Penname: Twifan1228 [Real name: Kathy Hansen
Member Since: 30 Oct 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I am a 55yr+ old Mother/Grandmother and avid reader.  My daughter is the one who introduced SM's Twilight to me in 2009.  I loved them; couldn't read them fast enough or enough times.  I even had them on audible to listen while I worked..  Oh, yeah definitely obsessed.  I found Fan Fiction after hearing a interview with Peter Facinelli once a few years back, talking about the Twihard fans and all the stories on the internet.  I did some searches and found FanFiction.net and of course Twilighted and then TWC.  I must say I have such an addiction now, can't you tell... 


E.L. James - Fifty Shades Triology (FanFiction MOTU I & MOTU II) OMG!!!  Love "My Fifty" Just saying!  Movie coming soon, hopefully!!!!


Sylvain Reynard's Gabriel's Inferno Series (FanFiction UOEM) "Professor Emerson" he just couldn't be more tortured and sexy if he tried.   I would love to see this made into a movie as well...


These Two Highly successful Published Author's, were first FF writers!  I humbly join the Millions of fans world wide in offering my heartfelt love and good wishes for their continued success as well as love and encouragement to all those Writers/Authors who so unselfishly give of your creative minds with the use of written word.  I however am not one of the lucky who have the talent to do so, but love love love reading. 


╔══╦══╦══╗ I have been diagnosed
║╔╗║╔═╣╔╗║ with Obsessive Cullen
║╚╝║╚═╣╚╝║ Disorder put this on your
╚══╩══╩══╝ profile if you've caught it to!  


I so totally borrowed that from Shannon aka mustlovertp YUP very OCD here


I have many many favorite reads and authors:  Just a few shout outs would be



  • Robshandmonkey - love ya Drea    EEK/Shhhhhh/Taboo/  (Just on TWC)

  • SexyLexiCullen - OMG can we say MobWard QS/WS  or DoctorWard  TSOU/INI

  • CaraNo    - too flipping many to count   :-)   (Just on FF)

  • Sarges Girls - Deb and Jen  OMG can we say check out drtuno for the sexiest Mercenary on the planet

  • mustlovertp -- hot hot InkWard  a new story posted 6/15/12

  • justginger/peoplelikeus   -- Such a awesome writer!  Poeple Like Us and Hope Springs

  • Savage7289  - When Michael Sheen did the reading of Unexpected Circumstances I was enthralled.. what a story ...

  • rbsschess  - House of Hope and Be My Master Headmaster and Human Sexuality 101  - it's not just the lemons but the humor, depth of story plot all around great reads

  • lmlx8  - Diamond in the Rough  - does she ever get inside our heads and Bella and Edwards.... Louise really makes one think... 

  • littlecat358  - Unplanned Perfection and The Demons in My Dreams  (Just on FF)

  • Jenny0719  - Everything again by her is just enthralling and endearing making you read them over and over  (Just on FF)

  • JenGreen03  -  Everything she does is AWESOME (Just on FF, maybe on Twilighted)


 Again just a very small handful of over the top talented writers. Sadly more and more have left the fandom because of various reasons, I just wish to voice I appreciate everyone for their Talents regardless of where they are in the development of their abilities; cultivate that Talent!  You are all  enormously talented individuals and THIS reader/reviewer definitely appreciates everything you write...  


Please please don't be offended if your not on my list above, I love all the stories I read and review... and some I don't .... Yes, I'm also a closet perv ***giggles and chuckles at self***


Oh, I am very much Team Edward and Bella  - Love Taylor - not a fan of Jacob and Bella - but fine with those that do, just not my thing.... I love the HEA's just because I didn't have that in my marriage(s) doesn't mean I don't wish that for everyone else.... See I'm charitable....  :-)      Laters All!!!   Muah!  Kathy


FYI:  Can't wait for next months release of Cosmopolis! 


SWATH was wonderful!   Canne was such a treat if your a Robsten fan as I am... Kristen rawked the Red Carpet in that Red Dress, Geez I couldn't believe it....Rob is alway killer in a Tux...OMG!!! Heartfail! LOL!


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Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

can't Bella catch a break here? This poor girl I declare   I love the story and very interested to see this play out.  Very nicely done too!!!

 



Author's Response:

Bella's life has been some what hetic for several yeears.  You will learn more about it in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and commetning as well as your words of encouragement!

