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Bonjour, bonjour,
Profile here we go !
So I’ve recently realized we're living in a small world and since I'm part of the even smaller world of academia, I'll be careful and only tell you that I live in Canada ;)
I discovered Twilight pretty late (I saw the first movie before reading the books) but was immediately drawn to Edward. Yeah nothing original so far I’m completely aware of that!!!
However, –please don’t hate me-, I was pretty disappointed by the quality of the writing. I read the saga both in French and English and for the first time I almost preferred the translated version – itself very far from being a literary chef d’oeuvre – to the original one!
I do love the world SM created but I wasn’t really happy with how she handled things in both Eclipse and Breaking Dawn so this is how I started to read Fanfic to satisfy my disappointment and frustration!! And I gotta say that I read really awesome stories thanks to over talented writers, and still do!!!
So I’m a 1000% Edward/Bella and canon pairings but I’m definitely not against some additions along the journey for some hot smutty sexin’!! I’m off course Team Edward but I don’t hate Jacob…He’s nice and cute but he’s just way out of Edward’s league :D
I’m an absolute bookworm, so I regularly have to force myself to stop reading in order to keep my social and professional life going ;) I’ve read hundreds of Fanfics, and I just want to pay tribute to those fabulous authors who graciously offer us the result of their hard work and unbelievable imagination!
If you ever need to check your French for your work please don’t hesitate I’ll be more than happy to help you out!!
Twilighly yours,
PinkSapphyr
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254874
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Oh goodie goodie...I'm kinda sure She's gonna Yellow..I mean, She's been on the edge since She left their house so I don't think She'll be able to refrain her impending orgasm too long...Unless She finds a more effective diversion than citing the states....She must know them by heart so the effort may not be big enough to really divert her mind from the ever present and ever building pleasure!!
As for her punishment (which She entirely deserved btw....She purposely chose to ignore a direct order....Not the smartest move my dear!!), I think Edward's choice was particularly pertinent! Even though She cried and was ashamed I think the parallel between her behaviour and its consequence is ironic: She's left to herself standing in a corner for a relatively long time with only her thoughts to keep her occupied! Seeing She's being punished because of NOT thinking before acting....I really appreciate Edward's way of thinking!!! Oh and this clit clip damn....The table scene made me all hot and bothered!!! I feel B's pain....And wish I could share her pleasure :D
I'm kind of sure that the new girl Heather is gonna be a problem...I don't believe She's really suffering from domestic abuse and I'm a bit afraid that She could be a sort of mole, gathering info on Bella for James....Like I said, I don't like it AT ALL!!!
As for Leah, I think I found her problem...She's just JEALOUS of the time Bella spends with Edward and all the Cullens....She used to be the only one close to Bella (with Jacob off course) and now She has to share and realises She's not the most important person in B's life anymore!! Hope They'll sort that situation out real soon...Don't need more drama!
And concerning Tanya, well.....Let's just say that I'm glad She chose to shut up ;)
Have a nice weekend and read you on Monday :)
Author's Response:
Do you want her to Yellow... I think Edward has something up his sleeve to take her mind off it ....((lol - trust me))... Don't you know the states? We learned them in Alphabetical order... the think is to say the state and then picture where it is,,(as a diversion) because I could say them all in a minute...it's the mental picture that helps, sometimes when I;m saying them I try to pin point a city or the capital to give me a little extra to focus on....((ahh.. the things we do ...lol))...As for all of your other comments, I think we will see what happens...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml
Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked.
Bastard!
I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”
“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.
“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.
“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”
“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark.
Oh Shit
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Niiiiiice!! I love it when Bella's being a smartass.....She has a quick wit, it's at the same time completely endearing and really funny ;)
I'm truly glad She was willing to talk to Edward about Jane's advice and perception on the lifestyle. Off course, Bella being Bella, She needed some time to sort things out but She did open up and even tried to secretly psychoanalyse Edward ;) Great job!! I'm really proud.
I love the idea of Edward getting a tattoo too...You're gonna have to root for that babe ;) Tattward's always hot...So a Tattoed Domward will just be....gah....Absolutely irresistible (I know as if He weren't already...Sigh!). Anyway, I checked the photos you posted and Bella's piece of art is really nice ;)
And finally (sorry for my rambling), I've to say I'm a bit less freaking out now that I know Edward didn't forget all the weird events that happened lately!!! He's gonna be even more careful...Hope it'll be enough!!
Can't wait for my teaser :D Have a good weekend!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you (sorry it took so long )....lml
Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.
“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.
“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.
“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.
“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Yes, that's exactly the case!!! The plot thickens and I'm still drowning in all the possibilities...This Heather is definitely NOT good news!! And this Officer Hawk was more than weird and rude....His abruptness was very uncalled for and quite incomprehensible!! Another fact to wonder about. and for which I'm completely clueless...I'm just following Bella's theories right now because mine have absolutely no solid basis!! Right now, I'm still blocked on "Heather's in cahoots with James, trying to gather some information on Bella's life"! Nothing really new or exciting!! Thanks dear for confusing me even more ;) It means that I'm apparently not a great mind :( Sob!!
Anyway, I loved the last scene..Until the end that is!! Damn, I was soooo frustrated BUT I'm so proud of her for having had enough presence of mind to Yellow before it was too late and risk a bigger punishment ! And Edward's reaction was very respectful while being still authoritative!! Nice combination because it soothed and grounded Bella!! I liked that very much :)
Hope you'll be able to update soon...Happy New Year to you too!!! Wish you all sorts of wonderful things Xoxo
Author's Response:
I want Edward for my Dom ...lol....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”
“Don’t say that!”
I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”
Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”
Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”
“No…” why the hell would I think that?
“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Waouh....I'm soo very proud of Bella.....Like You said, She had the damn clip all night and didn't Yellow or orgasmed!!! Ok, She yelled at Edward and had to face her controlled but efficient punishment right away but I'm proud of her no matter what!! I mean, even if He didn't expect that kind of outburst from her during their usual, this time was a bit different, and seeing the week They had AND the fact that She's beyond aroused AND that They've being disagreeing on her being jumpy for days...Well, this is not sooo surprising!!!
Also, the break-in is another bad news, I don't know what's really going on but it's not very encouraging and reassuring!!
Anyway, this evening was full of little pleasures, funny stories, consuming desire and hilarious remarks (thx Jasper, Alice and Emmett for those!) and it was very nice to see them spend quality time together!!)
I hope you had a great Christmas and that Santa was generous and well-inspired ;)
Happpy Holidays Xoxo Cecile
Author's Response:
Wow ... you hit all the stresser's in Bella's week .. you're right though she had all that stuff and then some...and Bella is a woman and sometimes we just talk without thinking....thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....
“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.
“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.
“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed
“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.
