Reviews by stormy315
Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8


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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

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Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

love the chapter! what´s the meaning of "BEB"  engraved on the heart ???



Author's Response:

Ha! I said in the chapter, but since you missed it that gives me something else to play with!  Lol!  I'll bring it up again soon I promise, don't worry.  Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

please continue....can´t wait what happens next....hopefully they will not only talk in dom/sub mode but also as edward and bella....can´t wait for the next chapter...

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

cruel cliff...leaves us hanging....the chapter was great, but i am disappointed in edwards behaviour concerning the revelation that bella is pussycat...the "talk" is too short, the situation is not really clarified..a whole bunch of questions respecting their relationship status is not answered. so they start a scene and edwards frame of mind is not as calm as i would´ve liked. he is angry, agressiv and impatient.....she safewords and (after probing) drops the V-BOMB.....

so let´s see what happens next....i hope they talk as edward an bella, and not only as Domward and Pussycat....

 

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

great chapter!!! carlisle is edwards dad, right? this will b interesting....can´t wait for the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for reading and spending the time to comment.

In a few chapters things will start to unravel and Bella will be pasting pieces together.

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story! The next update will be soon.

-Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31183
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

great chapter...did bella get paid to make a move on edward? something is up, i hope the truth doesn´t destroy their relationship....can´t wait for the next chapter....

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103460
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Fire

great chapter...edward is burning up...bella should do what she wants with riley...i hope edward doesn´t do anything stupid....

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Lost

great chapter...why is edward so set to resist her? perhaps she should look for another guy, jealousy might help her in his case.....will there be a hea??? can´t wait....



Author's Response:

I will say this... I think everyone will be pleased EVENTUALLY. No promises on how/how long it takes/detours to getting there. As for jealousy, Isabella is a smart girl. ;)

Thank you, CM

Summary:

Jasper missed his chance in college, but when Bella and Edward's marriage falls apart 15 years later and he helps pick up the pieces, will Jasper finally get the chance at happiness he always longed for? J&B Eventually.  Fair warning, this is major heartfail in the beginning, but will end up with a typical ACW ending.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42200 Read Count: 16464
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh please don´t leave us hanging..what did edward do? did he hit her? or did he bed another women in their house? did they fight??????

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Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263186
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

awesome chapter....so many questions answered...poor edward and bella....can´t wait for more....i hope edward can convince her that they will stay together......



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127502
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chapter....poor edward, emma and charlie....please update soon, can´t wait to see how bella does....

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104521
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

great chapter....will there be cheating? looking forward to the next chapter....



Author's Response:

thanks.

ah, I don't know what to answer that. nyes? Not the kind you might think of, though. ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

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AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Broken Traditions

great chapter....so bella is confused and edward is confused because of this;-)) sweet;-)) can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

I know!  And trust me, there's more on the way!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Tattoo on My Heart

great chapter....will he have a relationship with siobhan? or will they be just friends? can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

Well, you're the first one to ask, so I'll go ahead and say no, he won't have a relationship with Siobhan.  She's just going to be a friend.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Airport

great chapter....is bella dying? or is she leaving? can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

Choice words, but no, she's not dying.  But he's rushing because of her.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Living Up to Expectations

great chapter....i still don´t get why the relationship between edward, carlisle and charlie is so disturbed...can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

It's coming, I promise.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: A Wish is a Dream

great chapter.....i think he should realize first that he has a crush on her...can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

Well, that might be easier said than done.  We'll definitely see their dynamic change over the next several chapters.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Boy Next Door

great chapter....so first feelings towards edward....can´t wait for more.....



Author's Response:

Yeah, she'll be confused and weird around him for a little while, but I promise she'll come around.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Keeping a Wish is a Promise

great chapter....so edward has a new friend and we know what he did....can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

There's definitely more on the way.  ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Passenger

great chapter...what happend to bella? i can´t wait to find out....



Author's Response:

Mum's the word on events of the present-future.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Breaking Old Habits

great chapter....does maggie realize who completes edward? does she just live the moment with him? can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

I think she's more of a "live in the moment" kind of girl, but only I know exactly what she'll realize after a while.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Pain Killers

great chapter.....so bella has a crush on him, right? i wonder what will happen next, and what is going on in present time....



Author's Response:

She does, but she hasn't really figured it out just yet.  She's about to in the next chapter, and it's going to really hit her, but you'll see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Patience, My Grasshopper

great chapter....so bella realizes she has a crush on him and no chance to ever be more than a friend...can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

Yep.  And the best is yet to come!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 21: New Problems

great chapter and merry christmas! i wonder what he will do? can´t wait for more....



Author's Response:

Thanks, and I hope you had a great Christmas!   There's no telling with Edward right now, but we'll find out together.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Bad Dreams

great chapter....i think he will do something with music.....so did bella have an accident and is in hospital? looking forward  to the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Well, I can't answer your question just yet.  There is a chapter in the near future that will shed a little more light on that.  Right now, we're building Edward and Bella's friendship, and then there will be more later on.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Warm, Golden, Perfect

great chapter....so garrett tells him he is in love with bella;-)) looking forward to the next chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!  And Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: stormy315 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great chapter....so new problems coming up? can´t wait.....



Author's Response:

What is life without problems, but this will be basically a happy book.

 

Thanks.

E.