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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care? Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect. She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS. Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same. She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down. Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side? Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems? Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218345
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!
Great chapter. You verbalized all of Bella's fears perfectly.
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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for. She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given. Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him. Can an uneducated Bella teach him something? What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263191
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation
Omg. I don't know how I found your story but I love it. Great job. Anxiously awaiting the updates.
Author's Response:
Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers. It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks. Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process. I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30. After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters. Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for. I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist. (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL. Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali. I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried. I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to. Neither of those statements was untrue. I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s. You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information. Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk. Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see. Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming. She is quite sly, like a fox. We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking. I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities. I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline. We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it. We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers. Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us! Kasi (&Nikky)
Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process
I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor. Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying. I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.
“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do? This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know. Why…why would she lie about that? I did everything they ever asked. I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them. Why? I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it.
“Bella, please calm down. I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”
As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too. She looks broken and scared.
“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.
“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know. I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know. If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear. Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you. If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged. I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved. I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last. “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil
Great amazingchapter. I loved that you had so much going on. and Ugh the cameras didn't even catch her leaving the ball? this woman is unbelieveably slimy.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View. A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come. I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far. And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she? Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh. I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter. A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter. Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise. Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out. There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat. I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue. She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun. I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are. Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them. There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31. Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up. See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...
Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night. I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in. “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”
She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”
I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her. “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.” I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye. “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you. The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers. Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band.
“Baby, what’s wrong?”
She looks up at me and frowns. “I was just thinking about my past. There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.” Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it. “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me. Her friend... he gave me a muffin.” Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts. “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?”
My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head. “Yes, baby, it was me. I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”
Bella shakes her head at me. “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you. I wanted you to come back and take me with you. At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch. If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here. They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”
I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly. “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them. I will not fail you or my children again.”
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start
Ok. I like the baby news. I mean it fits. It's realistic. Now the nasty school marm. I really hope Cauis fires her. I just don't understand psycho bitch but wow you made her evil. I think it won't take Edward long finding Bella a ring. Great update. I can't wait until the next one.
Author's Response:
Hello, thanks again for reading and reviewing this story. Nikky and I put a lot of work into these chapters; as well do a large group of ladies who have become not only our sounding boards, but trusted members of our team. I was shocked that the backlash on the pregnancy was not larger than it was. I was very skeptical about making Bella pregnant and ironically Jess2002 (WHO HATES IT THAT EVERY STORY BELLA GETS KNOCKED UP) said it had to be done now, because (knowing our future plot line) it was the perfect fit. So if you are one of the (so far) two negative reviews about the pregnancy we’ve gotten, please know that your reaction was shared at first. After we thought it over it was easy to see that it however enhanced the love story between Edward and Bella. The gender of the baby is picked, as well as the babies name. The story is quickly approaching finalization, and with it I feel a sense of loss.
There haven’t been many questions, but there have been several comments about things that are complete misunderstandings. So I figured I would list some of the ones I remember off the top of my head.
Edward wants to marry Bella, but he hasn’t yet proposed.
Edward has been looking for a ring, and trying to his best ability to find out where his mother’s jewelry is.
Edward is very rich, and doesn’t have to work, but like most people who are rich a great portion of his funds is wrapped up in investments, so not always does he have access to super large amounts of money.
Edward’s father was quite a pianist and left Edward a rather large inheritance, as well as before his mother left she made sure to leave him money in a trust.
Elizabeth knew she was ill and left thinking Edward would be better raised by Esme and Carlisle.
Alice is not a blood relative of the Cullen’s, or Masen’s.
Jasper and Rosalie’s parents died and in the will they left guardianship of them to Carlisle and Esme.
Sue and Harry’s parents are dead, harry murdered them.
Bella’s biological parents are dead.
Rose was always allowed to act out and as if she was better than everyone else.
The next chapter is one you won’t want to miss for sure. Before you sit down to read it, you may want to get a cold drink (not promoting booze, but I needed some writing parts of it), a few tissues, and be sure to tell yourself at least four or five times before you start reading – “Kasi and Nikky are happily ever after writers...”
Thanks again for the story love, Kasi (&Nikky)
Chapter 30 Teaser, subject to changes during BETA process.
