Reviews by Lud
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102175
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Does Bella is going on another date? Look at Bella's side, you have Edward as perto.Edward is so affectionate he loves Bella?
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella is smart, clear that Edward wants more.
Give him a chance.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward and Bella need need to talk!
If Edward is interested in Bella, it's time to be honest with her.
I think Bella will die of jealousy, taste of own medicine girl!
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2012 Title: Just my Baby Daddy

What Edward was thinking of taking Katelyn to know Bella?
I hope he put in his place.
Bella Edward so close you have, make a move girl!
How these two ended up sleeping together?
Kisses.

Summary:

 

Isabella is with her best friends Jessica and Lauren father Jasper and has been for three years.  Now they are expecting their own baby.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2251 Read Count: 1268
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2013 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved It!
A prequel would be great to see how it all started, if Jasper tried to resist
Bella, and Bella and Jasper seduced.
I totally need a prequel.
Kisses.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717459
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Big C knows that your child is up to something? Looks that way, I'm glad he gave us an option to see the very Edward.Quero family lunch.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Great chapter!!
Bella is so unpredictable in their reactions, I thought she'd be screaming, however, was making pizza.
I was worried the way Caius looked at Bella, she is the weak point of Edward.
I want to see the dinner.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

So beautiful!
These two are two children confusas.Eu think there will be a lot of mistakes on the way but they can work because they love each other.
Edward and Bella made r03;r03;a very common mistake, they kept their thoughts to themselves and wanted others to discover them, at the beginning of my marriage I was also so, I wanted something, but did not speak, and when my husband was not upset I was, thankfully this has changed, I've discovered that men need to tell you all, they are not as perceptive as women.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I'm glad they are doing better!
Bella is right to be afraid, Edward is not careful, he is comfortable with the situation and can be stuck .CJ release but if will want revenge.
I feel like Bella and Edward need to connect, this stage of pregnancy is so difficult, if they do not unite to receive the baby.
Kisses.
I can have hope for a new story?

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I feel sorry for them, they love each other, but ,who can also err!
Bella is sensitive and afraid, the two did not have time to meet, undated and are now having a child, it is very difficult!
Hopefully Edward help Bella overcome their fears and to feel loved. I love stories, everything.
Kisses.

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Poor Bella! Hide is not the best way to solve the problem, but it is difficult to accept certain problems.
I felt like punching Emmett, but most men (and even women) are thus always find that the victim caused the attack, that's disgusting.
So beautiful Bella and Bianca together ...
Great story, you're incredible!

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Carlisle is right, Bella wants to know what is the opinion of Edward, some people really are not ready to be a mother, but it is not the case
Bella, she loves babies.
Bella was in a bad place, I hope she's better.
Lex does not take please, I'm sorry to miss this story.
Kisses.

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Bella is afraid, this is normal, maybe she needs Edward say what he really wants, he can not let her take any without thinking.
I want them to be happy, they deserve.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

So good!
They really need to talk, it's a complicated situation, Bella is young and was going dificuldades.Eu hope they can work.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Little happy dance! Yes Yes Yes! They did and I'm so glad that Bella overcame isso.Eu see that the wait was worth it because it was fucking hot!
I think Alice should see that movie he's just not to you, I think Jasper is not interested in Alice.
Kisses, good weekend!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

The life we r03;r03;chose Edward is dangerous, and this unfortunately involves Bella and her son. I fear that there is a possibility to be his best man who put a mark on it, anyway Colleone delivered his own son.

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

wow! was a very strong chapter! Edward is really in the world of his father after his passos.Amei the conversation that Edward and Jasper was very necessária.Sinto for Jasper, he tried his best for Bella, but sometimes the best is not enough, but he really love and care for his sister, who now good Edward can help them.
I do not feel that CJ has the respect of his team, and at some point, CJ jealous of Edward.
Great chapter.
Tribute, sad FF have taken, but relieved to find here.
What I hate ,the way FF it treats its writers and readers, take a story with so many readers? Because FF is what?! Greatest sensurador? They are bitter and jealous harpies who pursue big stories, do not stop, please do not give them this victory.
Kisses.
Ludmila.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So real and sweet! Edward convince Bella needs to open, it needs
talk alguém.Bella is a strong person, and accept that she is a victim, it is difficult ...
I felt sorry Jasper, now he thinks he failed, but it is hard to talk to someone she wanted to protect.
Thank you for continuing.
Kisses.
Ludmila

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

So beautiful!
I have the impression that Bella hides most things Edward, hope
it does not hurt him, he loves madly.
Anxious to see how they take this relationship.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Maybe not as Bella and Edward thinks she might be expecting him to take the first step, take the initiative to Edward our girl.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

