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Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40671
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Bare

WOW NAKED AND IN THE SAME ROOM TOGETHER LUCKY, LUCKY GIRL.

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Memory

I DON'T LIKE YOUR CARLISLE IN THIS STORY HE'S A REAL BASTARD ISN'T HE.

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Truth

OMG I FEEL SO BAD FOR BELLA AND ALSO FOR EDWARD FOR HE HAS TO BE THE ONE TO TELL HER AND TAKE THE BEATING SHE GAVE HIM, I BET EDWARD IS HURT THAT BELLA DOESN'T BELIEVE HIM AND THAT SHE TOOK IT OUT ON HIM AND ALL HE EVER DID WAS TRY TO SAVE HER.

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Hamlet

I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE DOESN'T HATE CHARLIE AFTER WHAT HE HAS DONE TO HER.

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Waves

IT'S HER MOTHER WHO IS DEAD HOW CAN THAT BE. AND WHERE DID EDWARD GO?

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Key

OK SO THEY ARE KICKING BELLA OUT BECAUSE SHE PISSED CARLISLE OFF SO NOW EVERY ONE IS GOING TO TRY TO KILL BELLA WILL EDWARD SAVE HER AGAIN? GOD I LOVE THIS STORY.

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Free

OH I'M SO GLAD EDWARD FOUND BELLA AND SAVED HER AGAIN, WILL HE TAKE HER BACK TO WHERE CARLISLE IS AND KEEP HER SAFE THERE?

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Mint

BUT DIDN'T HE KILL ALL THE PEOPLE HE KILLED TO SAVE BELLA? OR WAS HE KILLING PEOPLE JUST BECAUSE HE LIKED TO KILL?

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Want

OH YES THEY MADE LOVE I AM SO HAPPY FOR THEM. WILL HE STAY WITH HER OR WILL HE LEAVE AFTER TELLING HER HE WON'T EVER LEAVE AGAIN.

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Red

OMG BELLA WAS HIT WITHA BULLET SHE'S NOT GOING TO DIE RIGHT SO CHARLIE IS GOING TO GET THEM WILL HE HURT EDWARD AND BELLA WILL THEY GET AWAY? HELL I NEED TO GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Fury

NO HE CAN'T BE DEAD.

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Born

I'M SO GLAD BELLA SHOT CHARLIE. TO BAD SHE DIDN'T KILL HIM.

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Greatness

BELLA IS GETTING STRONGER WILL IT COST HER, HER LIFE WILL SHE FIND A WAY TO GET OUT AND BACK TO THE LAB WILL SHE FIND THAT EDWARD ISN'T DEAD AT ALL BUT ALIVE?

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Ribbon

WELL I'M WITH EVERYONE ELSE NOW AND THERE IS NO MORE TO READ I WAS SO HOPING EDWARD WOULD COME TO SAVE BELLA AGAIN BUT THAT DIDN'T HAPPEN I CRY FOR HER AND FOR HIM TO UNTIL NEXT TIME YOU LEFT ME WANTING A LOT MORE.

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Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Near

OH WOW THIS CHAPTER IS SO GOOD BUT I AM SCARD BELLA'S THINKING THE END IS HERE WHAT DOES THAT MEAN THERE ALL GOING TO DIE OR THEY ARE GOING TO WIN THIS WAR OR THERE GOING TO LOSE THE WAR? EDWARD AND BELLA LOVE EACH OTHER I HOPE THEY DON'T DIE EATHER ONE OF THEM IS EDWARD THE KEY TO SAVING THE WORLD AND HEE DOESN'T KNOW IT ISN'T THAT WHAT BELLA WAS THINKING IN HER HEAD? SHIT SHE SHOULD HAVE TOLD HIM IF HE IS HE HAS A RIGHT TO KNOW.

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 80738
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

I JUST FINISHED READING THIS STORY AND I REALLY, REALLY LOVE IT THERE SHOULD BE MORE VAMPIRE AND WITCH STORYS IT'S SO GOOD.

Summary:

forever

A group of friends meets and hooks up with a band  and see where this wild ride takes them.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102825 Read Count: 11318
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2011 Updated: 27 Jul 2011
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Date: 12 May 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'M ON BELLA'S SIDE ON THIS ONE EDWARD SHOULD HAVE PUT A STOP TO THE GIRLS BEING UP THERE AND TOUCHING HIM WAS OUT OF LINE HE STOPPED THE GIRL FROM KISSING HIM BUT IT WAS OK FOR THEM TO TOUCH HIS DICK NO WAY WAS THAT RIGHT.