“You talked to Charlie?”
“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.
“What did he want?”
As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”
“And?” I knew there had to be more
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Whoosh......Thank god for the last 20 lines (the ILYs...) because that was some heavy stuff over there!! Geez that James is a complete fucked up sadist!! I mean, come on you don't do that to people...That's just soo inhuman!! Brrr, I felt sick just by reading it!
Anyway, I really like your story, I started it yesterday on the advice of justginger (peoplelikeus) and I'm glad I did...I didn't stop until the last word you wrote because it was that good!
I think you did a great job with the personnality of the characters, the rythm of the story, the way you disclose their past through flashbacks or memories.
And last but not least, I absolutely LOVE your Edward and all the Cullens. I also appreciate your choice to give Aro and Jane such a positive role, which is very uncommon but finally rather nice.
Hope you'll update soon because I can't wait to see them basking in their newly revealed feelings of love and total bliss ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your kind words of praise...and I update Mondays and Thursdays...lml
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Good chap!! Edward freaked out a bit but it's entirely understandable....I mean , I 'm 99,99% sure James is around there...The white van, the collar, Seth barking at night...To many occurrences to be random!!! So I think that panicking was a perfectly natural reaction for him when He realised that no one knew where Bella was!! After what She's been through, He just can't help expecting the worst...Again!
Anyway, I found this whole "betting on Edward's life thing" really funny!! The "You couldn’t wait another week" from Emmett was hilarious, this guy is just unique!!! Seeing that Carlisle won the bet (who knows his son better than his father??? His mother but She would have never done such a thing!!), I'm curious to know what was Jasper's prediction....
A for the last paragraph, I perfectly understand why Bella needs their usual....She needs to relinquish her power and control to Edward after this rough day in order to free her mind and fell loved and taken care for.....I'm kinda surprised He didn't think about that possibility but I assume seeing her that tired and spent just let his desire to have her rested and relaxed prevail!
I can't wait for monday but we all know that Anticipation is the key to bigger pleasure....;) See ya soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I hope Bella gets what she is expecting...I have a teaser for you ....
“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.
“I turned it off”
“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.
“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.
“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Hey there!! I can't be mad at Edward, I mean He didn't do anything wrong. Bella did...She fucked up big time! I know She's new to the lifestyle but I think the method Edward chose was really effective.
She now understands better what it is to be a true submissive, that by neglecting herself She let him down and hurt him. She realised that her pleasure is intrinsically tied to his but that pleasing him is and will always be her main concern, what She needs to feel happy and at peace.
It was a really good scene, you managed to highlight all of their feelings and turn this session into something really emotional and touching. She's opening up and growing up as a Submissive and it's gonna be a pleasure to see her bloom in her obedience and devotion.
However, I can't wait for the EPOV (will you write something about that scene or not?) because this scene was definitely a milestone in their realtionship both as boyfriend/girlfriend and Dom/Sub. It's highly probable that it took its toll on him too: worrying for her well-being, punishing her, upsetting her, making her cry, making her feel unworthy (even if its not the point)....It's always harder for a Dom to do his 'job' properly when feelings are involved....But He did a great job so far....Firm, clear and yet tender....*sigh* As I said, I can't wait for your next update!
See ya soon :P
Author's Response:
Edward will be telling his side of this whole thing on Thursday...thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Hey there!!! Nice song for a great story ;)
The banana scene was hilarious, I'm so looking forward to what Bella's gonna say to Edward....I highly recommend She tells the truth even if there's a risk He doesn't take it too well because if She chooses to lie, God help us all, the consequences will be much more uncomfortable for her........!!
So, She obviously still has a lot of unsolved problems to deal with...The panic attacks won't go away until She decides to fight against and overcome her deeply rooted fears...I know, easily said than done but She won't be able to move on until She faces her past and find some much needed closure!
Anyway, I take you to your words for your pinky swear.....I want some hot smut for the next chap...They both need it, so do we :D In the meanwhile, take care...Read you on thursday
Author's Response:
Your right lying is never a good option...closure yes and security both emotionall and physcial...hopefully she will begin to gain both...I didn't pinky swear next chapter I said by the end of the weekend....patience my lovely ...lml
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I knew it!! I'm always more affected when I'm in Edward's mind.....I think it's because I can relate to Bella and I understand how She feels and reacts whereas Edward's reactions are more alien to me and are therefore harder to deal with....I feel really bad because He had to deal with a situation He didn't like and wasn't responsible for! I don't know if I'm clear but to be sure: Bella deserved feeling that way because She messed up and had to be punished for that, which wasn't the cas for Edward (even if giving punishment is part of his role...). Geez, I'm rambling so I'm gonna stop here!!
Anyway, I really loved the chapter and I find Edward's sensibility truly endearing. He's sooo undoubtedly my perfect man...*sigh* Why is it only fiction????
Can't wait for your next update dear...I love what you write :P
Author's Response:
thanks and all I can say is thatthe whole time I was writing Bella's POV, edward was screaming in my head to be able to tell his side,,,and he is my perfect man too, a girl can always dream :) ....thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml
Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”
“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.
“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”
“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Hey there! Thank you for that chapter, it was really good and completly necessary. The lunch with Jane was very well handled, She was able to both reassure and correct Bella. With her experience, She'll act as her mentor and guide, helping her to understand the lifestyle and herself better. Seeing Bella's past, it's not hard to understand some of her reservations such as dependance, trust, ect....Relying on someone else is obviously very difficult for her and I think with Jane's help, Bella's gonna be able, little by little, to become more confident both in herself and her relationship with Edward.
Concerning your question, I don't really see which scene could/should have made me mad. I think Edward's currently behaving like a really good dominant: He's coherent, attentive and dedicated....He doesn't do anything mean on purpose: all the restrictions He imposed - no cobbler or no "blowjob's sweet treat" ;) - are a result of Bella's misbehaviour and part of her punishment. Off course it's hard for her (but so ingnificant compared to her marked foot!), but She understands why He did it....It's all part of the deal!! Just like Jane said, being a real submissive implies accepting punishments and trying to improve oneself to do better the next time, in order not to disappoint their Master and to make them proud and happy through one's total obedience :)...It's not just about rewards and playtime!!
Can't wait for the EPOV.....Read you on thursday ;)
Author's Response:
See,, you understand... :) ...thanks for the comments ...lml
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Nice chapter and it's always a pleasure to finish with a hot wax play scene ;)
I think Bella's dream might be premonitory and my opinion on its meaning would be stay next to Edward (the light) because James (He) is coming after her!! I also believe that The kitchen is her happy place where She feels safe and loved, surrounded by the people who care the most about her and that Edward and her grand-dad disappearing little by little metaphorically represents what will happen if She lets all her doubts and deprecating thoughts control her life...
