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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Oh I'm soO relieved that she didn't go with Paul and Charlie is the coolest Dad in the whole wide world... LOL. I love the growl~purr thing Edward did to call Bella without her knowledge. That was kind of hot! I am glad you updated and I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Edward is going to say about all this...
Muah~Tracy
Author's Response:
I wanted to try something new with the mating call. I'm glad its been REALLY well received by everyone. Next chapter Bella is going to see more of hot, sexy vampire Edward. Yummy!
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
Wow... Very interesting concept. I'm going to have to google this myself. i only know of the mormon type... I'm very excited to read more of your story! Thanks for sharing it with us :)
~xoxoxoxo~
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts
Very interesting. I researched between chapters. You seem to have a good understanding of what it is and the difference. It's not my belief but I love the way you're writing this story. Who wouldn't want Edward for their husband; he's the idea man. Thoughtful, kind, caring, sensitive, attentive and gorgeous... geez... I'm jealous. LOL
Now, onto the next chapter!!!
~xoxoxo~
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties
uh-oh! Alice and her spending habits, I'm hoping that it was for a really good, unselfish cause and not just clothes. LOL
That's pretty cool that the whole thing was Rose's idea. But the way Edward explained it makes sense. We tend to follow what we were raised to do/be. I can see where she didn't feel complete, either.
LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the story. I really do. Hell; reading Edward's explanation of it makes me almost wanna try it myself... hehe
~xoxoxoxox~
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems
oh Geez... wow... ummm... that was kind of hot! I'm not sure how I would feel if I were Bella... does Bella even know how she feels? Gah! Onto the next chapter to hopefully find out!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception
ugh! Aro is a dick! What horrible things Rosalie had to endure. It was painful to read :(
I'm so glad she had Edward to rescue her!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge
i know Rose and Edward came from this type of family; but did i miss it when they were explaining Alice's upbrining. she wasn't raised in forks so she didn't have this lifestyle either growing up... so if she can do it; why can't Bella? I guess I'm a little confused. Maybe this is the bad part of reading the chapters back to back... lol...
This is definitely a very interesting story. I'm enjoying it immensely but I must say... a lemon-filled chapter full of steamy E/B lovin' would be nice right about now...
~xoxoxoxox~
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire
Love the direction of the story. I'm sure Alice will be estatic and Rosalie will blow a gasket. I love your story...
On a personal note; girlfriend... never say never in your household. I am so sorry to hear of all your personal turmoil. I know my review is coming well after it was originally written but I'm sending prayers your way, none the less...
God Bless!!!
~xoxoxoxo~
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing
I want to like Rose... I really do but she makes me nuts. She is a selfish little spoiled brat. What happend to her was AWEFUL... but that doesn't give her the right to make everyone else suffer. Alice is so much more giving and loving and encouraging. I say dump Rosie and replace her with Bella... I'm sure once that cat is out of the bag, that's exactly what Rose will be most afraid of...???
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table
With every chapter I fall more and more in love with this story. It's really beautiful and I am so hopeful that the walls won't come crashing down when Edward tells his wives (mainly Rose) that he and Bella are dating with the hopes of her joining the family...
THANK YOU for writing it!
~xoxoxoxo~
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business
Pulease! You could never go to far... we are all Edward freaks and LOOOOOOOVE it when he gets a little well deserved nookie!
I'm still pining away for the 1st Bella and Edward encounter... from all her reactions; I'm guessing she's either a virgin or extremely inexperienced... I'm guessing your Edward will be more than happy to help her with that little situation!
~xoxoxox~
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk
Hahaha... funny on the movie choices.
I'm glad to see the girls bonding. It's still a weird concept but I'm learning to go with it.
Now... onto the next chapter. Pretty soon I'll be out of them so I sure hope you are one of those thoughtful authors that update quickly. You're story is rather enjoyable, you know! and with over 640+ reviews... it seems well liked :)
~x0x0x0x0x~
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day
Oh my gosh! I'm so excited to read about the lunch date... but sad, too because that means that it will be the last chapter already completed...
Oh well... it's a punishment I must endure... onto the next chappy!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone
OK girly. This is the last completed chapter. I am now on the same page as everyone else... I hate waiting so please don't make me wait tooO long. I am really enjoying your story. It's funny, sexy and it makes you think. They've got a weird family dynamic but its also based on ideas that all family should be founded on. If that makes any sense...
So with that said; hopefully life will finally cut you a break and allow you to provide your faithful readers with prompt and exciting updates.
I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. I have so many of my own ideas of twists and turns that it's going to kill me to wait and see if I was on track on not...
Much love and God Bless!!!
~xoxoxoxox~
A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES but canon pairings. Very, very AU.
WARNING: This story contains much in the way of lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49922 Read Count: 11468
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Revelations and Invitations
I like it... I'm excited to read more! Now, onto the next chapter!
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: You Just Might Get It
Wow... he is really Emo, huh? ROFL... love it... Seriously Bella not a virgin... that's a 1st ... LOL
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Everything I Wanted
wow... interesting twists and turns... i'm very intrigued!!!
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Careful What You Ask For
oh no! a mean Carlisle... hmmm... ok. i'm letting that sink in :(
i'm still terribly intrigued though... this is really good :) thanks for sharing your story!
