Reviews by VickiShy
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113824
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 28 May 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So, so good. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank you thank you thank you. Loved the update. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank you thank you thank you. Loved the update. 

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717535
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Wow, someone was gonna shake him down?  Wow, balls.  I am anxious to know where CJ fits in.  Great three chpater update.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

well that is one barrier down.  great chapters Lex.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

She is young.  And not the brightest crayon.  That may be my favorite assessment.  Good chapter.  They talked - yeah.  progress.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I am glad Edward was so nervous. It fits his character. Now jasper. I hated hat he lied too. Bella was perfect. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

I think blow is going to really be bothered by the fact his mom didn't want to but did it anyway great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

OMG Bella just spit it out already.  I just can't stand her. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

well that's one way for Edward to find out.  I can't beleive Alice.  great chapters.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

She really is all over the place. Sheesh. Good chapters. I hope jasper doesn't spill anything. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Good chapters. I am so glad they finally allied. It is my hope that Bella will heal and start making decisions for herself. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Lexi I know you got a publishing deal for QS. Does that mean you are done writing FF?  What name are you publishing under because honestly I can't live without your writing?  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

Great couple of chapters. His mom. Wow. I can't wait until you tell us what Edward knows. 

Tangled Hearts by Flora Mile Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella life was everything she had dreamed it to be, a successful writer, a fiancé and everything is going the way she wants it. Until one unfaithful night changed it all. Can changing ones life plan work out the way you really want it. Is doing Artificial Insemination and creating a life going to make her truly happy?

Edward had seen enough tragedy, not only in the loss of his parents but now with his brother and his brother’s wife. If anything else happens, would Edward truly be standing? He might be a successful heart surgeon, but even then can he heal the hearts of two three year-olds?When Bella and Edward’s paths cross will it make them or break them!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83640 Read Count: 18792
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Who really is Edward Cullen?

ok I am liking the start of the story.  I am interested in how you connected everyone and I am curious how everyone will fit as you continue.  What I don't know yet is will this be and Edward Bella fic?  as in romance and not friendship?  Great start.



Author's Response: Hi VickiShy, Over the next couple of chapters you will start to see how it all comes together in the next couple of chapters, but I will say there will be a tissue warning. Thank you for your review. Fiorella

The Pull by Janiedoe12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 313]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella left Edward and everything she knew in Forks ten years ago. She knew he would never leave the MC, but circumstances drew her far away to accomplish her dreams. When Bella returns under somewhat mysterious circumstances, Forks will never be the same. AH. Tattward/Bikerward. Think Twilight meets Sons of Anarchy.

 

**Rec'd on The Lemonade Stand- go check out more recs from the TLS ladies!!**

 

tpull


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91763 Read Count: 60928
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Dec 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

OMG - the next chapter is going to be just explosice isn't it.  Great Great Great chapter.  Eay to rachet up the action and I really don't like mama bear or the drug addict - but I am baffled by the sonogram - whose?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am dying to know what happened with e/b. It was Esme influenced right!  Love the story. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

You have got me hooked like a fish. Nice complexities in your plot. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23

Esme is a problem. She just hates without caring about the consequences. Why?  Tanya, well she seems self centered but she may cause problems by sheer stupidity. Did someone steal Bella hair clip as a trophy?  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Great update. I am glad she is starting to let Edward in. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I liked all the different pov's. it helped really move things along. It also made me have like 800 more questions. I can't wait until you start answering things for us. Great job. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Yeah. Welcome back. I am anxious to hear the rest of Bella's story but the glimpses into other pov's was good too. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

I love this twisty turny story.  Keep it up.  

Who am I? by vamp_luvor Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

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Banner made by  vamp_luvor

My life drastically changed after I saw an ad online; I still cannot believe that I answered it!  I never expected it to turn out like this, but anything was better than before. When the pain became too much to bear; I realized that love heals.

This is a BDSM story A/H E/B HEA

Beta'd by: RAH070890


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21554 Read Count: 112988
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Why is Edward so afraid to talk to her now?  Good chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Charlie and Aro?  Isn't Aro respected and all that?  Won't he have to leave town now?  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Welcome back. I can't wait to see how Bella is. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Motives. I need motives besides money. Great update. 