I mean, I'm not Freud but this is how I understood it.....If I'm totally out of the loop, please feel free to set me right :P
Anyway, I'm glad they at least got one part of the punishment down, one more to go...Bella's really improving with her training, She picked up on all the signs He made and their meaning...That's great! She's definitely more attentive and focused! I'm really looking forward the party, I want to see a sinfully hot Bella driving an adoring Edward crazy ;) Heeeeeeeee, I can't wait!!!!!
I'll read you on thursday, in the meantime...Take care :)
Author's Response:
The dream can have many meanings and it would depend on your point of view as to what you think it is. You will see in a little bit if you are right ...thanks for the comments ...lml
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Ohhhhhhhhh....That's mean dear Edward :P ... Bella's gonna be pissed and He's gonna have a blast with her temper!! ;) He's a wonderful bastard when He wants to...*grin*
I hope the ink on her foot will be gone by the evening....They definitely need to have some fun, especially Bella...She's gonna have to release all the tension of the last days and all....I mean She's to meet Edward's parents....That's always a bit frightening.....And She'll have to remain in her submissive role, not really the easiest to allay her fear!!!
Have a nice weekend and read you on Monday :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml
While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.
“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.
“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”
“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”
I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.
“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.
“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
OMG...The orange vs sperm nutritional contest was just hilarious!!!!! I was unfortunately drinking tea (yeah I believe in tea properties too...) while reading that part and man, I almost choked and my computer screen was thoroughly showered!!
I'm very sorry for Rose's painful past but kinda glad that She can really understand and relate to what Bella's feeling and going through. I hope it'll give our little darling enough strength and confidence to really face her issues and find the will to really move on and open herself to and trust Edward completly.
I'm glad They told the truth about the banana thing and that the guys didn't freak out too much...That's cool, They don't need anymore drama!!
I'm sooo waiting for the next chap..Bella's foot's gonna be perfectly clean...I know it, and They're gonna have to evacuate all the tension and worries and frustration of the last days...I want it to be explosive dear...Give me some hot "i'm-melting-into-a-puddle-of-goo" playtime.......Until monday, have a nice weekend and take care ;)
Author's Response:
There is a house full of people there....thanks for reading I have a teaser for you...lml
The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.
“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on.
Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”
She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”
Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”
Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Ahhh He likes to watch her squirm...Mmm...So do we ;) But She's getting better at restraining herself! That's really great, go Bella, make him burst with pride and satisfaction ;)
That was a hell of a serious game of Chicken Scratch....I've always thought that Eminem's talent was to be freaking smart while being crude and provocative!! Once more, He didn't disappoint! It's nice to see that They all want to be more involved into Bella's life and try to grasp the reality of it. Her explanations were amazingly delivered - considering what was going on in her panties at that time ;) - but I couldn't help but notice that She said "They" while talking about beaten women. Is it because She doesn't include herself into that category or was it just a way of speaking??? It kinda bugged me....Still, given what Edward was doing and saying to her, maybe She was just a bit too distracted!! I don't know!
Anyway, even if I already read that part in the teaser, it didn't prevent me from cracking up with Alice's comment "you like when it hurts, right?"...That was simply hilarious!!
So, I'm really really very happy that her foot is clean but you're a mean mean thing Louise!! I'm still gonna have to wait for one more chapter to have the good stuff BUT you're half forgiven seeing you did give us some kitty action so......
Can't wait for thursday ;) Take care Xxx
Author's Response:
If you noticed she said 'they' when talking about abused women, becasue she doesn't consider herself one. She considers herself to be a survivor - however she said we when talking about women being nurturers because she is a woman....Does that make sense? At least that was my thought process while I was writing (((see there is a method to my madness)))...lml
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
She's going to get a reward, She's going to get a reward....Youhou....
But when??? She's clearly spent right now, She's gonna need some rest to get her body back under control!! That C-Grip seems to be an amazing device of pleasurable torture...Gosh, She did question whether or not She was going crazy from too much pleasure...That's SOMETHING, isn't it???
Anyway, the end of the weekend was pretty nice: Emmett and his non-existent verbal filter, Rose in a Sub-mode, Alice and her (I hope always right and unfailing) sixth sense, a snowball fight AND some freaking good bedroom time for our 2 favorites!!! So all in all, I'd say it was a pretty good trip!!
I also wanna know what made Edward react that way in their room....He seemed upset with something...Was it just because He messed up a bit with their travel time and therefore with what He had planned for them?? Hum, I don't know, there seems to be more than that....We'll see on monday , won't we??? Oh and when's the party taking place????
Have a nice weekend Louise and write us some good stuff....As usual ;)
Author's Response:
lol ... she was delerious from fighting it off...lol ...it was a jam packed weekend...Emmett cracks me up, but a least he let them finish ..lol.. and yes edward has a reason for acting that way. You may not like it butit is there...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you...lml
When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.
“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.
“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her
“You do. Are you hungry?”
“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”
“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”
“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled.
“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear
“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”
“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Hey there!! So sorry for the (very) late review but RL has been a bit hectic!
Anyway, this chapter was very good! I always love the EPOV but this one was particularly great & full of little hot and sexy stuff: i sooo loved the "don't lick that off your lips" or the NU-bra episode or when She had to dress him (damn...That's SOOO sexy) or the public orgasm (that was very hot but He was sooo sweet and caring) and off course the 'slut' calling, which I completly agree with you, is 'OMG-SOS-soaked-panties' hot!! ;)
Now, besides all the fun stuff, I clearly didn't like Leah's attitude! You said She has a problem so I'm gonna wait and see what it is. But She's supposed to be close to Bella and it's not the first time She throws cutting remarks!! Concerning Jake, I'm quite appalled with what He sometimes utters about women!! Some are shocked by Edward's behavior towards Bella but I find a hundred times more degrading Jake's remarks concerning B's dress or the idea He has of women and the lifestyle..This is pure machismo!!
Edward would never say something degrading or derogatory to Bella, She's his world and despite everything She is the one worshipped!
What's the deal at the Club, they're still stuck on Edward and Bella...DThey didn't find another subject to gossip about yet???? And with Stefan's comment 'million dollar baby', I think we don't know the extent of the damages yet!!