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Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY AND I'M ALSO LOVING THE LONG CHAPTERS.

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Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I LOVE YOUR STORY BUT IT DOESN'T FEEL FINISHED TO ME I GUESS I WAS WAITING TO FIND OUT WHAT THE BABY WAS AND EDWARD RETURNING HOME AFTER THERE TOUR. THANKS FOR THE STORY.



Author's Response:

there is a sequel.. its called on the road

 

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Date: 12 May 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

does bella need an operation on her head?

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Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I DON'T GET IT WHEN A CHILD IS KIDDNAPPED THE FBI IS ALWAYS CALLED WHY DIDN'T YOU IS IT YOU DIDN'T THINK OF IT? I KNOW CHARLIE IS A COP BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER IN CASES LIKE THIS ONE. I AM REALLY LOVING YOUR STORY.

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

IS THAT REALLY TRUE ABOUT THE MAN CUMMING IN THE WOMAN CAN MAKE HER GO INTO LABOR? I NEVER HEARD THAT BEFORE AND I HAVE BEEN PREGNANT 15 TIMES I LOSE 12 OUT OF THAT 15 BUT I DID GET THREE LIVE CHILDREN AND I ADOPTED ONE LATER IN LIFE. I'M NOW 68 AND THANK GOD ALL MY KIDS ARE STILL WITH ME I MEAN THEY LIVE NEAR ME NOT IN MY HOME WITH ME.

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Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

YOU KNOW WHAT I FEEL SO BAD FOR EDWARD ALL THE BITCHING BELLA DOES ALL THE TIME ALWAYS SAYING SHE'S SO FAT HE DOESN'T WANT HER SHE UGLY HE WANT TOUCH HER ALL KINDS SO SHIT IT ALL BULLSHIT SHE ACTS LIKE A CRAZY PERSON AND BEING PREGNANT IS NOT A GOOD ENOUGH REASON TO ALWAYS BE TREATING EDWARD THE WAY SHE DOES HE IS DOING ALL HE CAN FOR HER AND AS FOR THE KISS WILL I'D BE PISSED ABOUT THAT TO BUT SHE DOES KEEP TELLING HIM HE CHREATS ON HIM WHEN HE DIDN'T I JUST YOUR BELLA IS A BIG BABY.HOW OLD IS SHE ANY WAYS?

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Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

is it already up for us to read

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER AFTER SO LONG I THOUGHT YOU GAVE UP ON YOUR STORY I AM SO HAPPY TO BE WRONG I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR NEXT UP DATE

Summary:

Edward Cullen is an asshole. He's a moody musician and artist who likes his tattoos, alcohol and drugs. He's down on his luck when his friend, Emmett, offers him an apprenticeship at his tattoo parlor, Dreamstyle Ink. Will he give up his asshole-like tendencies or will he continue shutting people out of his life? Will a certain cinnamon eyed tattoo artist finally break through his wall that he's built around his heart?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161685 Read Count: 144000
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
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Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Five Months Ago

yes i think bella is going to say she is sorry, and maybe tell edward her story as well maybe they can be friends after all

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Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Five Months Ago, Still

i'm glad edward went to help bella it gave them a chance to get friendlyer i hate james he's an real asshole and should be fired but somethink tells me even that wont stop him from going after bella.

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Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Three Months Ago

I'M SO GLAD EDWARD WAS WITH BELLA WHEN JAMES RAN IN TO BELLA TO KEEP BELLA SAFT FROM JAMES AND SEEN HER HOME AS WELL BUT I'M SURE JAMES ISN'T DONE YET I HOPE EDWARD CAN SAVE BELLA FROM JAMES THE NEXT TIME HE SHOWS UP.

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Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Two Months Ago

THE MASTUBATION WAS REALLY HOT  AND THE SONG AND THE KISS BELLA GAVE EDWARD I'M LOVING THE STORY MORE AND MORE.

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Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: One Month Ago

I LOVE HOW THEY MADE OUT AND FEEL BAD FOR BELLA HAVING TO GIVE UP HER BABY AND YES THEY ARE MAKING GOOD HEAD WAY I THINK I HOPE BELLA KEEPS BEING NICE TO EDWARD AND STOPS HITTING HIM I DON'T LIKE THAT AT ALL.

