Penname: Twifan1228 [Real name: Kathy Hansen
Member Since: 30 Oct 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 55yr+ old Mother/Grandmother and avid reader.  My daughter is the one who introduced SM's Twilight to me in 2009.  I loved them; couldn't read them fast enough or enough times.  I even had them on audible to listen while I worked..  Oh, yeah definitely obsessed.  I found Fan Fiction after hearing a interview with Peter Facinelli once a few years back, talking about the Twihard fans and all the stories on the internet.  I did some searches and found FanFiction.net and of course Twilighted and then TWC.  I must say I have such an addiction now, can't you tell... 


E.L. James - Fifty Shades Triology (FanFiction MOTU I & MOTU II) OMG!!!  Love "My Fifty" Just saying!  Movie coming soon, hopefully!!!!


Sylvain Reynard's Gabriel's Inferno Series (FanFiction UOEM) "Professor Emerson" he just couldn't be more tortured and sexy if he tried.   I would love to see this made into a movie as well...


These Two Highly successful Published Author's, were first FF writers!  I humbly join the Millions of fans world wide in offering my heartfelt love and good wishes for their continued success as well as love and encouragement to all those Writers/Authors who so unselfishly give of your creative minds with the use of written word.  I however am not one of the lucky who have the talent to do so, but love love love reading. 


╔══╦══╦══╗ I have been diagnosed
║╔╗║╔═╣╔╗║ with Obsessive Cullen
║╚╝║╚═╣╚╝║ Disorder put this on your
╚══╩══╩══╝ profile if you've caught it to!  


I so totally borrowed that from Shannon aka mustlovertp YUP very OCD here


I have many many favorite reads and authors:  Just a few shout outs would be



  • Robshandmonkey - love ya Drea    EEK/Shhhhhh/Taboo/  (Just on TWC)

  • SexyLexiCullen - OMG can we say MobWard QS/WS  or DoctorWard  TSOU/INI

  • CaraNo    - too flipping many to count   :-)   (Just on FF)

  • Sarges Girls - Deb and Jen  OMG can we say check out drtuno for the sexiest Mercenary on the planet

  • mustlovertp -- hot hot InkWard  a new story posted 6/15/12

  • justginger/peoplelikeus   -- Such a awesome writer!  Poeple Like Us and Hope Springs

  • Savage7289  - When Michael Sheen did the reading of Unexpected Circumstances I was enthralled.. what a story ...

  • rbsschess  - House of Hope and Be My Master Headmaster and Human Sexuality 101  - it's not just the lemons but the humor, depth of story plot all around great reads

  • lmlx8  - Diamond in the Rough  - does she ever get inside our heads and Bella and Edwards.... Louise really makes one think... 

  • littlecat358  - Unplanned Perfection and The Demons in My Dreams  (Just on FF)

  • Jenny0719  - Everything again by her is just enthralling and endearing making you read them over and over  (Just on FF)

  • JenGreen03  -  Everything she does is AWESOME (Just on FF, maybe on Twilighted)


 Again just a very small handful of over the top talented writers. Sadly more and more have left the fandom because of various reasons, I just wish to voice I appreciate everyone for their Talents regardless of where they are in the development of their abilities; cultivate that Talent!  You are all  enormously talented individuals and THIS reader/reviewer definitely appreciates everything you write...  


Please please don't be offended if your not on my list above, I love all the stories I read and review... and some I don't .... Yes, I'm also a closet perv ***giggles and chuckles at self***


Oh, I am very much Team Edward and Bella  - Love Taylor - not a fan of Jacob and Bella - but fine with those that do, just not my thing.... I love the HEA's just because I didn't have that in my marriage(s) doesn't mean I don't wish that for everyone else.... See I'm charitable....  :-)      Laters All!!!   Muah!  Kathy


FYI:  Can't wait for next months release of Cosmopolis! 


SWATH was wonderful!   Canne was such a treat if your a Robsten fan as I am... Kristen rawked the Red Carpet in that Red Dress, Geez I couldn't believe it....Rob is alway killer in a Tux...OMG!!! Heartfail! LOL!


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

wow this is getting better and better...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review my dear! :) 

I hope that it continues to get better and better for you. I have a sneaking suspicion it will! ;)

Thanks for reading! 

