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I am a 55yr+ old Mother/Grandmother and avid reader. My daughter is the one who introduced SM's Twilight to me in 2009. I loved them; couldn't read them fast enough or enough times. I even had them on audible to listen while I worked.. Oh, yeah definitely obsessed. I found Fan Fiction after hearing a interview with Peter Facinelli once a few years back, talking about the Twihard fans and all the stories on the internet. I did some searches and found FanFiction.net and of course Twilighted and then TWC. I must say I have such an addiction now, can't you tell...
E.L. James - Fifty Shades Triology (FanFiction MOTU I & MOTU II) OMG!!! Love "My Fifty" Just saying! Movie coming soon, hopefully!!!!
Sylvain Reynard's Gabriel's Inferno Series (FanFiction UOEM) "Professor Emerson" he just couldn't be more tortured and sexy if he tried. I would love to see this made into a movie as well...
These Two Highly successful Published Author's, were first FF writers! I humbly join the Millions of fans world wide in offering my heartfelt love and good wishes for their continued success as well as love and encouragement to all those Writers/Authors who so unselfishly give of your creative minds with the use of written word. I however am not one of the lucky who have the talent to do so, but love love love reading.
╔══╦══╦══╗ I have been diagnosed
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I so totally borrowed that from Shannon aka mustlovertp YUP very OCD here
I have many many favorite reads and authors: Just a few shout outs would be
- Robshandmonkey - love ya Drea EEK/Shhhhhh/Taboo/ (Just on TWC)
- SexyLexiCullen - OMG can we say MobWard QS/WS or DoctorWard TSOU/INI
- CaraNo - too flipping many to count :-) (Just on FF)
- Sarges Girls - Deb and Jen OMG can we say check out drtuno for the sexiest Mercenary on the planet
- mustlovertp -- hot hot InkWard a new story posted 6/15/12
- justginger/peoplelikeus -- Such a awesome writer! Poeple Like Us and Hope Springs
- Savage7289 - When Michael Sheen did the reading of Unexpected Circumstances I was enthralled.. what a story ...
- rbsschess - House of Hope and Be My Master Headmaster and Human Sexuality 101 - it's not just the lemons but the humor, depth of story plot all around great reads
- lmlx8 - Diamond in the Rough - does she ever get inside our heads and Bella and Edwards.... Louise really makes one think...
- littlecat358 - Unplanned Perfection and The Demons in My Dreams (Just on FF)
- Jenny0719 - Everything again by her is just enthralling and endearing making you read them over and over (Just on FF)
- JenGreen03 - Everything she does is AWESOME (Just on FF, maybe on Twilighted)
Again just a very small handful of over the top talented writers. Sadly more and more have left the fandom because of various reasons, I just wish to voice I appreciate everyone for their Talents regardless of where they are in the development of their abilities; cultivate that Talent! You are all enormously talented individuals and THIS reader/reviewer definitely appreciates everything you write...
Please please don't be offended if your not on my list above, I love all the stories I read and review... and some I don't .... Yes, I'm also a closet perv ***giggles and chuckles at self***
Oh, I am very much Team Edward and Bella - Love Taylor - not a fan of Jacob and Bella - but fine with those that do, just not my thing.... I love the HEA's just because I didn't have that in my marriage(s) doesn't mean I don't wish that for everyone else.... See I'm charitable.... :-) Laters All!!! Muah! Kathy
FYI: Can't wait for next months release of Cosmopolis!
SWATH was wonderful! Canne was such a treat if your a Robsten fan as I am... Kristen rawked the Red Carpet in that Red Dress, Geez I couldn't believe it....Rob is alway killer in a Tux...OMG!!! Heartfail! LOL!
When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?
Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27
***on hands and knees clapping hands over and over again*** Shouting yes, Edward is going to be a Daddy!!! Now for the Drama that's going on! Humpf!! Well really, really glad she is going to be honest about this, after all what sort of example would that be for Little Bell, and she's right they will eventually find out, once your branded a liar that's it, trust is gone and well we all know the rest, but truth is this is a story so you have creative abilities, and I for one really appreciate you bringing this out in Bella, we already saw that in Edward, I think we knew that about both of them from the get go!!!
So now the story is really going to get interesting isn't it??? So much left to happen and then we have to deal with Rude and Mean Rose, don't think I have forgotten, hey I wonder if Rose had anything to do with the Ethics Panel?? Hummmm!!! Wow I just knew for sure Angela did that, but I guess that was toooooo obvious!
Okay, I will quit and say again, love the story, love your creative mind and can't wait for more updates!!! Have a good one......
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
GREAT CHAPTER ONCE MORE!!!!! But Crap!!! I'm alway on the edge of my seat reading this story!!! LOL! It was getting so good too!!!! Oh well anticipation is the name of the game! Your really a great Author and I truly enjoy this story. Edward and his OCD is a kick in the pants for me to read, you can just picture him and how he is just bouncing off the walls, so to speak, trying to figure everything out, sorry when he was in the Pharmacy was it, and he found the therm. I just couldn't help but chuckle! He is so funny!
I still think Rosalie is the one that turned Bella in to the Medical Ethics Board, but we shall see.
So glad they caught up with the wife of James, that low life having the nerve to say that about Bella to Edward! Now I don't mean to sound rude, but Aminah’s starting to really tick me off here! I know she is trying to do her job for her client, but why isnt she asking Edward for help? He could brief her on what to say, I don't know I just think she is being rude and biased against both of them. Maybe you will let her redeem herself during the hearing, but she is really setting my ears on fire here!!!
Great story and look forward to more. Thanks for your dedication to this story and keeping updated so frequently!! You Rock and Happy Holiday's to you!!!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29
Wow! That was Amazing, Awesome, Glorious, Spectacular! Just not enough adjectives to describe that!!!! Way to go detectives!!! Now goodness what on earth happened to Carlilse, I hope he's okay!?!? Please don't let it be Edward too!
Thanks for this wonderful Chapter and Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year as well!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30
Sweet!! Priceless!!! So happy that it turned out that it really was Victoria that reported Bella and not someone else like Rosealie, which I was personally fearful was the case. I'm releived it wasn't. I think Carlilse wants to offer Rose a job in the practice and that will help with things between Rose and Bella and eventually bring Rose around to liking Edward. That was a pretty sweet and logical way of dealing with the Ethics Committee and the Complaint that was filed against Bella!
Thanks so much for this latest Chapter and ready for more. Lemon times are ahead one might hope, on knees pleading and begging....will that work. Pretty Please!!!
Till next time,
Laters BB
Kathy
xoxo
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31
Okay you had me in tears throughout the entire chapter!! My heart was breaking for Little Bells Ewoord! First when they were having lunch, he just wanted to know where he was going to fit and IF she was ALL in or not, Poor Guy come on!!! we know we are all just screaming at Bella to put him out of his misery and jump his bones for petes sake!!!
Oh, and then.... (LOL!!) getting really excited here, Bella and Nessie remembering things about Jake and Nessie is drawing pics of Ewoord in the drawings that was just so precious..
That at the end was way, way cool!!! I just loved Little Bells reaction to everyone and how she told them things in her own little precious way, Oh and who couldn't love the reaction she had to her Ewoord....tears, tears, sniffle, sniffle!!!
Loved, this chapter!!! Yay!!! Jazz came back, I thought that's who called Edward at the end of Chapter30!
Understand that the story is comming to a close, really have enjoyed this very much and I hope that you see how much everyone likes you writing and will feel inspired to write more...till next update!!!
Later
Kathy xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
FanTastic Chapter, did not see the Victoria stuff coming at all...Wow this was a wonderful chapter. Priceless when Sasha showed up and discovered that Vanessa is a little girl. Love it. Wonder how Tanya will take the news of Edwards impending fatherhood, you know I am not a Tanya fan, but she really just loved him and he did just want her to find love and happiness, it would be nice to see that somehow for her.
Man I was paniced for just a minute thinking that Victoria was gonna shoot him. Can't wait to find out what the talk is going to cover.....
Till next week,
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 33
This was just such a awesome chapter, I cried through the museum portion as you know it was emotional seeing & hearing our Ewoord express himself over his mother.
I always ATTEMPT to keep in mind that this is the Author's story; however, I would love to see Tanya show up to the engagement party or whatever you have in story for Family and Friends to show up for in the Epilouges, I would love to see Edward have a peaceful closer with her and vise versa her with him. I don't think if would still be bugging me if He did not mention her in this Chapter at the Museum. It still plagues him.
I loved how he bought the house that he saw that day, it sort of stuck out in my mind as well when they were walking and talking, and he asked her blunty of her feelings and where he stood. Bless his heart, You really have a way of writing that makes the reader feel what the character are feeling. Just BRAVO and kuddos!!! Also loved how you handled the Boards ruling on Bella's Medical Lisc.
