Reviews by acw1
Collide by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We alone, a little flock,
The few who still remain,
Are exiles wandering through the land
In sorrow and in pain...
We wander in the forests dark,
With dogs upon our track;
And like the captive, silent lamb
Men bring us, prisoners, back.
They point to us, amid the throng,
And with their taunts offend,
And long to let the sharpened ax
On heretics descend

 

 

Two lost souls trying to figure out where they belong, collide. What happens when Isabella wants out of the plain life she leads that Edward wants to be accepted into? Will Edward face what he is running from to leave with Bella? Or will Bella surrender and embrace her culture?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57683 Read Count: 11066
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 04 Sep 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

loved the chapter. it was peaceful.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the awesome banner!

 

Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter.  Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago.  Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground?  What will happen when these two cross paths?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18426
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: REGRET-Part I

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: RUN DOWN

like it so far. looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: COLLISION

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: RUNNING

loving the story can't wait for the reunion and reactions.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.  Reunions and reactions will arrive faster in this story than my last.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: HOME

SO EXCITED FOR WHAT THEY DO NEXT CHAPTER!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  It should be exciting!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: LUCY

hmmm...interesting.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I think I may have misled some of the readers...there will be happier times on the horizon.  Peter and Bella will get there sexy times...it will just take some chapters to get there.  Stay tuned!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: CIRCLING

great chapter. enjoying the story. would have like to see her come out as alpha though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I like someone else's thoughts about that actually.  It's like they are both Alpha's; there's a male and female alpha.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK

VERY INTERESTING!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: THE END

great chapter. I really want to say that Edward should be beaten by Lucybella at least once but I really don't think she cares enough about him anymore. All her anger towards him and the family seems to have been taken out on the house. However what the hell is he doing with Tanya since he obviously still had feelings for bella. For his possesiveness he is attempting to assert over her and his display of emotions towards her..for that he should get his ass handed to him by her. he was perhaps never good enough for her. look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  With Edward and Tanya-Edward loves Tanya, but unfortunately not as much as he loved Bella.  Alice and Edward mourned Bella for over a century and the family didn't pressure him into a relationship, but they contributed to his moving on with Tanya.  I'm not sure if I'm going to put this information in the story, but thought you'd like to know.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: MY UNHAPPY ENDING

awesome chapter. even better story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: CAUGHT

loved the chapter. I guess I am still holding a grudge against edward as well. I wanted a little more damage done to him than she did. maybe another time.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Maybe she will, I still haven't decided.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: KISS

GREAT CHAPTER. SHE IS MAKING GREAT PRGRESS WITH PETER. LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: INTERLUDE

:)

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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SIAU

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

like the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  I'm glad you like it :-)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you :-)  

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hopefully this will work out good for leah.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading & reviewing!  :-)  You'll see!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

sweet.  PLEASE do not let her get pregnant from this.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you much :-)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

:)

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

great story, look forward to more

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

awesome

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

loved the story!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 21077
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

like the story

Summary:

Bella got dragged out to a bar one night. Subsequently drinking, she decided to let her old persona float away, and took opportunities that she normally wouldn't have. It was one of the best nights of her life.

Smut, dirty, plain and simple.

AU-AH, OOC, rated NC-17 for language and adult sexual situations.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8035 Read Count: 802
[Report This] Published: 06 May 2010 Updated: 06 May 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lose Yourself - One Shot

loved it!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

like the story so far.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying it! 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

loved it! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

good  chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Hppe you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

good chapter. glad they let her help peter. sad they had to fight at all though.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but the drama will bring them all closer!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

awesome chapter.  had to laugh about the giant bag o medicine.



Author's Response:

I had this vision of Peter at Walgreens just emptying the shelves!  Glad you liked, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  Glad you enjoe!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

good chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

great chapter.glad they got through to alice



Author's Response:

Glad you liked!  I'm happy to have Alice back among the "living"!  I felt bad keeping her catatonic for that long :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

enjoyed the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for letting me know!

 

Til next time :)

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Summary: Past Featured Story

ut

 

How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Closing A Door

such a sad story is there any happiness in her future?

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: What Could Have Been

how sad for them all. 

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

enjoying your well written story.  I just wanted to point out an error as I was not sure you were aware of it.  Near the end when Edward introduces Esme as his "mother" it should actually be ... all intents and purposes..not intensive purposes.  A common malapropism is "for all intense and purposes", (also, "for all intensive purposes") a result of the original phrase being misheard and repeated.Not trying to be picky or whiny just thought you might want to correct it and or be aware for future use.



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks for your review I am happy you are enjoying my story!!!! Thanks for taking the time to point out this error this type of feed back is helpful to me... I can't believe you got all the way to chapter 24 though and this is the only one you have pointed out... hehehehe I'm positive there is a bunch more... hehehehe... I hope you keep reading and reviewing...

Thanks

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Carmen needs to get off her high horse and accept Rosie.  She is really starting to make me a bit angry with her.  look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

hmm...didn't expect that. look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

like the story, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

great chapter. hope he gets there in time to enjoy the festival with her.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

good chapter. hope the couples get straightened out soon.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

loved it.  hope bella can get them all with those they love once she figures it all out.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Shame on Emmett. For not being honest firstly so that all of this could have been avoided. Somehow I think it will get worse before better but I am hoping for a happy ending for all down the line.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

sad predicament they are in. hope emmett comes clean soon so alice can have a chance with jasper.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

great chapter. hope the girls are ok. look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

great chapter. glad they are going to be ok.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

great chapter. glad she spoke up and told him what she was angry about.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

great chapter. 

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

glad to see a little edward and bella again. hope there is more in the next chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Lonesome Hearts

no chapter showing up?!?!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Yay more progress for bella and edward I hope they now will pick up the pace or at least have more time together.  Hope Alice accepts Jasper's love and sees a future with him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Carmen has to like her after that.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

good chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

hope Jasper convinces alice to marry him or at least to give him a chance.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

hope you tell us what her problem is. great chapter

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

funny

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

that was a pretty sweet surprise.  good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Hmmm.....what a mystery..hope he explains. I know whatever the reason it won't change her love for him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

great chapter. he was young and stupid but nothing she couldn't see past thank goodness. look forward to more edward and bella especially since she admitted to loving him.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

oh you tease me with talk of three chapters. love where the story has gone.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

loved it. very funny of big brother emmett.  i hope the wedding is soon too!

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

loved the chapter and the pace you are going. i won't lie and say that i don't wish you were writing more. I wish that you were writing even faster because I want more of the story but I can appreciate that you are really churning out the chapters at a fast pace, faster than other authors. so keep up the great work.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

look forward to more.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

:)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Oh that Jasper is pretty sneaky.  Hope it works in his and Alice's favor.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

aww.. love that jasper.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

great chapter. glad to see edward moving forward towrds a life with bella.  of course she will say yes.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

good chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

way to go big brother!!  Although can't really blame him it was an honest mistake.  I cried a little.  It was very sweet.  Hope alice and jasper don't get ruffled by the mistake.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

great chapter.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

oh man...they just can't win.  Better the barn than the house though.