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Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

Banner created by Evilnat

Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

Favorite Scream


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130200
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

And heres Edward;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Mean people would say with such friends you won't need any enemies;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

I was a bit scared for her, with not knowing what shit Aro would produce in her testimony, but you proved once again what a great author you are in creating this very nice judge;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm going to give this a try now, even if I'm really late into this story...

let's see how fast I can catch up with you

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It doesn't sound like Bella is the happiest, if she's spoilt...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 184: Chapter 184

Very good:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Now they're getting to know each other;)

I thought it was a great idea to introduce him as her boyfriend, and hopefully he won't be against this too much *lalala*

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 183: Chapter 183

I'm so glad they she didn't shy away from him again but seeking him out for help now:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

She's going to trust him with herself again, yay!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

So sweet to see the joy Bella could feel while Edward touched her scarrs!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

I was pretty sure you'd give out the death sentence, and I'm do glad you did;) this excuse of a man has no reason to stay alive!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 197: Chapter 197

I'm glad she had Felipe to help her through this, he sounds really nice!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 200: Chapter 200

That was an amazing story! I'm so sad to see them almost gone...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

I guess I cried more in this chapter than on some other completed fics...

 

It was an amazing ride once again you took me on, and I'm forever thankful that you wrote this!

CU soon Sweety,

ps. Another big thanks for all the lovely pics you put on your blog&tumblr, they never stop to be inspiring;) 

Summary:

everythingIneeded_zps20a89799

 

Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87253
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yay:)

I hope this means the worst is over...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm glad things are coming together nicely for the wedding

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Looking forwad to more ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

everythingIwanted_zps9dd57a41

 

A failed marriage and long divorce left Edward with a lot on his hands. Moving his kids closer to his family in New York was the fresh start he needed so that his family could thrive. Not knowing how he would juggle work and caring for his kids, he jumped at the chance to hire his brother's nanny to care for his own kids. But the moment Bella walked into his house everything changed. She started out as the nanny, but she quickly became everything he wanted.  

 

Bella's POV of this story is posted as Everything I Needed.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101886 Read Count: 89369
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I get that both Carlisle and Esme are upset how they found out about Edward and Bella being a couple. But the way they're treating them now and worse in front of Charlie and his family is so uncalled for! 

And it's not only about not in the loop from the beginning but about who's taking care of the medical part? How could Bella even trust them now as they did everything she feared they would if they knew?!

Charlie was very nice in meeting Edward, having his back instantly was a nice surprise. 

They're engaged 😃

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

:-)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

It's been quité a while since your last update, but I'm glad to see things are starting to get set in motion; )

Hopefully Carlisle and Esme will start to come around now, too

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983318
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

He meant everything that he wrote?! :-D

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Oh shit... That was a pretty bad week for her...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

As difficult as it might be for him - and her - I think they're doing great! They've talked about their feelings and took the time out from the benefits to get their friendship right once again;)

Im pretty sure they will work this out, because sometimes distant makes the heart grow fonder... And there was never a saying how much distant you should between you and what you really want;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I need a fucking strong drink and a cigarette after since these last 5 chapters wore me out.... And combined with the pic... Hot as hell!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They're TRUELY great friends! I loved that he spend the night with her after the break up - but with vomit-proofed clothes;)

 

i hope oped you had a great Christmas time!

 

i probably won't review each chapter, as I'm having trouble finding the right words there, but every now and then you'll hear from me... And I'm very greatful for ALL your Visuals over at your blog and tumbkr

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Paul really isn't a fan of Edwards... 

I loved how Edward showed him to his right place and made it clear that he wouldn't hold his breath against him;)

 

so, the big question is out of his mouth, how's Bella going to react?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't believe all that's Emmett interested in with Rosalie giving good head... He's usually not the kind of person that would sell himself that low...

how will he react to her treating Bella and his mom

that bad?!

I'm not sure if you already know about it... But a few days ago another author have out a note that ff is again on a witch hung for M rated stories...