This was just a awesome story, please write others!!!! If you so feel inspired that is.
Kathy xoxo
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1
Awh!! That was very nice, I didn't think about naming the baby after Billy, sweet, nice touch. Little Bells referring to Edward being a 2-minute daddy well just proves hysterically funny because that little girl doesn't forget a thing.
Loved it too when she said to her little brother, "Momma is a Doctor and she sayeed your gonna be fine!" that was just precious and darling because you can hear the conviction in her tone and words to her little brother, Dr. Momma says it, wells it's true.. :-)
Can't wait for the next Epilogue! I also hope your going to write more stories as well.
Kathy xoxo
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
Well this just Rocked!!! Thanks for taking the time to write this and keep us all so enthralled in the story!!! Oh, who did Little Bell marry????
You rocked this FF and hope you feel inspired to do more, you have shown your Chops dearyyyyyyyy!!!!!
Bravo!!!!
Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?
This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too. Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.
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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.
This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.
By- SexyLexiCullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420890
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Take a bullet for you
Well Holy Shit!!! No you didn't end this chapter this way!!! OMG... I can't review I have to go to the next Chapter!!! Love this story!!! BTW
Kathy
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Lake George Escape
My goodness, this was down right hysterical! There were moments I could not breath from laughing at Edward and Jared over this family camping trip. Just wonderful!
Kathy
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Big Day
Okay Edwards reactions were hysterical!!! Oh BTW love that you turned Edward into a Bariatric Surgeon. Fiirst off I am a 13 yr post op and worked for my surgeons that provided the full scope of Aftercare, which was NOT as Widely done at that time, so it is pretty awesome seeing that you are bringing out the Nutrutionist and such into the story.
Then Edward's thoughts on her Vejayjay just had me rolling out with laughter, and the fact that Carlilse too thought the same thing with Esme, well that was even funnier. Hello they are both Dr's tooooooo funny... Regardless if they are Surgeons they still understand childbirth from Medical School and Interinships, so this just brought it back to the fact they are MEN behind it all.. Great writing!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
this was just outrageous and hysterical!!! Man this must have been heck to write, but loved the story so much! Very glad there is a continuation of it too! Starting to read it this weekend.
Thanks again
You Rock!!
Kathy xoxoxo
Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation. Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago.
Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!
TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34251
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: She Works Hard for the Money
First two chapters are getting my attention! Intriguing thus far!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
THanks so much for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest. It's complete, so you don't have to wait for any chapters.
Enjoy & thanks again.
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Interview
Wow!! Okay this is really interesting me even more now. Love that he had changed his name so she didn't know who he was. Crazy stalker fan, interesting that it's Victoria and not Tanya... love how your mind is working so far with the characters....
On to the next chapter!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Victoria was always a more interesting character than I thought Tanya was. In later chapters you'll probably get who I made Tanya out to be even though I don't specifically call her by name. ;-)
Thanks again for the kind review!
Enjoy. It moves pretty quickly (I think).
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Another Place to Fall
hummmm this is moving along nicely isn't it. I love a clumsy B; it just shows her as so adorable in my humble opinion. A shy E, well don't we love our shy and timid men!!! **smirking and writing***
Love the fact this is a completed story, so no waiting for the next chapter, but unfinished stories are great too you just get the anticipation thing happening... Okay 'nuff said, love the story...looking forward to the date now...
Laters Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you like it... yes, I wanted to keep Bella... well Bella, but make her more grown up and accepting of her flaws, you know?
Enjoy date night!!
Mcgt
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breathless
Well that was just absoultely perfect!!!! I'm very curious about her accident, even more so now!! Wonderful story line. I do so hope that you are desirous and feel inspired to continue on creating and writing more in the future..
I know what I like the most about this story, it's like you said ITS BELLA being BELLA and our Edward being a Human Edward, with a twist..
On with the show...next chapter
Laters Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
You are spoiling me with all your wonderful reviews. I'm glad you like it and hope you continue to.
Thanks again!!
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Beautiful Disaster
Well Hells Bells that one had to happen sooner or later right!? This is such an engrossing story... I love seeing James as a slimy character, (because the A__hat is one.)
On to the next chapter... Oh and you should be spoiled with your reviews this is a great story..
Laters Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks again! See... my cliffies aren't really cliffies when you get to go on to the next chapter right away!
You're very very sweet... you've made my whole day! So thank you.
(Oh, and at the rate you're reviewing - I may reward you with an outtake of your choice if you'd like... I'm generous like that! ha ha... I granted the last person who reviewed each of my chapters with the outtake that will be posted probably early next week. It's a little glimpse at them in High School...)
Thanks again!
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Be Gentle to Me
Well the relationship with "E" and bro "Em" is quite entertaining isn't it!?
I appreciated that Bella listened to Edward, but there must be some sort of misunderstandings with their new relationship, like Edward said, he has never had a girlfriend before so all of this is new to him.
I wasn't surprised that Daddy dearest would reveal the award infomation regarding Bella, but our Bella doesn't like to brag in the first place and in the second place...she did try and tell him, He did cut her off and they are both busy folks...
Outtake huh?! wow that would be aweeeeessssoooommmmeee.....
on to the next Chapter!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: What an Honor
Sex + Frustrated = Bella Just kidding, but no I'm not really kidding, the poor girl and her dreams....That was pretty awesome.. Well now if Edward did pick up on that little tid bit in Bellas introduction by Dr. Kostas then he will have forgotten it by now, Especially since the Stalker Fan Vic.... hummm what could she have possible done to garner such a terrified reaction???
Love the story.. As I was reading I was also thinking about your wonderfully creative ways of bringing in things from "Twilight" and in very subtle ways too I might add, as well as in ways that are not used in all Fan Fics... great job...
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Heal Over
Wow!!!! Okay wasn't expecting that to be the case with either one of them... Great storylines though.. Knew Jake had to show up sometime.
Now that is flippin funny bursting into his bedroomm.. People need to show more R-E-S-P-E-C-T !!!! Just kidding I think it serves the persons barging in right. I know they were not expecting him to have somone in his room let alone his bed, but goodness he is a grown Adult Rock Star after all.... hehehehehe
Now on to the next Chapter Baby!!!
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Birthday Wishes
That was a fantastic chapter!!! I think that the talk between Esme and Bella was wonderful. I loved the use of the picture that Edward took their Sr year and how he has been mesmerized by it all those years. Very endearing!
Okay, the lemon was wonderful just wonderful! Our sweet Edward telling her about all the things that make him love her and the idea that she could possibly think that her scars were, in his words "a deal breaker" well it was just madness, he loves her from the inside most... Looks can fade and change but the spirit and soul of a person is what one should love the most, I personally think that this was just a look into the psyche of this Bella, and that she was afraid to see the good in herself...for now anyway....
Great Story, on to the next chapter! Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Tit for Tat
MERCY!!!! What a chapter!!!! You go Bella! Poor girl going so long without being able to hear :-) I think she can safely say she can hear now!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: And so it goes...
well now!! its gonna for sure be a long 2 months. Bella needs to fly out to him every week or two!!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Lonestar
Well Crap, this is going to be pretty challenging on both of them huh!?
I can see both sides sad to say!
Next chapter here I come! Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Time after Time
Oh I likey, likey...new gig for Bella!! Yay! Now the papps did follow didn't they... Well crud-o dud-o!!! Okay got to get to the next chapter sorry no time for chatter..
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Save Me
Wow this was funny in places and heartwrenching in others.. Momma Esme is definately spoiling her 29 yr old boy, this is clear as Day!!! But that is what Moms do, so I say let her...
Victoria: Well I can see how that screwed with his brain, it would with any man, it would make them question themselves, he does have the classic case of the it was my fault type of thing, when he never asked for her psycho ways...
Great Chapter Thanks got to get to the next one..
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Many the Miles
Holy Hell Victoria is going to stalk Bella now, I guess we knew that was coming eventually Right!!! arrrggghhhh!!! and Slimy James back a few chapters ago..Yuck!
Love how you really bring out Yuck factor for them... lolololol!
On to the next Chapter!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Stop This Train
Damn Damn and Triple Damn first we have Asswipe Jacob showing out and saying all sorts of ruuudde and cruuudde and sociablly unacceptable things to Edwards Bella and then she comes home to Psycho in her house..
Is it my overactive imagination or is there something up with Garrett! hummm
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Burn it Down
OMG!!! I thought something was up with flippin Garrett!!!! He's her Father OMG!!
she was involved with sleaze bucket James! owwwww yuck,
I gotta see what happens no time for chit chat!!! sorry
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hold On
wow!!! that jake someone needs to just really beat his ass...Thank heavens that Garrett wasn't as TOTALLY awfully as we all thought, at least he did call 911 before the fire started and turned them in..