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

interesting to find out the real issues these two have in there pasts that turned them into the people they are now!!!!!   I'm curious about the one from GQ magazine!!!  Very good story



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review hun! :) 

I'm about to post the outtakes that will start to paint better pictures of Bella and Edward's back stories, so this should satisfy your curiousity I hope. They're going to be coming each month, one for Bella and one for Edward. I hope you like them - I'm excited to hear your thoughts! 

Thanks for being such a loyal reader! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Fine Line

well I must say I was pleasantly surprised to read Bella having a tinsy bit more than perhaps a more prudent and emotionally guarded person should have been consumingBUT I was very pleased they share this tinsy bit of personal information and that Kiss!! Well now! love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) 

LOL I think it's funny you referred to her as 'prudent and emotionally guarded'! I never thought of it that way, but the more I think back to all the times before this, she definitely puts that front up for everyone! This might be a defense mechanism, but I can't say quite yet! 

The kiss rocked me to write! I hope you like what's coming in the not-to-far future for our favorite duo! ;)

Thank you for reading! 

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: On the Edge

oh my so close ... so close.... but at the same time I know that the next morning our dear Bella is going to be in so much agony...  first from the hangover and then from regret... the pain and misery that she is going to experience once she finds out what duplicity has been at play here..but I wonder, I just wonder if perhaps it will be Edward that will be recaked with agony and regret.... hum time will tell



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :) 

So close .... SO SO close ... hehe. ;) I hope you like my latest update .... I'm excited to hear your thoughts on it! 

Edward ... is damaged. The outtakes will show more of why, but, he's been on a streak of not feeling anything for so long that he might struggle with how to handle Bella because ... perhaps ... she brings out some emotions in him. I don't wanna give away too much though! 

Thank you for reading! :)

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Slipping

oh shit!!!!!  just what I thought.... dang Jasper and his  outh.. Emmett's going to spill to Rose I presume...but perhaps I'm wrong....Ahhh hell our Bella is going to be so hurt...but, I get the possible feel or vibe if you will that when it all comes out...Edward is going to be more hurt...Bella will be more self depricating I think......Cold Edward....Cold...perhaps you  eed to u derstand that women are humans and as such have feengs....hot sex....no doubt, i,m just feeling for both Edward and Bella for I know is to come..... great story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :) 

LOL ... Jasper can't keep his lips sealed at all, for various reasons. I do believe that he might have some consequences to deal with in the future, and not only from Alice! ;) 

Emmett just might give everyone a surprise .... but I'm not telling, lol. Not yet at least. You'll see though. 

I think Edward needs to go to charm school. LOL. Sometimes it pains me to write him, but I love him so, he's really not a bad guy, which will come out in the outtakes. 

Thank you for reading and for all your support with this story! I'm glad you're still enjoying it and that you've stuck around and kept with it! 

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Surprise!

oh that was perfect....I love, loved, loved this chapter... we saw both Edward and Bella take a bit of a deep breath here and  kind of work through some very Major things, like taking it slow...but emotionally not killing each other beyond all endurance... I love how he saved the Day for the deliveries just in the nick of time....hopefully this gets him kudos with the friends.... or not...anyway, yes the next chapters should be more than interesting....

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Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Countdown

yippee!!!! Here's to a ever so happy and exciting New Year for our Couples!!!!!  Love this story

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Chicago

What a wonderful detective he was indeed!!!!   LOL!  Yum Yum Yum

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Hot Commodity

oh oh my!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Minneapolis

Yay!  Glad you made it through your class, stressful as I am sure it was, I am sure it feels even more satisfying to have it behind you, what an accomplishment.   Well I loved the chapter of course, cause I love how Edward is evolving... I hope he doesn't break Bella's heart, but that may be unavoidable when she does eventually find out.. Sad he can't move on in a more healthy way... and realize that Bella is unlike Jessica or any othe woman for that matter... Love your story....

As for Rob, so excited to see him in his Blue Gucci @ the MoMA for the NYC Premiere of Cosmopolis.... He looked very handsome the next morning as well ringing the opening Bell @ the NYSE with Cronenberg...  Love the scruff and what they are doing with the hair, sexy as usual.  Jon Stewart was fine and so was GMA - I love how he pointed out that he never got into acting to publicize his Private Life....Well said Rob.....  He is a wonderful Sexy Man with GREAT Creative Talent.... Hope all the Rob Fans continue to show their undying love and support to this wonderful "Precious & Pure of Heart" Young Man, and continue being respectful of his life, and his choices.... 