Anyway, thanks for the song choice..I'm a huge fan of Blue October ;)
Read you tomorrow yay!!! :D Xoxo
Author's Response:
The people at the club are in shock, he's acting differant then he ever did, even when he had a sub he never acted like this, holding her, feeding her, dancing... that's all new for him...Have you ever known someone who always does something..expamle we have a friend ((who is also our neighbor and family memeber, through marriage)) he is always meticulus about his yard, the grass, the shrubs, the trees always perfect...this year he let it go, the grass was high, things were undone and we knew something was up, turns out he got himself a lady friend ,,,I know the situation is differant,,, but it is the same concept...Edward is differant and people notice and they are wondering why and who this woman is that has changed him rather quickly.........That's my explanation...I love that song, and it fit so perfect with my story ...thanks for reading and the comments ...lml
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Wet????? Something more like soaked or completly drenched would be more accurate ;) Damn, that last scene was super hot!! Feels good to let your inner slut play sometimes :D
As for the sound trigger, I'd say that Cullen got it right! Or completly wrong it depends how you consider her reaction!! Caning is clearly a hard limit for Bella but I think it was a good choice to introduce her to that impact toy the way He did! And He was up to the mark with all the necessary comfort, aftercare and reassurance....(This guy has some wicked fingers) BUT now the real "interest" of her panic will be to delve deeper into her psychic scars so that She could heal.
Let's see what She's gonna do with her dream....or should I say nightmare!! She's somehow unconsciently beginning to face her traumatic past!!
I'm so very proud of what you write dear!!! That's a real pleasure :)
Have a nice weekend and see you on monday Xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you...I find I am really enjoying the adventure of writing this story. My husband thinks I'm crazy but it seems like once I started I just couldn't get these two out of my head. They had a story to tell and they are using me to do it ...lol ...((see why he thinks I'm crazy..lol)) no seriously Bella remembers what happened to her, it's all the feelings that go along with it that she just hasn't delt with and that's what is raising it's ugly head....Have a good weekend yourself, and thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you....
After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my uneasiness. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.
Fucking great…
She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.
“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.
“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.
“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Hey!! Well, it was an interesting chapter..Nothing major happened but a lot of little things here and there that are finally making Bella realize that She's gonna have to really face her past and deal with all the consequences She chose to ignore and bury deep inside her mind......
I think relinquishing control to Edward for certain periods of time weakened the walls She erected in her mind to protect herself and now that they're crumbling, memories and sensations from the past are reappearing.
I'm very hapy with the way She handled Tanya the bitch...I've to say I was a bit anxious after reading the teaser...But everything's fine!! And you gonna love Carlisle...He's just THE perfect DILF ;) (even if I'm 1000% Edward....That man is definitely the second best!!)
Can't wait for thursday....Take care Xoxo
Author's Response:
Never been a Carilse girl ...but thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Well, She doesn't fool him at all...He's too attuned and attentive to her to fail to notice her every mood and reaction....He's gonna be good for her IF He mangaes to follow Emmett's advice, who for once was very clever with that one!!!
I can feel the mystery deepening and the tension thickening so I hope it won't be too hard on Bella, seeing She already has to deal with her resurfacing past....She doesn't need more drama, but somehow I doubt She'll be spared :$
I'm now gonna use my dirty kinky mind to feel those famous 10 minutes :D
Till monday, take care xoxo
Author's Response:
hmmm...i think they filled those ten minutes with some mutual oral pleasure...have a great weekend ...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml
We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.
“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.
“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed
“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”
“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.
“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”
What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?
“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Good...She let it all out.....She definitely needed to purge her mind from those awful memories and to free herself from all this guilt She carried.
Edward was the unfortunate receiver of all her pent up anger and frustration but I think He handled the situation like a pro!! I'm very proud!! He backed off when things got too out of hand, supported her when needed without loosing his temper!!! That's impressive!!!
So, I'm very glad this chapter finally arrived because it marks a major turning point for Bella and consequently for Edward. However, Leah's attitude is making me feel more uneasy every time She's in the vicinity.....Hope we'll find out soon what's her problem really is with her sister ;)
Read you on thursday, if you have time to update seeing it'll be Thanksgiving ;) Xoxo
Author's Response:
It does mark a turning point ,,,
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Oh dear..Jane was really a Godsend on that one!!! You just made it perfect for Bella when you chose her as her mentor !!! I think She kind of saved Bella by preventing her from completly giving up and entering a destructive spiral...I mean She did manage to stop all ideas of inadequacy or rejection...Which is a pretty big thing considering the state of mind Bella was in during the whole chapter and the amount of guilt and shame that crushes her.....
Regarding to the last part, I'm a bit torn......Don't get me wrong, that was hot as hell but I'm not really sure sex was the best solution in there....Sure She wanted to feel close to him and be reassured that whatever He saw wouldn't change how He saw her but the thing is that it obviously did and his reaction was probably more a result of her "denying" him as her master than a need to make her feel better!!
I don't know, I'm really looking for his side of the story because this is not really like him....Anyway, I don't know what Leah's problem is but I hope her shitty behavior will end soon because it's starting to get on my nerves a little bit...Just saying ;)
Hope you had a great Thanksgiving and that you gave your credit card some short respites along the day ;) Xoxo
Author's Response:
sometimes angry sex serves a purpose ,,,,
Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml
Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”
“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”
“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.
“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.
“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed.
While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Phew...I sooo hope They really made it through the storm.....That was a very important chapter and I've to say that you ended it with a fuckhawt scene my dear.....
Gah, now She's in trouble....But in good trouble...What is He gonna choose for her punishment????
Oh and I love the little "sharpie payback"....But hers is definitely not heartbreaking :)
See you on thursday Xxx
Author's Response:
I'm sure he has something in mind for her and yes it was some payback but hers was just a regular pen and it definitly is not as heartwrenching ....
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
It was a beautiful chapter...Full of love, sensuality, tenderness and intimacy! I really loved it...
I think She experienced Sub-spaced seeing how emotionally overwhelmed She is....The way You described it really conveyed a feeling of calm, serenity AND of intense excitation...It was quite the experience for me too ;)
Edward was absolutely brilliant in this usual....He chose a scene exclusively focused on Bella and fulfilled all her needs after all...He's just perfect :)
Have a good weekend baking and making jam ;) Read you on monday Xxx
Author's Response:
She did..it was a first for her and Edward like any man who loves his woman took good care of her...thanks for reading, here is your teaser...
Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.
“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.
“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish
“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”
“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment
“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Yay!!! She won or at least He willingly caved!! Now They're REALLY even :D
I like very much how natural and perfect They're together....It's soo obvious that They're meant to be...It's fate!
I found the whole breakfast scene really funny and moving...The women and kids were very excited and it was very sweet!! Esme and Carlisle know how to be sneaky :) but They are also very talented to let people understand how precious and important They are to them!! I like that very very much!
And as to Officer Hawk, yes it's easier to figure out why He wanted to talk to Bella but it still doesn't explain his particularly cold and rude behaviour!! And now Edward knows that Bella has serious doubts about Heather so I hope He'll ask the PI He hired to investigate further!
And as usual Seth rocks....He's kind of the permanent link between their houses...Even if He's sometimes annoying, his behaviour reflects the multiple changes in their everyday life.....And He's very very cute so...