What's going on with Bella? She does not like Edward, or scared? Hope they are well.
Kisses, I love your stories, all of them.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I understand fear and confusion of Bella, and I'm glad she knows the difference between what happened between her and Edward, what happened to Jake.
I think she is willing to overcome everything, and Edward is giving time to her new position curar.Espero that Edward does not scare Bella.
The end was encouraging.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

OMG! Bella does nothing by halves.
Does Edward will believe the baby is his?
I hope he is sweet and supportive to Bella, she deserves someone to.
Reaction Edward to Rosalie was great, he is leaving Bella recovers, but of course he wants to.
Bella will cause a miscarriage? Could she handle an abortion?
I never had to make that kind of decision, I do not know if I could make that kind of decision, there are things in life that you can deal with, and others not, and really I do not know if I could, then it is the case to know what Bella can deal with a baby, being young and single, it's hard, or with an abortion.
I hope Edward is with her in any decision.
Kisses, and great story.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

OMG! They are so confused!
Edward needs to talk about their feelings for Bella.
You made my day,I love your stories, all of them.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

They will talk!
I hope Edward can react well to pregnancy, Bella is more loaded, she pretended to be good, when in fact she was not okay. Now is too much for her.
More, please

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I'm a horrible person! I read chapter 63 to the 67th without commenting, but to my defense it's your fault Lex!
You and your mad writing skills, I love this story, she is warm, funny and crazy.
I loved the fight in front of the hospital, it was crazy.
Kisses, I want more.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I'm glad they are getting better, Edward is so patient,
I want to see them going hard and hot, Edward deserves a good time.
I was happy to forgive Edward Jasper.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I hope that Edward and Bella are seguro.Eu love them so much! I feel that Edward will have great things for him, Carlisle parent trust Edward, he does not trust CJ. I need more, please?! With sugar!
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Carlisle should not play with his father, Carlisle is a large shark, he knew all that his son was up to.
I'm glad that Edward is safe, Bella could not bear to see Edward stuck, I do not.
Jasper does not seem to pay much attention to Alice, Jasper is a smart guy, I think he is more involved than it seems.
Lex kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

knew Jasper Alice and about Riley?! I understand the anger of Jasper, Alice is a little stupid if you think your boyfriend would be okay with that, I hope nothing happens to Jasper, he just does not seem to love Alice, he was almost forced to stick with it.
I'm anxious to see what Riley knows.

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Edward seems to have bitten off more than they can swallow, the way he treats Bella is bad, he may even love her, but he amendronta and not talk to her, it is terrible for a relationship.
I miss his stories, mainly Saga Storm (pouting)
I lost them all ...
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

OMG!! I do not understand Edward, I know he's become the tough guy, but I think he will be in trouble now.
I hope Jasper talk to him and make him see that he is losing Bella and her son.
Edward knows how the game is that he has to pay Rilley, otherwise he will be in trouble. I'm scared for him.

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Edward is ruining something that could be beautiful, I hoped
Jasper could make Edward look at Bella, she is pregnant, and go through it in pregnancy should be difficult, Edward is getting lonely, changing, if he does not stop going to lose Bella.

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

At the end of the pregnancy I wanted so much sex ... I do not care about
my size, it was funny because the first four months I could not even think about sex, I just sickened and slept, then I just thought about sex.
I think Bella is going into labor, these cramps
seem to start contractions.

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

The baby is coming!! Jasper and Edward go crazy.
Etam sweet Edward with Bella.

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Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Actually this is the greatest moment of our lives, but it is so scary ...
Great chapter, poor men, they can do nothing but wait, and still are desperate, my husband could not even drive ...

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I have no words, it was so beautiful.
My husband can not stay in the delivery room with me, he was so nervous that it was not funny, he could not drive, talk, nothing ... even though my delivery was quick.
I was worried for Bella, afraid that something would happen.

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Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I feel sorry for the mother of Edward, she made a mistake and ended up paying dearly, Edward's father loved him, but he loved his mother, and after what happened and everyone knowing her case with Colleone
his life was a inferno.Agora with your back as are the feelings of Colleone?

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

WOW!! Meeting Esme and Elizabeth promises, I'm looking forward to it.
I'm sorry for how the life of Edward's mother followed, fate was not kind to her.
I'm glad that Edward and Bella are having good time.
Kisses.

Black Hole by addict_writer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

New attitude. New job. New friend with benefits. What started out as casual takes on a whole new meaning when things twist and turn and sink into the abyss of reality. One big mistake changes everything.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121478 Read Count: 119277
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OMG!! Edward really picked a bad time to say
"I love you", but Bella overreacted, and now she is in so much pain.
I'm glad that they will solve all, they are great jubtos.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter amazing! They are increasingly passionate.
They see how they are attached?
I'm afraid when they break.
I'm so glad you update more often.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it!!!