Best wishes with your endeavors Blueeyedcherry!!!  Your writing is wonderful and I'm wishing you continued support in all your writing, I need to catch up on a few of your other stories as a matter of fact.....Till next time.... Go BEC!!!!

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: We Need to Talk

well that was good....

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Seattle

that as AWWWWEEEESSSSOOOMMMEEE!  Oh, I could so see Charlie taking on the role of Robert DeNiro and saying...."Circle of Trust, Edward"..... yes, perfect.... hum....he finally told her about Jess. Hum, got to go back and read earlier chapters about Bella's past again.... ILY's were echoed between them and that was so anticipated, so very happy for them, just fearful of what will happen if she discovers "the bet" by someone else in comparisson to finding out from him personally, can not imagine the hurt she would be in for from that.    Yay! posting schedule!!!!! Love it....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Back Again

So glad someone pointed out that Rose was not the best of Friends doing that to Bella,  Yippee Love me some make up sex time to come! ,,!   Love this story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Moving On

TY for the update,  I really enjoyed Bella and Rosie's talk.   Love this storyline,  and will miss updates when you're finished,  but can always reread! 

Summary:

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This wonderful banner was made by VBFB1 Thanks so much it looks great !!

Edward a recovering sex addict and he opens a tattoo shop.

The new Artist he brings in to work with him is not what he

exspected will things work out, can he make things work,

Will love find a way.....

BETA'D BY RAH07890

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4180 Read Count: 2664
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 08 May 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow  interesting



Author's Response:

I hope you like  it and keep reading !

Summary:

Bella finds out some information before her wedding, she decides to run from her own wedding. What happens when she finds herself face to face with everything she wants, what will happen when things get mixed up. Not the best summary


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20729 Read Count: 4353
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

holy shit thatbwas unexpected.  didn't think that it was Jacob he was a cousin to, I thought more along the lines of his cousin was in the wedding party or something... jeez!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh I hope she doesn't lusten to Jackass  oh I mean Jacob  but seriously we all know that JB is just that a Jackass!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh shit she's pregnant now the question will be is it Edward's or is it going to ne that money grubbing mongrels!!!



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Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well now yes sir I think she is preggers too!!!!  Edward loves her!!!  loved the chapter.... sonsad he had to go....  get the the pharmacy sweetness!!!!



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Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

TY for the update  love this story.....Hope she tells him...I think he will be very excited to be having a baby with Bella

Summary: Past Featured Story

heart

Bella was a teacher at San Bernardino High. What started as a class project slowly becomes something more. Edward is fighting in Afghanistan when he receives a letter that will change his life. What happens when love blooms through letters?

This story has over 800 reviews on FanFiction.net!

thanks to LissyLock for the beautiful banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39298 Read Count: 47010
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 23 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

mercy that was wonderful!!!!

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

well hells bells if that wasn't an exciting turn of events....  first off REALLY Jacob you need a padded room along side Renee for the insane...  then poor Mike bless his heart.. hope that wife felt like a piece of crap..  TWINS  OMG!!!!!   how exciting

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

yippee!!! 

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow!!!  thank heavens for carlilse

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

your cute.. not the lemon we wanted... RIGHT  but it was still fine.. hope you write more stories in the future

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i knew you wouldn't let anything happen to our 1SG Cullen  or the baby for that matter  love the story

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oohhh  nooooo!!!!  love the story   yep glad Bella pressed charges and Renee is insane!!!!

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

okay lets start a fandom for getting Renee out of the picture  hateful woman  what the heck is she thinking calling her own daughter a slut and its not like Renee didn't know about the wedding  Charlie told her....  hateful  hateful woman....

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i love the way you end each chapter

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i'm just loving how this chapter played out...  but Renee is awful....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Of course I loved Edward's letter it wasnwonderful  no not oversharing there Bells good information to know...  Yes lets get that care pack right out to 1SG he needs his real licorice.. LOL  yay  Jazz is home safe and sound...but I have a feeling he will be going out once more..

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this looks very good...

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yes I'm really gonna like this... thanks for writing...  on to more chapters

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh  I love this...it's great... love that Jasper is Bella's Brother as well as the progression of the connection of all the key players, showing once more what a small world it can be... on to the next chapter...

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well done....  very sensitive, and compassionately wriiten... thank you!!!!