Poor Bella, makes you really hate those Rag Mags even in a Fictional story huh???
on to the next chapter!!! almost to the end. Again great great story!
Laters Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: At Last
Okay I take back what I said about Jacob, that was a pretty redeeming thing he did writing the letter and then turning his life around to help others. So that was pretty awesome. Loved this way you wrapped the story up.... It truly was wonderful you do have a talent and a gift hope you feel inspired to continue on with more in the future. Now I just need to read the Epilouge and Outtakes..
Laters Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it and hoped you enjoyed the Epilogue. I'm still waiting on my beta, but hopefully my outtake will be up in no time!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue #1
awwww I really loved this chapter and what all had transpired in their lives in the time span of 2 yrs.
Kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'
OMG can't write crying to much
kathy xoxo
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Twilight Reflected in Brown Eyes
cant wait for the outtake it will rock i feel certain!!!
Author's Response:
THank you so very much for each and every single review you left me!! I truely appreciate them all and I loved reading them in order this morning and getting your views as each chapter closed.
Thanks again and PM me if you are interested in requesting an Outtake. I'd be happy to write one just for you!
So far I have their trip to Costa Rica where they conceived Kate and one from them in High School
SO let me know if you have a thought & I'll try to write it.
Many many thanks again!!
Mcgt
Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb
wow what a chapter... what a story
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
now that was a wonderful conversation.... Kudos!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
wow... you had to feel some sort of compassion for how deluisional this woman was
"I leaned over my wife again and stroke every little inch of her face “I’ll make your pain stop…” I kissed her unmoving lips with all the love I had as I thrust the sharp needle straight into her heart..."
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"Renesmee's tiny warm hand touched my neck. She showed me the three of us in this room with me holding her and with Bella laying on the bed her thoughts shifted and re-focused on Bella, they had a questioning edge…"
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This story is a retelling of Breaking Dawn. It sticks to cannon up until Bella and Edward are back from Isle Esme, from there on it's all mine! In a way this is how I wish Breaking Dawn was written. However, the major focus of this story is on Edward and Renesmee's relationship rather than Bella's experience. So if you're a Dadward fan this story will appeal to you! (or at least I hope it will)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72115 Read Count: 11221
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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q
Teaser Trailer #2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Four - Moving Forward While Standing Still
holy shit, she's there in Az now.....yay!!!
Author's Response:
*chants* HEA, HEA, HEA ;)) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Have an awesome weekend.
~K
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254907
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
Ruh-Roh is right!!!! OMG Louise, dear we have needed a light and comical chattering chapter like this.. I love Didyme, can we keep her?!? She is a hoot! I love how she doesn't let Esme by with the avoidance of sexual talk... it was priceless... Question is Didyme a submissive too? Hell yes, with the full butter versus Margarine for the Hollandaise sauce, you go Jane....I will say hearing Didyme, Esme and Jame did make me think of Rose, Alice and Bella at the cabin....I could certainly see the parrellels between Rose and Bella's situations....with the Rents.....although Roses's mother needs her ass kicked and kicked hard...and when will Big Edward learn that always being prepared is not a bad thing... Sweet Jesus I was so happy someone needed the Advil....Holy crow now she knows the lockdown is coming... like Carlilse was preparing for earlier I fear lightening is getting ready to strike... and jolt the ever lov'n shit out of someone with that revealation.... hum..this line was perfect..."what do you mean my plans, WERE"..... using the past tense is enough to cause a few hairs to stand on end, right?!?! Next chapter is going to be something... can't wait... Laters BB Kathy
Author's Response:
Can we keep Didyme???? LOL No she is not submissive, Marcus and Her run the club Eclipes in Chicago, but they are not part of the lifestyle....she just likes sex - lol
Edwaard finds the things women do, like packing their purse full of the medicine cabinet contents and hugging eight times while saying good-bye --- strange, it's not that he's never been around women, he just never paid attention to those things...and i'm sure when he was out with his sisters & mother and needed an Advil, he never thought about what else they carried in their purse, he was just happy sone of them had what he needed...lol...
"Were" past tense...lol..that would make me stop in my tracks tooo...I would be like "What do you mean .were???" I'm sure Bella is thinking the same thing? Especailly since she is talking wit her boyfrind and nt her Dom....althought i suspect even the Master would have gotten a bit of attitute...LOL .....until next time ..louise
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Louise- No disappointments here! This was wonderful, Yes, I must admit, I was getting pretty wound up wanting to defend Master and His Girl when Leah finally outted just what her major problem was. She feared for her sister, now that is not selfish in my opinion..That is caring and loving, protective, Leah just goes about it differently than most people would. Leah can be construde as abrasive and selfish but really what we see is concern, she thought her sister was repeating patterns of isolation from family and feared Edward was physically hurting Bella....so Yeah now I can see where she was coming from.. I apologize to Leah for not giving her the benefit of the doubt..okay there I said it!!!
Some of the questions in Edwards mind regarding all of her family and friends and how protective they are towards her, in consideration to what travesties had occurred in the past, are REALLY good questions and ones I have wondered myself, but I really do think that we see Bella just hid alot from them. BUT will be curious to see if that is really all there is to what happened. Sounds like we are going to be in Forks for several Chapters and that's fine with me, this is such a great story and seems to be getting more and more attention from others. You are a wonderful Author and would love to see more stories from you in the future you definately have a fan here. If you ever publish Please take my email and let me know... I would PURCHASE your work in a heartbeat~!!!!!
Have a wonderful week. Talk with you next week. Laters BB ~ Kathy xoxoxoxoxo~
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
~Hi Louise Dear~ Excellent Chapter you knocked it out of the ballpark again... You know honestly as I was reading the bar scene and knew that it was James acosting Ms. Isabella, I knew that it would NEED to be BELLA that stood up to that Monster finally, I was never so proud of her in all my days!!!! That was perfect.
Yes, Emmett is going to be over the moon regarding the tickets and the golf date or shall we say POSSIBLE golf date, too!
What do I think of Jared!? Hum well I am not sure. I think that Yes, indeed Jared was young and was not mature enough and sometimes we do things in our youth that would never happen with maturity... But I think he has deeper regret for that time than he has revealed and he cares deeply for Bella. We do see more and more over the last 2 chapters just how isolated and alone Bella really was at times, she did hide from everyone in order to not effect others. Very much a natural submissive!!!
Love this story and love your telling of it..... You know your our very own FF rock star don't ya!!! Please have a wonderful week ahead and until next update.. stay happy and healthy and blessed in all that you do.
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
It had to be Bella ...i know that everyone wanted Edward to do it...and he still might, but Bella had to use the strength that she had found and stand up for herself....
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
Hi there Ms. Louise~ Hope the Father's in your life had a wonderful Father's Day!
Now for the story, what short term goals should Bella set... Well I would think one of them would be getting to know his Parents - more his mother more personally... I think that the lunch is one way to begin to achieve that goal. Another goal could be working on understanding her place in Edward's life (for example they discussed being together for 30 years from now) that perhaps might be more of a long term goal. Another goal might be learning to not second guess Edward or Master... I think that's human nature to second guess things though, especially with Bella's background. So I am anxious to see what you come up with for her. Your so wonderful with all this.
Secondly I loved how Rose brought the story back around to what was going on at the club, and yes, I am definitely going back to re-read the chapter where they were at the club and Bella was acosted by Jessica the Real Skank Ho! Yes, my question is going to be is the 3rd person going to be Caius or is it going to be one of Edward's EX-Submissives... I am wondering if it's not Caius... but I guess he is the natural guess.. hummm wouldn't it be something if James was involved somehow... He intimated little subtle hints about D/s lifestyle to Edward and Bella during the Forks trip, but perhaps that was just my mind thinking .... okay ready for the reaction of Edward for Bella's persumption that she could Volunteer her time and efforts without her Master's permission even though he was going to be busy, but she did not clear it with him first. So perhpas she needs to be thinking about those goals a little more DEEPER, before volunteering "HER MASTER'S Pet's" time to others......even if it's Master's family.... Then we will be having the celebration at the club and Leah's baby shower, wow we still have lots and lots to go..... so glad to think in those terms.... LOLOL!
Have a wonderful day and week ahead, Till next time, you just keep us enthralled in this story.... Loving it! Laters Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I am so totally hooked on this story. I really love your writing style and the unfolding of the story as well as the plot line. I love Aro and Jane, which is a nice change, I guess from the SM Series you just naturally hate them, also in so many other stories they are not necessarily nice people either, but here, Yep really like them. The cabin weekend where Rose and Bella are teaching Alice, LMAO seriously hysterical. One could just see the girls in the floor standing around Alice and the guys walking in on them wondering what the devil was happening. Good stuff. So glad that Bella is at Edwards right now with Seth, I just know something horrible is coming....Until your next update, can't wait.
