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Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141812
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Didn't she need to notify someone of her whereabouts or at least the fact that she is safe?
So Bella's the bastard child of a very influential senator. Did her mother ever marry?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

When will we get the full backstory on Tanya?
Is Emmett a military buddy?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Who is trapping whom?
Bella is Edward's very own woodland Muse!

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She may be hook on that feeling, but he is hooked on her. The total package!

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This plan to humiliate Jasper is going to backfire!
Bella's going to be unbelievably angry with Edward.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Has Edward been married? Were they expecting a baby?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So he was married..........to be discussed later, right?
I like the meddling housekeepers! Lol

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

A test just to prove that she wouldn't touch herself while waiting for him or a test to prove that she truly did want him in the ways he believed she did?
More than likely both!

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm a bit surprised that after Bella's revelation about the abuse she experienced at the hand of her ex husband James, Edward proceeded to push her issues of submission so quickly.
Let the heart begin to feel, let the mind begin to heal; for both parties involved.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Edward is losing the battle to control his own needs. Bella has truly broken him down.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well, in Bella's own naive way, she's figured out that Edward already wants her to belong to him.
This fiancé situation needs a resolution quickly.
Emmett seems to really enjoy pushing Edwards buttons. Hahaha

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wondering if Bella will be angry about the revenge tactic against Jasper? Then again, when she finds out what Jasper did with Edward's wife Tonya, she may take a swing at her half brother.
There has to be more to the story of Tanya and how easily Jasper went after her.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Lust, Love or Revenge.........Edward has found himself in a difficult place. His own thoughts cannot keep up with the desires of his heart, mind and body.
Once Bella allows Edward teach her the intensity of her own desires, will Edward ever share her with Emmett? I think not, but will Bella's desires leave him to think otherwise?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Edward has admitted he is in love with Bella but, does he realize that he is acting as a lover and not a Dom when he is teaching her the aspects of this sexual predilection?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Edward must realize that his disappointment comes from his feelings for her. His next line of thinking should be that she is still protecting herself from the abuse she took from James.
Will their next talk break through these issues they are each struggling to understand?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward, where is your hope?
Is he so broken from what happened with Tanya that he himself can not understand the difficult decision Bella needs to make at this very moment? He is in need of a partner. One that can be everything she needs as well as allow him to be everything he needs to be. His emotions are clouding that judgment. He needs as much time to reevaluate himself as she does.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Where does Jasper fit into Edward's confessions? Will the idea of revenge ever crossed his lips when he eventually reveals Jasper as his ex-close friend to Bella?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

One obstacle out of their way, two to go.
Can't wait to read how well they play together in his red room!

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

As many times as a Emmett and Edward have shared a woman, I believe Edward cannot do that with Bella due to his feelings of love for her. It would remind him of Tanya's betrayal. Possibly making him feel as though he is not enough for the woman he loves.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Don't do anything stupid Bella. For example, running back to New York to try and figure out what's happening back home.
I'd like to do more than just slap Edward up alongside the head for his stupidity.
I'm a bit uneasy with Emmett's casual approach to taking care of Bella after her first submissive experience. He was a bit too worked up for his own good after observing both Edward and Bella in full Dom/sub action. He did show an amazing amount of restraint. That may have also been out of respect for Edward as a friend.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I hope Emmett watched her leave so he can keep a close eye on her.
She ran.........there is no self preservation in that action.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad it was Edward and not her stalker.
Will Jasper appear just as Edward is attempting to explain who it was that took Tanya away from him?
Bella is forgiving but will she feel like a pawn in the game between these two ex best friends?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I fear that Jacob has found his way into Jasper's apartment. He has been laying in wait for her.
Will Edward get there in time? Or did Emmett sense something was wrong and turn around as soon as he figured it out?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

How did Emmett or Edward not hear this man, whom I think is Jasper, enter the bedroom?
Will Bella scream when she sees the pistol pointed at Edwards head?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Did James hit an artery or was it a direct hit to the bones? Bella's in shock. Edward should know how to field dress a GSW.(gun shot wound)
Does Emmett take out James?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Is Bella's blood type rare enough that a universal type-O donor couldn't assist her?
Won't the media get ahold of this and dig up something about relatives donating blood?