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

tears    tears     great  chapter

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG renee is horrible...  loved this chapter

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

what the heck did someone take her mail or is it truly a lost letter... WTF Renee, one doesn't just invite someone's ex to a home that isn't even theirs  OMG I can't believe that woman.....  love the story  thanks for this chapter

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

what a wonderful chapter... loved it   gosh I sondon't want anything to happen tp our 1SG on his night mission...  Angst....   just really love this story

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

angst is coming   i can feel it in my bones...   yay baby Cullen  on the way  that man has super sperm   lol

Ties that Bind by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen crime family has been a problem for the law officers of Chicago for over fifty years. After dozens of failed attempts to infiltrate the family, the FBI decides it's time to send in more undercover agents, Edwards and Whitlock. However, the Feds do not realize that Edwards has an agenda all of her own, which doesn't necessarily include putting a stop to the family's business.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 44260
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2011 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

TY for the update, great chapter and yes, sadly I thought that might happen.. Oh brother..... beware twins no doey the crime if you can't doey the "Cullen Style" time!!!  meaning meeting with the Twins!  Yikes~

Okay till next time!  Happy Holidays!

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Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i love the story and hated Jessica and Lauren....

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Welcome back to the story!  :-)  Missed your writing.... Interesting turn of events in the story

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG I can't believe that Jessica hass the nerve to say those things...  Yea they are having twins- how exciting! 

So intriguing!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Geez, my prayers go out to Alley-Cat on her new partner during the next two weeks, hopefully she will find some way to off her... Hahaha Just kidding...

Seriously, that was over the top when Edward finally got to talk with his Mother...

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

its very good and I look forward to more

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is sooooo good... I love My MobWard who is hot and faithful for his Bella... this sounds really interesting...haven't figured out the connection with Alice yet...

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow! that's all I can say about this chapter!!!

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

twin sister...okay I can deal with that!!    can't wait for more

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77471
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Enraptured

phew!!! fanning wildly!!!!!  LOL!!!!

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Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Memories

oh I am soooooo loving this story!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167539
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Intro

this looks good I've been meaning to read it for sometime... thanks for sharing the story

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Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: 6 Hot & Cold

each chapter is better and better...can't wait for more....

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Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: 5 Another Side

I loved this chapter...oh shit and what's the deal with his eye color??????

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Date: 25 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: 7 To Be Or Not

I love this story, so glad that your back with another chapter.  So glad to see that Edward is realizing that he can help Bella, and that he too over reacted to what happened in the interactive exhibit; Lee on the other hand is being a hard ass, and I think when she learns Bella's secret she will feel bad she has been acting this way.  Perhaps my interupation is incorrect, but I hope Lee will wise up and warm up too!  Edward is still fighting his feelings for her.  I don't personally think that it's Bella that Whit is dreaming about, I think it's Alice.....  

 

Loved the chapter, ready for more when you have it available.... have a good one.  Kathy



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kathy!  Your intuition about Lee is right!  She will warm to Bella and it won't be too many more chapters before that starts to happen.

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Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: 4 Confuse Me Mister

this is really good.. so Guppy it is

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Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: 2 Change My World

Holy Schmoly

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Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself

OMG that was hysterical!!  I was right along with Gopher and Lee and Whit; that shit was funny!!!    Guppy seriously Gopher you are just too flipping much dude  LOL

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: 13 Can't Touch This

TY for the update, as I love this story so very much.... Yes, I want to pound him in the ever loving head...  I will say that sometimes, I get very confused with his conversations with Esme....



Author's Response:

It's hard to remember that she's not really his mom sometimes because she's just so great at it!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: 16 If You Only Knew

I just can not sufficiently express what a wonderful story this is and the emotions that you envoke in the reader.....Esme is killer, Spot On!  Nothing is more poignant than the man who refuses to see...  We do know that Edward is steadfast in his refusal to open his eyes fully.... If, I understood correctly  Edward seems to think if he can just show his feelings to Bella by kissing her only, until they finish this Session/Mission/Trip then all will be well.... Yea, right....not gonna happen that way Skipper.... Just saying... LOL!  Love Whit's humor and how Lee is coming around, and honestly, seems like she gets Bella much more than Edward does....  so excited to have the next chapter to look forward too.... finally getting to Bella's story.....