Summary:

Bella is strong, independent & a fighter. She goes to Forks hiding from her past only to meet Edward. With people going missing is it possible that the darkness she's running from has followed her across country? My version of Twilight but a lot is still canon. 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101852 Read Count: 10104
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 05 Jun 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved her vulnerability in this chapter.  Good job.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

It is starting to make a little more sense now.  Keep going.  I am very inerested in this all coming together.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Bonus!

Your Bella is so burdened and dark.  The only light - which she totally rejects - is edward.  But since she is so familiar with the darkness she should be able to accept that her fate and happiness could be found in someone else who at least knows of the evils of the world.  Her thoughts here are so desolate.  Great job with inner Bella.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Seriously?  you can't just leave it like that?  ugh - please?  more?  soon?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I loved the chapter. Edward realized that she needed him but she opened her eyes that maybe they could do this together. The burn was scary. Loved all the kissing. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't beleive Edward isn't following her.  Good chapter though.  The Adam attack wass freaky.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I forgot ar Emmett and Rose too old for school in this story?  Also, Lucas had to know the vamps could hear him, shouldn't he have been more shocked or cautious since Bella hadn't mentioned them to him previously.  Great chapter.  I guess the last thing I am worried about it Charlie having her committed.  She seems like that wouldbe something that she could easily run from considering everything else going on with her.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ok very weird discovery.  Otherwise I like her. She is dark and true and so honest. Good chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This is my favorite chapter so far.  IT is simply Bella.  And the Edward.  I like the thought of these two solidifying thier feelings (mutually) before the big challenge in teh story occurs.  Great chatper.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

you have really upped the intrque this chapter.  Lucas, scott, murder, and no edward.  I am totally with you now, keep bringing it.  great chapter.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

There were so many emotions in this chapter and you left it off with a bang.  I hope thier is some sort of edward confrontation/explanation next chapter.  Great job.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy crap. Please update immediately. Charlie to the rescue?  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

A little over reaction?  Great beach time. Good chapter. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 102310
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love how happy they are.  great chapter.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I lie how you have everything coming together. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter.  Cauis is interesting.  I would liek to know more about the evil one.  Thanks.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great chapter.  76 mill!  holy cow.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am liking this story. Great job. It's a different twist and I am enjoying it. Now did Bella go to college at all yet? 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love how devoted Edawrd is to her already.  I am liking the mystery you have created as well  Good chapter.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. I honk it's smart for them to be married prior to the meeting. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter. Tanya needs to get her due now. Ouch for Paul. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great two chapter update.  I am happy that aro gave bella the folder.  now I have a better idea exactly how big of a deal it is that bella is his granddaughter.  will they get a chance to deepen their relationship?  Great job with the slores too.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Awwwww.  I really was hoping they would have a relationship. Great chapter though 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved the update. Newton is creepy but I can't wait for the will reading. Sounds good. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A homeless boy, hitch-hiking in the snow, a woman on her own, running from an abusive relationship. Is she crazy to stop, or are their paths destined to cross? Can this mismatched pair find succour and salvation together, or will their pasts intrude and drive them apart?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119972 Read Count: 27846
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Apr 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Snow

I am loving the story so far.  The first 4 chapters are completely captivating.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Tragedy

great update these last few chapters.  so is edward dreaming about his mother or the baby?  i want them to become closer still.  i am really liking both pov's.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

This was a wonderful story. I loved every word. Great job. 

 

Vicki. Madison, WI

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella is left at the altar by her fiance, Jacob, she finds that her best friend, Edward is the most effective cure for her misery. Is he, perhaps, the antidote to everything else that's gone amiss in her life as well? ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4187 Read Count: 1337
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 26 Apr 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job. Liked it. 

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Freed.

Great ending. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.