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Well, Jasper and Edward have made progress in their messed up friendships. I actually blame Tanya for pitting the two friends against each other as some sort of sick twisted game; where she was the prize. Glad she's gone! Edward lost not only his wife but also the chance at having a family. How very sad. Jasper on the other hand took his rejection to another level of deceit and that's just wrong. And look what revenge did for Edward.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

She can't deny him anything. Especially when she is still a bit intoxicated not only by alcohol but also by his presence.
Emmett is one smooth operator.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Introspection and acceptance were the two missing factors, sealed with forgiveness.
Here's to the start of a very long and healthy relationship.

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Command yes, but she is giving her love freely.
That is more than he could have ever hoped for in his choice of lifestyle.
To bad Emmett couldn't have found his HEA as well.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389604
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Just found your story....so far so VERY good. The pull you have created bewteen them is palpable.

Let's get back to the story and find out more about these two.



Author's Response:

Welcome to the party! Thanks for reading and reviewing! For update information, pictease, and chapter teasers, check out the blog! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

The musical Chicago comes to mind.....He had it comin'.

Go get that cheating, smooth talker and make him pay for all the lies!

Bella has some awesome wild dreams!



Author's Response:

Ha ha! That´s funny, because I´ve never seen Chicago, the movie or the musical. Lol! Yes, little Bella does have quite the naughty little dreams. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

His anger got the better of him.....he safe worded.

How will the family dinner go? I think the entire family knows Edwards obsession with Bella and expect hime to take the net six weeks to adjust to Bella being out of reach.

Will Alice tell Edward when she finds out about Jacobs infidelity?

Lets find out! Time to get back to the story.



Author's Response:

Hmmm... these are all very good questions, but unfortunately you´ll just have to wait and see! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! 


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I love the thought of Gangsta EsMom, she rockes.

Alice is soooooo cunning, almost scarry. And she now knows Bella secret fantasy before she even spilled the beans. This should be fun to read.

Better get back to the story.



Author's Response:

Isn´t the little pixie a force a nature? Yeah Esmom is my hero. Lol! Thanks for reviewing!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

He didn't safe word........had me fooled, but then his own hand performing the task to the thoughts of Bella while Tanya is denied her 'O' was perfect punishment. That Tanya is one wacked out obsessed female. Jazz had better protect Edward quick with that restraining order.

I loved the eight year old in the blue suit taking his date to McDonalds to propose. So Sweet and she still has the ring 24 yrs later. That's just as sweet. He is such a mommas boy, my favorite kind.

Glad that Esme knows his secrect obsession is Isabella.

Need to read more, back to the story.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yes, I thought the Edward and Esmom moment was priceless! Ha... I couldn´t bring myself to write a Tanya and Edward sex scene, so that seemed to be a suitable punishment. Thanks for the review!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

I agree that singing at the top of your lungs is very liberating. So is a good cathartic cry with family/friends.
TMI for Bella to see/take in, but her senses picked up on her bodys desires, interesting response to her fears.

Laughed hard at the Pee Wee's playhouse reference....Mecca Lecca High... Mecca fucking Hinny Hoe!

To Forks she goes..........

 



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for the review!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Alice with marks on her wrists, sound proof room................Bella blushing at TMI.She has no idea what she is in for. Mistress Rose testing her at the dealership, HOT!

Man to have an endless budget for Christmas would be awesome.....paintings, guitars, symphony tickets, just little trinkets to the wealthy. Just jealous I guess.

Alice is brilliant using a disposable cell phone to set up their communications. Anonimity is key. Can't wait for the actual meeting of the minds (or bodies). hehehe

Four little words....Sir, its me, pet.          

I wish!



Author's Response:

Lol! I just love your reviews, they always bring a smile to my face! Thanks for always leaving me some love!

I too wish for endless Christmas fund money! Lol!


Laterzz:)


Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Seth is adorable.

I had a feeling that Jacob would wind his way back into the picture. So......he got Leah preggers, continuted to screw anything that would let him and then married Bella without Leah knowing? He better find a way to stay and help his son through life and make amends with all parties involved. This is better than a soap opera!

Bella better keep her promise to skype with Seth.

Its definately time for some Edward and Bella banter.

Love this story!



Author's Response:

I know right, don´t you just want to pinch his little chubby cheeks! Don´t worry, Bella will keep her promise to Seth and they will only be getting closer from here on out. Sorry, but we haven´t seen the last of the douche bag, he´s going to stick around. Thanks for the all the great reviews!  You Rock Ma!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Edwards internal monologue is even funnier than Bella's.  I laughed at the image of his engorment being 'built for all weather' as if its similar to a set of steel belted tires; able to withstand the pelting rain of a cold shower.