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Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

A GREAT STORY THANKS FOR SHARING

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
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Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OH I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US HANGING LIKE THAT SO NOT FUNNY. WELL I HOPE SHE SAY'S YES BUT I FEEL SHE GOING TO SAY NO I SO HOPE I'M WRONG. EMMETT IS SO SMART TO THINK OF A WAY TO SAVE BELLA FROM ARO AND EDWARD'S FATHER I'M THINKING THE PERSON THAT WANT BELLA SO BAD IS JAMES AM I RIGHT?

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Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OF COURSE IT'S HER WEDDING NIGHT AND SHE DOES LOVE EDWARD DOESN'T SHE SHE WANTS TO BE MADE LOVE TO. I'M SURE HE CAN HANDLE THAT.

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

i just finisher reading all 32 chapters you have up and hope to be able to finish your story i really like it, it's not like any other one i've read and it's not like what happened is twlight some but not much the story line is your for sure and that in it's self made me like it that much more. here's hoping to be reading more soon.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to keep true to the timeline of the story but put my own twist on it. So I'm glad to hear you think it worked. Don't worry, I update this story as often as I can so you will see it come to an end...in due time, of course. There's still so much to come. Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter:

"Shh, Daddy, it's okay." Bella's voice was soft and soothing. "It's okay."

Panicked, my focus instantly switched to Renee, her mind still foggy as her medically aided sleep held her under. Mrs. Jones stirred but her dreams still played strongly in her mind. I breathed a sigh of relief as my mind shifted back to Bella.

I couldn't see anything in the room but I could hear them - Charlie continually repeating her name and Bella apologizing for leaving. It hurt me to hear their broken sobs knowing I was the cause of all their pain, but it helped, if only a little, to know I could give them this moment before his illness took him away.

Just then, the room came into view as Charlie opened his eyes. I watched though his vision as he pulled Bella away from him and held her shoulder, not allowing her to move too far from him.

"My sweet girl, you're home."

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
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Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND I THINK IT'S PERFECT FOR THEM EDWARD DOESN'T WANT TO PUSH BELLA AND WHAT THEY DID WELL THEY BOTH GOT THERE " O " AND EDWARD WAS NOT EXSPECTING IT AT ALL. I HOPE THEY KEEP UP THE FORPLAY EVERY NIGHT UNTIL BELLA WANTS TO GO ALL THE WAY AND I'M SURE SHE WILL WANT TO VERY SOON HELL I WOULD.

Summary:

27 yr old Bella, is an overnight manger at the Wal-Mart in Forks, having been away at school things have changed, little Edward Cullen, 17, has grown up and he´s secretly crushing on B. Wonder where Edward´s disappearing to at night. 

MY CONTEST ENTRY FOR THE SPANKING THE MONKEY! 

 

Disclaimer:  AS MUCH AS I WISH IT WAS, OR MAYBE JUST ROBSTEN, SADLY NEITHER ONE ARE MINE!  SUCKS I KNOW! RIGHT!  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5468 Read Count: 2067
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2011 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
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Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: When I Think About You... I Touch Myself...

THIS WAS GREAT BUT IT SO GOOD IT REALLY NEEDS MORE OR SHOULD I SAY I NEED MORE EATHER WAY  MORE IS THE WORD

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS IT'S 3 MIN. UNTIL 9:OO AM AND I HAVE NEVER LAUGH THIS EARLY SO I THANK YOU SO MUCH THERE ISN'T ENOUGH LAUGHTER IN MY LIFE AND I OWE TODAY'S TO YOU. KNOWING HOW IT FEELS WHEN YOU JUST HAVE TO HAVE STEAK AND YOUR SO SICK OF CHECKEN I'M VERY MUCH LIKE THAT NOW I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF STEAK AND I KNOW I'M NOT IN THE FAMILY WAY CAUSE I'M 68 AND CAN'T HAVE ANYMORE KIDS. THE GUY'S ALL FIGHTING OVER ONE STEAK GOT THE BIGGEST LAUGH I REMEMBER ALL TO WELL ABOUT THE MORNING SICKNESS SO THAT FOR ME WASN'T TO FUNNY I CAN HOWEVER SEE HOW IT WOULD BE FOR MEN AND EVEN OTHER WOMAN. ANYWAY I  REALLY ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH.

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Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

HOW FUNNY I NEEDED THE LAUGH'S I GOT FROM THIS CHAPTER I DO HOPE YOUR UP DATES COME MORE OFFTEN AS I DON'T KNOW HOW MUCH TIME I HAVE CANCER CAN MOVE VERY FAST OF COURSE I AM HOPING FOR A LOT MORE TIME BUT WE NEVER KNOW IF THE TREATMENTS GOING TO WORK. I LOVE YOUR STORY AND THE LAUGHS YOU GIVE ME AS I READ YOUR CHAPTERS SO THANK YOU SO MUCH.