Wow. So dark. I would really like him free of Tanya. Great chapter. Gimme more please. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow. The druggie had that huge info and Carlisle couldn't figure it out?  Is it true?  And how is her father implicated?  Great job. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The last two chapters were deliciously evil. Amazing. Love the darkness. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Isn't eMac going to be super pissed he didn't get to?  Keep going. I want more. ;-)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great chapter.  i like the darkness of this story.  now that they have contact again i am hoping for more insight with the characters.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Again. Wow. Speechless here. The father really?  Bella has to be a little brain damaged right (lol)?!?  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

 This chapter gives me a welcome look at how they got together. Although I am still wondering how the previous chapter ended with her being so callous and cunning about the role Edward played in his fathers accident. Great job. This is a dark story I have enjoyed. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285766
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

I loved the grandpa. He was protective. I love Edward in this story. He is just 'le sigh'!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Beautiful. I love that song. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast

Perfect proposal. Cutest little girl Evah!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your note.  I love Lil Bit too.

cheers,

LB

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for

So sweet. Your chapter was full of happiness. It made my heart full. Good job. Would bob and carol move to seattle too?  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

OOooohhhhhh. continue right from this spot. She deserves her due. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 ~ naked as a jay bird

Ant sounds so talented. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow. I had no idea you were going to take us there. Great chapter though. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish

At most he will get some visitation but nothing more. Plus he has done nothing to help Bella in all this time. Not even a visit. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines

Jessica let him in?  Stupid?  Great chapter otherwise. 



Author's Response:

yes, i think Edward will need to find out why she let him in... not like Jess.  thanks for your note.  I plan to post the next chapter tonight.  here's a little teaser of chapter 30 : 

Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones.  Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.

He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest.  “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her.  So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up?  Huh?”

 

He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.

“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do.  She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.  

“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child.  We are their family and we will protect them.”

 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Great chapter. I am still a little leery of jasper but I will get over it. What about his jerk attorney though?  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

Yeah. But why do I want cherry pie now?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Edward is doing great in regards to his son. Are you going to make Kate evil?  Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Great family dialogue. I missed this and read the next chapter first. Loved the Cullen support. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Great chapter. Loved he man logic. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

I am totally ok. The love over flow-eth in his chapter. Loved it. Great job. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies

I hate that Anthony isn't with them. But soon. Beautiful chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...

Good chapter. I can see how he forgot and I hope Bella doesn't freak to much.  

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

All right Emmett. Anthony is coming!  Yeah!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - distracting brioche w creme fraiche

I love Anthony and little bit. So cute. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

Fun chapter. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334745
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ok I loved everything about the chapter. The jake thing really upset me though. What is his game?  And he was talking o Charlie like that?  About his own daughter?  I cannot wait to see how this plays out. 



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

I loved the start. So far both are very open and honest. Bella is extremely naive but so far I like it. Great Jo.  I'm sold. 



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone seems to be loving the story and we are so happy about that.  Not a lot of questions asked this go around, but there will probably be some more by the next chapter.  This story will be somewhere between twenty and thirty chapters when complete.  We mentioned this will post once a week on Mondays.  If for some reason Kasi can’t post Monday morning, it may post late Sunday night.  The Cullen’s are very accepting of Edward’s choices in life and his lifestyle, therefore yes the Cullen’s would be good to Bella if she were to be around them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we look forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story goes.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter. Bella is just so sad. Why is she invisible to her family?



Author's Response:

Hey everyone thanks for reading and reviewing.  There have been several questions and some we can’t fully answer to not give away too much about the story and where we’re taking it.  But let’s start off with the easy stuff.  This will be about 25 chapters in total, give or take a few and we update every Monday or very late Sunday night.  There are many questions regarding the scene that Edward will be participating in.  It is a scheduled demo, teaching session.  We don’t want to give away any info on the scene as of yet, but trust us that there will be nothing remotely sexual about it for Edward at all.  The submissive which will be a part of the exhibition will not in any way shape or form, want or try to keep Edward as their own.  As for more info on Bella’s parents and why they are the way they are, you all really have to be a little patient, you haven’t even met them yet.  There are a LOT of seriously wicked guesses as to what is going on and why things are the way they are, but so far nothing is dead on correct.  You can join us on Facebook, search for the group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Hope you enjoy the teaser... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  The rest of the night goes slowly and my mind often deviates back to Bella.  I end up texting her just to have some communication with her.

Beautiful. How was work tonight?  Did you get much work done for college?  I just finished eating some of the lovely apple pie that you made me. It was truly one of the best I’ve ever tasted. Thank you.  ~Edward

I try to focus on my work, but find myself unable to stop looking at my cell. I close the club and head home.  I’m sad and upset that she didn’t respond to my text. By the time I get home, I feel even more upset and even angry.  I wonder why she wouldn’t text me back.  Thinking over reasons, I make a mental list. 

