Reviews by Ashley Peterkin
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315846
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Ashley Peterkin Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets

I'm not mad at Jacob at all, it's not his fault. Bella just has some kind of split personality. One minute she's pissed at Cullen, making him promise not to fuck anymore women, and the next she's trying to fuck another guy. I just don't get her.

I hope she realizes before it's too late, she's going to really miss Cullen when he's gone for good.

Anyway, fan-fucking-tastic story so far, I'm absolutely loving it. Love the filthiness of it all. LOL

<3 XOXO

Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Ashley Peterkin Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Aftermath

Wow...

I'm not even sure what else to say. That was just... amazing!

You have an absolutely brilliant mind. I can't believe you came up with all of this. I sincerely apologize for not reviewing before, but I was so enthralled in the chapters, I just couldn't look away. I honestly tried to read as slow as possible, really not wanting it to end. But, a full day of reading, and it's finished. *Sigh*

This is one of my favorite Bella and Jasper stories to date. That's really saying something, because I've read some fascinating ones.

Your plot, your storyline, your characters, everything... it was completely perfect to a tee. During the war, I kept waiting for Bella to freak out and have her shield come into play. Lol, it just happens in a lot of fanfics. You, my dear, went a completely different direction. I know I don't know you, but I am so proud of what you’ve accomplished with this story. I realize you have a heck of a lot more reviews at other sites, but to have a much smaller site such as this, and 97 reviews... well 98 now, that's just amazing.

I could definitely feel your own emotions while you were pouring out each chapter.

Okay, I'm done with the sappy stuff. I thoroughly enjoyed every fucking minute of this story. I look forward to see what's coming from you in the future.

Hope you liked my review. LMAO

<3 XOXO

P.S. I’ll post this over at FF too, strictly because I am a review whore, and I want everyone to know how awesome you are.

OH! One more thing. Lol. Sorry, I don’t normally talk this much. But, there is a story, a lot like yours that I think you would like. It’s called Sassafrass Junction. She’s working on a sequel now, where the government is ruled by someone else after the whole takedown. Not telling you who it is. Lol

http:// www. fanfiction. net/s/5578241/1/Sassafrass_Junction

Just move the spaces, and it should work.

Hope all is well, Sweetheart.

*Sigh* I'm going to miss this story.