Are there other pages you are updating on? Because is be very sad if I lost another great story/author to this BS...


Love,

Babs 



Author's Response:

Babs ~ 

I do not post on FFn anymore. I had two stories pulled from the site and I refuse to deal with that again. I post here, on FicPad and AO3. Thanks for the heads up, though ;-)

I'm glad you're enjoying the craziness that is Edward and Bella! 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I love the get back at Rosalie through blue hair dye! I think it's a great idea to make up to her bitchiness;)

 

the he pic is awesome btw!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm very glad that Emmett got his head out of his ass at the end and chose his family over blow jobs...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Drunk Esme is a keeper! She's sweet and only tells them her hearts true desire... I'm pretty sure there worse drunken moms out there;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh my god! The decorations are beautiful! But $82.000 - that's insane;)

 

i love their little bickerings, it's so obvious how much love means in this family!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh boy... This man is awesome! And don't get me started on Bella;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I love that she admitted whole heartedly to not playing fair;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

They're so good together! I'm curious whose going to slip into kissing first, because Bella was missing that before;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think it's so cute how possessive he gets and that he REALLY wants to kiss her! So, he's the first to acknowledge that their feelings are changing - even only for himself... I'm curious how far behind him Bella really is with that;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

They're really cute together

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Now it's not so good looking for both of them, especially with the temper from them... But at the end of the day, I'm sure they will both be glad that this big pink elephant finally got acknowledged and work through their problems;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

I think it's a good thing they don't start up where they left things, because they need to get back to confidence in each other. But I think that won't take them forever, they practically were in a relationship before minus the kissing;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

That was very sweet - and hot - from him:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

That was very hot!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I feel so sad for Emmett! He really is a great guy and there should be some nice girl for him - hopefully in his near future;)

And I agree with Em, Edward should let take Bella the lead...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Edward really is doing very great with helping Bella to see it's HER he loves, not her body or what they can do together!

Alice is a sweet friend, $600 for a dress for a friend?! Hallelujah;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Congrats!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

That must have been horrible for Edward once again... Good thing Bella can always cheer him up;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I loved him making her choose one thing she likes about herself in the pic! Sweet

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

How can one person be that ... Much of an asshole?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Sometimes it's a good thing if your girlfriend is the BFF of your sister;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I think it's so very interesting how different the opinions on characters are in faction! I wouldn't even dare to think bad about Bella, and here you are defending her again for such ridiculous statements:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 May 2014 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

I love that Edward can make her see reason so lovingly but fast nontheless! And that he accepts her how she is - looking for revenge and all;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Barb really isn't the most helping one right now...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

I really like Elsa, she seems to be just what Bella needs:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

I'm not too happy that Paul got his hit through to Bella, especially with Emmett being right beside her... BUT I'm so proud of her for fighting back and finally seeing the great woman everyone tried to make her see again:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

I'm shaking with joy for this very special proposal!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I love it!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

One of the best endings I've got the honor to read in this fandom:)

Summary:

 

When his bitterness is the only thing controlling his present, will he ever be able to find happiness in his future? At some point, Bella was everything that Edward has ever wanted. With her past and his, will they ever be able to let go and take a second chance in life? Rated NC-17 for langague and scenes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12698 Read Count: 1474
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 14 Jan 2014
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting way to start;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella is in a relationship with James? A married James? Old enough to be best friends with her father....

boy, you're putting an interesting plot out here;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Seems like he has a nice group of back up guys, he just needs to realize it...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm pretty sure Rose did say the things she said out of love, but it sure as shit as a bitter after-taste...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like that he went to have a sleepover at his parents home, even being married and a mother myself by now, I still love to stay at my parents home from time to time, too. It's just very nice to be pampered instead of doing the pampering;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So.... Their paths cross for the first time;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101886
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Even if she doesn't think so herself, for me Bella is keeping up with life very good! I've tried I'm previous chapters to put myself in her shoes and how I would handle it... And I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be there, where she is yet!

I liked the honesty Edward shows to her again and again! He tells her his own truth without being too much;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

She's holding it together pretty well - mostly - but of course it couldn't be all happy and sunny...

poor Grace... I'm sure it's hard to make do with all these changes at her age:( But it's not fair to tell her mother she hates her! I was on the receiving end of those words from my daughter before too, and she's just shy of her seventh birthday! There's nothing in the world that hurts a mother deeper than hearing that your kids hate you... You know they probably don't really mean it, but knowing and hearing something isn't the same:(

Charlie was mean in giving Bella shit about how he got Grace to tidy up her room! I know he wouldn't really so something to hurt Bella, but this wasn't helping... Gladly he understood that faster than his wife;)

Edward... I'm sure he was embarrassed at the salon as Esme showed this particular picture of him to everyone - especially Bella;) But maybe a part of him liked it too?! He's really trying to help her and I think he's doing great in it

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

The changes truly are impressive but I always was a strong believer in love. And they all deserve that happiness; )

The promises Edward got for grace and John were awesome

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm not sure if I should glad that he had this one last good day to get his wishes off his chest, or sad because a very good man died to young to see his kids grow up and share the love with his wife....

I'm crying for a very sad beginning of a story and hope the best for Bella and your friend Pam! Please give her my condolonces even if it might be a "fresh" wound anymore in sure it still hurts!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I can't thank you enough for all the love you out into your stories, blog and tumblr! The pics you choose are always so beautiful... I'm speechless looking at some of them...

 

The new beginning.... I'm sure all of this must be feeling so good but overwhelming at the same time!

 

Rose seems like a sweet enough person with a cero BS acceptance;) I'm very curious how this friendship will come along;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

I guess this meddling was Renee's way of trying to help her daughter. And I can understand why she would want to help her... But if she's told that someone isn't ready, yet, you just swallow what you think is right for said person and wait for him/her to tell you to give it a go!

If you can't trust your parents to always be in your corner, who's supposed to be than?!

 

I'm a bit disappointed that Alice was Renee's partner in crime for the first set up... All good intentions aside, would she really want Bella to date someone like Mike?! Living still in the basement of your parents while being over thirty...

 

Charlie is a great dad! He has Bella's back no matter what and doesn't shy away from scolding his wife for overstepping limits;) And him trying to do Gracie's hair? Just to sweet!

 

Edward... It was very nice that he backed off from giving her a ticket but make sure she got home safely... Or did he have another reason for following her home?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm speechless - positively;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

She really can't see the progress she made so far...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I'm glad that Bella stayed for lunch with Esme and Emmett! The stories she told Bella might not be real lunch conversation but they made her laugh and loosen up, so that's a great thing;)

And making a date for blow out... Very good Esme;)

Oh no, I hope she doesn't freak out about Edward using the term date for their meeting to do the groceries and his first lesson...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I love Epov's too, especially written by you;)

Eame really was a great help to him at the beginning of this chapter! I'm pretty sure she could make him see, that he didn't do anything wrong before. But Bella needed to figure things out for herself, and sometimes guilt is hard to loose....

The Christmas fare was sweet! Even if they had to get some space after that, it was beautiful to see her family let him in:) But of course that would be something throwing her off guard, not that the kids liked him, but I guess how fast it went...

Im very curious what the next chapter will entail, but I don't think Bella is wrong in following her feelings - and Jake's wishes for her:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I loved their date! It was a very cool idea and the romantic dinner on the beach... Pretty awesome;)

 

But I'm a bit disappointed that Bella didn't try for Billy's idea of having someone sleep next to her... I'm sure Alice wouldn't mind but be of help... Just the thought of sleeping on a sofa for three years? I don't care how comfy it is, it has to get bad after that much time...

