Reviews by mfoxee
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Very goods story dealing wit an important issue that we all shopuld be aware of. Love your characters they have depth and are very believeable and easy to relate to. Hope to have a new chapter soon.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

wow agrand father and uncle wow.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Well i guess badness must run in the family Bella was cute with her bravado.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Good chapter I don't understand why the men did not call first.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

wow she is really powerful.



Author's Response:

Yup thats my girl hehe :] next chapter coming very soon xx

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude

I understand SOME thins that are going on but nnot every thing AND I hope It becomes clear soon.



Author's Response:

well send me a pm and I shall answer any questions, plus I can post them on my blod and it may help other people who may be confused :] xx

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Like a Moth to the Flame

 

I'M EXPECTING EXCITEMENT NEXT WEEK.



Author's Response:

hehe and your going to get it xx

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

Well this turned out so difernt than it started but I am glad you  did not leave us hanging.

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A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366495
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 58: If At First

This was a really beautiful chapter and I just can't wait to get Alice's full responce.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

 

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 These clans have been around for centuries, all competing against one another, the clan who says "leave no witness" makes sure it is fulfilled.

but witness has finally servived.

NC-17 for multiple reasons sex, killing, and language. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4832 Read Count: 423
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2010 Updated: 19 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

awesome story the fight scenes were really realistic cant wait  for more.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

This story always pulls at your heart strings one way or the other.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Such a great story kind of sorry to seeit end will wait impatiently for the epilouge.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Descending into the Darkness

Ok read the whole thing today and can't agree with Bella's action she is deliberately causing others pain. I know it must of hurt to get her memories back but I would of thought she had gotten a stronger back bone after all she survived.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: leaving hatred

this is quite a story a bad Edward a fighting Bella I am hoping that in your next chapter you would have enpowered Bella more by letting her learn self defense and how to protect  herself and her children man her kid is bad and thats the one edwrd does not like ? does he take more to the ones that resemble kids him thats sick , kids can't help who they look like  are we going to have a chance to see all the times Edward gets Bella pregnant when she is away from him?



Author's Response:

yes you will. it will be in the out takes because there is alot of stuff i took out because if i would have kept going with all that stuff we wouldn't even be on bella being out of the house yet.

thnx for the review!

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward is evil very evil but I am so glad you let Bella learn to defend herself.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

why does Edward have to be so sadistic if he rally loves her why can't he show it she can't love him with the the things he's done.



Author's Response:

because if out of the blue he changes into a sweet loving husband and they live happily ever after whats the point in that. everybody rights stuff like that. my story will be something you wont expect especially the ending you will probably be pissed but i live for that lol

thnx for the review

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: tired of it

Awesome love to see Bella standing up for herself I hope nshe cives him hell he certainly never hesitated to give it to her ,

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14797
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV

jACK REALLY WENT THROUGH IT WITH  VICTORIA POOR BOY.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Great story lots of excitement and drama and mysteries Edward was about as bad as they come and Bella at times did not do things rationally but she really fought his intimidation and domination .Micheal was a very nice character and a good friend to Bella if she had listen to him she may have been better off. Kudos on Matt he's hott just perfect for Bella and the opposite of Edward .can hardly wait for a new  chapter.

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: C15 Fishing

The girl is awesome .Why are people so intolerant they always have the attitude if your not like us then something is wrong with you.



Author's Response: thanks for reading. When i was in school had alot of girls treat of this way because i was different. I didn't like the same things they did and Irina is exactly like them all. I wanted to show that throu my writing and am very glad that people can see this. Once again thanks and i hope you keep reading :)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: C12 Betting Against Alice

Great story'



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, hope you continue to take this journey with us :)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: C13 Jelous Boys

Jealous Jasper is hot'



Author's Response:

Definatly have to agree with you there! I hope you liked this chapter :)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: C18 Tattoos and Bimbos

I found that Isabella passed up to many chances to tell Jasper so that he could have warning and she was over confident in her fight with Victoria.



Author's Response:

Well yes, Isabella is only human after all, she is a slave to her emotions as well as the pressure of finding Jasper, glad you picked up on it, thanks for reviewing, next chapter is up :)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: C20 Seduction Techniques

I wonder how Jacob intends to aid the princess.



Author's Response:

you shall have to wait and see ;)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: C21 Proving Edward

YES it is good to have him back but I thought that this would be a B/J fic.



Author's Response:

I actually haven't said if this story would be a B/J or a B/E fic, that is part of the mystery, it could go either way. Thanks for your review :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268906
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Such a great story where so many emotions are in play and the little girl lost  finds out she was not rejected ,but still has all the feelings of rejection inside her . how will she cope grat tale.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

A little bit of normalcy for our girl.



Author's Response:

A bit:)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow what the heck is wrong with these kids life is to short to be choosing  to love this one or that one love every one all the time.



Author's Response:

THank you:)

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This was like two steps forward and four back .Where are all the coping skills she is suppose to be learning to deal with this situation?

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I am not to sure I like this Bella she is way to self concious and interested in whaothers think of her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144864
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Great chapter to bad Esme made herself a oest andf cause her to lose some family.The frat party was grteat what the hell is threading ?