Author's Response:

I agree - In many ways, Lee understands Bella better because she can see a lot of similarity in Bella and Edward's struggle to figure each other out that she personally went through with Emmett.  Lee was much more like Edward when she first met Emmett and that caused a lot of friction between them because Emmett is so laid back and ready to love people.

We are extremely excited to get the next chapter out to all of you - So much good things happen between Edward and Bella and it really changes the course of the chapters that come after it.

Summary:

*1955* Edward, a typical American youth of the fabulous fifties being ruled by his hormones, is the new kid in town. Romance/comedy/slight drama - a coming of age story with eventual E/B. AH. OOC. Rated M. EPOV


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79827 Read Count: 14895
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2011 Updated: 28 May 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Only You

that was awesome...  such gossipy kids in high school...  good for Edward.... Yay!!!! they are back together and going steady again...  Love it!!!!

On Call by Twilightobsessed09 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Working in one of the busiest ERs in Chicago, Edward and Bella are colleagues who are meant for more than just a work relationship. As they grow closer, will the past allow them to be happy or will it return to rip them apart? AH, mature themes.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46238 Read Count: 2463
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes what a tantalizing little taste!!!! lickin lips ready for more



Author's Response:

I have lots in store for this story and I hope you'll like it.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hell no she won't live up to that promise!!!! Hence the previous chapter of what's to come.... yipee!!! So Edward "Nurse Masen" wants to be a Cardio Surgeon...well he certainly is a hard worker... full time nursing job and Med school wow!!!   this is really good... going on to the next chapter  

 

I don't ever recall being the first to review a story before   ......  I'm sure I have   at some time or another, just wanted you to remember that you do have talent!!!!  :-)



Author's Response:

Yep! and thank you very much for your complimant and for being my first reviewer! I really appreciate it. I love to hear what my readers think.

No, lol! she won't live up to it.  Oh you'll see..;)

Yeah, Edward is a little overachiever but it's all with good cause. Nursing is what connects him the most to his mother as he admired her a great deal. To become a cardiac surgeon is his dream. With Med school almost over, the journey is about to get even more hectic.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

phew!!!!  relief and release along with some much needed sleep, sounds like a plan



Author's Response:

LOL! yep, a really good one.

Much more to come.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lost in a world of privilege, Bella just wants to be loved. Will Edward be able to sweep her off her feet? Or will a blast from her past shake things up? FAGE written for Claire Voilet Thorpe. MA/NC-17

Banner by Mina Rivera

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10716 Read Count: 8450
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2011 Updated: 23 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well this is fantastic, as always... your writing is always a treat and this new story does Not disappoint...Bravo!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yes yes very good, just pulls you in from the very first.... on to the next chapter... thnaks so much for writting and sharing this wonderful story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh My Gawd!  Seriously?!?!?! No, say it isn't so.... Bull puckie!!! Carlie and Renee are monsters!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well that turned out to be a Eye opening, Light brightening conversation now didn't it?!?!?!  how can some e-mail their daughter and say hey, by the way your going to marry so and so, and just be so flippant about it.. Holy shit that was something...  well at least we got to see the mongrel monster the Swans are... hmpf!!!!  Asswipes!!!   Love the story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!!

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay! I loved this Edward, I mean come on who wouldn't love him!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

well that couldn't have been more perfect!!!!  I loved that Charlie proved us all wrong in the end and wound up being sorry for how he treated his daughter and wanted to work things out.. that is just humbling, anytime some is sincere and apologetic its humbling!!   Then you add Esme and Carlilse finding one another, well that is just the Perfection that is your wonderful creative mind my dear one!!!   Well done I say, WELL DONE!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I really enjoyed reading each of your reviews:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Three days before Thanksgiving newly engaged Bella gets some surprises from her fiance Edward. What is his secret and will their relationship make it? And what happens on Thanksgiving day with his ganja loving brother meets her chief of Police Dad?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12410 Read Count: 14263
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is going to be something   all those folks and having to cook to and on a budget, well this should be good

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well now!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

holy shit what in the hell was Edward thinking by NOT telling Bella about his mother!!!! oh shit!!!

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35433
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Remembering How We Got Here...

you rock!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Enough is Enough...

i love everything you write....