I was wondering why Alice a earlier spoken to Bella refering to herself in the third person, but Edward stated there is no 'I' in their convestation but Bella used personal pronouns. What is the difference?

Needing more!



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

Agent Provocature......beautiful stuff!

Bold move Bella sending pics to a stranger.

Looking forward to the outtakes of Bella and Rose in the playroom.

Can't wait to read how Edward and Bella start the new year right!

Have I mentioned lately how much I like this story.(maybe that should be in third person.....you own my eyeballs thru this story).



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

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Date: 10 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Welcome Back!
I do hope life has decided not to swallow you whole and allow you to have some fun now!
I've been missing me some Domward and subElla.
You have me curious as to whom Max really is and why he is after Dr. Cullen and Miss Swan.

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Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

The sensuality that flows off of these two when they are near each other is amazing. You have built up the desires so intensely that  just by giving into their senses they are ready to explode.

His denying her the big "O" all week makes her so vulnerable to him.

Her breakdown from the intensity of their scene should have given him a clue as to her being broken.  Time for Bella to heal in the hands of her Edward.

Will they be surprised when the big reveal comes, or relieved that they have finally found each other? Looking forward to them meeting face to face.

Thanks for sharing this very intriguing story.

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

Not sure how I expected Edward to act, but he is more pissed off than I expected. Maybe that's because of the setting in which they were placed in.

Bella's immediate response to him by showing a submissive stance was brilliant; showing her determination in making this D/s relationship a reality.

Where his Edward leading her? If I were Bella all I would want to do is attack his lovely person! Let Edwards temper turn into his long awaited passion, showing her exactly what he feels.

Will Edward make his family, those in on this set up, pay for their deception?

When does he find out about the sham of a marriage?

Your little comment on stopping the story here will garner more than 100 reviews.....nice little trick to keep us dangling off the edge of the clif!

Please hurry with the next chapter.

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Thanks for the panty alert at the onset. Definitely necessary!

You are cracking me up with Bella's 'Inner Goddess" making comments like spending time on 'Dr. Domward's disco stick' to  Edward refering to his appendage as 'the Deviant' being in rare form or twitched a hey there... how are ya, at her.

Now that the cherry popping mess is out of the way let the Dom/sub sessons commence. Will they be in a  24/7 style relationship?

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the sad part is that I crack myself of and find myself laughing all alone!  Haha!  Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

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Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Happy Belated Birthday!
I celebrated my birthday yesterday, 2 days after yours. Aquarius' unite!
Could the unknown POV be James?
I have an uneasy feeling the state of the art cameras will be necessary at some point in the future to take James out!
Can't wait to read how this play date unfolds.

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Training Day...

That was worth the wait!
Unfortunately for Bella the lack of boyfriend and girlfriend time plus too much alcohol and stress at work made a bad combination. The decision to act on her physical desires over ruled her trust in her master. She will be even more devastated now that she has failed the agreement she promised to uphold.
Yet another steep learning curve in this lifestyle that Bella and Edward will use to strengthen their relationship.

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Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

Wow, soooooo good to see this fic in action again!
I'm curious as to whom Edward called. Can't remember his mentor. Please refresh my memory.

Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

I enjoyed the interaction between Bella, Rose and Alice. We all need girl time.
Will Peter reprimand Edward in front of Bella or will Charlotte be given the opportunity to introduce Benjamin to Bella at that time?
Wondering about Bella's punishments.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

The phrase of the day for this chapter seems to be 'balancing work,play and life'. Bella now has several role models in Charlotte, Sulpicia and Didyme. Edward has his mentor Peter.
From your description this new resident, Mack Jameson' is James. Bad feelings surround this meeting. Why wouldn't Edward know of a resident being placed under his tutelage?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 A Moment of Clarity...

Great fic rec's.
Was it Jacob watching them or(if I remember correctly) her ex-husband?

So happy to read an update knowing this fic is in full swing again. a86;

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Well, I guessed Esme had something to do with this mess but didn't see the Angela connection with Esme as her mother.  That one threw me for a loop!

Do we get Carlisle's perspective on how his wife has lied to him about her and her daughter all through their marriage?

Still lovin' Rose and her control of the situation.

 

side note: real life can pull the rug out from under us, so take care of each other! Get well soon Ari.