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was so beautiful!
Even when they will deny that they are in love?
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I love this story!!
Bella is afraid to deliver? She is already in love with Edward, it is visible. Edward stopped resisting, he aeitou they love, and comcerteza a year together is something solid.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I miss Slob, he was so sweet.
Bella and Edward could have avoided all this if they had said that ese love.

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Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm so sorry for Slob, it is very sad to lose his friend, having to make a decision as difícil.Eu had two dogs, one as a kid, a sweet and protective shepherd, he was amazing, died of natural causes, suffered a lot, told my parents that I never wanted to other dog . I get married and win a rottweiler, his name was Teddy, and despite its size, that was what he was, sweet, obedient, intelligent, he died of cancer last year, I think is better to love and lose than never love, dogs love a sincere and selfless way.
I love to see the evolution of their relationship, past and future.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella and Edward are so funny!
This is so different from his past, when met, I'm anxious about halloween and watch them getting to know and falling in love, even without querer. I'm glad you're putting two chapters, I love this story.

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Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

The two combined costume, sure James suspects something, nothing screams more "we're a couple" than matching costumes. They are so involved with each other, they are caring and concerned, now that the two cute together, he with his hand on his face. I'm eager for more.

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Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was hot!!
Good way to end the night ... the lyrics and the music was perfect.

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Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Finally! They will get married. After all that passed, the relationship that they would not classify as dating, I would like to
see them more in their relationship hidden in its denial.
They were slow to accept that love, I'm glad they were able to make the wedding.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG!! They married, it was beautiful, I love it!
James knew all about them, they sap perfect together!
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Poor Bella! Poor Edward!
In life we make decisions and stupid we can not go behind.
The important thing is that they love and will bem.Rosalie a cow is disgusting, even in a difficult time she thinks only of his anger.
I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Great chapter!! I'd like to see Edward behaved with other guys around Bella when they were not dating.
Edward seems to be the jealous type.
I'm looking forward to Saturday.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

It was sexy, hot, sweet, all in one beautiful package ...
I would like to see more of his past in the office, I do not understand how they hide from others, they were always fucking eyes.

Summary:

Banner by Deebelle1


Summary: Professional race car driver Edward “Masen” Cullen finds something he never wanted—one day at the racetrack. Can this jaded speed demon, change the life of a girl he shouldn’t even associate with? What happens when Edward finds himself falling for a girl transitioning out of foster care and group home life? AH, rated M.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15558 Read Count: 3412
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

History sweet and beautiful! I just loved how they developed the love was slow and sweet .A cat was hilarious.
Kisses.

Examining Miss Swan by Aunt Bell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

exam

It's time for that annual exam all women hate.  To make matters worse, Bella's regular doctor is out sick.  Rescheduling is not an option.  What will she do when Dr. Tanner’s intern enters the room?  One-shot. All Human.  (Words minus ANs 7,126)

 

Banner by:  Ellie Wolf

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jared
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7040 Read Count: 2509
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2013 Updated: 28 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Annual Exam

I loved this story, she was sexy and sweet, the ending was amazing.
Great story, kisses.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story, especially the ending. 

Taking the time to login and leave a review means so much to me.  Thank you. :D

Summary:

Tile LGOR

 

Two different worlds collide, when Isabella Swan has to go undercover to investigate Jasper Whitlock. Can she keep up the lies or will her true identity be revealed? Are they both losing their grip on the reality? J/B AH


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Drama, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40407 Read Count: 6800
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter four

Bella is the male version of Jasper., That's crazy.
She actually slept with Felix? Felix will have problems with Jasper, or it is also infiltrated the police, I think it would be good if Felix was an undercover cop, after all Bella needs help.
Kisses.

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Father Edward is a monster! He wants to kill the son of envy. Edward is very intense and possessive, i love a possessiveward, but Bella is scared and needs to be protected.
I loved it, I'm eager for more. Thank you.

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Mr. Edward suffered an "accident", Edward will be the boss and need to be more cruel and hard.
I do not understand this chapter, in the previous chapter was Edward to take Bella's life, they said that the goomah was no longer in the image , and appears Bella looking happy and accepting the situation of Edward. What happened to Bella have accepted everything. I would like to see more of the relationship of Bella and Edward.
thank you.