Author's Response:

Threading is really huge in Massachusetts right now.  It's an alternative to waxing where women remove hair using intertwined pieces of thread.  I have no idea how they do it, but it works.  The ladies who do the threading usually have little kiosks set up in the malls.  However, in India, Pakistan, and the middle east--threading has been the preferred way to remove hair for centuries--at least that's what I've been told.

Esme is going to have a lot of making up to do.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This story is so funny my bladder can't be full when reading . I guess that Mike  Newton is Alice's mate and they are going to torture her from now on



Author's Response:

Mike Newton is absolutely Alice's mate.  We're going to start torturing Alice by letting the Major and Vicky interrogate her.  

 

As for your bladder, I've heard other readers tell me that Depends works great.

 

Happy New Year!  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yes to every thing and I just loved how Mike woke up it was awesome.



Author's Response:

Yes, Mike's wakeup certainly was eventful.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Really funny chapter I love how the girls conned the ool sharks.



Author's Response:

Oh, Rose and Bella are really crafty.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  More hijinx next.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG I can't stop laughing tears are running down my face the whole thing was just so funny . I agree completely with  Jasper about Carlisle and Esme 



Author's Response:

Carlisle and Esme absolutely needed to have parental boundaries set.  The fact is that they can't just waltz back into Bella's life.  J and B have also made it clear that they want to live a life separate from them by setting up their own household and by Bella choosing not to move in with them from the get go.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.   XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I think the trip was good for the couples and the family as a whole. Hard to imagine Rose looking anything but good.



Author's Response:

The trip was enlightening for both of them.  The next chapter will be filled with twists and turns.  Get ready.  

Two months without changing clothes will make even Rose look shabby.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Last thing first what Jasper did was way out of line for a man who tricked a woman into marrying him he should be proclaiming their relationship the moment that any one from the past turns up the should not get an opportunity to lay hands on him . As for the relationship between Peter and Bella and Riely I think its great . Bella must stop running from her problems but at least one of  the predictions came through.



Author's Response:

I agree with you on all counts and you'll see what I mean when I post the next chapter.  All issues will be addressed, then.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

so the next part of the reading is about to come.



Author's Response:

Oh, yes, and Carlisle is going to go crazy.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Well they certainly had fun this chapter.



Author's Response:

Well, that's what you do on vacation.  You have fun.  *wink*  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Good chapter those ladies are fun but vicious .Major Jasper is HOT!



Author's Response:

Oh, those ladies are nutty--and I include Claude in the mix.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

What is wrong with Renee what kind of mother says those things to their child she should be  shot .I hope Charlie will find out what she did and we will see fireworks .Who takes the word of some guy over their daughter.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

hey if you got any thing wrong  no problem it's fiction .Hats off to Charlie love how he handeledd renee.



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on

Happy birthday to your daughter , I had my first child when I was i9 going on twenty she was born exactly 1week from my twentieth birthday and now 22 years latr after good and bad her fther and I are still together this story is really a reminder of that time, I love Edwards little quote in the Journal 'your heart is my home sweet.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

THe hormones making that girl crazy. Not to sure i agree with them starting a relationship.



Author's Response:

hormones are a bitch.. relationship no, i think its too fast, she has an attraction to him, but at this point he is more into her, shes stubborn and holding on  to her plan she isnt ready for a serious relationship. it may seem like they are heading that way with the touching and  them being intimate... all i can say is people do alot of things caught in the moment

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

I know everyone wants to see Bell and Edward together right now but I think he is doing the right by giving her some space she needs to make her life's decission without his influence plus he is her doctor so its not appropiate,

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

It's sad that Bella's baby has a heart defect  and Edward adopting the baby is real good I don't know how Charlie is gong to take it. 

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

Well Edward sure let his declared his feelings to all this chapter.I was just picturing Bella taking off in a speed because she thought he water broke an bursting in on Edward it's kind of funny don't you think.



Author's Response:

thankyou so much for your review, i love that this chapter made some laugh cause we all needed some humor to cut the drama some

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

okay  hate that ending  the chapter was a build up to Renee return and only in the last chapter did she appear it was just to much of a cliffie.



Author's Response:

sorry for your displeasure of this chapter, i understand not everyone will enjoy this story, thankyou for your review

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength

Great chapter a good lawyer could of saved them all the hassel and tell them they had no case.

Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

Loved the pic of the baby she is so cute Edward really acted like a man in this chap but Bella was very brave in hoe she poke to Mr Newton .what Mr Newton did for Bella was wonderful.



Author's Response: thank you so much...

Adeste Fideles by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella returns home for Christmas for the first time in 5 years. Who awaits her when she arrives?

My one shot written for The Southern FanFiction Review's Countdown to Christmas.

Rated M for lemony goodness.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 2116
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Adeste Fideles

CUTE

Summary:

In this story, Bella is an orphan who has never met her parents. The only things she has from them is a golden bracelet and a box she was given on her seventeenth birthday. She also starts having strange dreams and her body is slowly changing. Then she meets the Cullens, but what are they? And what about her new friends?

Things cannot be any more confusing about Bella….or can they?

It can happen to anyone

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love and immortality
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44525 Read Count: 11284
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2011 Updated: 30 May 2011
Reviewer: mfoxee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wonderful twist in a well loved tale.