Author's Response:

Yes Esme and yah the daughter thing was sooo planned a while ago...but Ang doesnt know...

 

Esme will be next.. I havent explained to him yet... but u will find out how and why she lied this whole time

 

and thank you I will pass on ur well wishes for ari

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was reading The Love of Dominence and she recommended this story......

I'm on the edge after this first chapter. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was quite the party. Drawn to each other even while in costume. That was explosive.

Need to read more!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

This chapter was a riot.

Bella being jealous because hot guy did not sniff her......lol.

Emmett's booming laughter at the rub & tug banter, priceless. Can't wait for Rose to meet Bella.

Another weekend party, hope Eric gets his groove on. Partner swapping and they don't even know it yet.

Read on!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

What kind of cliff hanger is this...............

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

Wow, Laurant was working for someone else.....who? It couldn't be Eric? Maybe Angela?

I glad she now know it's HIM from the building.

I need to get caught up so back to the story!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

Yea they finally figured out who each other is.

Now comes the Drama.........standoff.........between wife and new love. Ben needs to get in on this action to take Ang away with him!

back to story

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

Oh what a tangled web we weave!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

I hope he knows what he is doing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Esme is a real piece of work!

Hope that Carlisle and Edward have an iron clad way of keeping Esme away from the family inheritance. Ang and Esme are sure to be up to something.......probably from the beginning threat creating the mess called his marriage.

Edward needs to get back to Bella quickly.......something about that invite to the Masquerade Ball seems off. 

I'm becoming more impatient as I type.....need part ll ASAP!

 



Author's Response:

shhhhh calm down....its all gonna be okay......u better??? alright......heres a teaser

 

 

I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.



I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.



His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.



His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.



My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.



“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.



Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…



I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”



I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Sounds as if Esme is behind all of this.

Rose is a twister with gale force winds. Glad she is on Bella and Edwards team.

Feel sorry for Angel, mixed up in this mess. Funny how a sudden change in circumstances can renew a broken bond of friendship.  How long will it last though.

Esme and Angel have a past that involves keeping Edward bound to Angela. Now that Carlisle has left everything to Edward does Esme think she can manipulate him for her benefit?



Author's Response:

Rose is a twister /w/ gale force winds that's for sure! I love writing her like this it just fits her so well. It's true though what you said about the broken bond. But we shall see how long it last.

Thank you so much BB for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

Did not need to know that about rats! So if sex is 20 times more potent than valium and rats have sex 20 times a day, why don't they seem more relaxed? Could it be that they produce too many offspring and it drives them into a frenzy?

If this story wasn't so awesome I would still be visiting your updates just to read the A/N's. Very entertaining!

DLIR - Please continue to let Ari know that her fans are sending prayers her way for the healing to continue, quickly {not just for us but for you also}.

The cliffy was not very nice you know.......

Please tell us that Eric was the one shot. I will be not so patiently waiting for the next update. Thanks.

 



Author's Response:

hahaha We try to have fun with the Authors Notes....eveyrone writes....we dont own and blah blah blah....u all know that...so we figure we share things u may not know LOL....Sorry bout the non nice cliffy...but there is a reason I stopped it there...the next part shouldnt be BPOV

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

Loved the litle prelude acting bit, you two are hilarious!

Emmett and his music.....does that song really exist?

Is Angela dead, is Carlisle OK.  If Eric was holding a gun to Bella why didn't he shoot back at Edward when he was on the ground? Where did his gun go?

Now I just have to not so patiently wait for answers.

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

Great start to peak my curiosity.

Look forward to getting to know your Edward and Bella. Nice change of setting for Edward. Am aware of a few good soldiers that have been shafted by wives while in the service of our country, sucks to loose the personal support. Most of the women have been selfserving and emotionally immature, not ready for the responsibility.

Bella seems pretty straight forward and sure of herself even if the rug has been pulled out from under her.

Thanks for sharing your creativity.



Author's Response:

I actually got the idea from a Lifetime movie-but also know of some real-life situations just like it. I agree that it is an awful thing. If you follow my writing, you'll find that I will always write a strong Bella, or at the very least, one that finds her strength. I can't stand weepy, doormat Bellas-LOL. Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cute first meeting between neighbors.

Second meeting even better....Bella, unaware, has planted thoughts by being a damsel in distress wearing only a short satin robe. hmmmm, This is getting better as I go!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I wanted thier meeting to be uniquie and just your normal neighborly thing. Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and leaving a review.  :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Funny.....Bella mentally kicking herself for not taking the oportunity to ogle the shirtless hunk of a mitary man standing in her bathroom in low slung pajama bottoms.