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Hyde
ok so unless you've seen the movie "UP" you won't get this but when you wrote "Squirrel" i about lost it. All i could think of was the dog Doug. LOL... sorry, my twisted little mind is able to find humor in the weirdest of places...
lovin' this... onto the next chapter!
Muah!
xoxoxox
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: An Eye for an Eye
ok, people are probably going to hate me for this but poor Edward. i wish Bella could see that Edward is made up of essentially 2 people. Him... the real Edward, the one who loves her dearly and then his monster, the vampiric animalistic side of him. it's 2 completely different people stuck in the same body.
when he says things that are hurtful, those words aren't coming from Edward, they're coming from the monster within...
i'm hoping for a HEA for considering the titles of future chapters; i'm thinking that might not happen...
xoxoxox
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Like Father, Like Son
hahaha... weird but sweet father-son bonding... minues the broken glass, blood and such...
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Confrontations and Evasions
cue... BD/SM stage right, please... LOL
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: If You Give an Inch
how about therapy AND a cold shower?
LOL... naw, you're good. this story is great!!! but, yes! you are totally right. you cannot avoid a limit. i've read about hard and soft limits. Hard are just that; a total no go but soft limits are meant to be discussed and to be determined if it's something that could be explored. i also am aware of the green, yellow and red system. meaning just that... green is go or good, yellow is caution, possible discussion needed or a need to slow down the scene and red is basically the 'safe' word as it mean STOP.
you're doing a marvelous job my dear! lovin' it to the max!!!
xoxoxo
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Three of a Kind
i kind of like that your vampires turn almost immediately... not the 3 days of suffering that SM created... very interesting...
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Gifts
Ohhhh... Esme seems a little evil...
Lovin' the Edward/Bella lemons! Yum! Yum!
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
ok THAT'S an interesting twist rigth off the bat. Totally cool... Charlie and Renee (her SM real parents) as her adoptive vampire parents. Huh... I'm definitely intrigued!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =) I'm happy that you like so far.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
very interesting storyline. it all seems so easy but i'm sure there is lots in store to challenge their happiness... Tanya for one... Aro's desire for Edward possibly another? Either way; I'm along for the ride :) thanks for sharing your story!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =) Oh yes, there's so much going on that works against Edward and Bella. Everything from Tanya and Aro, like you've mentioned, to blood donations, medication...etc.
Thank you for reading.
XxOo
~Jells
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
oh i just knew it... da, da, dummmmmm... evil vampire governement. poor Bella... poor Edward... i'm so sleepy but i have to read the next chapter to see what's going on... lol... great story!!!
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Yeah, the vamp gov't isn't going to make it easy for Bella.
Thanks again,
xo
~Jells
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
OK, the marking in the cafeteria was hot. LOL ... not necessarily romantic but raw and animalistic and sexy, nonetheless!!! xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm happy you liked!
Thanks again,
Xo
Jells
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
It was an awesome chapter! Lots of good information shared. I love how caring the 'good' vampires are. Of course I have no idea; but my crazy little imagination is thinking that crazy idiot James is behind the Bella look-a-like murders. Maybe he was a protegue of Laurents? And of course, how can you have a E/B story without the evil Victoria as well. Poor girl; wasting her time (and probably her life) on the likes of James...
Maybe I'm a freak but I like Edward's possessive side... it's kinda sexy!
Cannot wait to read more. Sex or no sex, this story is wonderful and I'm enjoying every minute of it!
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story. LOL. You're not a freak, I am. *giggles* Glad you like Edward's possessive side. Although, you'll see in future chapters that my male vamps can be quite fierce and dominant. Hope that is okay. =/
Thanks again,
XxOo
~Jells
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Oh Lordy! That was hawt for their first time! Damn... I'm with Edward; vampire style rawks!!! ROFLMAO~ Very well done. I am so incredibly impressed. You know, this is so different from SM's that all you need to do is change the names and you've got yourself a best-selling erotic thriller for sure. You've got talent baby! And if you ever need help or want to bounce some ideas off someone safe, I'd be more than honored to help. All you have to do is hollar. And hey... regarding RL... I totally get ya. School and studies always come 1st (sorry, the Mom in me slipped out) so I guess we'll all just have to remain patient while you priortize ;-)
I recommended Rob's Hand Monkey (Drea) take a look at this; I praised you up and down to her. I beta like I said; but didn't start until around chapters 30 or so... but even with her few typos and tense errors... EEK rawks. It's totally different from yours but definitely a worthy read when you have time :)
Xoxoxox - take care love. Definitely looking forward to more amazing, kinky, freaky, sexy, hawt and wild chapters from ya! 10+++ all the way!!!
~Muah~
Author's Response:
Hi Tracy! *waves*
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the kinky vamp sex. LOL Wow! Really? Thank you! I would love to publish this story even though I think my writing isn't that good. I have lots to learn. But I would be honored if you would help me. I appreciate any help or advice you could give me. =) Yeah, classes and all the reports make me want to pull out my hair sometimes. LOL Thank you so much for the rec and the praise. And I will definitely check out her story when I get some time. I used to read all the time during my spare time before I started writing. I miss just being able to relax and read since now my free time is used for writing. LOL
Thanks again,
XxxOoo
~Jells
PS. Ch 11 is my least favorite =/ Hopefully I make it up to you in ch 12. lol
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Hello Beautiful Girl~
Well hell... I'm perplexed :( I actually liked the chapter so now I'm wondering what I missed that you seems so displeased with it. LOL. It had action, romance, hot vampire~human sex, a lot of backstory with Bella and Angela (which is necessary if you're going to keep Ang in future chapters ... perhaps another vampire~hamun mating situation) and left us with the dreadful suspense of what in the hell does Aro want and/or will demand of Edward regarding Bella. Of course we all know he's not going to just roll over and place nice... Hmmm, like I said; what's not to like...