Have a nice weekend and see you on monday :)
Btw, I want him as my Dom too....Got any clue how I can manage that????
Author's Response:
Seth is like part of the family as a pet should be....yeah I want Edward too....oh well if you figure it out (how to get him) let me know....thanks for reading, I have this weeks teaser for you....lml
Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.
“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.
“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.
“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”
“My Officer Hawk?”
He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.
“I could have Charlie do it.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Hey there!! So first thing: I absolutely LOVE seeing Bella fall deeper into her submissive role and there is NEVER too much smut in your story...On the contrary, I think everything's very well balanced so don't listen to that kind of criticisms..They're not constructive AT ALL!!
So, as for the chapter, I'm a bit unhappy with Edward's mistake..I know He didn't want to make her wait and all but He did and it wasn't worthy of a devoted and attentive DOM and clearly not worthy of him!!! He knows about Bella's abandonment and self-esteem issues so She should always be in the forefront of his mind...Even if it's about a recipe for her, She shouldn't have had to wait alone, naked, unaware and feeling rejected!! Giving your submission is a GIFT that must be treasured....So yeah, I was not very happy with Edward but I think He's gonna redeem himself through an amazing usual :D
I also think that we're on something with that Heather gal....The women of the center all think She's a liar and have a bad feeling about her so....And the J of EJ could possibly be for James and not Junior...Okay maybe it's a bit far-fetched but I have a feeling that these two are in cahoots....
Anyway, I don't remember the name of the person who could have seen Edward entering the security code so I'm gonna go back a few chapters and start reading them again to find my answer...At least I hope!! But I have my doubts :P
So I liked the chapter (even if it was smut-free!) because it gathered a lot of different emotions, were they positive or negative!!! And I'd love to ride with Domward....Yep I'm a drooling mess, sorry can't help it ;)
Hope to read you on monday...Xoxo....Btw, the longer you'll write the happier I'll be...So don't rush, take your time, write tons of other amazing chapters and I'll be on cloud nine :)
Author's Response:
Edward was unhappy with his mistake and knew immediatly what her problem was and rectified it ... he's human and makes mistakes just like everyone else. As soon as he had her calm he went back into full Dom mode, because that is what she needed....Sorry to disappoint you, monday updates will be postponed for a few more weeks until I get back into my writing scheule...please bare with me...lml....
Thanks for reading and I have this weeks teaser for you.....
“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.
“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”
I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”
“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.
Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.
“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.
“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Oh Louise.....I absolutely adored your game!! It was such a great idea: mixing intelligence, sexiness and sexual talent was a definite recipe for success!!! It was perfect!
I'm so very very proud of Bella right now!! She's finally in the right mindset: her Master is her absolute priority but She manages to find a way to keep her wit and dignity intact while obeying her orders!! I admit it did scream of semantics but I'm still very proud ;) Jessica's a bitch anyway!!!
And Caius is definitely bad news, I don't like him one bit!! And I'm not very happy with Demetri entering the picture....They clearly don't need anymore people able to bring chaos into their lives!!! And I've still not solve the whole Mike/Jessica situation! They're apparently not in a D/s relationship, yet He signed her in....That's weird...Why would He do that, except if He's kind of forced to, if She has something against him...I don't know anything anymore!!! I've some HUGE difficulties to figure out who's on their side and who's not!! But you've been pretty good at clouding the issue so far so why stop now uh????
Anyway, concerning Edward's "gift" I'm tempted to say that He was surely pleased by the little scene Bella displayed with Rose and Jane!! It was certainly a lot hotter, sexier and arousing than the dull description She made up in her mind!!! Her total lack of reaction (apart from her blush at the end) was really surprising by the way!! As you mentionned it in your A/N, we know She's had a great interest for exhibitionism since the beginning, so her absence of excitement despite the obvious sexual nature of her performance was very peculiar!!!
So, as you probably figured it out, I really liked the chapter...It was very fulfilling and seeing Bella let her submissive side grow and blossom is a beautiful thing to witness...
As usual I can't wait for monday because it'll be EPOV and as you already know it...I'm a Domward junkie and I never have enough :D Xoxo Cecile
Author's Response:
With Mike?Jess it's possible that he was forced to sign her in or maybe he wanted something from her....ok ... she does have an exhibitionist fantasy howeverwhat has she been trained to do....obey, stay quiet, control herself and remain still....((smiles)) ...what did she do?....yes - she did exactly as she had been trained to do....the dull discribtion is only what she knew was happening. She didn't know what Rose was doing ....thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml
“Are we going to talk about it?”
“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”
I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.
“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”
Was I mad at her?
I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”
Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”
The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.
My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Ok so it wasn't exactly what I had in mind but that was pretty damn good!!!
I really liked the plans He had for her at the restaurant, that was very hot but at the same time extremely intimate....That was just thrilling ;) Damn, this bullet and those ropes+knots....I'm still squirming with her :D
However, I think I empathize way too much with Bella because each time Edward's disappointed because of a mistake, omission or misbehaviour, I feel her pain and shame....Yeah, maybe I should do something about it...Like reminding myself that this is JUST a story!!!!
Anyway, I'm not totally convinced with Edward's explanation about making Bella sleep on the floor because I'd NEVER make my child sleep on the floor!!! However, seeing He wanted to keep her at arms' lenght and was afraid of her "falling out of bed", I'd have her sleep beside me restrained and secured to the headboard!! ;)
I think that even though it wasn't full puppy play (far from it I know!), somehow Bella's first reaction to the collar and leash unfortunately affected Edward's real intentions... I like the whole significance and symbolism of the leash, but seeing that I'm NOT into animal play, I'm kind of torn.....
But that's not really important because Bella's making indeniable progress and I can't be happier about that!! She's become stronger, more confident and found some peace...Great job uh???
So, I really hope They'll explore further this whole playing in public thing because I really really liked it :)
Have a nice weekend and read you on monday XXXX
Author's Response:
Edward only said that he was "afraid of her falling out of bed" to emphise the idea that she was forcing him to treat her like a child. It was always his intention to have her sleep on a mat on the floor. It was her punishment...However I will tell you that a Dom will have his sub sleep on a mat at the bottom of his bed ,,,just because..I don;t think that anything would affect his decisions, including her reactions. He might have went slower, but I can assure you that he used the leash exactly as he had planned to. You will also see her reaction to the leash in the next chapter ....
Thanks for reading ... I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Yeeee OMG OMG OMG.....I can't wait!! I think tomorrow won't come soon enough!!! Damn, this will be their first time in public with Bella in full sub mode!! This is going to be glorious! I'm sure They're gonna be perfect and manage to forget all the heavy stuff thanks to an amazing time together!