-Lisa

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Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Holy Crow  she figured it out.... Oh, this is getting good now...Of course I love Daddy Dr C.  but I am a die hard canon pairing loving BxE ... so I am pulling for our Edward!!!  Sex on legs that he is....  Love the story!



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for reading and commetning.

It took our girl a little while, but she did figure it out.  I love my share of Edward but I feel liek Carlisle is under used a lot (he's actually my favorite charcter in the Twilight world).  I once knew where I was going with this sotry, but know, I'm not sure.  The next update shouldn't be long, maybe this weekend.

Thanks again!

-Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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To their families, Edward Masen, and Bella Volturi hate each other. Their secret relationship isn't the only thing they are hiding.

 

*Will be part of a Multi-Shot Series*

 

Rated for explicit Lemons and Violence

 

Banner by the lovely ViiolentDelight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10234 Read Count: 27923
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Behind Closed Doors

awww  I thought this might be the case!!!

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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Behind Closed Doors

dang this is just pulling me in!!! so good

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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Behind Closed Doors

love it

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74927
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well i loved this chapter... love how Roselie is working with Edward and helping Bella ..... Hey having Virgin Bella is a good thing in the story... just makes her more innocent..

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

woot woot!! we have a wedding date... I really love how Edward loves Winston too!  Bella kicks ass!!!!  I just love this couple!!!  so passionate and ready to get the salker out of there lives thats just flat out creepy... Thank you so much for this chapter.  I have to go read GTTH again, yes again buts its such a good story!!!!  TTFN  Kathy    thanks again Ms Lisa

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lots of misconceptions and misunderstandings.. the story snopsis is pretty right on...  really liking this.  Savannah is such a romantic setting.. Magnolia blossoms, carriage rides, steamy (humid) hot days and Nights.... and lots of liquid libation... Yes, this sounds yummy!!!!

thanks so much for the heads up on reading this from here vs the other site and thanks for taking the time to go through this story and critique it...

you have a wonderful style and truly write with a wonderful southern style..  I personally love it..

Later Kathy

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love how this is coming together and how he didn't know that what she wants to be is a cook.. oh I can see them having their own place, him running it and her cooking... yes yes I see this coming together.... great story

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

so good and hell ya I'm a huge PD fan go Lady and Son's!!!  now you must admit the Cullen's walking in with Bella cookin in Edward's clothes was just a little bit comical!!!!

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i must say her learning hownto give a blowjob was pretty priceless!!!!  loved the chapter!!!!

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

dang sicko Mike!!!!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

what a cute chapter.. I love the guys and the way they love and lust after their women.. Emmett was pretty funny!!! Carlilse was pretty funny!!!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh shit this isn't good... Edward and Bella re so over heels in love now this... damn, shit, triple damn.... (hum, what is a triple damn???) anyway I have to get to the next chapter....TTFN  Kathy

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

No .... I sympathize with writing this chapter... Good job!!! no worries!!!!  yes Edward needs counseling too!!! I'm surprised Carlilse didn't tell him that!!!!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes the outfits did sound just a tad bit risque, well at least Roses did...  lol!!!  yep body shots were hot!!!!!   thank Gawd they finally got back to a little more normal of a sex life...

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i'm sorry I know, and I mean I definitely know this is not funny, but seriously sometimes a person has to do what they have to do!!!!!  Poor Edward hasn't even begun to think about how he has only want sex when it was what HE wanted and When HE wanted it....  Ribbitt  ribbitt!!!!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh I loved this chapter    lots of giggles and WTF is up with Alice's fam-damily!!!!  those Rents are crazy!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well i'm just thinking that someone has to be paying for those flowers where is he getting the funds....  excited for the new business venture

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well now who knew?!?!?!  loved it...   i'm wondering if the stalkers is someone else entirely like that Dan guy.. you know the soldier, or even someone else  i'm not sure but this is really good...

Love the puppies name!?!?!?!

 

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Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ohhh how I love this story and your writing of it.. I did not figure in Eric Yorkie being the one helping sick puppy Mike!!!!

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Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well it took me sometime today to get this chapter read but it was certainly worth it... Gosh I'm so ready to see them at the shooting range... hehehehe, that was pretty priceless hearing Emmett tell about Bella's marksmanship skills! I love it.   This is such a wonderful story!!!