Well, one more chapter to go... I shall have to tackle it in the morning my dear! I'm exhausted :) Seems your lust~filled Edward has worn me out as well :D
~xoxoxo~ Tracy
Author's Response:
Hi! *Waves* =)
Thank you. I'm glad you still liked ch 11. I didn't like ch 11 so much because it was too smuty in my opinion. I like plot progression and it was just lacking. lol Although I did have to develop Angela's and Bella's relationship. Angela will be around in future chapters. And hopefully you will like what I have planned for Ang and Ben. Aro will be coming up soon...=/ LOL. Edward is a horny vamp lol. He's definitely exhausting.
Thanks again,
I love hearing from you
XxOo
Jells
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
you are soO mean. Mean... Mean... MEAN. LOL... what a cliffhanger! OMG... I'm just dying!
I don't know whether to turn you over my knee and spank you and stand with my arms raised towards the heavens while the choirs of angels sing your praises!
You rawk my dearest! I am a total fan!!!! *bows down humbly at your feet*
Hehehe... now, hurry up and finish your studies, write your papers, and get back to LAV, asap!
~Mwuah~
~xoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
LOLOLOL!!!! I couldn't resist the cliffhanger. =D
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
I'll try my best to post asap. =)
Thanks again. You're awesome!
XxOo
Jells
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
OMG. This is awesome! Wonderful! Insanely HAWT! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Gah... DEFINITELY CONTNUE... CONTINUE AND NEVER STOP!!!!
XxOo ~ Tracy
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Gah! Another incredible chapter. I am totally loving this... LOOOOOOVING IT!!!
XoXo ~ Tracy
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming
~Sigh~
wonderful... magnificant... sexy... beautiful
XoXo ~ Tracy
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Awesome... just awesome. I can't get enough of this. I'm trying to just read a few chapters at a time so I don't come to the end to quickly. LOL. I can't wait for your next update. About how often do you get to update? Just curious... Muah ~ Tracy
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
I have a feeling she can get into a TON of trouble... LOVED the car. I actually went to Volvo and built my own... mine topped out at 52k. I figured since it was all for fun, I might as well get it as loaded as possible... LMAO...
Muah ~ Tracy
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!
OMG. Your lemons are the juiciest... hehehe... you know, you should send her to subspace sometime soon. As intense as their joinings are; it would be fitting for her to experience subspace.
You're doing a pretty damned good job for not living the lifestyle. Lots of research or is this completely from your imagination of what you think D/s relationships are like.
Awesome story! Very well written... totally LOOOOOOOOOOOVING it :)
XoXoXo ~ Tracy
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served
Ruh~roh! ... That doesn't sound good... gah. I'm so addicted I have to read the next chapter but at the same time I don't want to because that takes me one step closer to the last chapter and then that means I have to wait for updates...
*sigh*
xoxoxo ~ Tracy
Sometimes love is darker. More crimson.
For the 'Beyond The Pale' Contest located at: http:// www. fanfiction. net/u/2431148/BeyondThePale. Image used: #17. (Voting open NOW!)
WARNING: Contains graphic violence, sex, and language. There are disturbing images and themes in this story.
(Banner by: Me, Myself, and I.)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7242 Read Count: 648
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Crimson Love: One-Shot
Gawd! That was dark! The sex was great, though... damn... it's hard to give this a good review without feeling like I have issues... ROFL... very well written, though, that's for sure!
~xoxoxox~
EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.
Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...
Hey Doll!
I'm so excited to see you here! I'm starting to like this website better than FF because there is less restrictions for those of us who are dark and twisted (of course talking about me, not you) ... You know I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE your stories...
xoxox - Tracy
Author's Response:
r u my cyber stalker? LOL I lurve you too! And i AM dark and twisted...just look at my favorite stories list..lol. Now, since you found me on both sites...i expect twice the reviews...get cracking! just kidding...XOXO . Thank you my dear! Laters..
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Day Trip For Bird Watchers
Hiya! I can't beleive I found you here... how're ya doin' ? Sorry about the ass kickin' your getting. I'm right there with you... I get my surgery on 2/4. Nuttin' like gettin' your throat slit right before Valentine's Day. Hehehe...
Oh well; I'll have plenty of time to catch up on my fanfic reading. I am starting to perfer this site more than FF.net; they're just getting tooO freakin' strict and I'm sorry, but I am a woman who is terribly fond of her lemonade (if you know what I mean).
As far as this chappy goes; filler or not, Edward gooooood ;)
Now; get back to V&V cause I'm dying for some more heavy petting... hurry up wedding day... I think I'm hornier than poor Ed and Bella put together!
OH! Did I just say that out loud?! ROFLMAO... oh well... you know me by now; I'm hopin' your laughing your head off too... if not; just email me a nice lil' ass-kickin' ...
~xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Oh my God...that did make me LOL. You are too funny. i'm setting up prerequisites for the first time they 'do it'(I think B & E would agree with these). Firstly: Emmett must be VERY FAR AWAY. Secondly: to get to Edward, Bella must only have to cross smooth surfaces..therefore no chance of falling down hurting herself. Thirdly: no gas-producing foods should be ingested by either within 48hrs of encounter. Fourthy: Bella can drink a bit...but Drunkella is forbidden access. i'll add to the list as needed. lol. You are killing me. ;)
A Bella/Edward Story
(Banner by AngelGoddess1981)
Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH
The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.
(New Banner by DivineInspiration)
Warning:
This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Invisible
Gosh, I don't know what to say... I just read all 9 chapters. I am intrigued at what will happen. Being a nurse; I know the severity of it all and if he pulls through what shape he could be left in. Bella is so young to be in such a messed up relationship. I feel weird to say something like "wow great story" but that doesn't mean I don't like it. It's just really serious and I know too many people who've experienced some kind of this situation in their lives...
It's painful but you are doing a great job writing it. I hope you understand my review. It is a good one... it's just a heavy story!
~xoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Believe me, I'm not offended that you have a hard time responding with 'great story' or something like that. I know what I've written is pretty cringe-worthy, and is had to get through sometimes. I'm just glad you're reading.
I can honestly say this was one of the hardest things I've ever had to experience. When it comes to some of the medical scenes, though, you may have to forgive me if I'm not exactly precise. LOL. Some of the memories are marred with emotion. I promise I'll try to get it as close as I can. :)
Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Need a Hero
I'm not a neuro ICU nurse but if you ever want some guideance or bounce some ideas off me; I'd be honored!
And thanks for understanding my review. It IS a good story... I'm just sorry you had to go through it :(
I am a survivor of domestic abuse. No substance abuse but mental illness and I understand the pain and the scars it leaves (the one's you can't see)... I think those are the worst one's of all...
Hugs!
Tracy :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the offer. I'll definitely keep you in mind because I have a ton of medical scenes to go. :D
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Daughter
what a beautiful flashback. i hope they get a chance to rekindle that flame and fix all the wrongs that have occurred. i hope Edwards parents don't let him down... where are they!? even i am starting to get nervous!!! ugh! can't wait for the next chapter!
~xoxoxoxo~
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389607
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Oh my gosh! That was so totally hot that I am tingling all over! What an awesome 1st chapter! Your Edward is so freakin' sexy. I love how he thinks, the things he says... And Bella... I'm very curious to see where this is going to go. Don't you DARE stop writing this... keep going baby and I'll be right along to cheer you all the way! 10+++ without a doubt!!!
If I don't spontaneously combust... I'll move onto the next chapter now...
~xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Welcome to the party! Thanks for reading and reviewing! For update information, pictease, and chapter teasers, check out the blog! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Great chapter. If you need some advice; I beta for a story that is about BDSM so I've got some websites I can send to you. I'm new to this site so not sure if you can send private messages but if you can't' just let me know how you want the info and I can send you the links...
much love and respect... Tracy
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot, I´m always looking for new information, so I welcome anything you might have. You can send me private messages from my bio page. Thanks for wanting to lend a hand! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
OK there is so much to this chapter that I love... Em is great "DOMWAYNE" that had me rolling!
Tanya is a bitch and she knows she crossed the line but with Edward admitting it isn't right anymore, it makes me think he's the one who safeworded... guess I'll find that out next chapter.
I was a little nervous when you mentioned "Fifty" because I didn't want to re-read another MOTU wannabe story but I don't think your is going to be. I like that Mrs. Cope doesn't clean Domward's playroom. That always bothered me about Icy's Mrs. Cope. I just hope, and it seems like it for sure, that your Bella doesn't do what her Bella has done to fifty. I like a sumbmissive-slut Bella and I like the true DOMWARD Edward. Something tells me you are NOT going to disappoint.
Now... onto the next chapter. Thank God I didn't spontaneously combust like I thought I would after having read the previous chapter. Your scenes are HOT!!!
~xoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving me a great review!
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
oh my gosh... I totally forgot about the whole safe wording thing from last chapter. LOL. I am totally getting into your story. It's really good. BUT... DO NOT let your readers or their review rush you into anything. It is your story and we are lucky enough for you to share it with us. I can be patient. Besides; anticipation is a great from of foreplay. It will make it all the sweeter once we do finally get the real thing and not a dream scene. I LOVE what you're doing but that's because you're doing it your way. Please don't change that!!!
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It is a bit of a hassle with the ´hurry up´s´ but I´m sticking to my plan and taking it where I want it to go. Lol! Thanks for the encouragement!
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Hehehehe... naughty girl. Great chapter. I love Momma Esme. She's always one of my favorite characters but doesn't usually get much game time (which is understandable - not sure I want to see Esme strapped to a whipping bench)... ick.
Now... onto the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol! Me either, not the visual I´m looking for. Thanks for the review!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Hopefully no one is leaving you 'hate' ... This story totally RAWKS!!! I mean you are awesome; totally (ugh... hate 80's references, LOL) but it's true. Your silent conversations are just spectacular and hilarious to boot. I have 4 chihuahua's and they are totally like Mojo; must be the breed.