Seth and Leah have taken to home schooling well; both are extremely bright children. Lucy resigned from her temporary position at the school, and is now helping us teach them at home. Between the five of us: Lucy, Esme, Zafrina, Bella, and myself, the twins are receiving an excellent education. They’ve both been a little more edgy lately, and upset about what happened with Sue. It’s been causing both of them to have more nightmares than usual. Samantha’s advice was simple: just keep helping them feel safe and secure in their home. We’ve talked about it several times, and I think they now understand that the school did something wrong. I also know that they believe we will keep them safe.
Mrs. Crown has been fired over her behavior, as were four other staff members. This led to the papers getting ahold of the full story of what happened at the school. When the story first came out, all that had been said was that there had been an attempted abduction. Since then, though, someone had talked – my guess would be Mrs. Crown – and it’s been all over the local news and in the papers.
Thankfully, Seth and Leah’s names have been kept out, but reporters did manage to get some of the story behind Sue, Charlie, and Harry. They were also able to gather some information on Bella, like the fact that she raised her siblings from birth, but they did not focus on this. They focused, instead, on how Bella had to have known that her Uncle and parents were hurting and killing people, and hid it instead of going to the authorities.
They talked about how when she worked, she left the children unattended and neglected. That one line hurt Bella the most, and I had a hard time trying to calm her down. Of course, it also upset Seth and Leah. To say I was ranting and raving over the phone lines to just about anyone who would listen, was an understatement. I had to take several deep breaths and remind myself that I supposed to help reduce the stress, not add to it.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Faith Within
K&N - I am not disappointed at all. The step monster got away with crap for several chapters longer than I thought possible. I loved Jane'sprotectiveness. Great chapter. Oh - how did Sue know that Bella's check was deposited in a joint account or that Bella was given access to edwards account and what about the email to the bank - can you have that explained in the next chapter?
Author's Response:
Well it seems that most everyone is happy that Sue is caught, but many of you are unhappy that she wasn’t tortured first by our dear Jane. No worries our little Jane will eventually be paying Sue a visit. Many seem to be worried that Sue will escape or get away; well rest assured that we have no intent on letting that fruit-loop free. She is toast. It seems that less people are disgruntled by Bella being pregnant, now that chapter 30 posted. As the next few chapters post, I am thinking most if not all people will understand why Jess told us it was the perfect fit. Nikky and I have added to but not really changed much of the original story-line. I love when you all make suggestions and we’ve already written it into the story. The next chapter has a few suggestions in it, that oddly enough were written before they were suggested. I know that some of you are sad that this will be coming to a close, but there will be MANY – MANY more out-takes to come. We actually discussed some future plotting things today and have a whole other out-take to add to the Enduring His Cimmerian View, in Edward’s POV to boot. A lot of you want a Jane’s POV and well we have decided that it will be the next one released, do I hear the cheering already? Yep... pretty sure I do... LOL. We really want to say THANK YOU again and again, for reading, reviewing and loving this story so much... it has become a HUGE part of our lives and we both put a lot of work into it, as well as the wonderful group of gal’s we have keeping us from looking stupid.
Thank you, and we will see you with the next update. Kasi (& Nikky)
Chapter 31 teaser, subject to changes during beta process.
Tomorrow we are scheduled to be in court. Since it is the same day as my birthday, I have refused to do anything but celebrate us getting full custody of Seth and Leah. I am thinking positive. Bella has refused to let my twenty-ninth birthday go by without doing something. Seth and Leah soon joined in and I lost the battle. So tonight we are having a family dinner, and everyone is going to be here. Bella decided that I should also receive my gifts tonight from everyone.
I watch her making sure everyone has drinks before she sits me in the middle of everyone. Seth and Leah come up to me first. Seth hands me small box, and Leah hands me two envelopes. I open the envelopes first. The first envelope contains a certificate for being the best dad, signed by both Seth and Leah. The second envelope holds a homemade birthday card from them. I whisper out an emotional thank you to them in their ears, before opening the box Seth gave me.
As I open the box, I see it’s a necklace. It is platinum with dog-tag like disks of metal hanging from it. The first tag says ‘Dad’. I look at the next which says ‘Seth Masen’ on it as I turn it over I see the other side has his date of birth. The next has ‘Leah Masen’ again the back has her date of birth. The last tag is blank and I look up questioningly.
“It’s for when Bean’s born.” I look up at Seth and Leah and pull them both in for a hug a kiss the heads.
