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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625112
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Great chapter... I think it has Edward thinking....



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Mic

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

OH NO!!!

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Charlie and James were stupid to treat Bella the way they did if they knew Edward was watching!!

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Hmm... What's Edward have in mind??? :)

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

It's good to see that the Cullens aren't as bad as Charlie and James, but it still seems as though Carlisle might have a little of the dark side with him...

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I hope he realizes that Jasper is right!!!!  Oh, I hope :)

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Yeah!!!!!  I am so glad that Emmett and Jasper have seen the light and they are sharing it with Edward.  Hopefully, things will smooth out for Bella...

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Date: 02 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Oh no, oh no, oh no!!!!!!

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Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

Incredible first chapter

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Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

What happened to the special guardians set up to Bella through the lawyer??  Did she fall through the cracks??

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Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

So humiliating...  Poor Bella :(

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Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Can't she run away??????



Author's Response:

Please be forewarned the next 7-8 chapters are very dark and graphic and deal with abuse. I promise the story gets better and has a realistic happy ending.

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

She has to go through a whole year of this???  I can't believe Vicki went along with this!!

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

The punishment was worse than it should have been.  Is Edward just as nasty??

Why did James smirk at Emmett and Jasper's marriage??

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Who will save Bella :(  They are such pigs.  I feel Bella's hate!!

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Pure dogs marking her...

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Poor, poor Bella :(  Is there any chance that Edward could be a nice guy???

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Unbelievable!!!!

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I am so glad that Edward came to save Bella.  I can believe he beat him up, though.  James will take that out on Bella.  Can't Edward take Bella home with him now???



Author's Response:

Soon. 

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Edward, you should have listened to.  Would they have noticed what else James did??

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Maybe Edward does have a chance to really be different and get to know Bella :)



Author's Response:

Remember change doesn't happen overnight. Edward is going to screw up. He was raised to be a heartless bastard and it takes time to overcome years of raising.

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Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I think Edward is being very patient.  Carlisle is being ridiculous.  He's the next one that needs to be found out.  I'd feel sorry for Esme though...If she loves him...

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Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

His brothers are trying so hard...



Author's Response:

The lightbulb will click on soon.

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Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Kinda sad, huh??  If only Edward would wise up!!!

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Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Both Renee's and Esme's wishes have come true...

Renee got away and Esme will have Bella as a daughter in law.

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Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

I am still hoping...at least he is asking

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Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

That was nice for Bella :)

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

I am hoping that this did the trick for Edward.  I am hoping that the light bulb has finally gone on :)

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

He's getting better and better, isn't he???  Carlisle better stay out of Edward's business.  He gave her as the gift, now let Edward enjoy it!!

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Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

One step forward...two steps back.  Hang in there Bella!!

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Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Good luck Bella!!!  He's closer than you think!!!

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Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Hopefully this will be a good start for both of them!!!

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Do you think she will give up the info on Carlisle??? Or will Edward catch his father in the act???

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

Bella is such a brave girl. 

Did Carlisle pay Renee and Phil's attorney off??

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

So, so cute!!!

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Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Such a great chapter!!!  They are truly learning to trust one another :)

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Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Way to go, Edward!!!  I hate  to see what happens when Carlisle finds out!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

AWWWW :)

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Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

Looks good so far, huh?



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it!

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Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Ugly, very ugly.  Just wait till Edward sees what Carlisle's plans are.  He will definitely have the support of his brothers!!!

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Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

Perfect!!!!

Carlisle is so, so ugly.  I can't believe how evil he is!!!

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

You are doing the right thing Edward...

Poor Rose and Alice...  Maybe they can get remarried :)

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

Beautiful :) 

How about birth control??? 

They left the ice cream out... will Esme get home on time???

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

How much will Carlisle expose to Edward about his wishes???

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Who are these guests?? Bad news!!!

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Oh no! Oh no! Oh no!!!!

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Oh, so good!!  I'm so glad he told her!!!  I hope they don't try to break down her door to get to her :)

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Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Made me cry :(

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Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh no!!!  Is it Carlisle???

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Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

What a test for Edward...

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Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I was hoping Edward was her date :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672753
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bella0609 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

I'm having trouble leaving you reveiws.  I'm loving your story.  This is the first time on this website so I can't get the hang of it.  Have patience with me.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Sadly, this site isn't user friendly for authors or readers :/ It takes forever just to do review replies and whatnot. So annoying. LOL. Very happy you're enjoying it! Hope you go on to read the sequel, too. <3

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Wedding Part One

Bella's getting little bits and pieces.  I'm glad she's telling him what Alice told her so he'll get to know the 'real' her.

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

There's gonna be a lot of angst, huh?  Gonna drive me crazy, huh??

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130198
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: bella0609 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looks great so far!  Looking forward to reading.

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Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes, This Bella is totally different, isn't she??  Should be interesting...

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Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Angie know how to push her buttons :)