I LOVE where you're going with this and to a degree it WAS Edward safewording... just in his head, your head, your pencil... whatever... LOL
Keep doin' what you're doing...
Author's Response:
Well, can`t please ´em all, but it´s the great reviews left like people like you that really RAWK! And make me want to keep writing the story. Thanks for all the love!
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
ROFL... a Mojo outtake would be totally awesome. Mojo 1, Everyone else 0
hehehe... I have told everyone who will listen to me about this story, including sending them the link to this website AND your blog.
I LOVE YOUR STORY! Thank you for sharing it with me. Your characters internal ramblings are just insane. Your story has everything, humor, angst (but not too much), and TONS of sex appeal. God, if the dream sex is this hot I can't imagine what the real sex will be like.
I'm sure once that happens I will spontaneously combust!!!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Ha! I hope you enjoy it when it comes, it won´t be long now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
OH wow! What a blow up! Hmmm... so... Jacob/Will/Leah ... interesting. So I'm guessing they will be in future chapters?
Doing good so far... I hear you're a fan of the story I beta: Edward's Eternal Kiss... now I know why you have such great taste! I adore your story! It's awesome and I get more excited with every chapter I read.
I meant it about the BDSM research. Drea and I have tons of website we can send you too... just holla if you need help!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Anytime you want to send me links or any info, I would appreciate it! And BTW Edward´s Eternal Kiss fucking RAWKS!!!!! I love it! Thanks for the review!
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
ugh! all caught up and now I have to wait... I don't know what to say that I haven't already said in the previous reviews... spectacular... awesome... fantastic... stupendous... chiors of angels singing just over the horizon... well done!
give Mojo a little 'pet' for me :)
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
oh!!!! the torture!!!! I cannot wait for the party!!!! ugh!!!! I will not beg... I will not beg... I WILL NOT BEG!!!
*sigh*
i liked having the chance to read both POV's on their 1st 'meeting' via telephone. NOW... I will sit back and wait patiently for Chapter 10 ... (wink, wink)
~xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Holy Mary Mother of God! Jesus H. Christ woman! You are the BOMB! The Shit! The Domme of all Domme's... men and woman around the world are kneeling at your feet... Chiors of Angels are singing your praises upon high! FUCK ME... that was just ... Oh My GOD! There aren't words....
Seriously though.. like it was an o.k. chapter... you know and stuff... ROFLMFAO. I think I'm in sub-space right now.
Lord have mercy! Please update quickly... like yesterday... like don't leave your freakin' computer until the next 20 or so chapters are completed! Don't worry about Mojo... I'll watch over him... you just type Baby!
Dammit... You've reverted me back to the 80's... I'm like totally valley girl over here... Geez!!!
God I love you...
~xoxoxoxoxox~
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
Oh MY Freaking GOD!!!!! That was awesome. Don't even tease about this being the last chapter. I will find a way to hunt you down and go all Kathy Bates on your ass... got it???!!! LOL ... you so totally RAWK! I want to see them together soooO freakin bad it hurts.
I cannot wait for the next chapter! It's going to be so awesome... I just know! God I just LOOOOOOOOOVE you! lol
Another recommendation that is quickly becoming me and Robshandmonkey's is "Living Amongst Vampires" by IBelongToAVampire. It totally rawks... if you get time, take a look at it. It's totally original in every way and totally hawt!!! Oh Baby!!!!
Muah! ~xoxoxox~
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Oh My Freakin' Gawd!!!! THAT is where you end it! GAH! You're killing me! Oh... I LOVE the way Sir and Pet interact with each other... He is the sexiest freakin' Domward I have read thus far! You are freaking brilliant... Litteraly... if you were here in front of me, I'd have to bow down and kiss your pretty little toes... ROFLMAO... Geez... I need to go take a cold shower, like pronto!
God Bless ya, darlin' You so rock it isn't even funny! And your rec's are great! I have most of them in my favorites already... ANYTHING by Fetish Fanfic is awesome! If you're feeling particulary kinky... go read her "Daddy's Little Girl Comes Home" that'll knock those frilly little socks right off your feet!!!
Gee... I see a foot theme going here... hell, I don't even like feet. Gah! I'm rambling! Help!!!
Muah!
~xoxoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Ha ha! You freakin kill me! I´m gonna keep writing just so I can read your reviews! Lol! Did you send me a msg on the blog about a having a friend who does manips? If so, send em my way honey! The more the merrier! And if I can give her pictures and she can attach the lovely Domward´s head to them, that would be orgasm enducing! Yikes! Overload, overload! Lol! Thanks for always leaving me lots of love! You rock bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Oh My God!!!! Wow!!!! I mean totally, fucking incredible, insanely intense... just W.O.W. Geezus! You are the woman... W.O.M.A.N. There is no other like you Ms Krazi. I would totally bow down and kiss your pretty little toesies if I were there... and I'm sooO not into feet... or women... but anyway, I got off on a tangent...
This was an awesome chapter! I am just beside myself with joy and excitement for them. This is like every girls dream coming true all at once. I know Bella is just caught off guard by his declaration of love. She feels exactly the same way. Sometimes when you're faced with everything you've ever wanted; it can be overwhelming but I am not afraid... I know the next chapter is going to be fuckawesome as well.
Right? I mean you'd couldn't break out hearts... could you?! Gah! There goes my confidence... hehehe!!!