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103461
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

JASPER IS BEING A REAL DICKHEAD HER'S HURTING HIS SISTER SO MUCH SHE LOVE EDWARD AND EDWARD LOVES HER WHY CAN'T JASPER SEE EDWARD WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR BELLA EVEN GIVE UP ALL HIS OTHER WOMAN FOR SEX AND DO WITHOUT JUST TO BE WITH BELLA TO WAIT FOR HER SO THEY CAN BE TOGETHER FOREVER.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Chicago

WAIT UNTIL BELLA PUTS THE COCK RING ON EDWARD I WONDER IF HE WILL ENJOY THAT

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Seattle

OMG THEY FINALY SAID IT THEY LOVE ONE ANOTHER I LOVE IT  AND IM HAPPY TO KNOW WHEN WE WILL BE GETTING UP DATES

On the Road by Lost Twi Sisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

This is the sequel to Forever You. Follow Bella and Edward as he's out on tour and she's home pregnant. See what surprises life has in store for them. Watch as their relationship grows and changes. Will the pressures of touring be too much for them?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27310 Read Count: 2408
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
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Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i just finish reading the 9 chapters you have up i really like that alice and rose are willing to spend time with bella and the kids if bella feels unsafe the phone calls that are hang up have me worried it's jake isn't it? and sean's dream that is got me worried to i hope bella and the kids will be ok. how much time has passed now that edward and the guy's have been gone? i'm loving the story.

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27183
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Watch and See

DAMN POOR BELLA THINKS HE'S NOT COMING BACK BUT HE WILL WON'T HE?

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Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Confessions

I'M SO LOST I'M SORRY BUT I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT I JUST READ DID EDWARD SEND BELLA TO JAIL OR DID THEY MOVE AWAY TOGETHER OR WHAT PLEASE ANSWER I NOT MAD IN ANY CASE IT'S YOUR STORY TO DO AS YOU PLEASE NOT OUR IT'S ONLY OURS TO READ, LIKE OR DISLIKE I HAPPEN TO LIKE VERY MUCH BUT I NEED TO UNDERSTAND THIS LAST PART WILL YOU HEPL ME?

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Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Goodbye

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ HELLO AGAIN I ONLY HOPE I LIVE LONG ENOUGH TO READ IT I HAVE CANCER AND I'M NOT DOING TO WELL, READING THE STORY'S HERE ON THE WRITERS COFFEE SHOP IS WHAT I DO EVERY DAY ALL DAY I LOVE READING SO I LOOK FORWARD TO HELLO AGAIN

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

The Calm before the Storm Banner 1


The Calm before the Storm Banner 2





Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

YOUR STORY IS REALLY GOOD SAD BUT VERY GOOD I CAN'T BELIEVE EDWARD JUST GRABED BELLA AND KISSED HER LIKE THAT AND YES I THINK SHE LIKED IT TO, I REALLY HAVE TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORY SO I'M OFF TO DO JUST THAT.



Author's Response:

Love your penname!!!

Thank you for your review -- now go on and read :o)

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

WOW EDWARD HAS GOT TO BE REALLY PISS OF AT HIMSELF FOR NOT DOING WHAT BELLA WANTED I DO UNDERSTAND WHY HE DIDN'T BUT WHAT WILL SHE DO NEXT TO GET HIM TO TOUCH HER LIKE SHE WANTS?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18

I DON'T LIKE THAT PHIL AT ALL OR HIS MEN HOWEVER THE MAN THAT WAS RRENEE'S DRIVER WAS A GOOD MAN DID PHILL KILL HIM TO? AND YOU KNOW WHAT IF IT WAS ME I WOULD OPEN THAT STUFF RENEE GAVE TO BELLA BEFORE TAKING IT TO A BANK TO JUST HAND IT OVER TO SOMEONE I DIDN'T KNOW WOULDN'T YOU MAYBE IT'S MORE THEN BELLA MAY THINK IT IS.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19

I ALREADY KNEW IT WAS JAMES SHE IS TROUBLE JUST LOOKING FOR A PLACE TO HAPPEN. LOL POOR BELLA AND SHE DOESN'T KNOW THIS JAMES CAN AND WILL TRY TO KILL HER IF PHILL ORDERS IT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20

WOW DID EDWARD AND BELLA REALLY MAKE LOVE OR DID BELLA JUST MAKE IT LOOK LIKE THEY DID?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO KEEP WRITING THIS STORY IT WOULD BE A SHAME TO JUST LET IT DIE IT'S SO GOOD I JUST WANT TO SET AND READ AND READ UNTIL THE END. WAS EDWARD READY TO TELL BELLA THAT HE LOVES HER WHEN THEY HEARD CHARLIE WAS HOME?



