that I enjoy doing, but five is getting to be a bit much so I would have you help with that.”

 

“Uh,” Bella stuttered, “I’ve never actually milked a cow before.”

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Bella was feeling the after effects of Edward’s touching and so her step was quick as they headed back. As soon as they were in the building, Bella turned and reached up, pulling Edward down for a kiss. He returned the kiss eagerly but before he could make his move, she was gone again, running up the stairs.  He caught up to her quickly but just kept his hands on her hips as she unlocked the door.

 

When the door swung open, Edward tensed and Bella’s eyes scanned the room to see why.

 

“Bella, hi.” The landlord stood up from where he had been crouched down by her wall of boxes. “I just came to do the final walkthrough and you weren’t home, so I thought I’d just start.”

 

Bella looked at him skeptically but didn’t really know what to say. She was pretty sure he didn’t have permission to enter her apartment without telling her first but she was moving out, so what harm could it have done.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Thanks so much for being patient with this chapter, I really appreciate the review.

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Bella had spent nearly the entire night after they returned home explaining to Edward what he could and couldn’t do on the farm. She knew she had been a bit stringent on the rules, but until she found something Edward could help with, it was best he stayed inside.  But as she stared at her front door she saw Edward had a different idea.

 

There was a bit of distance so Bella couldn’t make out exactly everything but she could see he was naked. Bella was horrified but she had no idea what she could do.  She was about to excuse herself when Rosalie gasped.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hope it was a coyote he killed and not a chicken or other farm animal.



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With a vulnerability Bella had come to love he looked down, tucking his chin in against his shoulder. “I no help wolves. I no help Bella.”

 

Bella had never really considered how the pack dynamics had worked. While it was obvious the wolves had treated Edward as family she had never really thought about what his role was. He was no were near as fast and while he could take down small prey; she doubted he could take something as hefty as a deer down to help feed the pack.

 

And now that he was in her world, the world he was meant to be born into, there was a chance for him to be helpful but he didn’t know how. Bella felt horrible for rejecting his morning offering when she saw the reason behind it. Edward wanted to learn, but he also wanted to work, to contribute to his new pack…her.

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

loved it as always



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Just when she thought she couldn’t take it anymore, Jake rose up and walked to Edward.  The movement was muted, each paw seemed to slowly rise and hover in the air before dropping back down to the ground. When he reached Edward, he lowered his head and met Edward’s cheek with his muzzle.

Jake’s giant furry face met Edward’s clean shaven one, his neck nearly wrapped around Edward’s and his head resting against the copper hair.  When the action broke, Edward turned his head toward Bella but his attention was short lived as Sam exited the cave. The snarl was instant and Jake immediately took a step back.

 

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great but still a bit sad



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know. : (

 

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

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Later that day Bella was working in the garden, filling her baskets with the herbs Rosalie has asked for, when she heard a yell and the rev of an engine. She looked up and watched as Emmett’s truck came barreling down the driveway and through the fence of the pasture, scaring the cows and causing them to run toward the far side.

 

Bella panicked, wondering if Emmett had a heart attack or something while driving. She dropped her basket and started running toward the truck that was now coming to a stop.  She leapt over the fallen posts and just as she was approaching, the passenger side door flung open and out stepped a laughing Emmett.

 

He glanced back at Bella and shouted, “Your boy here likes speed.”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

uh oh..not good to see them show up.



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Thank you so much for your support of my story.

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She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Futuretake- The Proposal

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Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed this. There will be more coming. I think everyone wants to see the wedding, so I will do that next I think.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Futuretake-Daddy Savage/The Wedding

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Thank you for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

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Love to get smiles ... thanks!  :)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

someone's about to get shot I suspect.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Summary:

 

Banner by the lovely Mandy52799

 

Bella is forced to do something she never imagined she was capable of. A FAGE 3Some gift for Life-in-the-shape-of-a-Girl

 

A drabble-esque fic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5952 Read Count: 5061
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Dec 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Simply Promised by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

award

Edward and Bella, best friends since kids, have promised to have each other's baby someday. Now, Edward is married and Bella has a Fiance. Edward reminds Bella of their simple promise, when he learns that his wife is unable to conceive. HEA E/B Lemons. Drabble

Banner created by: Mina Rivera

Beta: HollBeth

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 105611
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

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Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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A fortunate encounter while wandering the city may lead Edward to realize that, perhaps, not everything is lost. But is he ready? AH, ExB.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181516 Read Count: 21500
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Cufflinks

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Author's Response:

Hi there:

I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks fpr stopping by and hope you come back for the epi and outtakes that I'll post in the future.

Thanks. :-)

Love, CL82

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717535
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: acw1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: acw1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

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Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87107
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: acw1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Awesome banner by: LittleNudgerLove.

 

Set Post-Eclipse. Canon until that point. HEA. Mere weeks before her wedding, Bella disappears. With vampires, werewolves and humans to blame, no one thinks to look to the more sinister monsters lurking just off shore. As Bella is thrown into a frightening new world, Edward and Jacob must put aside their differences to save the girl they both love. But will they be too late? ExB

 

NOMINATED: for the Fanatic Fanfics Award 2015!!! For Favorite Action/Angst/Horror/Otherworld/WIP Fanfic.

FINALIST: Fav Newbie Author!

 

 

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'Still My Bella' Created by manu-chann, commissioned by silverhawk88.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251232 Read Count: 47885
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2017
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - New Guests

:)  loving the story



Author's Response:

Thank you, as always :)