Reviews by darkvampluvr
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

love this story, very original. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Loved this chapt and how she touched Felix. Hope to see him again. I really love this story, very original and well written. Hope you update soon and often.

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Wow, that is some seriously f'd up shit! Hope you don't have her in captivity tooo long. Can't wait til Edward is introduced. Plz updat soon.

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

GOT MY POST!! Definitely creepy. Was surprised that Edward was Aro's son. For some reason thought he would be the one to help her after she was rescued. Definitely interesting. Love this story, update soon.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625091
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Poor Bella, Darkward is back. Plz, Plz update soon.

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I like how you handled the aftermath. Can't wait to read epi. I think you should go ahead with your plans to make TPW and original work. You're an amazing author and i would love to read anything you wrote. (Hope you are still planning on continuing with A/J story though.

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really love TPW and I'm so glad to hear that you're going to concentrate on that for now and finish it up. I hope it's really soon cuz this story is really phenomenal also and I can't wait to read more.

Summary:

Edward realized in New Moon that with Bella is where he is meant to be. Forces earlier unleashed are now again threatening her life, and Edward must do everything in his power to keep Bella safe, from the danger lurking in the shadows and himself. EPOV.  

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257389 Read Count: 3173
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Confrontations

I understand in fanfiction that you have to use some scenes and/or dialogue from s. meyers. However I have read quite a few chapts so far and this is just you copying Eclipse. Try to be original if you decide to try another story.



Author's Response:

Hi,

thanks for leaving a review. I thought I had made it clear in my story notes that I have used all original dialogue and scenes from Eclipse, for which both Bella and Edward are present. There is additional dialogue starting in chapter 3 that is not in the book, as I expanded on the visit to Jacksonville. I am a fairly new author, and this is my first big story, and as I got deeper into it, I became more comfortable inventing scenes and dialogue.

As you read on in the next chapters you will see that I have added scenes for which Bella is not present, and tried to further explore the character that is Edward, as well as the surrounding members of his family, and his interaction with them. If you stopped after the first 3 chapters, I would ask that you read 4, 5 and 6 as well to see what I mean.

Thanks for your interest.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

were you told to remove your stories from FF or did you chose to? Well for whatever reasons I'm glad they're here. Hope you start updating them again.

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I followed this story over from FF and was wondering if you plan on updating anytime soon.

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Will you be bothering to update any of your stories anytime soon?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

LOVE this story. And I Really love you for you frequent updates. Wish chapts were a little longer. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

next chapter will be longer :) and I cant promise to always have them up this fast :s sorry xx

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Irrevocable

What the hell is this?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So glad to see this story on this site. Was following it on FF. How long til you'll be updating with new chapters instead of just the ones already on FF?

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

When will you start updating new chapters?

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can we plz get something new....soon?!?!?!

Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please don't go back into hibernation, I love this story and it's been FOREVER since you last updated! Is something in their situation going to change soon? He's had her for five months and the story seems like it needs something drastic to happen to move on. Especially if they are supposed to end up together. Are they supposed to end up together? If so, It'll be interesting to see how you get that to happen condidering how horribly he's abused her. PLz, plz, plz update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the awesome banner!

 

Charolette died 60 years ago and left Peter.  Edward left Bella in the forest nearly two hundred years ago.  Peter has been alone and Bella has been through hell; how will they find common ground?  What will happen when these two cross paths?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78843 Read Count: 18426
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: darkvampluvr Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: RUN DOWN

Great start, can't wait to read more. Plz update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  I'm glad you like it so far.