Summary:

FWWL

He’s a famous actor and she was just a young girl living in a small town. They met fell in love, had sex, and he left her. it’s been a about 4 years since her parents have seen her, and the world has seen him out there being…himself. After his family urges him to go back to the place where this all started, he goes there. When a little girl knocks into him around town, can he really figure out what he left behind? Short Chapters. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Finding What Was Lost
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20895 Read Count: 10264
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2013 Updated: 28 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm curious about this story, but there are things that do not make sense, like Alice and Jasper are married and she is still a virgin, there are other birth control, people do not have sex just to have children, it makes no sense, Alice seems to be older than Bella, because Edward's assistant, she will only have sex to procreate? Bella and Edward meet? jumped days and did not show the meeting. What problems with James. This story has potential but things need to make sense.

Reviewer: Lud Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Alice had no right to tell Ness, it was for Bella contar.Eu am a mother and would never let my daughter sleep with a near stranger, Bella accepted Edward very easy to talk to, I would beg Edward. It makes no sense for him to go after Bella to hit and now wants nothing to do with it, is incoherent.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG!! Alice should not have left them alone, I feel it is way more babies!
I hope they are able to solve their problems, and Edward need to stop being an idiot.

Author's Response:

Dont worry :) Babies dont come until the sequel! He'll stop...eventually :) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a single father and a police officer in Rock Island, Il. His new neighbor is his boss, Mike. What happens when Edward thinks Mike is beating his wife, Bella? Can Edward help save Bella? Does Bella need to be saved? Written for Jess2002, happy birthday to our friend. AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66334 Read Count: 26445
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 19 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful story!
This story is incredibly well written, I never knew what was going on, Mike is now my hero, he was amazing with Bella, I'm glad that they were all so close. I think a person unbearable Alice, I'm glad she changed. I find it funny that I never liked the Alice books of SM, I thought Alice a little abusive.
Kisses, please keep in with incredible stories.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86203
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

They are so cute together, Bella and Carlisle are perfect together.
Renee is a horrible person, I can not feel sympathy for her. Life is about choices and Renee chose to ruin his life.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I understand that Bella is afraid, but they love each other and now she has children who depend on it. They will have many problems. Going but worth the effort.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Bella! Renee is an idiot and James seemed unfair! I hope Bella does not give up on Carlisle and the kids, they are so cute.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Bella and Carlisle! They have to face many problems, I'm glad that's worth all the suffering, love is always worth. The kids are so cute and Bella is wonderful with them, it will be an amazing mother.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I loved it, I hate Dr. Gerandy, he was very arrogant with Carlisle.
I hope everything is well.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor Bella! She has to face much prejudice, age is just a number, but people do not see that. I hope Renee has not done crazy or Bella feel guilty.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Intense chapter, I'm so sorry Bella ... end with hurt the relationship with your mother, I hope she can forgive her. Tyler and Mike are so sweet ...

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98334
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good that Bella had more freedom, but as possessive Edward sempre.Eu not understand how your brothers accept the domination of Edward, he's afraid of losing Bella for their secrets, or he loves? I think Bella will still pay the hug she gave in Jake.Eu am very anxious, more please.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Did Edward could with the old Bella?
I do not think he will hold losing control, is who he is, I just think he already dominates in so many ways, it does not need to physically abuse.
I'm eager for more.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Jaymee is in trouble?
Gtande chapter!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Alice is really crazy, I do not understand Edward leaving Bella Jasper yell that way.
Edward does not regret his actions when Bella get pregnant it will continue as physical with her? His family find it surprising your changes, but two years is really too long, they may find that she has matured, they can see the sadness in her eyes.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

WOW!! So many things in one day, Edward Bella can not be happy, he wants to dominate it all the time.
Parents may find that Bella Bella only matured, but Jake realized that Edward is bad for Bella.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Your family will find that there is something wrong, the way Edward leaves barely breathe. I have the impression that Edward is much older than Bella.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward is a rude, I imagine to live with Edward and Bella to be nasty! I want more, I know Edward possessive and rude, but I want to see at some point they going to have a good time.
Thank you,