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Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

damn  maniac!!!!  first off can we address the bar skanks... can someone, anyone help me understand the mind of a skank???? what the hell??? the man is engaged and has not shown the least bit of interest in you three.....do the words self respect ever come to your mind?!?!?!  oh thats right skanks don't have one apparently..  Now then Yorkie!!!! Oh shit home boy is delusional poor dear guy.. you know I can almost feel some sort of compassion for the sick bastard... okay now I said almost...not that I did... dear Bella what an amazing shot you are my sweet girl.... thank Heaven's yes, thats behind you now!!!  Poor dear thought she was going to jail over this... bless her wee wittle "BIG" protective pea pickin heart!!!!!!  Oh can't wait for more.. feel doubly spoilt today not just this much desired chapter but TOAL too!!!!  thanks Lisa have wonderful Thanksgiving with the hubs and family!!!

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67318
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am reading The Journey of a Swan and love it.  This is really goos too.  Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love thii love this story

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Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Vampire is Out of the Coffin

i really like your writing   

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Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: I Smell Werewolf

gosh I love this story  now this is what SM should have written..  yes,yes  i know she couldn't..  Oh well we loved it and therefore gives you this wonderful platform to create..   on to more chapters

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Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hot shit  great stuff

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Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

now James Woods is a total prick, thank goodness Edward can here when he is around.  Love this story

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Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well that was amazing and killer.  I love how she got him to Yell You Win!!! LMAO

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Vampire Blue Balls, what a thought! Loved this chapter, Especially Bella and Emmett!

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Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am really hooked on this story, and get so excited with each new chapter.  Ewww James is horrible.. Perv!!!

Tanya coming for Spring Break ey!?  Well that should be some interesting storyline especially with Jake being present as well.

 

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Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Our kitten is going to become a Jaguar or Panther so Tanya better look out!!!!!  Love this story

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Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

here's lots of love!!!!!   grest chapter...   

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Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

What a interesting Immortal Mr Cullen's Bella truly is... What does he say about her? I think he refers to her as an amazing creature!  Yes, Yes, she is!

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can tell just from the wonderful POEM how much I'm gonna love this fanfic



Author's Response: I really enjoyed making that poem. It is going to be a fantastic ride. Keep reading...

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Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

that was just over the top hiliarious!!!!!



Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Keep reading.

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Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

gosh this is so flippin funny with all the wonder stuff that one also likes in a mushy E and B kinda way when the story isn't all angsty....   love it!!!!



Author's Response: I really hate angst...so my shit is going to be funny (pardon the french).

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Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this keeps getting better and better  please keep going...



Author's Response: I swear I chuckle constantly while I'm writing.

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Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

goog grief this is freak'n good please more chapters... please!!!!!



Author's Response: More chapters soon, was stuck a little on chapter 6, but managed to get it fixed. Will be posting by end of week.

Summary:

Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 82073
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yay!!!!!

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44804
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
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Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is such a good story!



Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!!

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Blighted (L)

Bella Bella Bella  what are you doing girl!  Can't believe you!!!! Okay Okay deep breathes here....   love the story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Sticky Situations (V)

Bella, Bella Bella

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Private (L)

Okay Bella he spelled it out, now you need to hear him and not over think this!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Mine (V)

Well lets hope he is saying NO to Bella leaving!!! and telling Jess to get out

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Christmas (L)

Holy Hell!!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Empty

what the heck   can't wait to find out why he ran!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Hurt (L)

Wow Bella Wow Girl!!!!!  You should hear him  and really listen with your heart!  and not with what you think.... he loves you girly!  You love him too!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Run (L)

Oh for pete's sake are you fucking kidding me!!!  Bella and Edward  TALK please!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Helping (V)

Yay!!!  Help has arrived

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 It Was Her (V)

OMG he left the bear and her rings under the tree with a note....  OMG

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Setteling In (V)

holy shit Tanya Denali  NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!  Leave Bella's Edward alone

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Caring (V)

Thank goodness they found her but yikes now Carlilse knows, Hummm both of them are having feelings aren't they

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 New York (V)

Awww that Million Dollar smile will get ya every time dearest One!!!!  Love this story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Something Special (V)

It's a heartwarming story in so many ways... You feel for the insecure, self reliant, unassuming Bella, and warm to the love that is growing within Edward... great Story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Discovery (V)

poor dear

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Dr. Cullen (V)

Well I agree finally shit   I was in near tears with what this Man has been through  360 degree change over Bella and she is feeling the same damn way about him.