Convining Alice, I think we all know what she is up to!



Author's Response:

Thank you again-I know, right? How could you miss that kind of man standing in your bathroom?? Alice is working subtely behind the scenes...

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice to see Bella can hold her own and not let anyone take advantage of her, even Alice know now to back off.

Fun idea to have adults playing kids games for several days of partying.



Author's Response:

Bella isn't going to put up with anyone's crap...LOL  I wanted the party to be fun for all ages. Who wouldn't want to be able to let loose and play for a few days? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Party, day 2, sweaty quaterback glissening in the afternoon sun. Takes your breath away doesn't it! lol

2 favorite pies found, telling off Tonya, wearing HIS sweat shirt with the intoxicating smell.......priceless!

Jean shorts, tight v-neck t-shirt with hands in back pockets popping out the chest, 2 favorite pies, a beauty wearing his sweatshirt.........he's toast!

Does she keep the puppy?



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward doesn't stand a chance...Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts-I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Leave it to the puppy to put Bella in Edwards path with her nice assets on display.

Oh, they each need a Friend.....with all the benefits!

Will Emmett be in harms way with the new drug dealers?



Author's Response:

Yeah, leave it to the dog!  I wouldn't worry about Emmett...   Thank so much!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Alice is at it again.

Edward and his sweet torture.....

Glad they got all the bagage out on the table.



Author's Response:

Alice just can't leave it alone, can she? It was time for these two to stop avoiding and just let things start to evolve.  Thank you-I appreciate you reading and leaving me your thoughts!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella is gonna let her emotions and misconceptions run away with her.

Edward has no clue his is officially in the dog house.



Author's Response:

Being deceived the way she was by James, can you blame her? It is a bit silly though.  lol  Poor Eddie-guy just can't catch a break.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awe, Puppy has a name....Jake, now that is down right hilarious!

Edward just keeps on provoking the unexpected rath of Bella.  Jealousy sure make us do stupid things.



Author's Response:

I couldn't leave Jake out, could I? I love Jacob...as a dog  LOL  Us women and our emotions-sometimes I feel sorry for the guys-they never know which way is up!   Thank you. For reading, for reviewing-I love reading them.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Alice and her interfering big mouth........she know how to play with the boys heads....pun intended!

A Screaming Orgasm.......“I would love to give you one.”   Me too please!

Oh Yea, body shots.........six pack abs, tongue, drink, lick salt......Oh my, I'm a little light headed myself.



Author's Response:

You should have been in my head when I was writing it.  On second thought-no. I really liked how this chapter evolved-it ended up being nothing like the original I had planned. Thanks for reading-love the review!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

For a moment I thought that maybe Mike, her student, had left the white rose. Then when the second one showed up I thought that maybe James was stalking her; not sure though.  Hmmmmm, will have to think on this more.

Bella is such a tease to Edward letting him know that she wanted to show him her bed time apparel. He has such a vivid imagination even in his dreams.



Author's Response:

Not commenting on the roses...but the imagination is a wonderful thing, eh?   Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

What a nice get to know you kind of day.

Secrete Agent Hotness, he is all that and oh so sweet.

Need to keep reading.



Author's Response:

It was nice, wasn't it? Glad you agree. Thank you for reading and for the reviews.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What a great first date, sexy motorcycle ride, romantic Symphony/picinic in the park and then amazingly hot fully clothed sex; topped off with him asking her to stay the night, Wow.

Lovin it!



Author's Response:

Nice, huh? I'd like to go on a date like that!  LOL  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Carlisle and Esme are adorable in their outward display of how happy they are that Bella is a part of Edward's future.

Can you write a more romantic kind of guy...........pure adoration for her, can't keep his hands off her, buying her favorite flowers and jewelery, making b-day dinner. Swoon!

They are going to have difficult time being apart. Hope you make their skype dates as hot as when they are together.



Author's Response:

Perfect! I  was going for Swoon-worthy!  He is leaving and it's her birthday-he had to do something nice. Thanks for reading. I love reading your thoughts about each chapter! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

That man is beyond hot in bed.

Glad they didn't utter the words good-bye.

Hard to believe how quickly they matched up not just physically but mentally and emotionally as well.