Author's Response:
I never liked that SM turned Aro so cruel.. if I had been her I would have set him against the others on the side of the Cullens...yeah well that's just me...lml
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Wow!!! Hey what is up with Leah?? I'm getting rather concerned with her little attitude, so I guess you guys are not coming to dinner. Hello! This was a fantastic Chapter and yes, I wonder what else is coming???? Your a great author and look forward to more of the story. Keep those chapters coming pretty please and Hey! Happy Thanksgiving!!! Enjoy!!!
Author's Response:
Gald you like it and Leah has issues that will need to be resolved,,lml
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Happy Thanksgiving!!!! Thank you so much for this Chapter it really was a great one, I have to agree the last one 38 was pretty powerful, but this one really gives you a little more clue as to what was happening in Edwards mind. I love the inner action and communication with Jane and how she helps Bella so much. I just can't say it enough I really LIKE Aro and Jane in this story :-)
My concern is still with what's Leah's issue with the way she is treating Bella? Is she jealous of her? Did she feel she deserved all the bad things that happened to her? I'm just not feeling very warm and fuzzy here!!! Yeah I know funny term right!!!
Okay really looking forward to the coming Chapters as they go to Victoria and then on to Forks, as well as the Mini Vacation with the Cullen's so this should all be interesting and then we still have more to find out from the investigator...so lots more to still go, thanks for the dedication you put into this story.. Love it!!! Have fun shopping!!!
Author's Response:
I think these two need some alone time and a small vaction before heading into Forks ....Leah has issues and all I will say is she is not a double agent...
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Great Chapter!! You never disappoint me in your content, thoughts, creativity and wonderful detail to our little couples "Usual activities" and "Other times" I just love the growth you showed in Bella and Edward in this chapter, first off that Bella thought of the lack of exercise and how that was in violation of the contract, and then she confessed prior to being asked about it, so that was handled wonderfully.
Yes, Leah is still bothering me, but I know that will be coming in future chapters, so I'm hanging in there in anticipation and trying to see if I can guess.. "**she chuckles to herself**" I'm thinking that perhaps Bella should have reset her codes on her alarm, but it sounds like she did take quite a bit of her important documents and so forth so perhaps all will be okay....
Dinner with Aro and his slave Jane Hey!! That's wonderful, since I really like them.
Looking forward to more of this story. On another note "can't wait for my Eclipse DVD this weekend!!!!"
Have a great week!!!
Author's Response:
Bella is growing ... Leah has issues that will be coming out ...soon...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml
A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.
The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.
A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”
I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”
“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
You simply never ever ever disappoint the readers and fans in this story.. I am so very intrigued with what on earth is going on at the club. The book business is rather comical when Edward said "I don't know if I want you reading a book that tells you what kind of dog I am." Yes that was rather cute!!! Can't wait to see what our wonderful Domward has planned for the playroom!!!
Author's Response:
It should be an interesting weekend ....and the Dog book is real ...
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Thanks for this Chapter it was interesting, wonderful and humorous (My mom made Aunt Bella some Red underware!) for sure. I always love seeing where you are taking things.
I have more questions than ever, like you said in your AN at the end here, "Will she ever learn!?!?" Humm This reviewer would think that, Master's Girl should plan for the worst and HOPE for the best!! LOL! I'm sorry that really isn't funny, but just had to add it.
Like I say with each review, I just love your writing style and how your mind works, you keep us guessing so well. You just give us little tid bits here and there along the way making us want and crave to know more... I take it that is your intent!!! Well done I say, Well done!!!
I hope you have more wonderful inspirations and are able to find time in your hectic life given the time of the year, to write more and post soon, if NOT I for one do understand.
Happy Holiday's to you !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading .. will she learn? i think she will after some time, besides naughty is part of the yumminess...lml
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Ms. Louise-
Spectacular as always!! I thought that might be some of what was wrong with Leah, so far I am relieved that she doesn't seem to be involved with the mysterious bad things going on. You asked if we felt her punishment was fitting, well if you mean in context with the 50 lbs and having to stand and not move for 35 minutes, which made her think about her actions, well then I would say yes!!!
I am still not totally sure if the clamp is for punishment or if more for working on Bella's control and concentrationor for modifiied "usual time"!! I honestly think she is going to "YELLOW" before much longer, I can't even fathom what she must be going through right now, then on top of that he kissing her too! Holy Hell! Our girl is definately an enigma if she can hold out and NOT safeword!
Tanya, well, I think it's pretty clear to Ms. Strawberry-Blonde Skank Sub that our dear dear Domward treats Bella much more than just a Submissive and I think it's getting ready to really rears its ugly head here!!! Meaning Tanya's jealousy that is!
I love your story and your way of laying this out for us, you are also very good at breaking things down in the AN if we missed something. Thanks BB
Deary I hope you have a awesome time with Concerts, baking and all the Holiday activities that keep people so busy especially with families.. Thank you for letting us know that you will be posting once per week till Jan 10th that was very considerate, you are terrific and look forward to the next posting.
Merry Christmas!!!!!
Author's Response:
Ok.. it's not a clamp. it's a clip. It slides over the top of the clitoris and stays in place by hugging the sides...and I will give you a hint,,, Edwrad wasnts Bella to be a quiveing mess of excitment when they get home,,,,,in the mean time I bet Edward has some way to keep her mind in the game...lol....Thanks for the well wishes and You have a Merry Christmas...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Wonderful Chapter thanks so much for getting it posted this week. Hope RL gets less hectic for you in 2011. Love the story and yes, poor Bella having to wear the clip the whole night. She is learning, I was really unsure what she was going to do with the crackers of pate`too! She did handle it fairly well however. I think the little trip down memory lane regarding "gran" was pretty endearing and brought a wonderful element of the Cullen's family life as children, teenagers and young adults. Seems like grandmother was a pretty cool lady and left great impressions on them all.
Now for Tanya, yeah something still has to happen with her. She must have had more feelings for our Domward than he knew, she sure does seem and act Jealous!
Well can't wait to see what the alarm going off is all about. Hopefully nothing is going to happen to SETH that would just be CRUEL and UNUSUAL punishment, he is wonderful, even our lovely Dom has a rather deep fondness to him.
Wishes for a Joyful Christmas!!!
Author's Response:
Bella did ask for ketchup ....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Awesome Chapter left me shaking my head going, hell!!! I need to re-read the entire story becaue like you said "Now the plot thickens" Hell Yes it does!! Urgghhh...
Okay first off, Please get to doing better, bless your heart :-( We don't like for our Fav's to get sick, and besides who wants to be sick for the Holiday's, not like you help it, but just get better soon, lots rest, drink plenty of liquids, eat as much as you can of Homemade Chicken Soup and take your recommended Meds!!! Now that will be $35 for the free advise. LMAO!!! Seriously, really hope you get to feeling stronger and recover soon!
Officer Rude Hawks: I was wondering if by chance he was one of the officers who was involved in her case when they found her at her home, because how is it that he knew about her open Sexual Assault Case, no where does it say that he ran a background check on her, but I suppose might be routine...hum... andor he is pissed or some such that she would not admit who attacked her, but somehow that just seems too simple, I think he is connected to one of the women at the Shelter too!
Mystery Home Invader: I'm feeling it's Caius or someone from the Club, I still think it's somehow more involved with New Moon than James though! Like Charlie said James was accounted for all evening and besides we know it's a bit of a drive from Forks to Seattle so that leaves out Asshat James! Tanya, yeah not so sure of her intentions other than to cause trouble and stir up shit!! Mike well he could be working with Caius.....just saying there just has to be more than one person from New Moon involved in all this.
Master Edward to Bella's so called "Now we are Even" well I new something was going to happen and I really was happy the precious girl SAFEWORDED, I was in pain for her, well not a bad pain, but you know what I mean. He is reminding her of his control over her, AND her willingness to allow that control. Bella wants to be a good submissive, I was so proud of her when she did have a small release that she immediately thought of how she had to confess this to him. She is learning and growing. He could be much harder on her, we all know that he is being a good Dom in the sense of being consistant and doing what he says and meaning what he says. I hope that makes sense (it's late and I'm sleepy!) He by no means is cruel to her, I really do think that it hurt him to tell her not to look at him the rest of the night, he loves her eyes, so that was more of a punishment for HIM than her....Yes, he did allow the ketchup on the patet after all..chuckles the thought of what must have gone through Master's mind when she asked...LOL!!!
Stay Safe and Healthy and a VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011 here we come!!