I can't wait to read more. I hope they do continue the D/s portion of their relationship though and that doesn't get lost in the whole 'in love' beginnings of a new relationship.
Muah! I just love the hell outta ya! You and Mojo (I miss that poor little guy) are the B.O.M.B.
XxOo ~ Tracy
10 fucking ++++++++++++++ !!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, you are seriously making me blush! Lol! Glad you loved it Honey! I´m reading this awesome new fic called Writer´s Block, you should really check it out when you get the chance! Lol! Love the story and I will get my but in gear and review. I hate that my phone won´t let me. Thanks for always leaving me some good lovin´!
Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh my god. i just melted ... help!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection
Ang is a bitch. That makes me kind of sad but mostly because I'm used to her being written as such a sweetheart. I also hate that she's so mean to Edward ... Oh Edward... no prenup? What was he AND his Mommy thinking??? I hope he finds out some serious shit on Angie so he can't dump her ass and move onto bigger and better things... mainly Bella!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life
O.M.G. I have a feeling things are going to get really nasty from here on out and I don't mean the lemony-fresh kind of nasty, either...
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think
oh why! oh why! does there always have to be angst?! He's not happy in his marriage... she's not happy in hers... but yet they always have to 'do the right thing..." blah. blah. blah...
but with that said, AWESOME story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you..xoxoxoxo
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness
god bella stop whining and stand up for yourself and take what you want!!! dammit!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings
cool...psycho Eric... i always thought that little geek was unstable!!!
Author's Response:
Okay soooo I just saw all your reviews,,,,,,,,,,first THANK YOU for taking time to read it.....Second I hope our still enjoying it. Yes the laurent chapter was scary....and yes Bella should fight for what she wants...We cant wait for u to catch up and and enjoy our Spartan and Kitten more.....xoxoxooxox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
ugh! soooO freakin' frustrating. can't Ang just have a little accident or something? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaase?!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
oh yeah... come on... DO IT already... I'm dyin here! ROFLMAO. I'm just enjoying the hell outta this story! Bravo my dear! BRAV-O!!!!! I am pimping it out to everyone that'll listen to me :)
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody
Dum, da, dum, dum! Oh poooooor Angie... got caught fucking aorund...??? Hmmmm.... this should be interesting!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
wow... Angie just won't let it die will she. I mean hell she's been bangin' someone else but is begging Edward and blaming him?! WTF??? I hope she gets everything that's coming to her. She's a messed up, twisted little 'b' and ... ugh!
Die, Angie... DIE!!!
ROFL
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
Oh praise be to God on the highest! Ok, that feels a little wrong to be praising God for Twilight porn... but anyway... you get the jist of it, I'm sure!
Thanks for the awesome lemonade. But it's a little creepy that both Edward and Bella are getting mysterious calls... is it Laurent? Eric? Ben? Someone Angie has hired to scare Edward back into her arms (not likely)... inquiring minds demand to know!!!
~xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
hahaha i love that your praying hahaha....Thats the best....Were soo happy ur enjoying it..I wonder who is making the calls myself...
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2
Oooooh! You're soooO mean!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! OMG... this is freakin' awesome. I hate cliffies but this one is great. Is it Eric? Is he going to totally go all postal? God, it would be spectacular if he could go postal, try to take out Bella but somehow get Angie instead and then the cops get him; he gets the death penality and then... bam! 2 birds with one stone!
Niiiiiiiiice... LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
~xoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Omfg we should sooo make him go postal and kill ang in one shot....hahah that shit is good....but unfortunately ....we have other plans for them to go down....muahahha.....sorry bout the cliffy but heres a teaser for the next chapter
"Bella?"
I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What's he want?" Jessica whispered to me.
"I don't know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.
He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.
Mike, that's his name.
Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I'm Jessica."
I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.
His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.
"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.
He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don't know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."
I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.
"An Angela Masen came to me today."
My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.
"What the ** did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.
"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life. I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."
I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."
I shook my head not wanting to hear this.
"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
Even without the teaser; I'd leave you some love :)
Oh... the suspense is killing me and you're gonna draaaaag it out, aren't you??? ROFL... I know how you are!
I fall more and move in love with your story with each chapter! Bravo my dear!!! Bravo!!!
~xoxoxox~
P.S. Neither Mike or Jessica are my favorite characters (mostly because everyone writes them to be horrible) but I'm really enjoying the kind nature they both have... give them a happy ending too... huh?!
Author's Response:
meeee?????? looks around..........u talking to me??? lol....ugghhhh yah im gonna drag it out a bit since this is the last part of the chapter that ari has read. I did start on the next chapter but i hope to have ari's input on it before i post it but we will c. xoxoxoxoxo and yes im happy with our original decision to go with Ang and Eric as their spouses and bring in the usual Main love intereest as smaller roles....important but smaller xoxoxxo
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies
Oh I love a fiesty Jessica and a pissed off Edward!!! Excellent chapter... cant wait for the next one !!!
Author's Response:
Jess is my new hero! And a pissed Edward is a sexy Edward :) We're so glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for your review.
x0x0x0x0xx0
Ari & DLIR
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
OH gosh! Wow... what a BITCH!!!! That was a very interesting way to play Esme out. She's always so sweet and motherly. Hmmm... something tells me nothing good will come from the next chapter. Is Esme helping Angela? When is Eric going to appear again? Who sent the invitations? I can feel my skin beginnging to crawl! Hurry!!! UPDATE SOOON! Muah!
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
hahahaah ur sooo cute.....lots of questions. hmmm how to answer. Well cant answer all but I can forsure give u a teaser. haha part 2 is greatttttttttt
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
oh i was so nervous about this chatper! i kept imagining either Eric or Angela had sent the invitation and something horrible was going to happen...
well, something horrible did happen but nothing I can't surivive... i'll take hot and bothered any day!!! Ha!
Love ya! Can't wait for the next chapter! Great smexin' my dears! Yum!!!
xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
LOL we're so glad you liked the sexin :) Awe we didn't want to make ya nerous. Or did we? LOL We are hoping to get the new chapter up in the next few days.
Thank you so much for your review. We love ya also.
x0x0x0x0xx00x
Ari & DLIR
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world
Gah! I... I... fuck me... Dammit to hell... that was intense and I'm so confused... I really wanna be pissed off at you for leaving another freakin' nail biter! You are sooooO cruel (but I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it!).
OMG... I never had any idea this story has been one hell of a roller coaster ride never in my right mind would I have guessed it would take this kind of a turn.
Sigh... oh well, guess I should go take care of my bloody nubs... There's nothing left but stumps at the ends of my fingers... Oh the pain...
LMAO... I cannot wait for the next freakin' chapter! You guys are so freakin' AWESOME!!!!!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE ya!!!
Muah~Tracy (FangMe)
Author's Response:
We love u too.....and deary if u lived close to me I could soooo fix ur nails....stopppppppp biting them. Ya I had to stop it there....I have an idea of how I want to see the next part go and I need Ari to help....so I will see how she is over the next while and if she aint up to it...I will write it.....XOXOXOXOXO The rollercoaster is almost over....maybe a loop or two more. :D
DLIR AND ARI xoxoxooxoxoxo
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl
Gah... I saw this post and had to read it really quick. I'll be sorry in the morning but that's ok... ya'll are totally worth it :)
Yeah! Esme is dead. I hated her... LMAO... Carlisle... OMG... hope he's going to be ok.
Can't wait for the next update. I, of course, always prefer EPOV, then BPOV then ... I guess it doesn't matter. LOL... not that any of that means anything to you... hehehe...
XoXo ~ Tracy
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.
Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.
L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie
Tkegl...Thank you!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129734
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Fastens seatbelt... getting ready for another wild ride... ;-)
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks for giving this story a chance. It'll be a lot different.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hate
wow... u weren't kidding when you said 'dark' ... soooO... this is an interesting twist to LAV... onto the next chapter. Let's see where we end up, shall we?
xoxoxo to Jelly!!! ;-)
Author's Response:
LOL. Yup, it's definitely dark.
Thank you =)
XxOo
Jells
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning
You are such an imaginative young lady! What an interesting storyline. So Edward has fallen for Bella even in the womb. That's pretty cool. Much darker and much more graphic than LAV but I like it. Then again; I'm partial to you, Miss Jellybean.... but you already know that.
You seem to have a talented friend as well... but alas, my bed is calling so I'll have to read chapter 4 tomorrow...
Nite, nite my dears! I'm excited to see where you're going to take us on this wild journey into Hell... Mwuahahahaha...
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Yes, Thaigher Lillie rocks. She's amazing! I couldn't do this without her especiallly all the dark scenes. She brings so much to this story. Wrting dark is definitely different, and it's a whole entire different mindset. It's very fun, but sometimes I find it frustrating. Hopefully, next chapter I won't disappoint. LOL
Thanks again,
XxOo
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up
Wow... considering poor Elizabeth's labor, mine was a breeze!!! Very interesting. Edward and Jasper are twins... Good vs. Evil? Strong vs. Weak? Totally off track? LOL ... lovin' the direction and the limitless possibilties I see developing! Awesome. Dark... I'm likin' it ;-)
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Yes, the possibilities are endless. Jasper is definitely much weaker, but I would say Evil vs Evil? lol
Thanks again,
XxxOoo
Jells
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken
oh man! i wanted Edward to claim her... dammit, Jells... you're a cock blocker extrodinaire! ROFL...
now onto the next chapter, which i am assuming will be dark. you little friend has a thing for dark... Hahaha..
LOVE YA!!!!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
LMAOOO@ cockblocker extrodinaire!!!! I enjoy cockblocking ;) It's quite fun. lol
Oh she LOVES dark. *giggles*
Thank you =)
*Mwah*
XxOo
~Jells
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull
ok. i am still here so i guess that means i'm not a pansy... ROFL... i'm a real bitch!
FINALLY!!!! is he going to claim her??? JELLS!!!! Tell me!!!??? I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is a wild story and I'm definitely along for the ride.
Hugs and Kisses!!! Until the next update (soon hopefully)...
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! Nope, you're definitely not a pansy! hehe
Hahaha. Do you think he will claim her? In front of everyone? Hmmm...maybe, maybe not. LOL
Thank you so much =) Love all the reviews!