“Thank you Little Man and Princess.” I watch them go back at sit down, after we share a few more hugs.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family
Ladies. Thank you for all the answers. I felt like you wrote this chapter just for me and all the questions I asked last time. Great job and I loved the proposal. Now sue's trial. I imagine her defense will try to prove reasonable doubt and implicate bella and or her true accomplaces. I imagine the media will have a field day with Bella again. And I am so curious as to who has been helping sue and why.
See you for the next update. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View. I am very sorry for the lateness of getting this review reply to you. I always write them out and Nikky sends them to everyone on FFN and I send them out to everyone on TWCS and Twilighted. With the move, I am without internet, so needless to say we got a bit of a delay. We are hoping that the delay will not cause an issue in the normal posting, however we may run late getting chapters 33, 34 and 35 posted. This has put me behind by more than a week, so I hope you all are understanding in regards to the situation. The reviews have been wonderful, and Nikky tells me that there haven’t been a lot of questions. The next chapter will be loved and hated, but trust in the fact that Jane has a plan for Sue. Thanks for being such loyal readers, we love and appreciate every wonderful review and comment you all leave us. HUGS! Kasi (&Nikky)
Teaser for 32 subject to changes during beta process
“What do you want Pet?” Sue sneers out.
Bella look at her, and I nod my head in encouragement. “I want to know why? Why you didn’t love them?”
Sue shakes her head. “That’s easy, because they were meant to be mine and Charlie’s, but instead they had to come out being HIS. Every time I looked at them, all I saw was that stupid fucker.”
Bella looks at her shaking her head. “Well I was Charlie’s child and you didn’t love me.”
Sue laughs sarcastically, and she shows her teeth as she makes a face. “NO, you are right about that. I don’t love you, I never have and I never will. I wanted something that was mine and Charlie’s, I deserved that. What I didn’t deserve was for your whore of a mother to intentionally get pregnant to try and steal my man from me.”
I chuckle out loud at Sue’s delusional attitude, and Sue growls at me.
“There are only two people I love in this world that is Charlie and Harry and you took both away from me,” Sue says caustically as she turns her glare at Bella.
“I want to know what you were planning to do with Seth, and the baby that belonged to Tanya, what was your plans?”
Sue laughs at Bella’s question in her evil sarcastic way. “You really want to know? Well I’ll tell you,” she says with a now huge happy smile.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers
That woman is delusionally evil. Great chapter and I loved strong Bella.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the major fail in getting this review reply in a timely manner. Been stressing with the issues of moving and getting the net working, but on the bright side things are working well now. Chapter 33 should post on time, I’m working on 34 right now and Nikky is working on the Epilogue right now. WOOT WOOT! Not much for teasers after this chapter, but keep those reviews and thoughts coming in, we love to hear what you have to say. Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)
TEASER!!! For chapter 34 – subject to changes during beta process...
With the help of Garrett, he got his hands on a large poker table, and even hired a dealer for the night with Aro’s help. He asked Bella and Esme to make us up snacks, and then sent Emmett and Jasper to get the big people juice. We kept the card game light while Seth was playing with us. After he went to bed, we gambled a little harder. Emmett’s only complaint about the night was that there seemed to be the lack of strippers. Actually, he was upset because there were no strippers.
The night was relaxing and rather quiet, so it was perfect for me. I don’t see this as my last night of freedom, but the last night of my old, solitary life. I can’t wait to have Bella as my wife. I can’t wait to call her Mrs. Masen tomorrow. Tomorrow I marry my soulmate, and my true life will begin.
~HCV~
Here I am, standing up at the front of the church. Everything is so beautifully decorated. The girls made it look perfect, and I know it’s exactly as Bella wanted it. The ladies of the church made sure that every single detail of Bella’s wishes was precisely the way she had envisioned it.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Wedding Bells
Great chapter. Honestly I started crying with the vows and didn't stop until the wedding night sexy time. Great job. If I was an audience member for that wedding and reception, I would have cried the entire time.
Author's Response:
As things are winding to a close Nikky and I wanted to take this opportunity to say that we are very grateful for all of your reviews and the time you put into reading our story. Our next plans are to work on the several POV’s that you have all asked for. The Jane POV will for certain be the next POV chapter we post.