Kathy
xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
$35 free advice ...LMAO ...lololhehehehhelololo....did he allow her Ketchup??? I don't think he did...((I'm going to have to go back and check that out)) ...oh and by the way, Edward's POV is coming up and some of your questions will be answered then... so hang in there...it's coming ....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”
“Don’t say that!”
I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”
Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”
Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”
“No…” why the hell would I think that?
“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Yes, Yes I do see a little more now understanding that Officer Asshat, oh I mean Hawk had already at this point knew about the playroom, yet then he finds out that she has been assaulted and raped!! Wow, no telling what he was thinking. Okay yes, he did grant her some much needed and deserved relief. HEHE!!
Another fantastic chapter and ready for more. Just keeps getting more intriguing, wondering if one of the ladies from the Center is tangled up in this mess..
Have a good week and until the next update... xoxoxo
Kathy
Author's Response:
Yes....see he's a cop and then he hears her back ground you have to wonder what on earth he is thinking.......(((your the only one who saw him that way)))
Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.
“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.
“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.
“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”
“My Officer Hawk?”
He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.
“I could have Charlie do it.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Good Evening Lady Bug -
You never let us down with this story! Well I think it was Mike that saw him enter the code. I appreciate the progression of the story. Your writing style and abilites keep me very engrossed in the story, thank you very much for another Fantastic Chapter!!!
Kathy
Author's Response:
thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Louise- Once more a fantastic Chapter. I was at first upset over the shower incident, UNTIL I listened as she read her punishment, and it clicked right then. It didn't matter what the TASK was or what the LESSON was to be it was alway predicated on OBEDIENCE. No matter how minute the the instruction was OBEDIENCE must be followed. In that frame of mind can we not see how she is becoming stronger as woman and mate for her Master and as a individual. It is strenghtening her in many areas of her life, especially after everything she has had happen to her, I can now see why and how she needs this relationship and lifestyle.
Irina...Hummm I think she is being geniune with him.. Lets hope!
This was a great chapter, for me it was about possibly one of the BEST yet!!! Poor Seth just wanted momma to pet him. But lets face it Master appreciates Seth too!!!
Laters BB
Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Yes kathy Yes !!! you got it...it doesn't matter if the task is something simple, ie- ask permission to use the bathroom - or something more difficult control your orgasm ((which is not easy)) it's the obedience and more important her willingness to obey, she is going to fail it's to be expected... no one is perfect but she is getting more confident, have you noticed she doesn't cry at every little thing, she accepts her failure and punishment with digity and grace knowing that he is fair and just and she learns from it .....she finds security in the relationship because of the confinds of his consistancy...she can trust him and therefore learn to trust herself...If - I'm not saying he will - because my Edward will not - but if - he should faulter and for some reason not stay consistant with his rules or what he expects it would totally confuse her and cause frustration on both sides...So you see he has to stay tough and he has to challege her or she and he will get bored....
Seth is part of their life ((both B&E)) love him ....
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml
Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”
I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”
His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”
“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face.
“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”
“Yes Sir”
“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.
“Tyler, how is the night going?”
“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”
Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”
Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Louise-
Wow! Not sure where to begin with this chapter, I will just say I am so proud of Isabella and how she clearly followed Master's instructions at the club, that was pretty Hot and interesting (speaking of the game that is) I will go back and re-read chapter 8 but I think I remember it was vouyerism if I recall, or exhibitionism it was one or the other but i will re-read thanks for pointing that out.
Jess: Humm I seriously don't think that Isabella was wrong (can't help chuckling while typing this) but she (Master's girl) is not responsible for Jess being present when she spoke with Rose... LOLOLOL I could help but want to once more come across this lap top and put a little stomp ass on Ms. Jessica for what she said to Bella in the restroom. When Bellla wondered if Jess knew the meaning of semantics well that was too funny... Bitches... I mean, if Edward wasn't so damn hot. LOLOLOL! Anyway, I was okay with the way that was handled and felt sorry for "his girl" in the office when she wanted to cry. (pouty face while typing) Master is only suppose to use those looks for HIS Girl..... sniffle sniffle... LOL!!!
Caius: He's just a Ass with a Captial A.... I have no words for that worthless tail feather.
As for how Bella handled his question in the car upon leaving the club, well.... what total growth and determination we see in her. She has really become quite the submissive; nevertheless we are able to see the confidence she has been able to find andor channel within herself is just so, oh.... encouraging I guess you could say and at the same time you know that its coming her Master's love and devotion to her as well as being the type of Dominate that he is.. He makes her tow the line and because of that she grows each day.... All of this goes back to the last chapter regarding Obedience... Yes, change is coming that's for sure. Perhaps this new found strength that Bella is finding will be needed for the trip to Forks, eh!??? Just saying, I know we have to eventually see the BIG BAD WOLF at some point in the story right?
Have a terrific week and can't to see EPOV on these events..
Later BB
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy...Yes Bella is getting stronger and more secure in her submission, and yes it seems to be coming on the heels of Forks...thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Louise - Bless your heart, you did have a week from Hell; you are always more than generous in your writing of this story and keeping it updated for which I am more than grateful for. I for one would never chastise you for anything, like not have time for responses.. Goodness! Really do people get upset over that? You rock, I love the dedication and insight you give your readers and this fan certainly, into different aspects of what you refer to as "it takes all kinds to make the world go round!" That is so true.
I can't wait to see what more he has in store for their last day in Victoria and then Yep of course the trip to Forks.
His Girl did very well with Full sub mode in public, did she not!!! I say Woooohooo -Isabella- girl you have truly come a long way in a short time... I had faith that he was not going to do anything to her in public that she could not handle. But, I must confess (ducks head and lifts eyes sheepishly) I worried a little about the intentions of the collar and leash... hehehehe!!! Poor folks in the next room with the headboard hitting the wall like that, I bet they wish they were doing the same thing... (Big Evil Grin)
Okay till next update, you have a better week...Please!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy
I will admit that this week was much better ,,, at least so far it is....Bella did do a wonderful job and as he always is edward was proud of her...lol about the neigbors in the next room...lol ....talk to you later ...louise
Thanks for reading... I have this weeks teaser for you..
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Ms. Louise -
What a awesome Chapter! Yes, I did get the Flawless Submission, can't recall if I added that last time or not in my review, and yes, your visualization for the readers was wonderful. EPOV is always pleasing to me, I love seeing what he is really thinking and feeling. I love how Bella explained to him about "The dominant Look" which he can't help using it, as he is doing what he knows. BUT, at the same time it hurt her because that look belongs to her. Well put and stated. Loved that very much. I also Loved when she told him that she handled Jess and that she felt she was ingenious in that endeavor too! That was so Bella and I really loved seeing that side of her. Oh I would sooooo wanted to know what Jane wanted to say before her Master stopped her. Drats!!!! When ARO said that they (Edward and Bella) should get some heat retarded suits, I could not help but laugh in agreement, BECAUSE I can FEEL your wit, I can definately see you turning the POT up on them in respect to this...
It was pretty awesome and endearing to see the playfullness of Edward and Bella as the guests were arriving.
Whoa! We are getting so much closer to them going off to Forks! So anxious for that trip, not sure why I just am.....
Well till next week, you take care and as always Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy .. we are getting closer to Forks and the story is moving along allowing them to bond as they go...and I'm sure that the heat will be turned up...(smiles)...thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, here is this weeks teaser...
Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.
“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”
Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”
“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.” I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention.
Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”
I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”
Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”
“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”
“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”
“Well I don’t know about carefree…”
Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Louise ~ Such a good chapter and sorry about your computer problems, they are always a Pain in the Backside, that's for sure. "M" has something special to celebrate, she is graduating on the same day as RPatz 25th B-day, how cool is that ESPECIALLY if you are a Rob Fan... :-)
Yes, it was endearing to see the relationship from Edward's eyes and come to understand it more... even someone who has grown up with Bella and Jacob didn't fully get that they are just close in a family way and not in a romantic way, I think Jacob has felt this protectiveness about Bella because he knows that she does not have anyone else and in some ways hasn't he given her to Edward?? I say yes, it was Jacob that was with her at New Moon when they met, it was also Jacob that started giving Edward insight into Bella and was more understanding of their new Ds relationship than Leah even. The way I see it is Jacob can sense that Edward loves and cherishes Bella and will not hurt her, he sees and senses the protective side Edward has towards Bella too!
Hum wonder what on earth that Maggie and Bella are discussing, if I know and can guess what our girl is up to, perhaps Maggie has endured years of the same sort of treatment from James father and Bella wants to give her some sort of encouragement, OR seeing as Bella felt sad for Victoria AFTER the confrontation with James at the bar, perhaps Bella is trying to pass on to Victoria through Maggie that she fears for her safety... I don't know was just thinking, I don't think Bella feels fear from Maggie or Leah would not have left her alone with her.
