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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625046
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

What a beautiful way to end this story loved it!

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Loved this chapter update. I hope Edward has changed for good. But you never know if it was planned or not? I wonder if he will get out and go after Bella again? Or will he let her have a happy life with Matt.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Love this chapter update. This story is really heating up now. Poor Bella was probably freaked out at first. Anyway because of the pull they have towards one another it's more of a natural thing. Edward will probably flip out cause he has mated with a human. I wonder if he will be disappointed or not? Will he keep her a secret from everyone else? Can't wait to find out!



Author's Response:

Thank you=) Glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for reading and commenting. It makes us smile =)

~Jells

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

Love this story & chapter update. I am so hooked on it. I feel for Bella everyone keeps taking advantage of her she never has a choice in the matter. I hope Edward will show her kindness and free her from her current living conditions. I can't wait to see what type of plan Jasper has in mind for his big brother. Is Alice in the story as well? I wonder if she is will she be a human or a vampire?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =)

Alice will be coming up soon. =)

Thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.

~Jells

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

Can you say hot whoa. I really loved this chapter update Edward is finally giving into his feelings for Bella it's about time.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sorry about the crazy late reply.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I am so glad you posted FYW on here. I can't believe #FF?! They do this all the time it's not fair but I'm happy your back. Love this story. Between Bella and Edward I don't know who is worse emotionally?

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That's one thing I don't like about #FF just one person can complain and your out. Here's the deal this story is rated M for mature why then do they read it and complain no one forced them to read it. I think that they are jealous really. Your story is that good.

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Eyes down loved it. Love this story so much. What does Edward want? It's been like five years. I hope Bella will have a little more backbone when it comes to him not just lay there and take it from him. I really hoped he changed for the better as well.

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Loved this story but I have a very bad feeling Edward will be there. Bella needs to take a break from the both of them. Her relationship with both men will destroy someone in the end. To top everything off they are father and son that's what I am assuming here. If they are pity Bella who is stuck in the middle. Her daughter loves Carlise how can Edward compete with that his father? I really hope Edward doen't think Bella was playing a game with him.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading and commetning!

Bella is just getting back into the dating scene.  Things will be explained farther on in the story.

Hope you continue to enjoy it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Bella didn't make an inform decision regarding the two men in her life. I think she really she should have left well enough alone and stayed away from the both of them and dated other people. Edward on the other hand is acting really petty now. He is a glutton for punishement. Now he will have to see Bella all the time with his father not a ideal thing at all. He just pushed her into his fathers lap what an idiot he is! I do think that he probably fell hard for her but since he was hurt before he won't ever fight for anyone again. He is such an ass for sure. Since is mom is a slut he thinks all woman are whores. Love this chapter update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

We are going to get into Edward's head a little bit in the next few chapters or so.  I'm toying with an outtake between Edward and Carlisle.  I'll figure it out after I'm done with the current chapter that I am working on.  There is some more drama coming up and I hope you enjoy what you read.

-Lisa

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen

I think Esme is very jealous of Bella being with her ex. I wonder if she will wants her ex back? Why else would she feel threaten by Bella. You know the old saying the grass is always greener on the other side? Carlisle never became serious until now with Bella. I have a feeling that Esme will push Bella into Edward's arms by the end. Bella needs to stand up for herself and tell the old hag off. Love this chapter update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing.

You'll see in one of the out takes why Esme is so obsessed with the fact that Bella is with Carisle.  I didn't spend a great deal on the point and hope it is suttle enough to pick up on.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!!

I'm posting the first out take now!

-Lisa

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Out Take Two

Wow! No wonder Esme blew up at Bella. That truely gave me some insight on what Esme was thinking at the time. You don't know what you got til it's gone baby. I have a feeling she will try to break them up. Either to get Carisile back or to take revenge out on Bella.  Thanks for the outtake.



Author's Response:

Wait until you read the next out take.  I'm very proud of it and drafted it a few times.  If I can get through real world work I might post tonight.

Thank you for readig and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Nineteen

I loved this chapter update. I don't think Bella has true romantic feelings toward Carlisle. If she did I would be pleasantly surprised cause there relationship hasn't progressed at all. They really seem more like friends. I know he is in love with her but she listened to her daughter and stuck with him instead of giving Edward a chance. I know this is a Bella story and not cannon. So I'm waiting to see who she exactly ends up with in the end.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Bella does have romantic feelings for Carlisle.  She is just unsure of how to express them.  She had only been with one other person and they knew each other basiclly their whole lives.  The whole aspect of being with Carlisle is a different feeling and she doens't really know what to do.  She'll seek some advice from a friend in the next chapter.  We'll get inside her head.

It's not that she didnt' give Edward a chance, it's just that he was rude to her not once but twice (when she first met him and they were talking about her grades and then when she spilt the beans about knowing Carlisle and that whole thing).  Sit tight though, there will be more in the future with Edward.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  it is fun to write!  the next update will be soon.

Thanks for leaving your thoughts!

-Lisa

Summary:

Four year old Isabella Swan has recently moved to America from Australia for her father's job. It is here where she encounters the one boy who will never let her get away.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 471 Read Count: 1438
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2011 Updated: 04 Aug 2011
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

How sweet of Edward to share with Bella. When he say that Edward's sick what kind of sickness does he have? Great start love it so far.



Author's Response:

 

:) He's not "sick" per say, just has different mental functionings. :)

 

:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)

 

Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Edward's Girl

Love this chapter update. You have a really good story here don't give up. 

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)

Love this story. I can not wait for more I'm hooked.



Author's Response:

So glad you feel that way!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

Loved the start of this new story. Please keep on writing it.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked this first chapter. The next chapter will be up next week. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
~Anna-Margaret
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Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Shame

I really like the beginning of this story. Please continue to write it. I wonder what Edward did to Bella breakup with her or something? The poor man hates himself so badly for what he has done. So it sounds to me that Bella might be in a relationship I can't wait to find out what in the world happened to all of them.



Author's Response:

Thank  you! I promise more is coming soon. I'm glad you can see Edward's pain, and not just his actions.

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 64982
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am hooked on your story. I'm a B/E fan but I love the pairing of Paul and Bella. Jake is something else really why should he even care about Bella when he already imprinted on someone else. He hurt her so bad. Bella is very strong in this story which I like a lot. I don't like a weak Bella. I can't wait to see what Jacob does once he finds out about Paul being the Alpha of them all.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this story.  Jake has some lingering issues and Angela is the cause of most of them.   Paul and Bella are truly good, kind people in this story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35421
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: ooohbeee Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Our Humble Beginnings...

I'm totally hooked on this story. So now we have some insight on how Edward's fetish started wow! I wonder after she had her first baby if that's when he started acting like a baby during sex or unless he started acting like a baby before she had any children at all that's a good question.



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo