Reviews by just4u
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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

IT WAS TERRIFIC!!!!!!!

THNXS A LOT FOR ALL THIS IMAGINATION!!!!!!!!!

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Alice in her own Wonderland

i seriously despise her snobby and pathetic ass, she finally shows her real colors!!!

she's among the elite and Bella hasn't earned that privilege as if she in turn did being born in a wealthy family and hadn't worked for anything in her life!!!

she obviously contradicts her own words talking about earning a privilege while having never earned anything herself except maybe the title of self-righteous, selfish,delusional lying bitch!!!

i like the idea of her being the monster here, too often have her interfering ways been considered cute rather than controlling and self-absorbed!!!

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

THAT STORY IS INCREDIBLE AND SO DIFFERENT!!!!!!!

PLEASE REVIEW,I am dying here!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! =)

I'm happy that you are enjoying it.

I'll post more soon =)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

thnks a lot,awesome chapter by the way!!!!!!!!

thnks a lot for updatint!!!!!!!!

please update again here,we're dying here!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =D I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! And I'll post more soon. Should have something hopefully by next week.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

JUST TOO GOOD 4 WORDS

I ADORE UR WORK

IT'S PURE GENIUS

PLEASE UPDATE MORE OFTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Awww thank you! =)

I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

good god!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was spectacular!!!!!!!!

incredible,i'm blown out of my mind!!!!!!!!!!

thnx a lot

please update soon,i've waited long 4 this one!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Thank you!!! =D I'm totally happy that you enjoyed this chapter!!!

IKR? It was a long time since the last update, but I'm really going to try to update much sooner.

Thanks for reading and your awesome comment!

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

REALLY NICE.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you liked =)

I'll post more asap, but first I have to finish my chapter for Living Amongst Hell. lol

Thanks again for reading and commenting!

~Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

I LOVED IT

PLEASE KEEP UPDATING



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much, just4u =) I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter.

I'm working on the next one already =)

Thanks again,

Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

UGHHHHHHHHHHH THE SUSPENSE IS HORRIBLE

IT WAS DEFINITELY INTERESTING

WATS HAPPENING TO EDWARD?????????

HIS POSSESSIVENESS IS SO SWEET AND HOT BUT HE WAS INDEED A BIT DISRESPECTFUL

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

KISS KISS



Author's Response:

I know the susepnse is crazy. sorry about that. =( Buuuuuut, I shouldl be getting ch 15 back this week and I promise I'll post the same day I get it back. Ohhh and ch 16 is almost complete. =)

Thank you =) Love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

nice and really surprising

i didn't expect this turn of event,thought that the force of their connection caused the pain when Bella got mad with him!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon please!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Yeah, you would have been totally correct because that's exactly what would have happened if Bella denied Edward. He'd die slowly. And he'd be in a lot of pain physically and emotionally. But in this instance, it was The Change. Loved your guess btw. Thank you

Ch 16 is complete. It should be posted really soon.

And Thank you soooo much, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

 

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

what's going on with Bella,is is the pill to increase her red blood cells???

but she didn't take it???or is it linked to being edward's mate???

it's so frustrating  but so gooooooood!!!

please update soon

 



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves* =)

LOVE your guesses.

And you're absolutely correct, she didn't take the pill. Carlisle gave her a harmless red blood cell production pill instead. But what about her birth control pill? Nah...maybe not, right? hmmm.... lol You'll see soon what's going on with Bella. There could be so many things.

I should have the chappy posted this week sometime,

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

fantastic as usual

keep it up

i think the roar is ben discovering about the pregnancy or an unwanted visitor

update living amongst hell soon please

till next time xoxoxo



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thanks so much! =)

I'm in the process of rewriting ch 20 and after i'm finished I'll finish LAH too.

Sorry for the wait.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I ADORED THE CHAPTER.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard

NICE BUT STILL UNSURE OF WHAT TO THINK OF JASPER AND ALLICE.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

really took me by surprise!!!!!!!

i like it a lot!!!!!!!!

please update soon.

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I LOVE IT.COULD YOU ADD MORE INTERACTION BETWEEN ISABELLA AND EDWARD!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

UR SO EVIL BUT I REALLY LIKED IT.

KEEP IT UP.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the suspense is killing me though.

please update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

I SIMPLY ADORED IT AND THE LAST PART SO PRIMAL AND HOT!!!!!!!!!

SIMPLY WOW

KEEP UPDATING SOON PLEASE,IM DYINH HERE!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Tyggy~

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

so good but Edward was cruel to that,i hope hiss attitude will improve when he realises he cannot escape his mate!!!!!!!!!!

I'm confused whether at the end he is angered by the need to be with her or Peter's and Charlotte4s treatment of his mate.

We'ii see next

please update soon!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

You'll see about the anger part. But just remember his protective instincts kicked in over Bella.

Thank you for reading and commenting =)

~Jells

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

just wow

way to go

update soon please,this story is too gooooooood

xoxoxoxoxo

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55730
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

REALLY INTERESTING

I ADORED THE CHAPTER

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

 

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

TOO HOT.

REALLY GOOD,KEEP IT UP!!!

 

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

REALLY NICE

A BIT DEVIOUS BUT REFRESHING AS WELL

UPDATE SOON PLZ

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

really good

is it carlisle??

update soon please

 



Author's Response:

Ahh my dear doctor, it could be Carlisle...it could not be. We just don't know. Bella never thinks of him again after she leaves the coffee shop. Thanks for the review, darlin. I appreciate it so much. Much love to you - D

Until next time...here's a quick peek at chapter 14:

I sat down at the counter right in front of her and she stared at me with her hands on her hips. I knew better than to say a word before she did, so we sat in silence for several minutes. She was definitely better at this game than Mrs. Jones was, she would have cracked by now and told me what she wanted. I was getting nervous, fidgeting on the stool and wringing my hands together until finally she took pity on me and spoke.

"Sweetie, what are you doing with kids like that?" She shook her head. "You're a good girl, sweetheart, and they're nothin' but trouble."

I didn't know how to answer without telling her the truth. I had to think fast.

What would Lizzy say?

And then it came to me. "I met them on one of my trips to the city with my Aunt. We became friends and I come and visit them all the time now."

She narrowed her eyes at me and I knew she didn't believe my story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 86574
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

they are so loving and generous,i love HEA

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263186
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!

sooooo good!!!

this story has completely captivated me

it is well written,clear and so intelligent,it's an absolute pleasure to read!!

i love your bitchy rosalie,i love it when she's made out to be the bad guy

others tend to cuddle her,find her excuses but in reality her awful attitude is her own doing and being horrible to others is a conscious act not to be taken lightly,noone should get away with hurting others!!

i'm anxiously waiting for your next update,i'm currently having exams and your story is just the right thing to help relax a bit!

see ya soon



Author's Response:

Hello our faithful readers and reviewers!  We were expecting a bit of a lashing from some of you, and we have gotten a few but nothing like I expected.  Please let me remind you all now first and foremost that we are both happy ever after kind of gals.  Little refresher is needed about ages, and a few other things, since there were a few questions.  Edward is 28 and will soon be turning 29.  Bella just turned 11 when the twins were born, Sue left when Bella was 13, and Bella has been working for the university for over 5 years.  Bella just turned 19 in chapter 8.  Edward is 9 and 1/2 years older than Bella.  Before Sue left, she obtained a fake ID for Bella that said Bella was 18.  Therefore everyone surrounding the apartment building assumed she was of legal age.  Sue needed everyone to think Bella was 18, and she was sure to scare tactic that into Bella.  All these years, Bella has continued to maintain the age Sue said she had to say she was, in fear of not being able to stay with the twins.  Now for Bree Tanner and James...Bree Tanner was the female student from Edward’s Summer school course he taught.  In the summer for the past several years, Edward has been helping his good friend Marcus by teaching the kids who struggle to pass, or are so far behind they may not graduate high school.  Bree Tanner was the hoodie wearing shy and quiet girl from chapters 1 and 2.  Bree lives in Forks and attends high school at Forks High.  James Hunter is a Math teacher and the truancy officer for the Forks school district.  We don’t want to give too much away, but if you think back to the earlier chapters, when Edward had to take a break from his panic attacks, he was clear to tell Marcus his concerns about Bree being abused.  Bella is naive about many things, but she has grown a lot in the past few chapters.  We want to be clear that Bella feels as if she lied to Edward, she started trusting him a long time ago and when she started trusting him she feels she should have told him then.  Edward doesn’t feel betrayed by the lie, but he is more of in shock by the lie.  When he thought he was almost 5 years older than Bella he was concerned with the age difference, mainly because of how innocent she is.  Now that that almost five is almost ten, he is confused.  The next chapter will have you cheering Edward on, and hating his guts too.  We don’t want to give too much away, but I will say this, we are both excited at the prospect of the reviews after the next chapter posts.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing this story, you all have no idea how much your words mean to us.  Thank you, Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Teaser for Chapter 18: Confessions  (As always subject to changes in the Beta process.)

Leaving Bella’s place, I get in my car and drive.  I don’t even slow down when the speedometer hits one-hundred-thirty miles per hour; I just keep driving.  I am racing to get away from the fear and the rage that is inside of me. I still feel so angry; how the fuck did I not see that she was only nineteen?!  I mean, she looks so young; I am so fucking pissed at myself.  She is still a baby, and the fact that she is only nineteen, doesn’t keep me from wanting her.  I want her, and I need to be with her.  I want her in every way, which is so fucked up. I shouldn’t want to be with a nineteen year old girl.

 

She was thirteen when Sue left her to look after Seth and Leah.  She was so fucking young, and she ended up in Aro’s club at thirteen!  Fuck, if he would have said yes to her…if she was in the pictures I had to choose from…I would have picked her…I know I would have… fuck! I could have really hurt her.  I am really fucking sick! Thank God he said no! Fuck, the dip shit pimp that said yes...shit! I’m sure she would…fuck I don’t even want to finish that thought.

 

“FUCK!” I scream out and I do an illegal U-turn at eighty miles per hour.  I decide I need to see Aro. If I find out that fucker knew her real age, I am going to add that motherfucker to my shit list.  I am going to hurt him so fucking much, and anyone who tries to stop me, too.

 

 

Reviewer: just4u Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start

THERE ARE TOO MANY BITCHES OUT THERE

OTHERWISE GREAT CHAPTER AND SO FULL OF HOPE WITH THE BABY NEWS



Author's Response:

Hello, thanks again for reading and reviewing this story.  Nikky and I put a lot of work into these chapters; as well do a large group of ladies who have become not only our sounding boards, but trusted members of our team.  I was shocked that the backlash on the pregnancy was not larger than it was.  I was very skeptical about making Bella pregnant and ironically Jess2002 (WHO HATES IT THAT EVERY STORY BELLA GETS KNOCKED UP) said it had to be done now, because (knowing our future plot line) it was the perfect fit.  So if you are one of the (so far) two negative reviews about the pregnancy we’ve gotten, please know that your reaction was shared at first.  After we thought it over it was easy to see that it however enhanced the love story between Edward and Bella.   The gender of the baby is picked, as well as the babies name.  The story is quickly approaching finalization, and with it I feel a sense of loss. 

There haven’t been many questions, but there have been several comments about things that are complete misunderstandings.  So I figured I would list some of the ones I remember off the top of my head.

Edward wants to marry Bella, but he hasn’t yet proposed. 
Edward has been looking for a ring, and trying to his best ability to find out where his mother’s jewelry is. 
Edward is very rich, and doesn’t have to work, but like most people who are rich a great portion of his funds is wrapped up in investments, so not always does he have access to super large amounts of money. 
Edward’s father was quite a pianist and left Edward a rather large inheritance, as well as before his mother left she made sure to leave him money in a trust. 
Elizabeth knew she was ill and left thinking Edward would be better raised by Esme and Carlisle. 
Alice is not a blood relative of the Cullen’s, or Masen’s. 
Jasper and Rosalie’s parents died and in the will they left guardianship of them to Carlisle and Esme. 
Sue and Harry’s parents are dead, harry murdered them.
Bella’s biological parents are dead. 
Rose was always allowed to act out and as if she was better than everyone else. 

The next chapter is one you won’t want to miss for sure.  Before you sit down to read it, you may want to get a cold drink (not promoting booze, but I needed some writing parts of it), a few tissues, and be sure to tell yourself at least four or five times before you start reading – “Kasi and Nikky are happily ever after writers...”
Thanks again for the story love, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 30 Teaser, subject to changes during BETA process.

Seth and Leah have taken to home schooling well; both are extremely bright children. Lucy resigned from her temporary position at the school, and is now helping us teach them at home.  Between the five of us: Lucy, Esme, Zafrina, Bella, and myself, the twins are receiving an excellent education.  They’ve both been a little more edgy lately, and upset about what happened with Sue. It’s been causing both of them to have more nightmares than usual.  Samantha’s advice was simple: just keep helping them feel safe and secure in their home.  We’ve talked about it several times, and I think they now understand that the school did something wrong.  I also know that they believe we will keep them safe.  

Mrs. Crown has been fired over her behavior, as were four other staff members.  This led to the papers getting ahold of the full story of what happened at the school.  When the story first came out, all that had been said was that there had been an attempted abduction. Since then, though, someone had talked – my guess would be Mrs. Crown – and it’s been all over the local news and in the papers.

 Thankfully, Seth and Leah’s names have been kept out, but reporters did manage to get some of the story behind Sue, Charlie, and Harry.  They were also able to gather some information on Bella, like the fact that she raised her siblings from birth, but they did not focus on this.  They focused, instead, on how Bella had to have known that her Uncle and parents were hurting and killing people, and hid it instead of going to the authorities.  

They talked about how when she worked, she left the children unattended and neglected.  That one line hurt Bella the most, and I had a hard time trying to calm her down. Of course, it also upset Seth and Leah.  To say I was ranting and raving over the phone lines to just about anyone who would listen, was an understatement. I had to take several deep breaths and remind myself that I supposed to help reduce the stress, not add to it.  

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A Nightmare

I LOVE IT

THNKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER

HAVE THEY REALLY FOUND EDWARD??

IT SEEMS TOO EASY SO I'M SURE IT'S NOT THE END OF THE DRAMA

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324404
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Our Home

Hi,i've followed your story on FF and i hope to read ch.15 soon

This story has captivated me,love the naughty Carlisle,hope to read more soon

Keep up your good writing,fantastic story

Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

hot hot hot,wow,it was worth the wait!!!

Summary:

 

 

This is a look into the minds of those who have watched Edward slowly remove himself from his own cimmerian view. These are Outtakes based off of His Cimmerian View. Read through chapter 24 of His Cimmerian View before starting this. AH/OOC

Banner made by the wonderful SoapyMayhem for His Cimmerian View, we just added the word Enduring.  Thanks SoapyMayhem you ROCK!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71046 Read Count: 5928
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

really great,i would love to have a Rosalie POV as well!!



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131966
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: just4u Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it,keep it up!!