That first day was very quiet and fun, They so deserved some time away from all the madness that's become their life lately....Some time to enjoy themselves and themselves only before reality comes back in the not so very appealing form of Forks!! I kinda dread that moment so I wish their playtime will sweep them off their feet and fill them with enough pleasure, love and relaxation to endure what will come next!
I like how Edward never backs down when it comes to dealing with Bella and her insecurities!! She's amazingly strong when She has to face outside threats but nearly completely hopeless when She is her own demon!!
Anyway, I really can't wait because the last 3 words just had me mewling and panting and wishing sooo bad I were in Bella's place...Yeah, sigh....Won't ever happen I know, gotta see reason but reality is sometimes very hard to accept ;)
XOXO Cecile
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Yes, I agree..This chapter definitely offered Edward a new vision and understanding of some people more or less close to him!
I'm very intrigued by his idea of topping from the bottom...I mean it'd be the best solution for Bella to be able to experience a scene as a Domme but I'm far less sure about Edward's ability to submit...Even if He's still controlling....I don't really see him sucking dildos or wearing nipple clamps or a cock ring ;) However, I'm sure He'll be excellent at worshipping her.....Well, all I have to do is wait and see what you'll decide, because no matter what.....YOU're the boss :D
I'm very glad that They finally broached the subject of money. While Them being both very wealthy, They'd so far never really talked about their assets and I didn't really like to see that subject left aside because let's be realistic, it was heavily looming in the background with all the rumors going on at the club!!
As a hopeless romantic, I was very very happy with the "I'm-not-really-looking-but-I-know-this-is-not-the-type-of-ring-I-want" episode...Yeah we didn't have sew but COME ON.....He's planning their future...This is SOOO much better, because without any future, there's no sex ;)
Anyway, I really liked this chapter, it left a breath of freshness and intimacy that I greatly appreciated!! Have a good week end and read you on Monday. XOXO Cecile
Author's Response:
Ummm... if he does top from the bottom ((IF)) it will be something that they have a discussion about before hand. Just as Bella has limits, so will Edward...and actually he will still be in complete control. Money has to come up in given relationship and if they are moving forward then it had to happen. Thank you for leaving a review and I sent you a seperate e-mail...lml
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: photos
Oh...I love who you chose for your characters...Really fitting!! So glad you kept Rob and Ashley (always been my favourites) AND I absolutely adore your Jasper and your Bella!!! How do you picture Esme and Carlisle??? And Aro and Jane, because honestly the actors of the movie clearly don't match with your descritptions ;)
And your first picture is really beautiful :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: B & E answer your questions
Good interview....It made me laugh even if I kinda cringed at some of the questions but I can understand why people react badly to punishment and stuff , so it's good that you clarified the situation ;) Great job !
Author's Response:
Oh my ...some people were really upset ...thanks for reading ..lml
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
OMG I just can't wait for your next update because this story is just unbelievable!! I soooo love this dominating, possessive and passionate personality you gave our favourite vampires...Damn, this is so amazing and sexy!! Every chapter just keeps feeding my submissive nature and I can't help but ask for more ;)
I hope Edward will come back soon, very very soon, like right now because Bella seems to be pretty badly injured....
Anyway, I really loved all the differences you introduced to your story: they made it exciting, captivating, very pleasant, smouldering and extraordinarly addictive!!
That's brilliant and I really really want more :D
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much!!! =) Your comment made my day!
Thank you. I'm happy that you like the vampire world and the vamps in it. Edward will become more dominant, possessive, passionate as time goes by.=)
I will post more as soon as possible.
Thanks again. I appreciate your comment =)
xo
~Jells
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Hello Jells....I'm perfectly aware that as a student school is (as it should be) our first priority, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't over the top happy when I saw your last chapter had been posted!!!
It was beyond great..I'd say it was worth the wait, but I'm afraid it'll jinx the chance to have early updates :D Anyway, I loved how even more possessive and protective Edward's become...Damn, I must have a problem but I find his new behaviour to be awfully exciting and tantalizing....The period sex at the end was beyond erotic, so much unbridled passion and need....I couldn't stop squirming ;)
I'm usually not a violent person (far from it!) but I've to say that I'm particularly happy that Mike isn't a problem anymore..The damages He caused were far too important for him to stay alive and remain a permanent threat!!
I loved the whole scene at the blood donation center, whether it was Emmett and Annabel or Edward ripping a new a**hole to the supervisor or Carlisle taking the 'nasty nurse' down a peg or two....I loved how confident and proud Bella felt.
You mentionned Aro will be present in the next chapter and I've to say I'm a bit worried about how the "meeting" is going to go....With Edward in such a primal state...I'm afraid things won't be very pretty!
Anyway, I hope you'll be able to update soon because it's a delight to read your story....XOXO
Author's Response:
Hiya PINKSAPPHYR!
Thank you so much! I'm totally happy that you enjoyed the chapter. It means a lot to me. =)
Aww I'm glad that you enjoyed the period scene. I was nervous to post it. But i figured what the heck, he's a vamp and she's bleeding. lol
Yeah, Mike had to go. Even if let's say he was locked up in jail...he's a vamp, they live for eternity so he would have been a problem when he got out. And you're totally right, Mike caused too much damage. And Edward was doing what any male vamp would do, get rid of thr threat permanently to ensure the safety of his mate, no matter the consequences.
Thank you, glad you liked the donation center scene.
And yeah, I'm worried about the meeting to with Aro too. I have two versions of that meeting in my mind...one not so nice...and the other...well. lol
Thanks again. Your comment made my day!
I hope I can keep you entertained. I'll try my very best to post more asap.
XxOo
Jells
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105125
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!
Well, well, well...That's a nice story you have there!! Both sweet and titillating ;)
I've always pictured Edward as a Dominant and Bella as a Sub so it's no surprise there...however, I kind of like how you organised your plot....Disclosing clues little by little undoubtedly highten the interest of the story.
I also like the fact that they were both virgins....Even if it's kind of hard to believe considering that learning control is one of the most important part of the training! Anyway, I find that very sweet!!
I think Bella was trained by Leah (the Domme) and Jake...Perhaps I'm all wrong but She did mention it would have been like "sleeping with her brother", so I based my assumptions on that comment!
I hope Esme and Rosalie will soon come to their senses and realize that being in a D/s relationship requires complete trust and devotion on each part and that comparing it to some kind of domestic abuse is a real blasphemy!
Anyway, I hope you'll update soon because I want to know what She was dreaming about......;)
Author's Response:
sorry for my delay in responding. I am thrilled you like my story. Esme just needs one more thing to happen before she sees the differance. hope you like the new chapter! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!
Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards. See banners below.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Yellow Carnations & First Class
Oh yeah, I can't wait for her to land!!! This surprise will be phenomenal, I'm sure of it...Seeing the underlying feeling of concern and worry for Bella's safety, I'm 100% convinced that having her beside him will be the best surprise for Edward!!!
