Reviews by amwine
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss

I love Charlie!  He made sure Renee got what she deserved.

I am so sad that Victoria's baby didn't make it.  I hope Victoria is okay.  Great job...thanks!

 



Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings

I love Edward's POV.  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

Wow....Renee is one piece of work.  I can't believe a mother could say those things to their child.  I think when Charlie finds out about this letter, Renee won't be in that house anymore.  She doesn't deserve a daughter as sweet and beautiful as Bella.  It just makes me so sad for Bella.  Great chapter...thanks!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

Bella needed to tell her story.  Keeping it bottled up was not helping her.  I hope she will feel better now.  That kiss was pretty sweet, but I hope it doesn't get them into trouble because of their ages.  Great job....thanks!!! 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

I am glad that Rosalie was paying attention and talked to Bella about what she saw. That will be a lot of help to Bella. Great job...thanks!

Author's Response:

thankyou so much

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

I am glad the truth is going to come out, but it is sad Jake is in jail and not James. Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread

I hope Bella learns in these session that she didn't deserve this.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

thankyou so much:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

I can't believe the way parents treat their kids sometimes.  I think it is very sad.  They ship their kids off when they need them the most.  I really wish Bella would have been honest about what happened to her.  This was not her fault.  Great job..thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

How sad for Bella.  I hope they can get James for this.  I can't wait to get caught up with this story.  Great job...thanks!



Author's Response:

ty so much for your review

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength

I am so glad that everything is over in Forks.  I think Bella has made peace with that place and will be able to go on now.  I am so glad that Charlie will be moving to Phoenix.  It will be good for all of them to be together.  Great chapter...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

so far this is the first review to touch on Bella's coming to terms with what happened to her and her making the decsion to not let this part of her life dictate who she is as a person, thankyou so much for the review

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Hourglass heart

I hope the scholarship can be transferred for Bella.  I think she would have a very hard time leaving to go to school, but would go since it was already paid for.  I love their gifts to each other.  Seems like everyone had a nice Christmas and New Years.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Life's Little Blessings

I am so glad Eden is here!!!  Mr. Newton did a good thing for Bella and his grandchild.  I worry what will happen to him now.  At least he made it safe for his grandchild.  Bella is going to be so happy that her Dad is moving to be close to her.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Forever Mine

I am so glad everything is turn out so well for everyone. I love the way Edward proposed to Bella. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 full circle

I am glad that everyone is happy and healthy. I love this story! Great job...thanks so much!!!

Sitting on Santa's Lap by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Bella is working as a Santa's helper...see what happens when a new Santa arrives... holiday citrus and a little fun!  ExB


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3235 Read Count: 392
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!  Great job...thanks so much!  Happy Holidays!

Summary:

From the time they met through Jake in college, Bella and Edward were best friends.  When her world falls apart and he’s the one to pick up the pieces, could their friendship grow into something more?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8084 Read Count: 839
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 24 Dec 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...I love it!!!  I am glad they finally figured out that they belonged together.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks I had fun playing with the song for this one...I'm glad you liked this story and reviewed once again!

Summary:

 

 

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"I think you liked me touching you in front of your ex, didn't you?" E & B are alone for New Year's ... or not. Written for the Squeeze My Lemon, Lemon writing exercise.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2754 Read Count: 2290
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 24 Dec 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it all!!!  I don't know how Bella was quiet when Edward was talking to Garrett.  Too funny.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

GupCL

Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3351
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a wonderful story.  I love it all!  Great job..thanks so much!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years into her marriage, photojournalist Bella, is worried that she isn't enough for her bi-sexual husband. Can a meeting with a mysterious street artist allow them both to fulfill their undisclosed desires?

 

Lemons Poly/Slash Edward/Bella/Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9218 Read Count: 6224
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 05 Jan 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Undisclosed Desires

I love it!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

30 Days by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary: Past Featured Story

30 days

30 days for him to make her prom queen. 30 days for her to turn his world upside-down. AU/AH. OCC. Canon pairing.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24840 Read Count: 39107
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2011 Updated: 03 Mar 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Day 2

I love these two!  Bella and her attitude and Edward trying so hard.  Thanks for making me laugh!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Day 1

Too funny.  I love it...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I don't know how I missed this, but I love it and I can't wait to finish it.  Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138749
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: From rock bottom to beautiful horizon

Very interesting.  I can't wait to get caught up.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: A brand new world of kink

So Esme knows the secret.   I am guessing now much gets by her. 

