Sorry I haven't left a review until now.  It took some time to read all the chapters back to back.  Wow you really pack alot of punch in each chapter.  First of all, I have to say hands down this is the best alternate Twilight story I have read so far.  This is not something I declare easily.  Thanks to my twific addiction I have no idea how many stories I have read in the two plus years but I would venture it would be close to a 1000.  OMG, I also have to say some of these chapters are downright hilarious.  I will be reading and all of a sudden I am laughing out loud.  Seriously, my kids think I have lost my mind.  The way you wrote the characters they are believable.  This is the first story where you made even Victoria a likeable character.  The sex written is totally hot and it grabs your attention.  Alot of time when you read thses kind of situations it is written very generic and they all blend into one another.  Holy cow, you have nymphos running rampant also.  I can't wait for the next chapter even though you updated yesterday.  In case it is not obvious through this review, I effin' love this story.  Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter as always.  Yay my lazy ass is finally leaving a review.  It has been awhile.  Although this chapter was pretty tame it hit me on a personal level.  I am talking about Kylie's POV.  I wish sometimes I had an older brother, a protector.  Kylie always had two.  Now that their lives are moving in different directions I can see where she is coming from.  By being the baby of the family she was used to having all the attention.  She is in for a dose of reality.  It is hard because she was close to Dame but they are not seeing eye to eye.  And I know people will hate me for this next statement but I am gonna say it anyway.  It is not Jordan's fault.  If he is wrapped up in school work and his girlfriend and neglecting other peoples' feelings it is not her fault.  I am not very close with my brother even though he is 3 years younger than me.  I used to pass blame on his wife sometimes why he doesn't come over my house that often.  I have come to realize you cannot make anyone including a sibling make time for you if they don't want to.  Kylie needs to focus on herself and her goals for life.  It is not the Kylie show and not everything revolves around her.  Even though I do alot for my parents and my brother at the end of the day I look out for my husband and kids' needs first.  Wow I sound bitter but I am not I have come to accept life as it is.  I love your writing because you keep shit real.  Life is shit sometimes and not everything is rainbows and unicorns.  It is messy and feelings get hurt sometimes.  I love how from the beginning of Riders to now how much these three siblings have grown.  Keep up the fabulous work and I can't wait to see how you will wrap this for us in a pretty bow.

Love ya,

GemGirl Fanfiction

Hey Lexi first off I want to say I am loving this story so far and am so happy you decided to make the Storm series a trilogy.  Last chapter you threw us for a loop pairing Sonny with Maggie.  I was like wow I didn't see that coming.  He is hot and she is sweet but together they could melt ice standing next to it.  This chapter just solidified it.  Why all the hate on Sonny trying to be happy.  Hasn't he been through enough!!  He was shot at as a child and had to grow up real fast in this lifestyle.  You can say it was put on him much like Edward had it put on him when he was young as well.  Him and Katie are done...stick a fork in it.  Her comments in this chapter just showed her true colors.  She was just using him for sex plain and simple.  If she truly loved him she would cut a bitch for even looking at her man and not invite her into the apartment.  Aro needs to get his nose out of their business.  Where was he when he caught his married daughter effin' his friend's son in the office at Eclipse.  She is not a goody two shoes and is a chip off the old maternal block.  Like mother like daughter...it is sad really she could of had it all with Sonny.  Maggie may be young and innocent but she is passionate and would be loyal to Sonny.  Why would you want someone who consistently cheated on their spouse even if it was with you.  They forced her hand leaving her husband....she would have still continued going back and forth like a ping pong ball.  That is straight up nasty.  I feel it is Sonny's due time for some happiness and if Maggie makes him happy then Bella and Edward need to step up and support them and be happy for them.  They need to remember how they got together and Bella's friends and family thought she was nuts for taking off and being with Edward.  It is universal the need to love and be loved.  With that being said I can't wait to see Dame's reaction to finding out that Sonny and Maggie are together.  I wish Amelia was being genuine with her feelings.  I was really disappointed by her shadyness the last chapter.  Until the last chapter they were my favorite couple...but she just killed it.  His actions weren't any better.  If he was paying any attention to his girl he would have noticied her checking Sonny out when he wasn't looking.  I really hope she is not a mole being placed to start shit in the Cullen family.  It is starting to look that way to me.  So sad I really liked her even though she hoe'd it up on the first night.  OOPS......but then again so did Maggie and Bella as well.  I swear the Cullen men must be blessed with magical peen it made these three women put out the first night real easy.  They were dickmatized I guess.  Can't wait for the next chapter to see how things progress ****crosses fingers*** with Sonny and Maggie.  This story is the highlight of my week it makes my day when it updates.