Can't wait for the next portion and ready for the proposal. Oh, and Seth waking Edward at 2:30am just to ask if he and Tracy could stay at their house when they are in town was kinda cute! I just know that Seth is going to be on Edward wanting to know more about New Moon and BDSM lifestyles... That should be a interesting weekend with all the family in town for baby shower....
Till next time... Hang in there! Have a good week! TTFN - Laters BB Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Louise - Happy Thursday! Yes, I am always so happy to know that we get a new Chapter on Thursday's!!! This Chapter was awesome. I loved the discussion with Aro and Bella in the Kitchen. I once more think this gave us more of a insight of the closeness and trust that Bella had in Aro to let him guide her to the right people with her Funds, yes, it's true that Bella could care less if she didnt have those funds or not, and would still be just as happy if she lost everything; however, still this is a Big Deal I think, yet again, I'm possibly over thinking this.. Not sure, I just see that she could have just let things stay the status quo if you will, like let whatever Charlie was doing continue on the investment course... but she is branching out and trusting someone other than her Father, so to me that is huge, not only that but this was before Edward and I think allowing herself to even Trust Aro out of friendship helped her in having the desire to Trust and allow herself to have a D/s relationship. Okay enough said on this.
The dinner discussion was pretty enlightening and was glad to see some of that information discussed, and understand that it was Truly needed at this point. (I had previously read Aro's Outtake so I did know some of that) Edward's reaction to Aro and Bella in the Kitchen did, but yet didn't, really surprise me either.. Edward trained as a Dominate under Aro and is a very strong and powerful D therefore this is his protective side rearing it's head. Love a Dominating E... owwww! Hot!!!
Emmett is a crack up, that was too funny!!!! Thanks for your wonderful humor....
Till next week, hope you have a wonderful week and weekend!
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Some of what you are saying about Bella just letting the funds where Charlie had them will come up in the conversation that E&B have about money....Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.
“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting.
“W..Why? You said I could keep it”
Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”
“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.
“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”
Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”
My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”
“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Hi Louise - Happy Thursday to you! Wow! Great Chapter and this did fill in alot of missing information regarding both of their financial situations.
I found it rather interesting that it appeared that Edward was using the Waxing issue as a matter and reminding her that He is the Dominate and she belongs to him for his pleasure alone. Oh, Gosh before I forget, Yes, I did play the Wanda Sykes You Tube link you posted in regards to Waxing; I must say... Holy Hell that was fucking hillarious seriously, when she talked about her Ass I thougt I was going to stop breathing I laugh so hard. She is too much!
Wasn't the conversation with Demetri interesting, I really was glad to see Edward learn a little more of what people or should I say, what Caius is babbling about to other's at the club. I was impressed that Demetri had really already formed his very astute opinion of Bella and knows that Caius is full of Shit! Hummm still leaves "This One" to wonder if he really is involed in whatever is going on behind Bella's back...
Okay they are on the road for their mini Vacation, so happy that he is thinking about proposing to her. He really does love her and she loves him as well. I thought that he was really saying something (even if it was just his own thoughts) when he acknowledged that he just couldn't see himself allowing another person in on their playtime together to give her Dominate Experience if that is what she wanted. But, he is thinking about finding a creative way to Top from the Bottom... Humm that could be very very interesting and can't wait to see how that plays out...
Okay have a good weekend and TTY next Thursday hopefully for another arousing chapter of DITR... You Rock Lady Bug!!! Kathy xoxoxoxo
PS.. krazi4TwiSaga from FTLoD gave you a nice shout out recommends for this story in her last chapter. Just in case you didnt know already!!! She's pretty awesome too!
Author's Response:
OMG !!! Wanda's video ... holy hell!! I laughed so hard I couldn't see through the tears .....About the waxing - it goes back to the rules that Bella agrred to ... which if you need a refresher in what they are yyou can find them on the extra's page....and thank you for telling be about krazi ... I didn't know that ... I sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for leaving a review this week,,,,lml
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Happy Late Friday Louise - Sorry it's taking me so long to get to this chapters update, not that I haven't been trying.. It's been a strange few days.. Anyway... Just loved this chapter.. Zip lining sounded like a blast..... I was really wondering what the neighbors heard... hahahahaha... I didn't even think about Seth, barking and howling too much... Poor Bella's hooha, she must have been tender. I truly did expect her to start having some sort of trying and stressful memories the closer they came to arriving in Forks...
Loved how once more he reminded her just how important she is to his life and how he can't think of the future without the thoughts of her being there with him by his side, each and every day. This is Seriously setting the stage for a proposal... hint, hint!!!
Okay her dream has me slightly perplexed. The light I take it is Edward and the Dark is James? I suppose we shall see. I suppose it could be compared to "the light" is the strenght she has gained in her mind. "The dark" is the weakness that she still feels at times, like the memories she has of thr terrible and horrific crimes she experienced at the hands of James.
I loved the Jane and Aro outtake that was wonderful, wow my respect truly goes to Jane, knowing that she was going to risk the wrath of "His Most Grand Master, Aro" she still couldn't help but show her unwaivering love and desire to reach out to her nephew regarding Bella... In the wonderful words of Jacob from Twilights BD - "She was brave, didn't faith or anything!" When she took the spanking with the cane, ouch I was in pain for her.... So my question to Jane is this: How on earth did she justify within her mind, not being put out with Master for such a punishment. I understand that she purposely and with intent knowing that he had told her "Not to mention it to Edward" and did it anyway. Jane also knew what the ramifications of her actions, but... Man that was just tough... She is tough...just shaking my head, in amazment!!!
Louise have a good week. Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.
“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.
“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”
Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”
She shrugged “Someone had too”
I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.
The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Goodness Gracious Ms. Louise -
The ending of course is hysterical... Mercy heaven's sakes alive what the hell happened with Leah she just unloaded away on Bella! I see her point and side, but Leah is rather self absorbed sometimes and thinks that Bella should have no life other than Bella following after Leah... Yes, she did encourage Bella to go to New Moon but I dont think she was thinking that anything would come of it! Bella is doing wonderfully holding her own.
Bella never ceases to amaze me when it comes to her fears! When she put down a 1 and listed Caning, I was shocked... seriously this should be really deep, emotionally! Can't wait for that. Thanks for this weeks chapter, nope you never, ever disappoint the readers, I promise you never disappoint me!!
Next week is going to be a good one I can hardly wait!!! Have a good week.... Later BB Kathyxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
if they do caning .. it will be very slow...and build up to an actual scene...hmmm...yeah! ...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Holy Shit Louise~~~~ You really did a wonderful, FanFuckingTastic job (as usual) with this chapter... I just couldn't believe my eyes and ears with this one! James is a total piece of work. Now I have to totally agree with SETH and his comment about Snipers!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
well I was wondering how Master was going to address the situation with his run in with James to "His Girl" I did like the way it was addressed. He did not need to tell her all the horrible things that he had to say! I don't really think that we are through with that situation yet though, ARE WE?
I also think that we see more and more what caused Bella to become so inwardly silent, and How she Fell Pray to James... just re-read the section of the woods.. she was totally alone, even though she had close, close relations with every one from the Reservation she was still considered a out sider, I am certain that James used that against her too!
Great story, anxious for next week... Have a good one. Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
Louise- as always wonderful chapter!!!!
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
oh ms louise - another thought provoking chapter~ im not sure what the money is being used for other than something James is up to which is obvious, but i will say i love the twists and turns that this takes. i wonder....... well i just wonder.
well looks like Master Edwards pet is going to get some play time we know how loves exhibtionism to a degree with Master.... hehehehe.. okey dokey till next time take care and hope all will be well with you
TTFN Laters Kathyxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I have a small teaser for you...lml
“Stay still Isabella” I told her placing my hand on her knee letting my fingers glide softly up the inside of her thigh. “You are to speak freely and tell me about this morning”
Bella’s brow furrowed, I thought that meant she was confused as to what I was talking about so I prompted “At breakfast, you gave Claire a bite of food, something happened, tell me about it”
“This one doesn’t know what you mean”
Bella was over thinking she needed to let go of her inhibitions and tell me what was at the root of her reaction. My fingers drifted over her outer lips while I tried to coax the answer from her “Picture it in your head, the fork coming out of Claire’s mouth…”
“She did what your girl said”
“Yes she did and what did that do to you?’ I asked while my fingers became more insistent in their movements.
Bella whimpered opening her knees a little wider “It made your girl want to tell her to do something else”
“What would my girl have her do?”
She answered without thinking “She don’t know”
That might have been an honest answer, it’s not like Bella has had any training in being the top, hell she was just learning the roll of the bottom. But I wanted to make sure so my question became more direct. “Would you have Claire do something to you?”