As for the next story we plan to write, well Nikky has this uncanny ability to get a tiny idea and go freaking CRAZY with it and so now she has already hammered out a decent start on a new story... AND what a story it will be... How about a story of a virginella who loves to dance, and an olderward who lives in the BDSM lifestyle – we know been done before right? Yeah well knowing us... do you really think it won’t have a few twists? Besides as wonderful as we write bad guys, you know you can’t wait to see what kind of crazy this will bring on. This BDSM story will of course have SEX in it, but it will not be all about sex, nor will the next chapter of HCV.
A couple people have mentioned that they hope the whole next chapter is not just full of a bunch of sex acts, and honestly HCV has never been about a bunch of sex acts. Yes there have been some explicit scenes in the story, especially regarding Edward when he was attending the club, but this story has never needed sex to be readable... and our next story will be the same way. We also have a stalker story on the burner, and the BDSM may turn into a really big drabble or one-shot. Either way you’ll be seeing MUCH more from Nikky and me.
I am also writing a story with Jess that will start posting fairly soon under the name JessAndTAT that will be called Bases Loaded.
I don’t think that there are any loose ends yet to tie up, other than Rose, and you will learn more about her in the Epilogue. If there is something else you want to know let us know right away and we will get it answered and or addressed in the Epilogue.
As always and again, thank you so very much for being such wonderful and loyal readers.
Kasi (&Nikky)
Teaser for Chapter 34: Subject to changes during Beta process.
I look at Bella who is sound asleep, in bed. I smile pushing her hair from her face. I rented us a villa and we haven’t left the bedroom for longer than half hour all weekend. I know that things will change today. She still has no clue about where we are. I chuckle remembering the car ride here and how she looked around trying to work it out. All she knows is that we are still in America.
My phone beeps I pick it up and read the text, seeing that my first surprise will be here in just over an hour. I get out of bed head to the kitchen to make Bella breakfast in bed. I play music as I fry her eggs and bacon, being really careful of my delicate parts, since I’m not exactly dressed. Ha, the naked chef has nothing on me. Once breakfast is ready I head back with a try and place it on the bedside table.
“Baby it’s time to get up,” I whisper in her ear.
I watch her smile as she stretches and wakes up. “Hmm, no – to tired. Come back to bed and cuddle with me, or better yet help me wake up the good way – like you did around three this morning.”
I chuckle shaking my head at her, but stop to kiss her before speaking. “As much as I would love to take you again baby, over and over – I can’t right now. I have a surprise for you and you need to eat your breakfast and get washed before it arrives. Because once it’s here I’ll be taking you out for the day and you will finally know where exactly we are at.”
She opens her eyes wide and smiles at me. “You got me a surprise?”
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Magic Times
I am so happy for this family. Thanks for clearing up who was helping sue. Great job ladies. Btw Jane is terrifically scary yet love able.
Author's Response:
Wow, you guys are all so amazing, it will be bittersweet when we post the next chapter and click that button saying it is complete. We want to really thank all of you so much for reviewing, we know hundreds of others read, but didn’t review, so we really want you to know that we are grateful and appreciative of the time you put forth to send us a review, no matter how long or short. When the final chapter posts you all will have the chance to read an author’s note from us both. Nikky has written hers and I have written mine. Normally I just write them and include whatever Nikky wants me to touch base on. I am super stoked because we actually stand a chance at getting our reviews over 5000 at FFN and we just pushed over 1000 mark at TWCS. We are both so excited and thrilled with the turn out for our story, so thank you in being a HUGE contribution to those warm fuzzy feelings we both have over the story love we have gotten. THANK YOU! Be sure to get Enduring His Cimmerian View on your watch list, because the next POV chapter to post is Jane and there will be a large dish of justice served Jane style in it. Thanks again to you all for the wonderful things you’ve had to say!
Kasi (& Nikky)
Sequel to ‘Virgins & Villains’ and ‘Love Rescue Me’. Follow Edward, Bella and the rest of the family as they survive pregnancy, childbirth and anything else that life throws at them. Alternates between BPOV and EPOV.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52678 Read Count: 14114
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The City of Light & Falling Down
Worth the wait !!!!!! Great chapter. Is this chef going to be a problem?
Author's Response: Let's just say that Edward tends to overreact. Thanks very much!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Oscars & The Lucky Man
I love these characters. welcome back.
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Californication & Idle Threats
Great job. I forgot how much I missed these characters until now. I love how strong Bella is. In fact I think I should go back and read the first story over again. Take care babe.
Author's Response: very glad you like the story...working on the next chapter now. It begins in France and is in Edward's pov. Thanks!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags
Yeah. Great job. I do love how close Bella and Edward are.
Author's Response: I love writing them as well. Thanks so much!
Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Great job. A physical response even.
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Carlisle's reaction was interesting. Rather forceful.
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Great job making them connect like this. I liked it.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
NIce to see some of b's efforts are shining through to the real world. Great Charlie.
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Great updates this week. Enjoy your trip.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
Great job. The theory is plausible but how does she overcome it?
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Great job with Bella's emotions these last few chapters.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
Yes I agree with Beta - odd, but will it work?
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Epilogue
Congratulations on this amazing last ff story. Good luck to you in normal world writing. I am a big supporter of ff authors when they go " straight " so please let me know.
I have loved all your stories. Good luck. I'll miss you.
Bella meets Edward, but what she does know not who he is and what he does. But Edward knows the lines that he's crossing when he makes the decision to be with her. Many factors are against them. Will their love be enough? or will the lines be too strong?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 135 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 441443 Read Count: 491650
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127
Alice is so spoiled. Good chapter.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128
This chapter seemed very sweet to me. The lemons were great too, but I love it when you write about Edwards devotion.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131
Great chapters. Alice was much more tolerable. I am freaked out about the noise in the night Bella heard. Nice job. Great story.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132
Wow. Awesome foreshadowing.
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134
So sad. And wow is Alice in trouble. Good chapter.
A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. Bella finds her own piece of heaven with the man who saved her, but has she truly escaped the clutches of the man who preyed on her?
All Human, Bella & Edward. Rated NC17 for language/lemons/some violence. Expansion of a one shot I posted on Fanfiction.net but then expanded due to reviewer request.
Reviews on Fanfiction - 138 so far!
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168665 Read Count: 27965
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Hi - i found this story and am loving it. great character development. great plot. And the lemons are causing me todrink. Wow.
Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.
Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923285
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
seriously is there any hint of hope for them to get off the island? Plus, when are they going to discover the secret of alice? Great two chapters.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
yes it was beautiful. thank you.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
yeah, my nipples are sore after reading this chapter. I don't think Edward or Bella realizes that Aro is not going to let them go, or it has sunk in that he is going to keep the baby not to mention what will happen if the baby is a girl. Great set of chapters They are so sick, but you are telling a good story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!!!!!!! Love them all. I can tell you that at this point in their lives, they were not the least bit concerned with if Aro would take the baby or what would happen if it was a girl. They are in survival mode, day by day survival. When the newness of their situation wears off, and they are in somewhat of a routine, they start to question what will happen down the road.
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69
Dammit Edward where are you ?
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Yes, totally sick but I can't wait to see how you eventually write this. Great job in making Edward rethink his life. But wow is Aro CRAZEE!!!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
So what are the age of the characters here because Aro is Edwards grandfather which means he has to like 70 right? And he is delusional enough to want a baby? How is the island supplied? Is there no hope?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
sick sick bad guys but good chapter
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
you are doing an amazing job with this story. yes, it's sick and sadistic, and extremely cringeworthy but I can't not read it. I have to take a deep breath to read each chapter and I do it because I want to see B and E and even Jasper and Alice overcome the evil that surrounds them. So, see you next chapter.
Author's Response:
OH you get it... you sooo get it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its all about two things. #1, what would u endure to keep someone you love from feeling pain, and #2, what can you overcome when you have love.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
good chapter. Is it wrong of me to want every man on the island except for Jasper and Edward to meet a very gruesome death?
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I actually wished they would have had to clean each other too. What an ending.
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Ok the last two chapters have been totally un cringe worthy and I am ok with that. Seriously I admire your story. I have never felt so aprehensive about reading a story yet can't wait to read it at the same time. You ladies are killing me. Great job. Every single chapter is well thought out and the bad guys are completely sick and I know you are going to intriduce us to more sickos soon but I do love the time you give us with the good guys as well.
Is there any hope for the good guys? Do they any shot at this nightmare ending?
vicki from Madison, WI
Author's Response:
Hey Vicki, I'll be driving through Madison tomorrow. They do have a hope at this nightmare ending. I can give you some vague hints. I am a happily ever after girl, so don't fear. But there is some sorrow and some tears coming up.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
ugh I get so tense reading this story. great job though. keep it up.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Thank you for letting them really connect before the nightmare of a wedding day. Great job. Yeah!!!!!!
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
I liked your authors note that Edward is worried about a potential baby and how he is going to protect both it and Bella. Great chapter. I love how nervous he was.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Terrifying chapter but you did a great job with it.
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Finally. Now give me some hope for getting off the island. Great job.
Author's Response:
ironic you mention hope.... tanya is making a scarf with the word hope embroidered on it. :)
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
At least momma Bree is saved. So sad.
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Wow. Great update. Yes Victoria. That is love ( rolls eyes ).
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Wow. Thank you. I am so happy they all made it. There is so much to explain. Now please don't keep Edward and Bella apart to long. Also I am very worried about James. Great chapter.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65
Wow. Edward still thinks she had the ultimate procedure. And did I understand correctly hay Charlie chipped him? Great job.
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67
Good stuff for jasper and Alice. Now to get Edward and Bella straightened out.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68
well his head is still in his ass but he does have some decent leads. Great chapter. As far as your book! Wow. Congratulations!!!!!
Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich. What happens when he finds out her secret?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202993 Read Count: 68922
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call
Excellent chapter. I loved rose and the way she led Edward. Hate the other kid btw.
Author's Response:
Rose was awesome. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.
See ya soon,
~EA
Chapter 18 teaser:
Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.
"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Words
Le sigh. Finally. Thank you. I want to proceed with romance. I am curious how Bella is going to keep paying her tuition. Great chapter.
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: The Cabin
You did great with their first time. Babs was great. Good chapter. The tv interview was good too.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Mississippi
They are finally back on track. Great chapter.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Somewhere I Belong
That was so beautiful. Can I belong here too? Great job. Btw. Last chapter. Esme totally channeled her inner mrs weasley. Loved it.
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: I'll Stand By You
Take care of yourself. This was a great chapter.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: A Part of the Family
As much as I dislike Bella's parents I would guess a jealous, well-connected girl is behind this. Great chapter. I am liking team Edwards family more and more.
Author's Response:
Hi, so glad you liked the chapter. We'll see if you still have the same thoughts as to who is behind the pics after the next chapter. And Edward's family will be behind them 100%.
Chapter 22 will be up later today once I get it back from my beta and have it all fixed up. Until then here's a teaser for ya...
"Mmm, good morning," she whispered and rolled over to face me.
Somehow when she'd shifted her position her breast had slid under the palm of my hand. Bella froze and her eyes shot to mine. I moved to pull my hand away from her but she grabbed my wrist and held it in place.
"It's okay," she said softly leaving me frozen this time. "You can touch me."
I didn't know what to say. What to do. So I did nothing.
Bella removed her hand from my wrist and placed it behind my head. She then pulled me down to her and kissed me softly before gazing up at me. Her eyes sparkled with desire.
All sense of restraint left me when she hooked her leg over mine and rolled back, pulling me on top of her. I pressed her into the mattress as I covered her lips with mine and kissed her with all the passion that was surging through me.
Bella responded instantly with equal fervor, hitching her leg tighter around mine and pushing up against me. The urge to grind against her was overwhelming
....Is it just me or is it getting warm in here? Thanks for reading!
~EA
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Done
What a great confrontation scene. Truly dynasty worthy. Great job.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue
Yeah. Great chapter and story. I loved the maturity of these two. Great job.
Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412100
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
This story was very well written. I was always wOrried they would be exposed. Can't wait for the epilogue. Great last 2 chapters.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
great job with the loose ends. cant wait for the epi
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I'll miss this story. Write something new soon.
Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730
Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119929
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Damage Control
I didn't see that coming. Nice cliffy.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Breaking the News
I loved the update and finally Faith is getting what she deserves. Finally. Great chapter.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: The Perfect Day
It was perfect. So sweet.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Where there is love
great job with this story. It had me on the edge of my seat,. and thank you for starting my new daily grind obsession.
Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
you are doing amazing things with this story keep up the great work
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
OK I liked the last two chapters. I really think they have made progress. Amazing progress really (since I read the back story and I really shouldn't have because now all I can think about it the justice I want to see for her rather than her story now - you know?). Anyway, I know she is having a bad day due to the nightmares, but please let her show some improvement so the witch doens't take her away again.
Come back soon.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
What a witch. Great chapter.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
great chapter. you are doing a good job with this content. I love how true edward is to wisp.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
good chapter. wisp seemed to make good progress.
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Pet cant be gone, great chapter. love the dvd and the cuddles.
Edward is a boxer with a dark past and secrets. When his best friend's little sister moves in, he finds himself in the biggest brawl of his life. A story of love and sacrifice and fighting for what matters most. AH/OOC
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37761 Read Count: 15859
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Nice start. I can't wait to read the rest.
Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107118
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Loved the date. But is Charlie really the father? If he wasn't he wouldn't have paid right? Great chapter.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
nice twist. i cant wait to know more. great chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Great start. I can't to see where you take us. And btw is mrs newton stupid?
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Aw man. Couldn't she have gotten it out first. Work your way through your block. Ou are doing a great jOb.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
TAken by whom? and wow, Tanya is so screwed. Great chapter.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
I am glad that Jessica finally got what she desrved but why isn't she afraid does she not know who Bella is associated with or is she just that stupid or does she really think Mike will protect her. Love the love.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
after all this i stillcant believe mike is still walking around great chapter
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Great lemon and I also enjoyed the flashback.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
i think jessica knows something about the scheme overall but maybe not about mike's exact involvement. great chapter.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
love the last 2 chapters. great job.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
How did the crazy lady get free? She hAs been like magic the whole story. Great chapter.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Yeah!!!! Great job. Good story.
Edward is a professional assassin for Aro. He's ordered to kill Charlie, Renee and Bella Swan, but he can't. He won't. Now his new target . . . is Aro. All he has to do is make it out alive. E/B, C/E, J/A, Em/R - All EPOV - AH - OOC - language, violence, a few lemons.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109715 Read Count: 35838
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Sins of the Father
Woah. You are great wih the twists now. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm trying to keep up with the level I've created, but there's a big windfall coming, so get prepared.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Secrets of the Past
You are ultimately evil woman! Great irina story. Great chapter. Biting fingernails - waiting.
Author's Response:
*rubs hands together manically* I know. And don't worry. You won't expect what happens next.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Last Resistance
That was a very tasteful and intense lemon. I really liked Edwards point of view for it too. We don't get that very often. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, we don't get Edward's POV much, so it was fun to write.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Hitting Hard & Fighting Back
Holy crap I was totally not expecting that ending. Great job. I am anxious for your next chapter.
Author's Response:
I know, I love when that happens! The next chapter is on its way.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The New Strategy
I am so intriqued by this sotyry. So please continue it. But, I totally understand that you are working on other stories, so if you abandon this one just come back. I will still be here.
Great chapter. Is Edward stupid for hanging on to the cell phone yes, but I understand his mental need to hear from his friend.
You are doing a great job with this story. So please continue it after you do what you need to do.
Author's Response:
I swear not to abandon this story. I'm making notes and hoping to work on it a little at a time until it's good enough to post. Thanks for sticking with it, and I promise you won't regret it.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Taking a Chance
Interesting Bella being the agressor. I can't beleive they were spotted though, they were so careful. BTW, I need help deciphering the messages. I get some of them and others not so much so if you could help with those I would appreciate it. Great chapter. See you next week.
Author's Response:
Well, as you've probably guessed, the messages are almost all written in code, so I guess you kinda need my brain to really figure them out. I'll PM you.
Thanks for reading! And I think you'll be surprised.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Innapropriate Contact
It's interesting that Sio is there. I mean she found him so easily that it is a little disconcerting. Now her tracker is out, but if she found Edward wouldn't it be simple for others to find her? So many more questions with a third party added to the mix. great chapter. I like how you have really made the possibility of Bella and Edward so complex. I like how Edward is struggling with his feelings as well. Good job.
Author's Response:
It would be possible to find Edward and Bella if someone was directly on their trail. But with his tracker removed, his phone disassembled, and him being mobile for a good 24 hours means whoever is looking for him will actually have to look. There'll be more on that in coming chapters.
I'm really glad you're liking it so far. I hope I don't disappoint.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Safe Haven
I don't trust siobhan. What is with all the stopping? She's sshifty man, shifty.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's being her normal unassuming self, but don't worry about her. I can vouch for her, I promise.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Decoy
I actually knew what 5 large was - but what is the "new cable installed"?
Is it lemon time?
Great chapter. I cant wait to see what's coming.
Author's Response:
That's Carlisle's way of telling Edward about a new message from Aro. Before cell phones and computers, messages were sent through a cable. And mum's the word on lemons. ;-)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Laying Low & Going Crazy
Beautiful chapter. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And thanks for reading and reviewing.