Wow this chapter blew me away just as you promised it would!  Lauren got what was coming to her.....no one could save her she did it to herself.  Now that she is gone Katie could grow the fuck up and not be poisoned by her Mom.  Now that Dame has received closure from this nightmare he can grow and mature not just as a man but as a human being.  He needs to go back to square one and learn the basics.....basic human emotions and reactions.  This is where Amelia can prove herself is to stand by him.   No lie I used to love her character Lexi........but the last couple of chapters make me want to bitch slap her.....sorry.  As for Sonny and Maggie, I love them so much but......Sonny needs to get off the baby train for awhile.  He already has a daughter coming any day now but is so desperate to knock Maggie up.  I don't get it.......maybe he is feeling insecure and wants to establish a more permanent connection.  Sonny wake up...she married you and loves you.   Geez give the poor girl a break because she has been through so much.  As always can't wait for the next chapter even though I just finished this one.

Yay we are back to my man Sonny.  Well he is not mine....I wish.  I love him to death too bad he is a character in a story and not a figure in the real world.  Wow so I guess the honeymoon phase is over huh.  It couldn't last forever.  It can't because Sonny is not your average 9 to 5 Joe who works in an office.  He's a hustler and has to chip in his share to the thing.  Maggie has had to grow up real fast in order to keep up with him.  But in this chapter we see she is still that naive 18 year old girl with stars in her eyes.  Her expectations were unrealistic.  Maybe she didn't have the big picture of who he was when they got together but she still knew more than Bella did in the beginning.  She will grow and mature it will just take time.  She is spoiled because Sonny spoiled her rotten to make up for her parents being so cheap.  She is going to always expect things to be the way it was in the beginning.  That is why it is called the honeymoon phase.  I am glad they talked everything out and she recognized her shortcomings as well and communicated her fears to Sonny.  You don't know how much I want these two to outshine everyone because they had so much shit thrown at them.  When they rise above all this drama it will be a big FU to all the haters.  Leave the poor girl alone about the baby issue for real.  When I was 18 I was concerned about finishing high school not having babies.  I can see where she is coming from.  It seems like everyone is pressuring her to have a baby now.  I hope this doesn't become a much bigger issue than it is right now.  Hopefully things will get better from here but who knows life in the Storm series is unpredictable.  The rest of the cast of characters are hilarious.  The winner being Ed Sr.  Can't wait for the drama to unfold.  Love ya to death and the Storm Series.

Hey Lexi Gemgirl here!  Finally leaving a review....sorry I am lazy with that.  This chapter was well worth the wait.  You nailed it....every emotion you feel when you are giving birth for the first time.  You are excited in a good and bad way.  I agree with Bella telling off the doctor.  He should not have put her through that.  When you do the final scans they have a pretty good idea how big the baby is going to be.   She is petite and being her first birth it was unnecessary grief for her to be put through that.  My first birthing experience was not great at all.  I can relate to her frustration at the doctor lol.  I guessed correctly about the name.  I had a feeling she was going to name him that.  Such a beautiful chapter.  But what I love most about you as an author is the subtle little hints you dropped last chapter.  No I am not going to write my feelings on that.  You have to draw your own conclusions.  Loved this chapter so much.