Have I scared her off? No, I don’t think that’s it.  She wouldn’t have agreed to meet up with me if I had scared her.  From what I see and know of her, she doesn’t ignore people, so that can't be it. 

Maybe her phone is out of minutes.  Now this is more possible, because her cell is one of those cheap pay-as-you-go ones and she has little money.  If that’s the reason, then there is no way for her to call or text me back.  Do dorm rooms come with a phone in them? Not really sure about that, I’ll have to check.  I know she is the type of person that would try to keep money on her cell and would say if she was low.  She has often said she needed to switch her phone off because she was low on minutes. 

Maybe she fell asleep and is a deep sleeper.  It has been after midnight when I texted her.  She did say she was normally home before eight and in bed by ten most nights.  Yep, that must be it.  She’ll most likely text me once she’s awake.  I’m sure she’ll feel bad that she missed my text.  One thing is for sure, she doesn’t need me being on her ass like white on rice.

I feel myself calming down after thinking over the theories, and I decide to head to bed.  I wake up and look at my phone seeing it's a little after seven in the morning, but I still don’t have a text from Bella.  I frown and let out a sigh as I rub my face, knowing that I need to get moving.  I’m supposed to be meeting my dad at nine for breakfast, because he won’t be able to attend dinner tonight.

I get showered and dressed all while glaring at my cell.  I see that there is still no incoming text. I text my father to say that I’m on way, and ask if he could text me back to be sure he got my message.  I frown even more when he's answering my text minutes later.  Well, that takes away the newest theory that my cell is not receiving incoming text messages.

I arrive at the hospital and see dad is waiting for me.

“What was the texting all about?”

 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow Bella is going to be more damage now. Renee is beyond awful. I hope Phil gives Bella the money. 



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chApter. I liked how Edward has involved others with his concerns. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We were very glad to see that the major majority of you are no longer questioning Edward’s abilities to do the right thing.  The next chapter is the chapter that will really set things into motion.

 We have had some concerns brought to our attention regarding the fact that Bella talks to Edward about herself in third person.  We are not saying that EVERY submissive talks to their Dominant in third person, but the research we’ve done, more often than not it is the way it is.  Keep in mind that we’ve spoken to Dominants and submissives alike during our research.  In this story Bella has a photographic memory, she could have read any number of books which reference the usage of third party speaking as a natural way to show submission.  Neither of us is saying anyone else should do this, but in this story Bella is quite the natural at speaking as a submissive. 

Some have suggested that Edward try to just be a boyfriend and not a Dom to Bella.  Edward will discuss all of this with her soon, we assure you that no stones will be left unturned.  Chapter eight you will get to meet Charlie, but first we will have a turning point in seven that many of you have been asking for and suggesting since chapter two. 

There have been a lot of comments and references about the neglect Bella has withstood from her ‘family’.  When Nikky and I first talked about this story I wanted us to play up the neglect, because it is a huge amount of the way many children live.  I have shared with everyone, in the author’s notes and review replies, that I was a victim of neglect.  When I talked about my own experiences it was not for your sympathy it was to say that I know it happens.  I want to say thank you to all of you who have made mention of my past abuse, and send hugs to those who have shared some of their own stories with us.  Not everything Nikky and I write about Bella happened to me, and as an adult I had a moderately decent relationship with my parents.  I cannot say that Bella will, or that this story will end with her having contact with her biological parents. 

We hope this addresses the majority of your concerns and or questions.  We will see you next week with a pivotal chapter in the story! 

Much love, Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:
“Please, excuse me, I need to take this,” I inform Aro and move away while answering my cell. “Beautiful, how are you this evening?”

I don’t hear a reply, but I can hear music in the background.

“Ah, shit! That hurt,” Bella’s voice comes across the line, but it sounds off and slurred.

“Bella, are you okay?” I ask alarmingly, already moving toward the exit.

“Oh, this ... weird ... I was going to call you.  I feel ... real funny ... strange.  My head ... hurt and ... I feel ... um ... so dizzy ...”