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Note (L)

Heartbreaking Edward!!!!   kept the teddy bear!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Double (V)

Well whatever trouble Jess causes it best not be anything that willl hurt those twins!  Give them some happiness please...  yes, so happy they are back together and really together

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Presents (L)

OMG he is going to be so upset

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Jessica (V)

time for work no more reading today!!!  read the rest after work tonight!~   Hum what is Jessica up to!!! 

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Trust (V)

I guessed right at the end of the last chapter!!!!  Yea!!!!  Oh Shit Jessica!  What the Hell!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Angela (V)

she will trust him!!! I know she will!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Surprise (V)

Yea!!! to all that!!!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Checking In (V)

Oh shit, I don't like bad surprises!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Family (V)

Dang!  Can't they get some nooky before being swallowed by all the family love~~~~  LOL!!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)

Yes, of course he liked that idea... he's a smart husband that has just discovered another talent his wonderful wife possess....

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Graduation (V)

you go Bella

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Alarm (V)

Oh no what happened to our girl

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Unexpected by Vickisan

Didn't take nearly as long as I feared for him to start caring

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Married by Vickisan

Wow

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Songs of Loss (L)

Can't believe I am feeling compassion for Tori

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What Morning Brings (L)

Dang

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Promises (L)

Awesome Story!

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Night to Remember (L)

Well somtimes you have to like the characters that you have always hated... Meaning James

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Where it all began, by Lynzi

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed.  So I am now!!!!  Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ticket Out by Lynzi

Really like this story, not so much Edward's personality at this juncture of the story... but it is what it is.  Right?!

I had to come back and review, just got to chapter 12 and realized I hadn't reviewed. So I am now!!!! Great story

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 New (V)

Yes, Yes, I think she likes what she sees,,,,,

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Esme (V)

yay

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)

I can see Charlie's side too, but he did know that Edward had searched for Bella, high and low, so for him to think that Edward left Bella well that was silly on his part....

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)

Favorite lines of ALL TIME:  

If I find you standing in the middle of a room, your clothes covered in orange paint and paint all over the walls and floor with a brush in your hand and you say you didn’t do it. You didn’t do it. Agreed. Forever.”
  

That is fucking priceless

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Ours (V)

Wow!!!!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Parents (V)

Yea! have they even told her parents?  I dont think I recall that happening yet!

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Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Declared (V)

Happy Dance   Touhdown!!!  Shabang!!!!  yes!!!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 Loosing

poor Edward continually having to defend himself...  Listen up!!! Hear my words, his wife believes him loves him and totally 100% trusts and has faith in him   what would his motivation in hurting Jessica be   you silly nosey busy bodies !!!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 Forced

yes I liked that he dropped something like that to Miss gossip monger

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 Questions

well honestly I think his reactions are logical!!!  Meaning that he isn't emotionally connected to her she has after all lied about him over and over... on top of that he has tried to show compassion because of her unborn child and each time it bites him in the butt!!!!  Edward is a compassionate doctor that doesn't mean tht he should be overly emotional about someone that he knows thats neen hurt.. make sense??!!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 Happenings

Edward teuly is a compassionate doctor, wno just adores his wife love, the trust these two have in one another!!!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks

no kidding so proud of you Mrs Isabella Cullen

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 Information

come on Mike fess up with any and all information   please!!!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 Private Eye

understand about RL and the tolls it can take.. take caee of you and know that this story is LOVED...  Yes at least they know that something smells in Denmark

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 Waiting

I hate moving...and spiders...  now for the review.... Damn I hope he remembers to tell Charlie about Tori

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71Ups & Downs

smack smack  Office Lee   got that  hey officer are you friends with Tyler or something???

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 Plans

well I'll be that Bitch!!!! Tori!!!

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67 Duty

I am so glad that my opinion last chapter was just confirmed once morenwith this one.. he is a caring dr for his patients that have no voice, and the mother is the incubator for that patient.. you don't getnthe sense he doesn't care what happened to Jessica because he clearly does but at the same time its mot like he has feelimgs for her like he does for his wife..  Charlie is a honest person who will be impartial and honest...  loved the way he addressed those gossips at the hospital  he's right they should know of his compassion for hs patients at this point...

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68 Evidence

wow!!!  let Edward save that baby 

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Bonus

holy hell that was hot... okay I read some of the chapters on my android and couldn't review, but promise to go back and review those chapters...

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Lawyers

love this story

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Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Shopping

such a wonderful story