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It means a lot to know that people are actually enjoying my stories!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Marriage by Treaty by Zorantha Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 167]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Prince Edward of Forks and Princess Isabella of Voltura are forced to marry as the terms of a treaty signed by their fathers to end a war between the two neighboring countries.  Edward is a spoiled, arrogant womanizer who is determined to have a marriage of convenience.  Bella is a feisty young woman from a country where the women fight beside their men making her a warrior princess.  Can Bella tame the wild Edward and make him into the man he should be or will the whole world lose out.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59923 Read Count: 51688
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2011 Updated: 12 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

really like this so far, please know your appreciated for writing

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218368
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

oh Lord Have Mercy what a chapter....that was the flippin bomb!!!!  spanking the monkey, LOL!!  Bella - is that what I did???  OMG I was doubled over laughing at that one.... see you next week...

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Omg this Rocks!   So good!  Thank You! 



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Ghosts or Goats

oh hell this was a fantastic chapter...  all of your characters are so spot on personality wise, and I just adore this Bella and Esme....OMG I was roaring with Belly gripping laughter over the whole Ghosts or Herd of Goats portion .... Geez Esme and the girls trying to catch the Nanny Goat and two kidds was hilarious....When Alice was singing to the kidds I thought I was gonna fall out of my chair....then Esme running with a lasso in her hands chasing after the momma goat was just heart stoppingly funny...I seriously couldn't breathe in portions of this chapter and oh lest we forget Momma C and her reprimmands of the boys...and her colorful choice of the F word...Oh I am so excited for the next chapter.......this keeps getting better and better each and every chapter....   Lots of love.... Kathy



Author's Response:

Hey there, Kathy

I just loved your review. So glad you loved the chapter.

I'm writing chapter 22, so stay tuned sometime this weekend.

Love, Karen 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

good..looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reviewing. Chapter 11 will be about a week I think.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Love Shack

this was wonderful!!! enjoyed it very much, and so happy to have another wonderful chapter... the American term for Peg, would be clothes pins....  I love all the detail you out into this tory and love love love your blog, it's fabulous, exquisite, and greatly appreciated...... till next time, stay safe, healthy and happy... all the best... Laters BB! Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Glad you liked the lemon chappie. Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Getting Help

Geez!!!  Poor Jasper! 



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reviewing. Jasper is okay, he just had a panic attack. It happens sometimes to the best of us.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

the last three chapters were fantastic.... Jasper spanking Alice well this Jasper reminded me of "People Like Us" character "Jasper" no not the Dom part of his personality, but the stronger and forceful, powerful in words and action Jasper....(not sure if you have read PLU or not, it's a killer story, if your offended by anything BDSM then it's definitely not your type of reading, but it's a killer story) ... I hope most people understand yhat this is a fanfic and your not trying to be overly perfect in all the details, like you say, and point our your not a surgeon or Orthopedic surgeon, but from this lay persons POV, I thought you did a killer job with all the story line, from the rescue to the bats, all the makeshift items they use and survive with... the shower scene first with Alice and Jasper was powerful you could feel the steam rolling off the words while reading...Jasper was so made at Alice for putting him and everyone in a extremely hanious position...but at the same time he was relieved she was safe...loved the spanking she got...sorry but she acted like a child with her actions and thoughts....  Esme is one powerful momma!!!!!  sorry but that final ease dropping was hiliarious...you all know it was, so thanks for that bit of humor.... oh Rosie honey, yea...no...morning sickness isn't gonna be that quick....dear lord all three of those women are gonna be big time preggers if they don't figure something out soon...maybe that's whats wrong with Alice....hummmm...  love the story and all your pictures...  Later Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thanks for your great review. Yes, I have read PLU and I loved it. I am also reading JustGinger's (aka Peoplelikeus) next story Hope Springs and I'm enjoying that thoroughly as well. Another great story is Master of the Universe. It's no longer available on fanfic websites but it has been published by TWCS in 3 volumes starting with Shades of Grey - different character names of course. If you haven't ready MOTU, then I think you would enjoy reading Shades of Grey + the next 2 volumes.

I'm so glad my words brought to life for you what I was aiming for. I wanted the reader to know just how angry Jasper is with Alice and how she tries to manipulate him. There is a reason for her behavior other than being a brat, so stay tuned in later chapters. Esme's eaves-dropping - yeah a bit funny. A few minutes later and she might have caught her son in flagrante delicto. What an eye-popping experience that would have been for Esme!