Author's Response:

Yes, I will finish this story.  I'm glad you are enjoying it :o)

Was Edward going to tell Bella that he loved her? Hmm.....can't say for sure.....you'll have to read on to find out :op

I'm working on the next chapter now and hopefully, I'll get it out before the Spring semester starts next week.

Thank you for reviewing!

Summary:

Bella never gave up hope that one day Edward would return, even though everyone told her it wasn't going to happen. Find out that in that sometimes when there's nothing left to hold onto except for Hope.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4751 Read Count: 639
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2011 Updated: 29 Nov 2011
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WELL I HAVE READ ALL OF YOUR FINISHED STORYS NOW AND LIKE THEM ALL I'M ALSO READING MIDNIGHT SUN AND ACROSS THE LINES AND I LOVE, LOVE THEM SO MUCH

Sugar Cookies by Emmamama88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Opposites attract, and sometimes crash into each other, literally. Come along and experience a little 'Christmas magic' with our favorite couple. This story has been expanded from the original holiday One-shot. All-human, cause that's all I write.



Thanks to Coleen561 for the great banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50299 Read Count: 14692
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas - The Beginning

I HOPE THE REST OF THE STORY IS AS GOOD AS THIS CHAPTER.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Valentine's Day

I'M REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY, AND THE PART WHERE EDWARD PUNCHED THAT ASSHOLE FOR TALKING BADLY ABOUT BELLA WAS GREAT.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Easter Sunday

I LOVE HOW ESME PUT JACKIE IS HER PLACE AND LET HER KNOW SHE WOULDN'T BE GETTING THE BOY.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Memorial Day Weekend

I'M SORRY IF IT WAS ME I WOULDN'T LET MY CHILD BE SEEN MY HIS MOTHER AFTER ALL THE YEARS APART AND ANY WAYS SHE ASK FOR MONEY TO BE FERR OF HER CHILD MAYBE SHE SHOULD REMEMBER THAT. I LIKE THE STORY A LOT AND LOVE YOUR EDWARD.

Popsicle Sticks by Emmamama88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:


'That which does not kill us, only makes us stronger', at least that's what they say. Bella and Edward meet as children while on vacation with their families. A lifetime of summers follow, and their relationship is tested beyond its strength. Follow their story through the years as they come to learn that each day spent with someone we love is a gift not to be taken lightly, but to be cherished forever.

Thank you to Coleen561 for the lovely banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94085 Read Count: 9100
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

HOW CUTE AT 10 YEARS OLD THEY DON'T EVEN HAVE A CUE OF WHAT LIFE IS ABOUT.

Author's Response: true...but they think they do....just emulating the adults around them at that point. Thanks!

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

WOW SO GOOD BUT WILL BELLA AND EDWARD EVER GET TOGETHER AGAIN

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

hs22

"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218331
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

SOMETIMES IT DOESN'T PAY TO WAIT. I HOPE HE DOESN'T WAIT TO LONG.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

I HOPE YOU PLAN TO TELL US WHAT BELLA FINES IN THE BOX'S I HOPE IT WILL BE THINGS SHE REALLY WANTS TO TAKE TO HER HOME EVEN PICTURES OF HER AND HER MOM AND DAD. HER TIME ALONE WITH EDWARD WAS REALLY GOOD TO I LOVE THE LEMONS

Summary: Past Featured Story

CFoW

 

Lily O'Brien is a hopeful child. Will her special cups of hot chocolate and a new friendship with Dr. Edward Cullen make her greatest wish come true? Aaaaaw moments ahead.