I see Felix standing guard close to the door and I head to him. “Bella, I’m on my way.  Stay on your cell.”

I pull my cell away from my mouth before speaking to Felix. “I need to go. Find Aro tell him I had to leave, he will assist you in any details you need.  Let him know he is in charge.”

He gives me a nod, and I exit the door and run to my car.

“Okay, Beautiful, stay right where you are and stay on the phone with me. I’m on my way to you.” I try to take some deep breaths to calm myself. “Where are you, Beautiful?” I start my car as I switch my cell to hands-free.

“I ... hum, bathroom ... I think. Fuck ... it’s warm in here.”

I know right now it is best to keep her talking. “Have you been drinking?” I ask frowning, because I know even when I’m out with her, Bella does not drink much.

“Nope ... I am ... a goo ... girl ... I swear ... Sir, no ... drink-ies ... for me.”

“There you are! I was wondering where you got off to. Who are you talking to?” I hear a male’s voice ask, and I move my car a little faster.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

The background check..  Seriously I don't get it.  Why does Charlie do that?  And why is bella with Jessica?  She isn't stupid but she is kind of acting that way.  Great chapter.  I am loving the detail you are putting into this story.



Author's Response:

Well it seems like more and more of you are hating Bella’s parents.  That is quite understandable, but you haven’t even met them yet.  Yeah you get to meet them.  Form your opinions after you do.  The back story of what happened at Harvard will come out, soon.  You will also get to see more of the sweet side of our DomWard in upcoming chapters.

We had people worrying about throwing Bella right into scenes and such, we want to assure you that there is no way we could write that, because there is no way she could do that.  This story starts in September, and they will be friends first.  Edward has feelings for her, but he knows she is quite broken.  Have some trust in us, we are not perfect but we do try to provide a decent story worth reading.

We’ve had a lot of people asking about chapter count, and posting time frames.  At this point we are saying around 25 chapters.  There are 14 written and once we have it fully written we will post much more often.  We could easily post up to chapter 12 right now, but then you would be stuck waiting for 13 and on up.  We would rather put you on a week wait now, than have to say, sorry we got writers block no chapter this week.  We purposely started posting after we had 10 chapters written for a reason. 

We’re going to start giving teasers like we did for His Cimmerian View, and this is the first teaser and it is unannounced, so enjoy.

Nikky and Kasi~

 

I chuckle, before leaning in to whisper to her.  “These are exhibitionist submissive and Dominants that are in these. There are many showing different scenes—new things—teaching methods.  Some have sex in them, but unlike porn these, or most of them I should say, are collared pairings, who have been together for a long time and both agreed to do this.  There are some that are of a submissive that is into humiliation.  They’d meet with the Dom several times and build a trust between them, before these filmed scenes take place.  There’s always a contract between both parties, and both are screened for STDs beforehand.”

Bella looks at the DVDs and then back at me.  “Are you in any of them?” she asks, her voice is soft and low.

I look at her shaking my head.  “No, I’ve never done that.  Well, I never had someone taking pictures or a video of it anyway.  I have done a few scenes with my sub at the time.  When I’m not with a collared sub, like my current situation, I’ve done scenes with submissives’ whom I have a good relationship with from my club.  I’m due to do a teaching scene about rope bondage and spanking at the club three weeks from now.  No matter how many scenes I participate in, the one thing I don’t do is have sex during a public scene.”

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ok I didn't think she would go with Renee but I am surprised at how she held her composure when turning Renee down. What/ how did Renee damage things?  

 

I feel you are getting us to some dramatic points. Great job. 



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Girls. I just don't understand how Bella could have surrounded herself by all these awful people. Great chapter. 

 

Just a bit about Edward. Yes he is a Dom and sexually he had an interest in Bella. But sometimes the need to fill the role of friend or big brother is what is needed more than love or sex. I have a very hot friend (I am an old lady twi ff lover of 41) and he is beautifully broken. As much as he is sexually attractive and captivating he needs me as someone who is a true friend rather than as someone who has an interest in future sex. He has enough of those type of admirers. So as much as I love e and b romantically. Maybe not here. Ya know?  