James is definitely creepy and He's probably not innocent in this situation!! And you gotta love such a protective and Mama-Bear Rose...I know I do!!
I can't wait for the next chapter....I hope you had a great Christmas
Happy Holidays Xxx
Author's Response:
Hope you had a good Christmas also. Thanks very much for the review. I'm so glad you like the story. i'm posting a sneak peak of the next chapter on V&V's facebook page tonight. The link is on my profile page.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances
Ohhh I love drunk Bella!! She's hilarious but She has to stop feeling so unsure of herself....Yeah I know easier said than done but still!! She can't keep always shutting down everybody when She's embarassed or feeling ashamed!! It just makes Edward freak out...And that's NOT good!
Anyway, this was a very funny chapter..I love to see them so carefree! Can't wait for your next update!!
Author's Response:
old habits die hard for Bella. She has more self-confidence than before...but still slips. Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises
Oh God.....This chapter was absolutely hilarious....I'm clearly not gonna forgive Bella for her overcaffeinated babbling....That was way too funny to be offensive...I was laughing so hard that I almost chocked myself to death with my Diet Coke....And my poor computer screen got an awfully sticky shower!!!
Edward's reaction was also very amusing: yelling at first, then a pretty long freeze-frame and finally a very passionate come back to reality....So sweet and perfect!! He's so proud of her and completely head over heels for her that it makes want the EPOV even more ;)
The episode with Alec was uproarious: while Bella was completely mortified, She gave him hell and kinda made him fear her....That was irresistible!!
And She found out that Edward stole her Little Mermaid underwear...Wonder what She's going to do with that precious little tidbit...Hope She'll tease him merciless ;)
I wish you a Happy New Year and Happy Holidays Xoxo
Author's Response:
Rats...I forgot to put the *warning label* on that chapter...the 'don't read this while operating heavy machinery, drinking, eating, or at work or school where you will get busted for laughing out loud, oh and don't hold an infant while reading either' heehee. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
I absolutely LOVED Bella's inner discussion about Edward's peen..Damn, that was hilarious!!
I'm happy to see that despite what He said, Edward's actually getting involved into the wedding's preparations and has probably saved the day with his very clever proposition!!
I also have to agree with Tara and Joanna, She definitely has more will power than I do!!!!
And what about the psycho's brother??? I thought the flowers were from that deranged James guy.....Hum.....Mystery mystery!!
And while I'd never treat death like trivial matter.....The end of the unlucky Ms. Chance was particularly ironic and well-found....
Read you soon...;)
Author's Response:
as i've said before..it's fun playing God with this fic. Planning the end of Ms. Chance was a particularly rewarding experience. yeah baby! lol. Hey it's all make-believe. i had a great time writing the entire chapter actually. Thanks very much!
EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.
Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Valentines For The Enamored
So cute to see how utterly in love Edward is with Bella....His first reaction when a situation occurs is always for her, trying to make things easier for her, or to spend as much time as possible near her...It's so romantic and absolutely perfect!!
This guy is just to die for: Endearing, compassionate, crazy in love, attentive, entirely devoted and fiercely protective...He's just...Gah!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter of V&V, so if you can send me a little teaser, you'd make my day....Xoxo
Author's Response:
i'm posting the teaser on V&V's facebook ..probably tonight. Look for the link on my profile page. ..I agree with everything you said about Edward. He's just the perfect man. Thanks very much!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause
Sweet Baby Jeebus....I'm having such a good time reading this story!!!! As usual I'm partial to the EPOV....I love being in his mind too much, I can't help it...It's an addiction ;)
I think things so far are really brilliant; I love ALL your characters : Emmett's an adorable doofus, Rose's a fierce goddess, Alice's just exceptional, Jasper's naturally charming and effectively subdued, Esme & Carlisle are as sweet and caring as ever, Charlie's absolutely amazing, Edward's a completely smitten SexyMovieStar and Bella's one hell of a kitten Tiger!! And all the others are either fun, nice, protective or completely crazy.....I love all this variety ;)
You did a really great job with all the drama.....I like a bit of angst to keep things interesting and make them more 'real' but you didn't go overboard with it and it wasn't too painful to read, which I appreciate....
Can't wait to read your next update of V&V :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I like writing from his pov...it's very diff from Bella's. I appreciate your review very much, glad you like the stories.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Prelude To Aspen
Aaaaaa...He's such a hopeless romantic...That's very endearing and hot as hell...At least in my book...He's just my perfect guy!!
As I told you before, I really love seeing the world through his beautiful eyes ;)
These chapters (thanks for the extended gift btw!) were great and I can't wait for the new update of V&V....
Take care :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! i like writing from his pov also.
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual
Don't worry, I ALWAYS love your EPOV!! It's just really special to be inside his mind and see his realtionship through his eyes!!
For example, I was absolutely not aware that He was that embarrassed about Bella's behaviour during the lunch with Johnny!! One should say that She wasn't very lucid that time so that probably explains why She didn't notice ;)
Anyway, He's still as charming, endearing and heart-stopping romantic as ever!! And totally in love with his Bella....Sigh, He's kind of perfect, even with his faults!
I can't wait for the next update of V&V because things are becoming even more fabulous now....They're engaged and got to 2nd base!!! Guys this is EPIC!!!! So that's why I'm a bit (ok a lot) impatient for your next chapter!! Have a nice weekend Xxx
Author's Response:
you too. thanks so much, that was a great review! made me happy!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Give And Take
Great chapter...It's really always a pleasure to see all these events again but through his eyes.....His mind is such a nice place to be ;)
And He's sooo irresistible when He's all cute and ashamed!!! Gotta love Carlisle for being blunt and getting things straight...He was firm but so fatherly...*Sigh* Those Cullen men are just too much for our overexcited selves ;)
And I think Dorothy's awesome....She's hilarious and sweet.....Wish all the elderly could be that fun and adorable....:D
Can't wait for the update of V&V.....Xxxx
Author's Response:
my favorite part of this chap is the talk with Carlisle. The next V&V will be soon . Thanks very much!
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389602
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Hi there!! I've to say that even though there're only 2 chapters so far. I'm kinda already hooked!!
I'm a sucker for that kind of story and I think you're onto something good!
I'm glad you chose a hardass genius AND Submissive Bella....It should lead to some delightfully interesting stuff ;)
And They're both secretly in love with each other...Damn, that's just the perfect material to feed my endless and ever unfulfilled hopeless romantic nature :D
Hope you'll be able to update regularly.....See ya xxx
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
Mmmm....I really love being inside Edward's mind!! I find him absolutely fascinating and almost perfect. I love how sensitive and tenderhearted He really is, even though He apparently doesn't show it very often. His adoration for Bella is at the same time heart-breaking and totally swoon-worthy. It's kind of weird to see him so unsure and so shy when Bella's concerned...I mean, it's been 9 years!!! He could have said something...I don't know, at least tried to know how She felt via his sister...She's the only one for him and She doesn't even know He noticed her....What a waste!!