Need to keep reading.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review-I just couldn't let them say 'goodbye'!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The flower thing again............James?

So sad Bella sleeping in his bed, in his shirt. At least she has access to his things for comfort.

He needs to concentrate on his job or he could get himself injured or worse yet his team could be put in jeopardy.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hmmm...could be...  concentrating is a difficult thing to do when you focus is split, he may need to make a decision soon. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Her stalker is getting bold.

Why didn't she tell Edward she loved him so he could respond in kind?

The anxiety is escalating, will he be home before the stalker is caught?



Author's Response:

Perhaps the stalker knows that Edward is gone? Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Who is Mike working with or for? I still think James is involved. Someone is orchestrating this plan and distracting the Cullens.

 



Author's Response:

You're close...all will be revealed soon. Thanks for taking the time to read ATH and for the reviews!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So Mike acted on his own. Way to go Jake! Quick thinking Esme and Alice.

Poor Rose and Alice, feeling responsible, hope Edward can understand that it was not their fault.

How will Bella react when she finds out Edward quit his job for her? Lucky girl.



Author's Response:

He did act on his own, but felt empowered to do so by his drug dealing. Jake is a good dog and I agree that Bella is a lucky girl! LOL  The girls will be fine.  Thank you for reading! I love your reviews, too.

Summary:

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Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hopefully you will be finishing this sequel to Lonesome Hearts?
I was just getting into the characters.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Proof

Charlie and the boys are funny together.
I think Rosalie was right on the money when she asked if the last two years of complaining was just pent up sexual frustration.
I think your wonderful is a good step towards the ILY'S.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Preposterous

Mistress,
I think your Miss Swan has a massive crush on her junior editor. Chuckling.
At some point they need to use first names when addressing each other. LOL

Must read more!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Proposal

Perfect!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

Great job bringing it full circle with the toilet paper notes.
Very swoon worthy. I loved it!

Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - The Perfection

There will always be lessons learned when loving someone.
So cute that Edward brought his girl home to meet his parents.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two

What a nobel act Edward performed by sending Bella to speak with Jacob.
I agree that there is no need to rebuild her friendship with Leah and Jacob.
That was quite the impromptu set up for the ILY'S. Enjoyable non the less.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Proposition

I don't remember who rec'd this story, but I'm glad they did.
This is going to be a fun ride.
I'm giddy with anticipation.
I need to keep reading so I can catch up to the rest of your fangirls.

Kristi

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Plumpkin

Reciting the ABC's while receiving a bj was funny. Yorkie hearing the results of Bella's efforts, hilarious!
Well it seems obvious to those around them that E&B are falling hard for each other.
How long before they get it?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The Pants

Interesting game of confession in the honor of Cinderella's shoe.
They have a very long way to go in the departments of communications and trust.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One

The foot banter on the bed with pringles was a hoot!
Hopefully Leah and Jacob's wedding will be the end of her woes and yet the beginnings of her forever with Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure

Will their follow-up discussion ne as heated as their physical gratification?
So many new conditions to discuss. How will they continue to work together?
Will they now give into the need to know each other as intimatly as they know each others bodies?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Present

Such a fine line between love and hate!
They are still learning how the heart has a way of leading them where the mind is afraid to go.
Forgiveness, another tool the heart uses to mend and build at the same time.

How will they move forward?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Progression Part Two

Lies always surface!
Bella needs to rip the bandage off quickly exposing herself for the manipulator that she believes she is. I just hope the confession prompts Edward to follow suit in divulging his part in this mixed up affair. How much damage can either of their hearts take?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - The Progression

Edward's closed off personality and arrogance will be his downfall. The collateral damage will be minimal but the two hearts involved will take a beating. Pun intended.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Prowling

Hiding a relationship is an additional emotional strain these two don't need.
Really starting to like your Jessica. She's a hot lovable mess!
The wedding should be a bit easier now.

Author's Response:

Hi bb!

Just wanted to pop in and say thank you for all your reviews and sharing your thoughts with me!  I've loved reading them!

Hope you enjoy the rest and thank you so much for the support!

xoxo

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Pick-up line

They say no more games, but every time further together it escalates into a larger version of the mixed up contractual agreement from the beginning.
Love is the underlying motivational factor, but lust is the driving force!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two

He told her before that she owed him one. I guess she paid up with that hit little bathroom scene.
Well, they made another modification to tge agreement. They are officially, mutually exclusive! This us only week one, two more to go.