Bella has been through so much!  The lose all those babies and then have Jacob say what he is say is terrible.  I hope he gets what is coming to him. 

Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Old friends and a sexy dance.

He gets what he wants when he wants it, doesn't he???  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Surprise! Or not.

Wow...I didn't see this coming!  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

I don't blame Edward for being so upset that Calire has heard of this lifestyle even though what she has been told is not true.  I wam worried that she has not come back to see Edward.  I hope he can get her away from her mother.  She deserves to be with people that will love and protect her and I am not sure she always gets this from her mother.

I love the end of this one.  They have come so far.  Great job...thanks!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Valentine's Day had been the most magical day of Bella's life, everything was perfect. That is until Edward left. Now four years later on Valentine's Day, she's about to marry another man. Can Edward make Valentine's Day theirs again? Thank you Noelle Seven for the awesome banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22741 Read Count: 2742
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this!  They are going to have a lot to deal with once they go home, but they knew it was right and they went for it.  Great job..thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

HI,

 

Sorry it has taken me so long to reply. Real like has been super busy. Glad you liked the one shot so much. I will be continuing it just as soon as I finish up with the full story I have going now. It won’t be too much longer I promise.

 

Thanks for all the support and I look forward to seeing what you think when Bella and Edward have to go back to Forks and face everyone.

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

Summary:

Neurologist/Knight in shining armor Edward Cullen is called upon by a tiny fairy to save a damsel in distress. Disney makes it look so easy. Entry for the 'Who Doesn't Love a Fairy Tale? Contes on FFn.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26057 Read Count: 4887
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Oct 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Slumbering Swan

I love it!  Great story...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

It took me forever to respond (I blame email), but thank YOU!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Alice Part One

So sad. Its does help to know that she is safe and happy now.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Bella's Emails

I love the first one. I never thought about how it would look when Carlisle and Alice met Edward at the airport. I can see why she would think he was gay. I am glad she got the chance to send the second email. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoyed the whole story. Well, both stories, I guess.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Alice Part Two

At least they know where she is now. How sad they couldn't find her sooner.

Summary:

Edward lives in the world of beautiful people as a modeling agent, but a brief encounter at a poetry slam has him thinking about a real woman.  Will his poetry skills be enough to win her? FGB piece for azucena, M for plenty of reasons.

Below is the amazing banner by Rosalynn

RubyLips


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10598 Read Count: 1187
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ruby Lips & Words of Want

I love it!  Great job...thanks!!!

Bridging the Gap by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

After having her heart broken, Bella comes to meet the handsome and caring Dr. Carlisle Cullen, her sister Esme's best friend. Can they find in the other what they've been searching for?

This beautiful banner was made by Rosalynn.

Bridging

 

Another beautiful Rosalynn banner.

BridgeOverTroubledWater


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28132 Read Count: 3000
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bridging the Gap

I love how they let things happen for them.  They are  such a great pair and I never though I would be saying that.  I am such an Edward/Bella girl, but this Edward did not deserve Bella.  Great story....thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

You're not the only person to tell me i made them love B with someone other than Edward...I'm glad you liked it becasue I enjoyed going outside of my normal comfort zone with this fic.

It's You by Lost Twi Sisters Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary:

Bella and Edward meet on a cruise. Both are attracted to each to other.  We'll see what happens after some fun- loving on a cruise, when they encounter each other again.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Want to read
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88437 Read Count: 41339
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope Bella will stop running now.  I had a feeling that picture was of Rose and Emmett.  Great job....thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow...there is not going to be anything slow about these two.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well it is a start.  I am glad they are going to go slow and see what happens.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope they talk soon.  I am sure this is a shock, but they have to talk.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am glad Alice could help Bella understand Edward.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Of course she is right.  Is she surprised her plan is working???  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love them together.  The saying fits them perfectly.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I can't believe he didn't catch up to her and she spent the whole curise hiding from him.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well I guess it was fliring, but I wouldn't call it harmless.  Edward is going to have to do some fast talking.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alice cracks me up.  She is so excited.  Great job...thanks!!!