I'm working on this chapter. Oh boy! What hell it is! lol
Thanks again,
Hugs~n~smooches
XxOo
Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit
OH my gosh! I loved it when I beta'd it... but, if possible, I have fallen MORE IN LOVE with it reading it again. I'm so excited! I can't wait to see the reviews. This chapter may have been a pain in the ass but it was definitely worth the labor of love!
Good Job Jellybean. You're the bestest of the best! I can't wait to see what Tygs does next! Woo Hoo!
~Muah~
Author's Response:
Awww thank you Tracy!!! Glad you really liked it. It was torture writing it, but I'm glad it payed off in the end. lol
Hehe, yeah I wonder what Tygs has planned. It's gotta be something evilish I'm sure. lol
Thanks again,
<3
XxOo
~Jells
This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married. He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi. Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her. Now, they want her to join in on the fun.
This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell. It is a damned sexual buffet. If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones. This story is NOT for you.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13861
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair
Geez... I've never really enjoyed the thought of Edward and slash or even any of the other Cullen's having sex besides E&B but geezus!!! That was freakin' HAWT! sooO mind-blowing. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE write more stories or elaborate on this one; it's just THAT gooooooood!
~xoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks so much for the fabulous review and rating!!! This was just an idea that kicked around in my head until I finally put it on paper. I have several other stories that are floating around in there including some slash. I just need to find time in my RL to get them out. In the meantime, I have a complete story called 'Use Somebody' that is AH and full of lemony goodness.
Thanks!
Nickey
PS. I have been thinking about a second chapter to this once they move into the new house. We will just have to wait and see what my dirty mind can conjure up. ;)
After James phones Bella and tells her that he has her mother, Bella realizes just how futile it would be to go to him alone and confesses the true identity of the caller to Alice. Edward takes Bella far away, to a remote cabin...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8100 Read Count: 654
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my!!! I'd love to see you write more. That was hot and sexy and I love your Edward and Bella. Just the right amount of angst and lemonade! Yum! Yum! Can't beat the sweet with the tangy! LOL ...
Write more stories! NOW!!!! ;)
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! I've got plans to continue this one, but right now I'm concentrating on "As Long As You're Mine" - the Cullens (except Edward and Jasper) are ghosts, and its a murder mystery.
And you are so right about the sweet with the tangy!
New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!
In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?
AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I wasn't sure what my thoughts on this story would be but it was really sexy. I'm definitley intrigued! Onto the next chapter... Tanya is always such a naughty girl... I wonder what Edward has instore for her? I don't know much about this 'lifestyle' but I'm guess she just did a major 'fuck up' ... LOL
~xoxox~
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
LOL ... some of your lines are AWESOME! I cannot wait for chapter 3... here I go!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
ugh! I'm depressed... one more chapter left and then I'll have to wait for updates... UPDATE SOON!!! Please...
Tanya is a bitch and I'm not a fan of James either... good riddence; although I'm thinking they're not going to go away that easily!?!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hurry! UPdate soon! I LOVE this story :) Kinky little shit, huh?!
~xoxoxo~
Author's Response:
Thakn you for reading my story. Next chapter is almost done. then the beta gets her turn with it. but i hope to have it up soon rather than later. Thanks again for all your review i loved them all! Nails233
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
OH! I'm so glad Maxine survived but poor girl, what a thing to have to deal with.
Really...???? No new children born in 4 years? With all the sexin' going on in that town... Interesting... I can't wait to see what's up with that.
I am so excited for the next chapter! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
xoxoxoxo
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
OH cool chapter! It was definitely worth the wait! Great lemon AND some action! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Excellent job my dear! I love this story more and more as I read it!
~xoxoxoxo~
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
LOL... You are sooO mean! Hehehe... GREAT chapter hopefully the next update will come quickly so you can put us out of our misery!
Muah ~ Tracy
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Oh my gosh! How exciting. I hope it all ends well. I won't be able to function if anything happens to Edward. He's finally got a chance at happiness and I also hope Maxine is ok. To hell with James and Tanya and I'm even a little pissed at big Daddy C but I still don't want anything to happen to him...
I am so addicted to your stories... I'm in the middle of "Be My Sub" too and can't wait for that next update!
Muah ~ Tracy (or Fangs... LOL... I switch idenities often, mwuahahaha)
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Awesome!!! Loved the chapter. I was holding my breath to see what was going to happen regarding the ex at the door... and damn, I cant wait til all the Carlisle stuff is out of the bag... gah!!! You rock girly~girl :D
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Awww... poor illward! I hope he gets to feeling better soon... and I'm with Bella... what is up with Carlisle?! That shit is mucked up for sure!!!
I can't wait till the next update! Woo hoo! Counting down the days!
~Muah~
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I like EPOV ... he's a interesting dude. LOL.
I can't wait to hear more about the whole Charlie, Renee, Bella thing. I have always had a soft spot for Charlie so I'm glad it's Renee who's the total bitch and not him... even if he didn't try terribly hard for Bella... at least he's not a total dick... I hope.
Boy, Bella is insistent to try and keep a leg up on Edward, huh? Guess next time she will take what he gives and not up the anty!
Great story!!! xoxoxo
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
ugh! I cannot wait to see how the evening with Renee and Charlie's goes... God! "Daddy" Edward is one sexy, pervy MoFo... he makes me wish I had my own "Daddy" ... LOL ... pant! pant!
Can't wait for the next update. Congrats on the story nominations!
~xoxoxo~