Regards, Jkazzie

 

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Moody Blues

Well I think Alice is missing her mess for either depression or Bi-Polar disorder ... which would explain a great deal honestly. Thank Heavens for Jasper's ability to communicate with his brother and Bella's easy forgiveness... Oh can not wait for more.. writer's blocks arrgghh!!! Laters BB Kathy!

Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Good guess on the meds for Alice. Thanks for sticking with me through the writers block.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Soap and Dope

I love this FF and all the great details you pit into this story is incredible.  the survival abilities this unique group has truly makes the phrase  "a dream team" very accurate. Each person has talents....  love this story and thanks so much for another chapter.....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

I'm so glad you love my story and you don't mind the detail about their survival. Everyone has hidden talents and knowledge they think is useless - until they need it that is. Think about what you could bring to the mix in a similar situation. I do all the time whilst writing this story, even if it's just an idea about what I'd be willing to attempt.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - House Calls

you did a wonderful job as always on this chapter....I just can't say enough how much I thoroughly enjoy all that you put into this story just blows me away......well done....   giggles at Edward and Jasper and the sex talk with Daddy C.....  absteninus, yea not gonna happen.... LOL!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for the compliments on chapter 20. I am so glad you enjoy my story. The research is endless. Some stuff I know, but other stuff I need to look up and it's not always that easy to find the answer I'm looking for. Sex talk with Daddy C - yeah, what a hoot! I wouldn't be practicing abstinence either if Edward Cullen was my man :)) And Emmett's reaction to the parasites - priceless!

Look out for chapter 21 by the weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - We meet again, Red

TY TY for this wonderfully written chapter..once again you blow my mind on how astute you are in your research..now who would put the detail in regards to the depth the hole needed to be....seriously and then the damn pirates are back....sheez!!!!  Yep time to make weapons.... they are looking for the treasures of the Island....right!?!?!    till next time....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yep the damn pirates are definitely going to cause trouble for the Cullens. Defensive matters and Thanksgiving is next in chapter 24, followed by more trouble courtesy of Jimmy in chapter 25.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Thanksgiving Games

Oh my heck what a chapter!  Loved it all, well with the exception of the awful Pirates but hey, we all knew this was coming again right?!  The industry that they each bring to the plate was once again pointed out very eloquently by pointed out by Carlisle during the Thanksgiving dinner. 

Your blog is AWESOME!  I love all that you put into this story.  I think I tell you each chapter and each review how much I love all that you put into this, I just can't say it enough.... **psst** (I don't tell everyone that)  Later have a great day!  Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 25.  

I'm happy you enjoyed it, and that you appreciate the blog. A lot goes into that as well - hours of work in fact, but I think it's important to provide a visual for the story.

The next couple of chapters will be nail-biting, so stay tuned for the first one in about a week.

Kind regards, Karen

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Teaser ...

oh yes pretty please!



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for your encouraging review to the chapter 27 teaser.

I hope you liked chapter 28 just as much. Look out for chapter 29 this weekend - more on Bella, Rose and Larry.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - DEFCON ONE

holy crow....at least I have the next chapter available to read now....yikes, this is so good.... ty  ty  ty for the wonderful work and detail you always provide...



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 26. Glad you avoided the cliffies.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - One down, two to go

Our Edward and Emmett were men possessed for the wrings done to their women... now where oh where is Vivi?  hum....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 28.

Edward and Emmett certainly avenged their women - god help Vivi if she tries something similar ... or worse - and she will. LOL

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Bullet

this was so good... I couldn't help but chuckle in a place ot two... poor mentally challenged Larry, he can't help it.... hum....sure am interested to find out what Viv and the Morte crew went back to Hawaii for.... and just how far away that might be...   I presume the Zodiac can't go all the way to Hawaii, perhaps not enough fuel...again...so good... okay, I'm caught up once more.....  all the best till next time...and TY for all the frequent updates...  Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 29. Yes, poor Larry - he's not quite running on a full tank (of gas) as we say in Australia. There is a reason for his condition which will come to light in future chapters. It is something that affects more people than was first realized 20 years or even a decade ago, including my nephew - who is as sweet as can be, but is easily led and sometimes in the wrong direction. He comes across as mentally challenged as well, but is quite the opposite - its a behavioral condition of the brain, rather than one of low intelligence.

More on Vivi and MORTE in upcoming chapters. Some actual answers and some theories, but there is a reason for Vivi's absence - she will be back though.

Look out for chapter 30 on the weekend.