 

The idea with the stuffed animals made out of Jake's old clothes... That had me swallow tears, it's so sweet!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I'm glad that she could take some if his felt pressure of his chest after the Vancouver question! It was very sweet to offer, and who knows, maybe she'll be able to give him an answer sooner than expected?;)

Snooping Alice on the hunt for details about their first date, was very funny! I can totally understand her feeling nosy with her best friend, but am glad that she didn't pushed too far...

i can only repeat myself, how impressed I'm feeling about the strength Bella shows! She's such an amazing mother to her kids, doing so many sweet things with and for them! She's always the last on her long list of tasks, but she's finally starting to allow herself some happyness too:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

The pics are wonderful as ever, I really like the blanket;)

At the beginning of the first mixed up date with the kids I was really nervous. I get that the kids, John especially, might have a problem with Edward being the boyfriend of his mom... But both, Bella and Edward, really made it easy for the kids to see, there's no competition for Jake in Edward:)

And the day with the adults was very sweet too!

Hm... Will he stay the night?!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I'm out of words with pure happyness;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter!

From the moment Mrs. Kerr came to apologize with her daughter, to Edward protecting John... Over to the gift making with Esme to asking Charlie's permission... This was pure bliss - thank you for that all:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

The lemon under the stars wars magical! His description was very hot already, but the real thing didn't disappoint either;)

 

omg! She invited him to stay and go to Phoenix! Yay

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26

Knowing this was to be expected to happen sooner rather than later doesn't help with the amount of sadness I feel nor the tears im crying for both your mother and Esme... I know I said it before, but I'm so sorry for your loss! 

Cancer is the biggest asshole!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

Hey there, glad to have you back on this one as I remember how close it was to your heart. I admire your strength to get back here as I can only imagine how very difficult it has to be for you! 

TThere was a lot happening in this chapter. But I love to see them getting closer in their family dynamic; )

And getting Billys blessing was the cherry on top

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16

Yay things went well here

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

I never expected John to be the one who would put their living arrangements into consideration, but the little man did fabulous:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

The proposal was so wonderful!

Each chapter has haf me fighting tears and this one was no difference. I hope Esme will be able to see them get married

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27

Thank you for the happy ending, it's very much appreciated after the funeral part

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

The problems John and his class mates have had with Jessica should be more than enugh to get her fired, but if your system is as desperate for teachers than ours I'm quite sure it'll be the probation first. Though it would suck since hr behavior seriously is uncalled for:(

The engagement party sounded like a lot of fun even if it was a bigger event than they wished for. And I'm very happy it gave Esme something to do since I'm sure that's a great distraction in her situation...

 

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

dl

Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97748
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh no... finally he did get to her only to see her flatline? Thars so cruel:(

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm glad their little boy is fine and that Bella is supposed to make a full recovery! My heartbeat was beating double time through this whole chapter but I'm sure noe I'm able to relax - for their hopefully reunion and happy times;)

Summary:

OOC. AH. Charlie was one of the few things that connected Edward and Bella. She loathed him while he worshipped the ground he walked on. It was this connection that would turn their lives upside down.

The Anthem of the Swan

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16898 Read Count: 4692
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2014 Updated: 09 Apr 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Thy Will be done

Well, you didnt really gave much away with his first chapter,  but have me intrigued; )

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Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Life Unexpected

Seems like charlie gets what he wanted, I just have no clue why he would want his kids to get wed...

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Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Naked Truth

So, its Edwards "fault" they're in this situation? Interesting...

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Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: The Poison

Hm....

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Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Glitches

Even more drama for Edward, am I evil if I say, good? ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Spring of lies

Such a bad place to leave it be... I hope you'll continue this story

Summary: Past Featured Story

Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96556
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2014 Updated: 31 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So the police informed Phil of Bella's whereabouts, why wasnt Renee there as well?!

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Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh no....

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Hopefully there will mostly be good times now, but of course she still has to give a testimony for what happened to put her in the hospital...

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

He's ditching a lot of school these days, that cant go over too well

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm not sure what either of these two would have done had Phil decided to take things further, but I hope Esme could have taken him down! 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I really don't want to be a party pooper, but are the missing mentions of contraception intentionally or did you just forgotten to say anything about it? 

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Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Doesn't Bella remember that Edward just makes his first experience with her too;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

:)