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Mocked by Faith by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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For Alexia Cross and Justin McNear, things are not what they seem.  Both were born and raised in hidden, gated communities.  A place where time virtually stands still and marriages are arranged by parents before a child’s 18th birthday.

Alexia is destined to be her community’s first spinster.  In a last ditch effort, a husband is found.  The only complication?  He has no idea he has been betrothed. Will his history of dating outsiders help or hinder his relationship with his future wife?

Justin McNear searched outside his church for the woman of his dreams. Returning home after failing, he knows he needs to rectify his life and his faith. Can a woman he’s never met make him whole again?

Will this couple end up mocked by their own faith?  Follow Alexia and Justin through the trials and tribulations of finding, falling, and surviving each other's love. It’s never easy saying “I do” to someone you don’t.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 1129
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2011
Reviewer: datmomo Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Alexia Cross’ crossroads.

well, that chapter was kind of promising, so i guess, it has stopped. i literally find, those storys who have some depth and some promising original story to it,  stopped, right when i found them. That's just too sad... Maybe one time you continue writing this.



Author's Response:

No it hasn't stopped. actually quite the opposite. Its being published in its entirity by this site's publishing house. My other story Diaries of a Lonely teenager has had its name changed to Mocked by Destiny and is on pre-order as of yesterday. Whether you love him or not will be published in August of this year and it has been renamed Mocked by Faith. I hope you will check them out once the are released. Thank you so much for reading it.

you might want to see if the other orginials you have read are being published. that could very well be the case.  http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/publishinghouse/books/detail/14  tihs link is for my book but you will also beable to navigate around and search out others.

Michele Richard