 

*Edward, Bella, Alice, Charlie, Angela

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28639 Read Count: 8913
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Jan 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'M SO GLAD TP SEE YOU BUT UP A CHAPTER AFTER SO LONG I HOPE YOU WILL HAVE THE TIME TO UP DATE AGAIN SOON

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

LOVE THAT YOU WERE ABLE TO PUT UP A CHAPTER IT'S BEEN FOREVER SO HAPPY TO BE READING THE UP DATE I LOVE THAT ONE OF OUR LADY'S HAVE HAD THERE BABY NOW I'M GUESSING ESME IS NEXT I'M SO HOPING SHE AND THE BABY MAKE IT OK I KNOW WE ARE ALL WORRIED THAT WE WILL LOSE ONE OR BOTH OR THEM THE COOKED LEG OF GOAT LOOKS REALLY GOOD. I HOPE TO BE READING ANOTHER UP DATE SOON.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

I THINK THIS IS THE PERFECT COME BACK AFTER SO LONG WAITING FOR AN UP DATE I REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263190
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

I DON'T GET WHY BELLA THINKS EDWARD IS GOING TO LEAVE HER, HELL HE LOVES HER SO MUCH AND HE IS AFARID SHE IS GOING TO LEAVE HIM. I FOR ONE DON'T SEE WHY BELLA WOULD BE MAD AT EDWARD FOR FATHERING SETH AND LEAH THEY JUST NEED TO SEE IT'S REALLY A GOOD THING BECAUSE EDWARD PLANS ON ASKING BELLA TO MARRY HIM SOME DAY AND THEY ARE ALREADY A FAMILY BELLA CAN ADOPTED THE KIDS AND SHE WILL BE THERE MOTHER



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?

I'M GLAD THE KIDS TOOK FINDING OUT EDWARD IS THERE FATHER SO WELL, BUT WHEN IS SOMEONE GOING TO TELL BELLA THAT THERE MOTHER IS DEAD.



Author's Response:

Thanks again and again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  As the story comes closer to an end, it seems we have a lot of questions or comments that are geared toward answers already given in the story.  So we decided to give a little background to clear up the misconceptions and questions. 

Edward Masen: Father is dead, mother is bi-polar and left him in the care of Esme and Carlisle.  Mother is alive, but whereabouts are unknown.  Edward met ‘Tanya’ in college, they had a short affair and she left, after being caught in trying to get money from him.  Edward then shut down and treated all women as if they were not worth his time.  He refused to date or trust any women and he instead only was with a select few at Aro’s club, where he paid for sex.  Edward owns the restaurant where his parents used to take him to eat at, before his father died and his mother went off the deep end.  Edward is also one of the youngest English professors at UW. 

Bella Swan: Bella was born the child of single mother Renee Higbottom.  Renee met Charlie during one of his planned scams to get money.  Renee was very rich, as were her single father.  Charlie ended up impregnating Renee, but he was already married to Sue Clearwater.  Renee paid off Charlie and Sue to leave her and her child alone, but then subsequently died of breast cancer when Bella was three.  Renee’s father fought for custody, but grand-parents rights are not acknowledged in the state of Washington, therefore after Renee’s death the state went in search of Charlie Swan.  Once he was found Bella was placed in his and Sue’s care.  After Bella went to live with Charlie and Sue, she was treated iek a slave and was never allowed even normal things such as schooling, food, new clothes, and every other basic thing as parents we give our children without second thought.  Bella grew up starved for affection, so once she got to take care of the twins she gave all that affection she has been starving for to them.  Her love of the twins is unconditional as is their love for her.

I hope this helps answer a few questions and clears up a few things.  I’m not sure why, but we have several who think Sue is Bella’s real mother, and that is not the case at all. 

Thank you again so much for all the wonderful heartfelt reviews you all leave for us.  It is amazing to us that we have managed to instill such a deep devotion in our readers to our characters, and we are blown away by just how much emotion our readers feel for our characters.  I know that the character names belong to Stephenie Meyer, but these characters and the way they are in this story are in fact ours, she owns the names and appearance descriptions, but the attitude and demeanor and words are all ours.  Thanks, Kasi (& Nikky)  PS... Sue is not dead, she will be payign a visit soon, and she is ALL EVIL.

TEASER Chapter 28: Subject to changes during beta process.
I am so proud of Seth and Leah this past month has not been easy on them, but they have held their heads up high and got on with it.  There has been some name calling at school.  Now I know kids can be cruel but the things that they are saying, is coming from older mouths first.  Things no parent should be saying in front of their children.  Bella and I have addressed the school regarding the problems, but we’ve been brushed off like nothing is going on.  Mrs. Crown the principle said that people will talk.  She went on to point out that I was after all, Seth and Leah’s father, and I was shaking up with their big sister.  The way she said it, implied that Bella and I were doing something wrong.  After her rather rude little speech I called Caius and explained the whole thing to him.  To say that he was angry is putting it mildly.  He went as far as taking the principle in front of the school board, and she was put on a written warning.  Not only is her job and tenure in jeopardy, but her career as a whole is.  Since we have proof that she knowing let kids and adults harass the kids, she was warned that a lawsuit would be filed if the behavior continued.  Her biggest mistake was she was aware what the twin have been though these past five months, yet did nothing to help stop the harassment.