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
wow what a chapter! it would be nice in the end for them to be able to have a baby but - not every couple has to have children to make them a happy family
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
Louise - Yay! so happy that you're in the next round of voting. This is such an engrossing story, your devoted fans are very excited for you.
This was an amazing chapter, I was laughing my head off at Bella, Edward and Esme too! Let's face it that was pretty comical. You are so funny at times. Let's not even talk about what a wicked mind you have with those tasks of Master Edward...**raises eyebrows and snickers** Let's also agree that if any of us could change places with Bella we would in a heart beat, the thoughts of giving your total submission to that wonderful Human Masterpiece is just mind boggeling... well on to another topic... time to breathe...
Yes, I did watch the MTV awards just for RPatz and KStew as well as the Trailer of BD, Holy shit, if the Trailer is any indication we are going to really enjoy BD I think! Anyway, I was a little puzzled with the Generations Award presentation for Reese, but that never bothers me much, just shows me his human side. Absoultley loved that he kissed Taylor I thought that was pretty comical too! It was all in good fun.
Lastly, good luck with this next round of voting and best of everything to you.... You Rock!!! Till next time Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
OMG Kathy !! I was so excited to see that DitR made the 2nd round.!!! I texted M right a way and we had a squeal-fest ...loll.....hmmm... the task, I'll let you in on a little secert, Bella is not happy about that task and she just might find herself in a little bit of trouble ((not a lot, just a tiny bit)) ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, until next time...louise
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
What another wonderful chapter... I was laughing so hard at Edward during the ball game.. but Vinny he is just priceless.
As for the awards catagories Yes, I too was rather surprised to see Jacob in his slot, but when I thought about it I do love this Jacob alot...he is a fierce friend and brother (in-law) as wll as a friend to Edward too.. he is compassionate in his acceptance of Bella and Edward's relationship too. So yeah that's another reason I voted for him......
Have a good summer and look forwrd to the next chapter when it's ready... be safe... till then Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy, believe me I wasn't complaining about the Jacob award, I was just surprised (in a nice way) but I was glad because my Jacob is the way I wish SM's would have been, friendly, loving, and brotherly...watching out for Bella without interferring (unless needed) ...anyway glad you like the chapter and thanks for the votes...louise
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Louise, Louise
Poor little Vinny is so darlin but I didn't say nooky!!! LMAO!!!! Gina dsmn woman that was just skanky.... Loved the conversation about the Gucci dress.. 60% off making it $800, yes that was perfection... So curious about Janes phone call can't wait... Oh and did I ever love the retelling Bella gave to Edward about what actually happened with Vinny and the micro fiber unders....
Till next weeks update please take care.. Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxox
Author's Response:
You knew he would say it sometime...I mean really you can't tell a kid not to say something and then expect them to listen...lol....thanks for reading...lml
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Louise-
So very glad to know all is well and that you are back!!! Funny tning I started over with the story last night or early this morning I guess, anyway, I was so happy to see this chapter. Em and Vinny are always a treat to read and quite comical...... Yes Bella has certainly come a long way, and I'm not sure truthfully why Edward is upset with Bella ... I am very perplexed or puzzled and will be re-reading the chapter about her assignment...... I found it very very enlightening about how Bella saw her relationship with Charlie that was very interesting.. I truly enjoy how you get into her mind and Edwards as well... It pains me to sense that Bella would like to have children yet because of the actions of that careless Monster or should I say devilsh calculating monster she may not be able to conceive and carry a child.... hopefully this will be some miracle in the story IF thats the way you have it planned... okay have a good ome and take care... Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for being patient while I took care of what was happening in my r/l and I have to tell you that while I was away i too went back to re-read my story...the next chapter will be up soon and then you'll get the whole story of why edward was so upset... thanks for reading Kathy ,,,louise
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
Edwards POV and reasoning behind the events were very insightful as usual! I am often astounded at my emotions when I read this story, I love how you make a person think and feel compassion and understanding for this couple and their endearing relationship. Hearing Bella say her submission meant a total surrender and this was the last piece that she had NOT given to James. How James had continually tried to break her, Edward hearing that "seemed to feel a deep remorse" however, you showed the key in this surrender from Bella's own words-- she felt safe and could trust Edward her Master. There was a huge difference in James and Edward, Edward does everything for the betterment of Bella and James never thought of anyone besides himself. P-I-G!!!
Edward's dream was interesting, I am sure that it was significant in numerous ways, but what I took from it was there are so many layers and ways Bella needs Edward but at the same time Edward truly fears for Bella......
Thanks so much for this wonderful chapter and patience is alway the key... I will be here waiting patiently for the next update and chapter. The best of days lady bug... take care. Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Hi Louise - thanks for the chapter and what a great chapter it was! I can see how important all of this was for the understanding of our girls Rose and Bella and the loving, compassionate person that Bella is... she automatically thought of Rose...the defensive training is important for the girls for all woman, and men for that matter...I feel that people trying to hurt Bella is not anywhere near being behind us so..this was good training...Yes Bella took down Emmett but a real attacker is going to have the rush of adrenaline and Bella will have to be even more focuses.....her submissive training can help her with that focus...
I have been one of those that love Edward and Master...but in all honesty I like to whine for and on behalf of his pet Ms Bella, but she needs this... Bella needs everything that her Master and Sir give her, also what Edward gives her...it's all done to Help her in HER NEEDS!!!! I am going to remember my own words here for upcoming chapters and think of Bella's desires, wanrs and needs.. Let's all support our couple,
Have a good week Louise and hope life is treating you kind
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Holy Heck Louise this was a killer chapter.. I left my extremely wordy review on FF under Khans so Inwon't repeat all that again.. But just wanted to say how much I love your creative mind and even though my inner whiny child wishes for the story to tell me all the secrets right now... Thank you for being in control and giving us all the details and time for Bella to find herself first and grow because of all the things that Edward helps her with... so by the time we progress to this point and she finds out all these details she is finally able to come to terms, and dealing with all those evil folks who transpire to do evil toward her.. Look at how she is able to finally deal with her Dad, that in itself is huge... so good... what a wonderful Master of this story you truly are.. you put it all out here just for our benefit... :-) Big grins... Have a great week!!! Kathy
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Hey ther Ms Louise- What an interesting chapter, and BTW I really enjoyed Charlies' POV outtake, it was very informative.. Now for this chapter.. **giggles** the trip to Nordsroms was our typical spoilt Bella, but she has learned to listen to her Master a little more and be more willing to do what pleases him not just in the playroom or during playtime, of coursenhe did have to poiint out to her that it was his way or it would be during THEIR time...so one way or the other she was going to surrender to his will...then we moved right into the grocery shopping which I loved I might add, but then you add in the visit from Ms Jessica and well that was perfection... Okay now I'm still incredibly curious what it is that Karen thinks that Bella has that SHE is owed...would it be James DNA?!?!?! I'm really not sure I guess I'm reaching...the only other thing I can think of is money, perhaps James told her that it was his money that Bella has ...I'm just at a loss but then again the girl is alittle more than bonkers...Hummm.. now in regards to Bella and total lockdown Yea, I think she is in for some big time punishments coming up...first off Bella works at the center and does so many other things too, so I'm rather curious what this lockdown will entail... Fruity Pebbles ---- mhmmm Master you best get a whole case of those sugary little treats as incentive for your little girl, cause we all know that she can be pouty and bratty when she wants... Yea - don't see that changing soon...do you?!?!?! Lord have mercy I love this story and was happy to see this chapter, but also realize that you do have a family and life so I am patient, looking froward to the next chapter this weekend, if all goes well like you said.. Until then...TY so much for this wonderful chapter!!!!! Laters BB Kathy
Author's Response:
Hi Kathy....I think your right about Bella an not being happy about what Edward is calling "lockdown"...lol...thanks for reading
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
Oh Louise Darlin' your Rant was very much needed and understood, well at least by this reader who did take the time to go and read some of the HORRIFYING reviews that were left. I wasnt sure who I felt worse for YOU or Master and then Pet... well lets just say I had compassion for Pet as I knew her heart was in deep sorrow for knowing that she had not understood in time what she was doing, and I never thought that she didn't trust in her Master, I just didn't fully grasp that she wasnt in pain, so I was someone who thought she should have used Yellow, but not RED... I didn't think she was beyond... I knew it would eventually be a lesson she would come to grasps with.. He is a teacher in every aspect and I truly love how he teaches... strict but with great love, and reverance for what he knows her to be capable of....
Some women just don't understand the meaning of NO do they? Example is Miss Shelly.. what a rude woman!!! Leech comes to mind when I think of her.... ewww gross and Yuck!
Yep lots room for growth and future exploration... No I have never seen Bella as a Slave either.. like she said, Love Jane she Rocks but never could fully see Bella in that role...