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Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It is sad that Charlie is gone.  These two are going to have a blast on this cruise.  Great job...thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Alice is always behind things like this.  I can't wait to get caught up.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

GIF animations generator gifup.com

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Baby Steps are Still Steps...

I love it! I am so glad they are finally getting to where they both want to be. They finally have their family together. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

I can understand how hurt she is by what Edward did, but she can't hide forever. He is getting the help he needs. She needs to do the same. I hate to think that she will miss Macs first day of school. They should both be there for that. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

No worries, I assure that Bella may be being a bit stubborn now, but she will get the help that she needs!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo Here´s a little sneak peek at the next chapter:

 

“Hey there, buddy,” I cooed softly while I swayed Parker back-and-forth in my arms.  “Daddy sure did miss you.  Did you miss me too, P?”  I asked, sitting down in the glider that was in the corner of his hospital room.

 

I´d stripped, and took a quick shower in the on-call room, donning a pair of dark blue scrubs and a yellow disposable hospital gown before I entered Parker´s room.  You could never be too careful, and I didn´t want to expose my little guy to any unnecessary germs that could possibly prolong his stay. 

 

I knew that Bella was anxious to our little guy home, but for me, Parker´s release would be bittersweet.  Parker going home meant that I wouldn´t be able to see him everyday.  I hadn´t realized that I was crying until a tear splashed against his little blue cap-covered head separating into what seemed like a thousand individual molecules.

 

Feeling the need to explain to my son why I wouldn´t continue to see him every day, I slipped my finger in his tiny hand, relishing the way his little fingers wrapped around my large one, and started to speak.  “Well, P,” I paused, fighting with the lump that was clogging my throat.  “You´re getting so big, daddy´s so proud of you, sweet boy, proud that after everything he did to your mommy that you´re healthy, growing big and strong, and soon you´ll get to go home.”  I bit the inside of my cheek, trying in vain to hold back my sob.  Unsuccessful in attempt, “I´m so sorry, son” fell from my lips in a broken cry.  “It´s all my fault that you´re in here; I will never be able make it up to you, but by God, I plan to die trying.”

 

Parker´s eyes fluttered open, staring up at me as if he was offering me a tiny piece of absolution.  Though some may not agree, and argue that it was gas, I´ll swear to my dying day that he looked up at me and smiled.  Beaming up at me with rose-colored cheeks, and a twinkle in his eye, in me, my son saw no wrong. 

 

I was his hero! 

 

Just the mere thought of that made my heart pump wildly in my chest.  Not that it was even remotely possible, but in that moment, my love for this tiny innocent creature in my arms seemed to quadruple in its intensity.  Clutching his delicate little body to mine, I held him as tight to me as could without causing him harm.

 

All too soon, my phone was vibrating.  Without even looking at the screen, I knew that our time was up for today.  Once Bella returned, she and Mac would be here for the rest of the night.  Bella was such a good mother, making time for both of our children. 

 

Even though it was against hospital policy, she insisted that Mac be allowed spend the night in her brother´s room; having me for a father and  Carlisle Cullen as your grandfather came with many perks that we had no problem using.

 

Parker´s suite was state of the art, and if not for the obvious knowledge that this was a hospital, you would think that you were staying in a suite at the Fairmont Olympic Hotel.

 

Being a children´s hospital, we had several rooms that were setup for long-term care, making families feel like they were at a home-away-from-home when their child was hospitalized long-term for chronic illnesses. 

 

Bella and Mac were able to sleep in a comfortable queen-sized bed and the room even had a small kitchenette complete with a microwave and nice-sized refrigerator.  That way, Bella had plenty of liquids at her disposal to keep her hydrated for breastfeeding, and Mac could have juice and snacks to tide her over during the day.

 

Like I said, it was the perfect set-up!

 

Reluctantly, I stood to my feet, trying not to jostle the sleeping infant in my arms.  Taking care with his wires and IV, I placed a lingering kiss atop Parker´s head and gently laid back in his bassinette. 

 

The door opened, and I didn´t even have to turn around to know who it was.  I knew that when I didn’t immediately respond to my mother´s text, she would send my father looking for me.  A strong hand gripped my shoulder, giving it a light squeeze.  “I´m sorry son, but it´s time,” he whispered solemnly. 

 

Even though he didn´t agree with my actions, he was still my father. 

 

And when I hurt, simply put, he hurt too!