Caius informed me of another school that had room for more students.  It was little school that only had a little over one hundred students.  It went from kinder-garden to fifth grade and each class had mix of around fifteen children per classroom.  It was a private school, and ranked in the top ten of all schools in the state of Washington’s education program.  There was a sister school that managed the grades sixth through twelfth, also ranked in the top ten.   Both schools are quite prestigious and expensive, but cost is of no matter.  There are a few nice things the school is located close to where Esme and Carlisle live, but that also causes us transportation issues for to and from school.  Both Bella and I have talked about this and we all talked about it in family therapy.  Seth and Leah asked to just finish out this year of school where they are before deciding.  We agreed that this was the right choice for right now.

Summary: Past Featured Story

pt

 

President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth

GOD I DO HOPE BELLA ISN'T HURT TO BAD WILL IT BE MUCH LONGER BEFORE THEY FIND HER AND SAVE HER WILL EDWARD GET SHOT SAVING HER?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story

I'M SO GLAD BELLA IS DOING BETTER SO IS JAMES ROYCE ONE AND THE SAME PERSON OR ARE THEY TWO DIFFERANT PEOPLE?

Summary: Past Featured Story

ail

A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

i'd been wanting to read this story for a long time i'm so glad i got to it at last it's perfect i just loved it so much. thank you for writing it for us to read.

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing

will edward ever get better?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Up and Down

WILL EDWARD EVER BE ABLE TO HAVE SEX WITH HIS WIFE AGAIN?

Charlie's Secret by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

cs

Everyone has secrets, even Bella Swan, but how will she react when she learns of her father's? Will it affect her rekindling relationship with Edward? What other lives will be changed because of his little secret.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105805 Read Count: 12520
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2012 Updated: 07 Nov 2012
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

CLAIRE IS CHARLIE'S DAUGHTER ISN'T SHE? HE'S THE ONE PENNY SLEPT WITH WHEN SHE WAS DRUNK.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

WHY DO I FEEL LIKE CLARIE ISN'T TELLING THE WHOLE TRUTH ABOUT HER BOYFRIEND

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'D ALREADY GUESSED CLAIRE'S BOYFRIEND WAS A VAMPIRE LIKE EDWARD BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM DID HIS VAMPIRE FAMILY  STOP HIM FROM COMING BACK TO CLAIRE? DID THEY KILL HIM BECAUSE HE DIDN'T WANT TO LIKE KILLING PEOPLE ANY MORE LIKE THEM?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

BOY DID THAT EVER FLOOR ME SHE IMPRINTED WITH JAKE AND HE WITH HER WOW. WHAT IF THE BOY FRIEND COMES BACK WHAT THEN? BELLA AND EDWARD HAVE GOT TO KNOW HER SISTER'S BOY FRIEND IS OR WAS A VAMPIRE. I WONDER WHAT BELLA WILL THINK OF JAKE IMPRINTING WITH HER SISTER.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I THINK IT'S GREAT JAKE AND CLAIRE ARE IN LOVE BUT I CAN'T HELP THINKING WHO'S SIDE SHE WILL BE ON FIR THE WOLF'S AND THE CULLEN'S GET IN A FIGHT BECAUSE BOTH SISTER'S LOVE A VAMPIRE AND A WOLF IT WILL BUT THEM IN THE MIDDLE WON'T IT?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH SHIT WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO TO HER? HE HAD TO OF SEEN HER WITH JAKE WILL CHRISTIAN HURT HER OR KIDNAP HER? DAMN I HAVE TO GO TO YOUR NEXT CHAPTER TO FIND OUT WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN.