Okay so enough of that, lets discuss Aro, Marcus and Emmett's visit... Lord have mercy I love Emmett and all of his silliness!!! Cuz!!! Inbreeding! Oh Jeezus I tell you I was just chuckling listening to him... Yep so we get a bigger understanding of what Asshat Caius's issues seem to be wth Bella... This boiled down to the worse case of "ease dropping" I have seen in awhile. Thinking that Aro sent a Check to Bella's mother. Good Gracious! I adored Bella's behavior over all that she found out.. and yeah Emmett so deserved the little bit of retaliation with the cane "if" that is what she was doing and something tells me she was...
Well I am curious to see how she handles issues with the Cane and if it will become a solid Hard Limit or not! Master seems to gets lots of Pleasure from the use of the cane....
Till next time and TY very much for such a wonderfully enlightening chapter!!!! You are alway over the top and give me plenty to consider when reading....
Laters All Please take care Kathy
Author's Response:
Doms need to be strict, unwavering and consistant...i didn't discribe Shelly but in my mind i had pictured "Peggy Bundy" from Married with Children...LOL ....Emmett has a natural way about him that is just ...fun loving, Yet he is witty and inteligent and can be down right scary when need be....I love him and he treats Bella like she was his little sister, teasing her and protects her, you just have to love him...oh and the next chapter you'll see more of what happens at the club soooo....be ready ...lol...thanks kathy...seriously, thanks...louise
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Louise--- My dear Merry Christmas a little belatedly and All the best to you and your family in the New Year!!!! Whoa! what a night indeed!!! can't wait.... Dougie is something...hahahaha!
I took Isabella's writing about the 24/7 submission more on the lines of giving herself to her Master deeper and this would open the door for her to consider Marriage with Edward, because we know they love one another, But, Do we Know, in Edward's mind at least that she would be willing to take that step again!?!?! So by her entire writing it showed me that her mind was going there, Especially when she said there isn't anything that she wouldn't do if he asked it of her, or smething like that....
Have a great week....see you Thursday!!!! Kathy
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
TY for the chapter Louise, you know your loyal fans miss you when your not updating HOWEVER we totally support your RL and know you can't be glued to the computer wrtiing and updating... so your are indeed excused for what you say are delays in updates... Just love the story.... I truly had to giggle at little Vinny when he won Leah over by telling her he hoped her baby was a girl, so she would be pretty like her....awww..... what a charmer that boy is... Alice well mercy me; another baby well. well. well! This poor couple is going to be surrounded by pregnancy hormones all over tarnation with Alice being preggers too... I really hope that Bella and Edward can have children too, it would just seem the ultimate cruelty to me if they couldn't because of that heartless James..... I know they can adopt but Edward really wants a biological child...oh well...whatever you have in store for them will be good too.... I am still in awwh of Bella and her charitable attitue towards others, even Alice being so rude to her ... another reason we love Bella so.... Looking forward to their usual time as we have upcoming in the next chapter.... till then Take Care Louise and be happy and safe Kathy
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Wow Louise! I'm speechless! Humm.... Give me a second to find my voice.... Okay, Vinny, what a Precious curious little mind**giggles**
The Van, well I think I need to revisit the chapter at the Park, when they had the fund raiser for "The Center".... seems to me there was a Van..... So I will revisit those earlier chapters.... Yay! Sequel!!!! Yippee! Alice and Edward, well I am reeling from that conversation and Alice's TRUE feelings about Bella, but it really doesn't surprise me. **I say that in all honesty** Esme spent years of treating Jane poorly and Alice was front row and center for that example.... so it does stand to reason that Spoilt Rotten Alice doesn't have the maturity to see, as Esme now is seeing, that it was a narrow minded and Highly inappropriate view to take on her Sister-in-law... How judgmental can a person be Alice…. I am still in shock in awe mode over that portion of the chapter.
Master Edward has definitely been established as an Highly respected Firm and Strict as well as an insightful Dominate with his current submissive, I say current, and Not submissive’s of the past because I don’t think he had the connection with those women he does with Bella. I had the feeling or the sense that he was in need of relieving some pent up frustration he was very much left with from his recent conversation with his Sister, therefore I felt he was a little sterner than he generally is during there "Usual" time.. I'm not sure if I am expressing myself right here, what I mean is that Master seemed to be in a very Intense Dom Mode. I was so very proud of Bella for using "Yellow" not once but twice ... first over the tampon/cup issue and then when she was on the brink of failing his instruction to not cum.
Feminine Hygiene during that time of the month was something that Master shouldn’t have considered pushing her on, Especially given Bella's history, considering where and what James would cruelly do to Bella, Master is just not consistently putting her history front and center when he is giving her directions such as he did in this chapter regarding the tampon.... Putting MYSELF in her place in this chapter, I fear I would have said "RED" and not yellow. Now that I think about it, she did essentially say RED when she told him that anything dealing with the Toilet was a Hard Limit now. Well done Bella! I slowly worked through the HIS STRONGER DOMINATE side through most of the time, until we came to the end and he doubted her being truthful with him about the double penetration and James.... Ummmm.. Master.... why would it matter what she did in her past? Dear Lord how many submissive’s have you had? .... and why on earth are you doubting what she said? That hurt me that you doubted her.... Knowing what a sick individual that EX of hers was I could honestly see him drugging her and doing things to her that she has blocked out, but not that she would deceive or lie to you about.... Okay I'm through talking with Master.
Now you my dear Louise and the wonderful M - You both rock, Louise you my dear one for writing this Huge chapter 20K+ words killer.... and you M for the wonderful feedback and Mad Beta Skills you use..... You both Rock.... have a wonderful one! Much FF Love, Kathy
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough
thanks Louise..... Your appreciate your insight into Bella's "reason" for not using Red during playtime... I had not looked at it like that, I appreciate how Bella's limits are needing uping and changing, showing her growth as well as deeper trust in her Master.... can't wait to see wjo her escort for the day is.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100
That was awesome!!!! TY Louise! Loved this look into Double D and Dougie's relationship and learning more about Isabella's new "MG Bestie!" Wow, Ex-Marine, hum wouldn't have thought of Dougie as a Fighting machine, see pre conceived ideas... shame on me! But now we know what a great companion Dougie is for Bella
***NOW COMPLETE***
Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life. She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl. After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart. The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief. She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband? Only time will tell. What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them?
AH/OOC. Canon pairings, with twists. NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness. If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183792
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down
I'm sniffling and taking calming breathes right now.. Okay not getting on the kill Edward band wagon. Nope am not, am not... well maybe I am... Holy Hell Edward WTF!!! Sometimes you do not think before you speak. Shit man, when has that woman once said or done anything to you without you and Carlie being her first thought.. She would have no more told you that you were a worthless piece of shit over First the Damn Carmen fiasco, then that Money groveling whoremonger Jessica she put up with could very well end her career, because she was protecting Carlie your flesh and blood...I'm just so disappointed in him right now... TEAM BELLA!!!!
Okay yes, .... :-( I am a lover of Edward too, actions speak louder than words Butt wipe... Yes, I love my Edward... he best do some deep deep damage control here.. Just saying!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)
wow Carmen is crazy
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...
I did!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)
Wow Marta!!! WTF! Time for a new Nanny!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan
I nearly Peed on myself laughing at this. Too funny!!!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One
Really really liking this story. Edward is different but the same in a more I'm not sure but honest and tender, yet reserved sort of way.
Later Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day
What a wonderfully written story! I know this is my first Chapter but I am really intrigued, I wish I had found it sooner.
Later Kathy xoxoxo
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain
I am speechless, but have faith in your story line and plot line, as well as your wonderful writing abilitites
:-) Later Kathy xoxoxoxo
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache
wow!!! eating disorder makes alot of sense actually considering the situation
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - The Brain(less) Trust
dear lord, I laughed and sobbed in this chapter...What a fantastic writer you are Damn this is a good story
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed
Can't wait for the Epilouge - Yeah! He was really stupid to take TA KStew to the dinner and then to not realize that he was letting her flirt with him. I had to admit that the use of the TA's name was pretty classic especially when he goes to pick her up and he says how much like his Bella she looks, now that was priceless..
Okay nuff said from me... Your a great writer and author Later BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings
Shit you Rock I loved this story, of course I am going back and going to re-read it, I know there are chapters that I did not post a review on so I will try and cover those chapters and YES, I will read "Trip of a Lifetime"
Once more, this was a very well done story, loved it!!!
Later BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
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All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Mean little Pixie shouldn't have interrupted them :-)
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love our Bella you go girl!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
well I am pretty curious and anxious to find out about their time in NY 3 years prior now! Can't say I blame her for not wanting to go on a honeymoon, she can't help that her body betrays her, but at the same time I think whatever he did back then he had have done it with her best interest at heart.