 

Leaning down one last time, I brushed my lips against his cheek.  “I love you son, be a good boy for mommy and sissy tonight.  I´ll see you soon,” I promised, praying that it was one I could keep.  “I hope...”  Unable to stomach the look of pity that was sure to be in my father´s eyes, I turned and walked out of the room without so much as sparing him a backward glance.

 

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow...how sad. I can't wait to get caught up. Thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story!  Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Start of a New Life...

She has been through so much. I am glad she had the time she did with Sue and Charlie. She is going to be a great Momma! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is to late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story!  Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Life After the Pain...

Edward has been through hell, but the sad thing is now he just wants to hide and hope all the hurt will go away. That is sad. I can't believe he can not comfort his daughter. That is the worst part of this. It is sad he lost his wife, but to push your daughter away is terrible. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Memories of the Past... and Uninvited Guests...

I love Mac. She is so cute. I didn't expect Bella to find her in the bathtub. That was priceless! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: What Happens... When the Fog is Lifted...

Edward needs a lot of help! It is so sad he can not get over what happened to Calire. He is hurting himself, but his daughter the most by not dealing with everything and moving on. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Surviving the Storm...

Poor Bella and McKynzie...we all know what is coming...

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: When the Music...

Well I am glad to know he didn't leave. I feel so bad for Mac. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...

Wow...what a mess he has created. I hope Bella and the baby will be okay. I hope Bella hasn't lost the ability to have more children if she watns. Edward is finally going to get the help her needs. It is going to take a while to work through this and make amends to his family, but they love him and that will help him through this. I can't wait for the next update. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

I am so glad they are finally talking. Great job...thanks!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward left Bella the day after he makes love to her for the first time. Join Bella on her journey of love, laughter, pain and tears. Will love be enough to bring him back? Will the love of his baby be enough?

 

Warning:  at times there will be lemons and language. Bella will be unsure of herself, she will doubt herself. Edward will be an ass at times, but this is life and life is not always pretty. Will love really be enough?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72137 Read Count: 34972
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2011 Updated: 26 Sep 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love it! What a wonderful day. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow... :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It is just going to take time. Edward really messed things up. Bella is right...email or no email...phone or no phone...if anyone of them would have gone home to check on her anytime in the first year they would have found her in their house. This is going to be very hard on Esme. I don't see Nana wanting to be away anymore. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He better be going to get the rest of the family. I don't know how they are going to get through this, but I hope they do. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So he never expected Bella to be there? I wonder if Ben and Angela knew he was coming back. I am so sad that Charlie died and that all the time he and Bella missed out on. Bella had to give up so much. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am glad she knows how strong she is and she can make it through anything! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella is amazing! To go through all this alone. There is no other word to describe her. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Since Bella's emails, texts & phone calls seem to be going through, why are they not calling her back? I can't believe they would not check out what is going on. What is up with the house? I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...I hope they will respond to her messages. It is not right to leave her in this situation alone. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am glad that Bella met with Alice and heard what she had to say. I think it was very important Bella heard what they went through. I loved it when Mason called Esme. They both were so cute. Great job...thanks!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I wish Jasper could have talked some sense into Edward.  This is not going to be pretty I am sure.  I feel so bad for Bella....she has been through so much!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am glad Edward is trying to change.  He will come up with something to keep Bella safe.  I don't trust Edward Sr at all.  What a mess.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am glad Edward listened to what Alice had to say.  He even listened to Bella.  I hope he can figure thing out and make things better for Bella and himself.  Maybe there is hope for him yet.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ok, I get it, he is not going to let her go, but why doesn't he try to fiugre out a way that she will want to stay.  I wonder how he will ever learn.  Great job..thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

And he says she is not a slave.  Maybe he has a dictionary down in the library.  I just can't believe he did that to her.  I don't know that he will ever be able to dig out of the hole he has gotten himself into.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