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

SO I'M GUESSING CLAIRE IS A SHEILD AND THATS WHY SHE IS DOING SO WELL

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I HAVE TO WRITE YOU A REVIEW IT'S SO YOU KNOW I AM SO HOOKED ON YOUR STORY I REALLY LOVE IT I DON'T KNOW WHY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO GET TO IT BE MAN AM I EVER GLAD I DID AT LAST GET TO IT. I REALLY LIKE THAT EDWARD HAS OPENED UP TO THE FACT HE AND BELLA CAN DO MORE THEN TOUCH AND KISS BY TOUCH I MEAN HOLDING HANDS NOW THEY HAVE GOTTEN EACH OTHER OFF AND SHOWERED TOGETHER SO HOT I REALLY THOUGHT BELLA WAS GOING TO GIVE EDWARD A BLOW JOB IN THE SHOWER BUT A HAND JOB WAS BETTER BECAUSE THEY ARE BOTH FIRST TIMERS ON EVERYTHING, HOW EVER I THING A BLOW JOB WOULD BE OK BEFORE MARRAGE IN ANYCASE I JUST HAD TO TELL YOU I LOVE CHARLIE'S SECRET ALSO YOUR NEW TWIST OF A SISTER FOR BELLA WAS SO GOOD. YOU LEFT ME WANTING A LOT MORE PLEASE DON'T STOP YOUR STORY AND LEAVE US ALL HANGING LIKE SO MANY PEOPLE DO IT WOULD BE A SHAME TO LEAVE THIS STORY UNFINISHED.

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Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123073
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

IT'S A REALLY GOOD STORY AND I HAVE TO SAY I'M SORRY I WAS  USEING IE AND DOING REVIEWS BUT COFFEE SHOP DON'T USE IE SO I JUST CHANGED TO FIREFOX SO MY REVIEWS WILL GET TO THE AUTHORS I DID REVIEW YOUR STORY SOME NOT EVERY CHAPTER BUT I DID A LOT BECAUSE I REALLY DO LIKE IT SO I'M ASKING YOU TO PLEASE LET ME KNOW THE NAME OF THE NEXT STORY WHEN YOU ARE READY TO POST IT SO I CAN READ IT TO. THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME READ THIS ONE.



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Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
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Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

IT'S A GOOD THING CARLISLE TOLD HE TO GO HOME AND GET OUT OF THERE.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I HOPE EDWARD CAN HELP BELLA

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

POOR CHARLIE WHAT IS HE GOING TO DO ABOUT THE BILLS IF THE INS. STOPS PAYING?

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

SO BELLA IS TALKING IN HER MIND BUT NOT WITH HER MOUTH AND EDWARD CAN HERE HER. COOL.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

DOES BELLA KNOW MUSIC? DOES SHE PLAY OR SING?

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH I LOVE YOUR PRESIDENT TREATMENT. SO THEY NOW KNOW IT'S BELLA'S VOICE EDWARD HERES I DON'T GET HOW THEY GET HER TO GET BETTER SHE IS STUCK RIGHT SO HOW DO THEY GET HER UNSTUCK.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

WOWWHAT WILL CARLISLE COME UP WITH?

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I WAS GOING TO SAY THIS IN MY REVIEW TO YOU TO HAVE BELLA STAY AT THE CULLEN HOME SO THEY COULD TAKE CARE OF HER BUT THOUGHT YOU WOULDN'T DO THAT I GUESS GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE. LOL

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'M SURE THEY ARE GOING TO AGREE. AND GOD LOVE EDWARD FOR HIS THOUGHTS OF HELPING CHRLIE WITH THE MED. BILLS.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'M GLAD BECAUSE THEY WILL TAKE GOOD CARE OF HER AND I'M SURE EDWARD WILLBE BY HER SIDE AS MUCH AS HE CAN TO WATCH OVER HER.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

IT'S GOING TO TAKE A LONG TIME TO BRING HER AROUND ISN'T IT?

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

WHY DID IT WORK THE FIRST TIME HE TOUCHED HER AND THE SECOND TIME IT DIDN'T?

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

HE NEEDS TO SAY YES

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

YES IS KNEW CHARLIE IS SMART.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

THEY WENT TO ALOT OF TROUBLE TO MAKE BELLA'S ROOM SO NICE AND TO MAKE HER FEEL WELCOMED.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

BELLA IS THERE AT LAST EDWARD MUST BE SO HAPPY

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'M SO GLAD ALICE, JASPER AND EMMETT WERE THERE TO HELP EDWARD STAY CALM.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

POOR BELLA SHE THINKS SHE IS DIEING.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

EDWARD'S VOICE IS MAKING BELLA RELAX ISN'T IT? ISN'T THAT WHY HER HEART IS BEATING SLOWER.

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OH I HOPE THAT KISS HELPS BELLA HER HEART IS GOING TO TAKE OFF LIKE A JET ISN'T IT AND CARLISLE IS GOING TO ASK WHAT HE DID RIGHT?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

GOD BELLA DON'T DIE.