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)  PS... Vicki, Edward wants her don;t be fooled by that, but he will never push her beyond whatever it is she needs most from him.  A Dom is only as strong as his submissive.  Right now Bella needs a friend and that is what he is.  Things will develop but there is a bit of a slow burn.  I hope you'll see that as it develops.

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ladies you are doing a great job. I do believe that things like Bella's story do happen. I was raised by a single mom. She was hit by a drunk driver when I was 8. I have been the adult in our family since then. I had to care for her and my sister and cook and clean and maintain the home at that age. You react differently to things because your perspective is altered. You choose to believe that any sign of love is precious because it seems like a sign if normality. 

 

Great job.  



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I want Bella to be the one to kick their ass though. Just wow!



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good chapter. Aro has a good point though. I wasn't expecting the ending. 



Author's Response:

Well it seems the majority of you really liked this chapter.  There was some confusion regarding Edward’s family, they all really love Bella, but have been warned to not be too handsy or huggy with her, because it is nothing she is used too.  Please don’t fret, Edward’s family is there and will be there to support Bella.  Lots of you still want instant retribution for Bella against everyone who has hurt her, but please be patient Rome wasn’t built in a day.  As always our update schedule is every Sunday night/Monday morning, so far I have been able to post every Sunday.  There is a lot of stuff going on and things will be interesting here very soon.  A lot of people were surprised by Bella’s actions of kneeling naked in his playroom, but only Bella knows what she wants.  Edward wants her there is no doubt about that, but he wants her to want him for herself—not just because she thinks this is what he wants.  Edward has a fine line to walk, but he is not stupid and will handle this situation accordingly.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:
I glance down at my cell, when it rings seeing that it says Beauty.  I frown, because I know that she should be about to start her last class.

“Beautiful, is everything alright?” I ask worryingly.

“Renee called, I didn’t pick up.  I was unsure if you wanted me to call you first or if it was just Charlie. I’m sorry, I just thought ...”

I smile and sit back down.  “No, Renee wasn’t on the list, but I’m glad that you called.  Please wait until I’m with you before calling her back.  I will make a list of people of who you are not to answer to, it’ll make it easier for you—us.” I hear Bella clear her throat a few times. “Is there anything else, Beautiful?”

I hear a light chuckle. “You know me so well.  Two things, one I want to know what would happen if I skipped my next class, and second, they want me to see Mr. Whitlock, Jasper, sometime today.”  I can hear in her voice there’s something more and I know this may need a face to face talk. “I am on my way to make an appointment with Jasper right now.”

I smile a little and grab my car keys.  “I coming and getting you from Jasper’s office, stay there until I arrive.”

“I will, Sir ... it’s, oh, Jacob,” Bella says.

“Well, hello there, Isabella.”

I move faster towards my car.  “Don’t speak to him.  Go into Jasper’s office and hand Jasper your cell,” I say to her, while Jacob was talking.

“I’m sorry, but he’s blocking my path.”

I let out a sigh, and start my car. 

“Who are you talking to?  Not that old guy?  Is he still fucking you?  I’m surprised he’s been able to keep himself hard around your whore ass.”

I grit my teeth together. “Shout Jasper’s name now,” I say as Jacob rattles on.  When I hear nothing coming from Bella, I put on a firm voice.  “Now, Little Girl, scream for him and hand him your cell.”

“Jasper!” I hear Bella yell.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I was so impressed with the first weekend together.   I liked it because it shows that edward is really trying to build a long term Ds relationship.  I loved the slowness and care he took.

Renee - beyond cooky and obviously abusive - just in a different way - please don't let edward go to jail for killing her.



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Renee is awful but Phil does seem to care but seriously Renee will drop Phil like a bad habit if so etching better comes along. Too bad because he does seem like a nice guy but Renee is using him. Hero Edward is still awesome. 



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter. Lovely fluff. She is so selfless. The college boys covers stipend intrigued me. I am out of the circle though why would her roommates call her gellar?  What does it mean/ refer to?



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Their first time was perfect. Not planned. It just was. Phil is awesome. I hope Bella is ok with the news. I still don't get Charlie though. 



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved the strength Bella showed. Phil is awesome. And I didn't catch the clues. I hate the cliffie (jk). Great chapter again. 



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter. I am so proud of Bella and I loved the engagement. I wasn't prepared for the ptegnancy but I can deal. 



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”