Kind regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Question and Answer

well I rather like Larry and his "Special" ness....he's rather unexpected and you find such a desire to extend compassion to him... Mr Red, Mrs. Lady and Dr Pops....love his take on names.... now for Edward and Bella's discussion... hum... sorry Bells, but Lt. Masen has valid points....yes, she was in a very difficult situation however, Edward is still correct.... as for the Bold and the Beautiful... Esme's right Brooke was horrible.... LOL!!!!  hope you are feeling better soon and take care.... all the best  Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 30. I like Larry as well. I modelled him on my nephew who also has Asperger. I love the names he has for people as well. He assumes that the names he first hears are peoples names - it will be difficult to change his mind. Re B&B, I'm a Brooke fan - I have been since I first started watching the show way back in 1987. I was a teenager in highschool when it first started in Oz - Whoo! Where do the years go?

Look out for a marriage proposal in the next chaper and news in the AN about a ring poll I'm launching on my blog so that readers can choose their favourite wedding rings.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - North

Oh dear one - So saddened by the news of your health... Brightened somewhat knowing you are better and moved into a new location.... hope you are settled in and happy with your new place...... You were missed!!!  :-)    

 

Dear Edward, tries to be kind doesn't he, but at the same time he just gets beside himself with frustration over Larry and his innocene. He really can't help it Edward....thank heaven's they found all they did.... storms be damned, please make it back safely ....... till next time.... take care.... Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

I'm feeling much better. Thanks for your concern. New flat is great and much closer to the city only 3 kilometers (a few miles) so I can walk to and from work if I want to in about 35 minutes.

Yeah, Edward doesn't quite know what to make of Larry, but he'll get better at relating to him.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

Yay! shorter is fine, just to have them back safe at camp with the others is good in my book....  Hope all is well with you and tnat your now settled into the new place .... have a great weekend and week ahead.... all the best  Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32.

The new flat is great except I need to do some hated housework. lol

Regards, Karen

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Oh, sweet and endearing to leave me in stitches at the end, because I was laughing at Edward so hard... Hilarious Boy!  on to the date night now... TY again for posting and writing this wonderful story....  Hope your well!  Take care



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Glad you enjoyed chapter 33. Fancy forgetting to ask the girl you want to propose to out on a date! Only a man, huh?

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - The Date

That was so perfect, and what a WONDERFUL EXQUISTE RING!!!!  WELL DONE!  I loved how Larry even got in on helping with input on the meal with his scarifice of his Milo.. I really laughed that he made Edward repeat the instructions 3 times to ensure he had it down right....  How unselfish of him to share with them too! 

Edward was so endearing in this chapter, we all know what a sexy hunk he is, but sometimes we don't see this romantic tender side and given the circumstances of where they are, well it was a group effort and they certainly pulled it off....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal and loved the ring. I think it's gorgeous as well and Bella will never want a different one. I had a lot of fun with this chapter.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Just getting around to this chapter, sorry for some reason I missed out... anyway, hope you are well and life is good...the photos are wonderful as was this wonderful chapter... You once again had me laughing and crying all at the same time..... sign of a true Writing Artist!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 35 - I'm sorry my response is so late, I was busy writing chapters 36 and 37. I hope you've enjoyed them and are happy with the outcomes. Chapter 38 should be ready by next weekend. Thanks for the kudos, and compliment. I'd really like to be a published writer some day.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

this was a over the top wonderful chapter...  the entire story is beyond exceptional....like I repeatedly state, but this one, in particular is without a doubt, Fabulous.....  thanks again for writing and sharing with us....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for your great review to chapter 38.

I'm so glad you still loving the story. I appreciate your support, as always.

Regards, Jkazzie

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Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

a very Merry Christmas to you as well ... Wow, what a wonderfully written chapter..... as usual you out did yourself on the blog... loved the pictures of everything....Larry always cracks me up and how endearing he has become, he is such a real part of the Cullen family and I sure hope he gets to remains with them in the end.....Hilarious Edward breaking his nose like that.... just priceless, and so perfect in this wonderful story....  holy hell now we have the big bad guys arriving....  can't wait for the new year and more of thiz wonderful adventure........  Be safe.... Happy Holiday's



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed it, and the blog as well.

I enjoy Larry, as well. He will stay with the Cullen's.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Enjoy your New Year celebrations and happy 2013.

Regards, Jkazzie