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella! Edward is an idiot, he does not love Bella, I feel that Edward will take revenge on Bella, she really said everything was in your heart, maybe Edward understands how it is cruel to Bella.
I'm so looking forward to it.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Poor Bella, worst place to find, close to a bloodthirsty mob, but she was lucky to attract him, or he would have killed her.
I think Bella is about to explode, I hope Edward does not forbid to go to his mother.
Great story, I may be crazy, but I love a possessive Edward.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW!! Edward surprised me, I thought he was yelling and screaming, but he sabia.Eu still do not understand their relationship, but I feel that a lot will happen in their stories always happen.
I loved it!!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella's brother has a sixth sense, Edward actually
not a good person, but Talve, it is changing.
I loved their interaction with brother and niece, but I think Edward is jealous.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I want to punch Edward and Jasper, yeah I know that violence can not be solved with violence, but he is being a jerk, she said nothing, he is bipolar, can only be that.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter!! I loved their interaction in bed. Edward can be possessive, but I had only seen the aggressive side of him with Bella, now saw that he is also an insatiable lover, I hope that it does not disappoint.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad that Bella was having a good time with your family! Jesse was so sweet, I thought Edward would be crazy to know that Bella and Jake were
more than friends.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor Bella she is paying for the acts of his brothers, Edward is so gross, Bella had no blame for what happened, it was Edward and he still guilt. I was wondering when Bella's brothers would do anything to save Bella la.Edward will hide or unload their hatred of the brothers Bella? I love it.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward is really being a jerk, I would not condemn Bella for trying
escape, she has a security it does not want, that Aro was his only friend was taken and Edward mistreats and uses only sex.
I want more, I'm so greedy, I always want to read more about this
relationship suffered.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think Bella should feel like a prisoner,
Edward really loves Bella? I miss them together, I hope Edward Bella trust, but this is a long time to trust Edward.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Mark is loyal to Edward, he will not be friends with Bella as Aro, Edward is still a controller, but I do not see him taking care of Bella, it seems only control, possession, maybe he has feelings for Bella, but does not show them.
Please continue, I think the brothers Edward Bella will still take extreme measures.

Dared to Truth by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Dared to Truth banner by Christag Banners

 

Banner by Christag Banners

*Written for the Fandom4OK*

Summary: One party. One kiss. And one age-old game of Truth or Dare that... well, you'll see. Just like you already can how much I hate writing summaries.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17269 Read Count: 2412
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dared to Truth

I hate Alice, she is so ... Machiavellian, it is treacherous, Jasper must pursue Bella, Alice is just a whore. Alice no love Jasper.
Edward loves Bella, of course.
I love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23448
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Isadora Meet Isabella

I loved it! This story is so interesting, has many possibilities.
I imagine that Bella will have to earn the trust of Edward, I love oldeward. I look forward to more, do not stop, I do not think you need a BETA, the chapter was perfect. You have some programming to update? Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW! Did I hear right? Alice is a witch and Isa Bella Dora too? I love the name Isadora means gift of Isis, ie, it is a gift from the gods.
I see that Bella is trying to make everything better, I do not think she will be able to fool Alice, but Alice will help her, this family needs a makeover and Isa needs help.
I loved it more please.

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281097
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I loved this story, and I loved the imperfections of Edward and Bella and the way they complemented each other, they walked a hard road, but it sure got a better place.
Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG!! I love this chapter, you are amazing, Bella never imagined having so much power over Edward, he is addicted to Bella. Edward had to think about losing Bella to confess that need it. I'm looking forward to more. I'm following you on TWCS. Kisses, thanks.

Can't Help Falling by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

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It was only supposed to be physical outside of work. That should be easy, right? So they thought... until it wasn't anymore.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24293 Read Count: 18008
[Report This] Published: 13 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 ~ Ain't No Other Man

I understand that Edward is protecting your heart, but he was a jerk to Bella, he's hot, but dumb. Bella is suffering, I hope she can get through this, she's a pro, she can recover and go on, Bella must show that Edward lost. A handsome doctor might be interested in Bella, I'm sure Edward would go crazy.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 – Don't Know What You Got (Till It's Gone)

WOW! I believe it is not too late, he should talk to her before you lose it.
Edward should not let someone who betrayed him to end their chances of finding true love. He should show his feelings for Bella or leave it ir.Eu like this story, she is so sweet, I just feel for Bella to show up poor, she needs to be strong.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ~ I Surrender

They'll be fine! They love, Edward must overcome the betrayal and regain confidence Bella.O chapter was so emotional.
Kisses

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ Forever Tonight

That was so sweet I loved! Edward needs to regain Bella, she deserves to be loved.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 ~ Blind Faith

o / WOW!! That was sweet, I loved, I understand Edward is not ready to surrender, he will at some point, they will no longer know every hospital? I hope they mosterm all your love to others.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ I Do (Cherish You)

I just loved!! They deserved an ending so ... sweet.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: He's a coldhearted businessman who's set in his ways. He wants perfection, but doesn't see it from anyone, ever. What if he tastes the other life, will he go back and if he does will he change? AH/Rated M

Amazing banner by Deebelle1 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36855 Read Count: 9821
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved it! I think everyone should take a lesson as Edward, that would make us much better people, I thank you for your generosity in sharing their stories with us.
Kisses.