He is going to have to change his attitude towards her if he wants to show her what a great guy he is.  It is sad he has to eavesdrop to find out what she is thinking.  If he was nicer, I am sure she will tell him things.  Greqt job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I would like to take a belt to Edward at this point.  He is something else.  Just takes and doesn't really take her into consideration.  This would go a lot better for both of them if he could have approached things differently.  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel bad for Isabella.  I can't wait to see where this goes.  Thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope Jasper can help Edward and Alice can help Bella through this.  How old is Edward?  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have a feeling that Edward is going to regret the way he is treating Bella.  He could be a little nicer, but I guess that is not the way his life is.  Great job..thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward has a lot to learn.  He could make this all a lot easier on himself.  I guess he will learn the hard way.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am afraid of how the evening is going to go.  I hope for Bella's sake nothing happens though.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love this Rosalie.  I know she is going to be good for Bella and in the long run I hope she is good for Edward too.  Maybe she will make him see that how he is treating Bella is not right.  He is already starting to see that...maybe she will help it along faster.  What was up with Edward Sr.???  I can't wait to figure that out.  Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I don't blame Bella for being confused.  That is to be expected.  I really wish Edward would seek help from his brothers.  I think that is the only way he is going to make it through this.  He is right that he can't let Bella go...Aro would be right there to get her.  I love Emmett!  He is going to give Edward what he deserves.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think Edward is trying, but he is fighting it too.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am so worried about Bella.  I hope Aro is not upstairs after Bella.  I can see Edward's Dad getting him out of his house so Aro can break in.  I hope Edward gets there in time so nothing more happens to Bella.  He needs to go talk to Carlisle...maybe take Bella there so she is protected.  I can't wait to see what is next.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I am guessing Aro is pushing on their dad hard.  He wants Bella back and they thought this was the way to get Edward to send her back.  That is my guess anyway.  I am glad Rose is there for Bella.  It will take them all to keep her safe.  Finally Edward is admitting how important Bella is to him.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

These two have come a long way.  I can't wait to see what is next for them.  Great job...thanks!!!

Two by vbfb1 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella never expected in less than a year she would be in labour again. Damn Edward’s super sperm.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1714 Read Count: 3032
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2011 Updated: 09 Jun 2011
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!  Great job..thanks!!!

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am so sad that Garrett is gone. I feel so bad that Bella has lost another person from her life. I hope she finds Edward soon. She deserves to have some happiness in her life. I hope they don't have to wait 100 years to find each other. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

I hated killing Garrett. I loved him and I knew what it would do to Bella when he died, but it had to be done if I want Edward to come back. I hated to keep them apart for so long but they will be seeing each other very soon. I promise not to make them wait 100 years. Thanks, as always, for your review, darlin. I love hearing what you think. Love you tons - D

Until next time...here's a peek at Edward's next chapter which will be up later today:

Sitting alone watching the sky change colors, I thought of Bella and our lives together growing up. I replayed every moment and let the love we felt back then wash over me. I knew I couldn't, but I wanted to feel that again.

I wanted to look into her eyes again and see the love I used to see when she looked at me. I wanted to wrap my arms around her and promise that I would never let her go again. Assure her that if she still wanted me, if she still loved me, we could be together forever. It was possible now and I could take her with me.

As the sky above me grew dark, I made my decision. I had to see her and if she was happy, I would leave quietly and never return. I would find Carlisle and Esme and live my life with them.

But if happiness had not found her in all these years, I would go to her in the night, take her someplace where I could explain everything and beg for her forgiveness. And if by some miracle she still loved me, I would take her back to Carlisle so he could change her and I could keep her with me for the rest of eternity.

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love it! I didn't expect a proposal yet, but I can't wait to see how Bella responds. All I know is she better now jump into his arms...even though I know she will want to. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They are so cute! I love it! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

She is trying. I have to give her that. I understand why she can't stay there. He is everywhere she looks. Her parents will be crushed. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow...Bella has been through a lot herself. I don't know how she will deal with this. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It is so sad. He went through so much. They all did. I am worried about Bella and how she will take the news. I wonder if she is sick somewhere. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Edward...he was so nervous. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Edward. So much is going on. I can't believe her parents took her away for so long right before the wedding. I guess will be a good thing though. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think this is perfect! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

He is such a wonderful person. He and Bella are so lucky. I love that his monther is making the dress for Bella. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet! I can't wait to get caught up! Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward has been through so much. I am glad that Carlisle took him back. I hope he will find Bella sometime soon. Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I understnad why he has to let her go, but it makes me so sad. I am so worried knowing she is out there on her own. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well I am glad that Bella has found some friends in the city. I am still so worried about her though. I wish the doctor would be Carlisle, but I don't know that it will be. Great job...thanks!!!