Anyway, I don't really like him seeing himself as a monster..Yeah He likes kinky sex, but He's by no means a bad guy or whatever???He has to stop thinking like that pronto!! I think going to Switzerland will be good for him....As will dumping Tanya....;)
By the way, I bet He safeworded...Didn't want to have to take care of her ass afterwards ;) ;)
Update soon, I'm really hooked Xoxo
Author's Response:
lol... we´ll see... Remember Bella is his unattainable.. or so he thinks... for him it´s different than just another quickie.. he wants forever with her....Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: For the Love of Domination
Yay!!! Thanks soooo much for the early update..That's sooo sweet!!
How I love your Alice.....Geez, seeing her all "I'm gonna fuck Jacob Black's future like no one else" sent chills dow, my spine...She can be pretty terrifying BUT She's absolutely perfect in her "big sister" role: always chirpy, strong, involved, damn smart and freakingly intuitive....She just saved Bella's life and will actively work to make her awesome prediction come true!!!! Like I said I love her!!!
This chapter was really great and I can't help but be greedy for more..yeah, it's THAT good (even if we don't have hot schmexin' yet!!) ;) Xoxo
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Fantastic chapter!!! I loved being inside little Pixie's mind: She's so bubbly, fiercely loyal and protective, entirely dedicated to the ones She loves...It's a pleasure to follow her crazy and convoluted but so funny rambling!!! It was a very important choice to write in her POV because She's after all the one that'll make everything possible, thanks to her fabulous meddling personality ;)
I think the big revelation went pretty well...Okay Bella freaked out a little bit but as we know it, it wasn't because of the playroom, more about all the inanity She's feeding herself!!!
Anyway, I'm kinda sad She won't be spending the holidays with the Cullens, but I understand her need to be with Charlie and to look on the bright side of things, Edward won't feel too left out if She's not there!!!
Hope you'll be able to update very soon because it's such a joy to read your words :) Xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Youhou....They're gonna talk and play on the phone without knowing who is who...But I've got a little question here missy....Why won't They recognize each other's voice (I assume They won't seeing your prologue!)...I mean yeah it's been years since They saw each other but They're madly in love so They should know his/her voice no???
Anyway, I'm sooo happy you chose Rose to train Bella...We're in for some hot and naughty play sessions :D Can't wait for that!!!
I love the gift Edward chose for Bella but (sorry if this is a stupid question but I wanna know!) what does BEB stand for???
Your EPOV are really always the best, and his dream freaking hot....I sooo love being in his mind ;)
Hope you'll update soon Xxx
Author's Response:
Well I don't want to give anything away, but I has been about 5 years since they've communicated with each other, alot can change in that amount of time. That said, we'll just have to wait and see how that telephone call goes! Lol! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Well, I'm very happy with how close Bella and Seth now are! He's definitely a cutie and Bella didn't have any chance against him...She was meant to be wrapped round his little finger...And that was a true pleasure to see them so close-knit and happy to be together....And then the Wicked Witch of the West aka The Prego Bitch Leah had to come back and screw everything up!!!! And to crown it all, Jackass is the father of the Bitch's baby.....Isn't that wonderful uh???
Anyway, I think Bella behaved brilliantly, Charlie was an awesome Dad, Seth is just adorable, Sue has to remove her blinkers asap when her daughter is concerned, the 2 morons can go f*** themselves and Mojo rocks!!
Now I can't wait for our much wanted and needed Sir's POV! Happy New Year Krazi :)
Author's Response:
Lol! Glad that you liked it! Yeah, you can´t help but love little Seth! You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
Yay!! That was a great chapter...I really loved how you gradually increase the sexual tension so that I'm now begging you to let Edward grant her release soon because damn.....Waiting is killking me :D
I love that Bella is responding so well to her new lifestyle!! She's definitely a natural sub and I just can't wait for saturday because I want to see the chemistry between them work its magic....However I'm not sure who will recognize the other first and how They're going to react to reality!!
I absolutely love Alice: She's really a Godsend here, even though She has some difficulties to rein in her natural giddiness and excitement!!! She's at the same time the best matchmaker EVER, an amazing BFF and a supportive mentor for Bella...I really hope E&B will both remember how great She is when They'll realize her "manipulation" :P
I didn't really like the "I was finally getting over my feelings for Edward"...WTF?? I'm not sure I'm very happy with that comment..Sure She doesn't know that He's Sir but I'm a bit disappointed that She's willing to let him go for a relationship that's -for what She knows- only based on sex! Sure it's no fun to harbour an "unrequited" crush but I don't know..This little comment made me sad!
Anyway, I can't wait for chapter 10 because I off course read the teaser on your blog and let me tell you that the wait's gonna be very very hard..............:P Hope to read you VERY soon Xoxo ;)
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
OH.MY.GAWD!!!!!!!! That was insanely INTENSE!!! I made the disastrous decision to read this chapter in the bus and I'm quite sure people must have thought I was plagued with the St Vitus's dance disease by the way I was constently squirming in my seat.....Come on, as if you could have kept your body's reactions to that freakingly amazing scene under control.....Yep that's what I thought, you just can't ;)
So as you've probably already guessed, I loved this chapter....(Even if I was left high and dry at the end due to my situation :D) It was very well written and the feelings coming from Edward were extremely powerful and exhilarating...Therefore enabling the reader (aka ME) to experience this scene with the right frame of mind, the same desires and expectations BUT ALSO the same frustrations......Damn, I thought I was going to kill Alice myself at the elevator and maybe you too a little bit (sorry, unfulfilled needs can force people to do crazy things...) when Edward didn't analyse his reaction to Bella biting her lip any further......Unghh...That was HIGHLY frustrating!!!
Anyway, it was very good and I soooo wish I could have taken Bella's place but eh!! That's was dreams are for, right???? Can't wait for your next update and nex pics and teaser on your blog...XOXO
In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.
Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Brilliant story.....So gripping and well written!! The characters are really interesting and perfectly imagined....A true gem! Thanks for sharing it :) xo Cecile
“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 23
Ooohhh.... I can't wait for you to update... This is such a great story! There are quite a few BDSM stories out there, some very good, some terrible, and yours is simply delightful! I love the theme and your writing style... I love the depth and complexity of your characters and the accuracy of the plot! You portray them as real humans, making mistakes and all, and you always do your best to highlight the psychological aspect of their relationship. It's a real treat so thank you!
I don't know how many chapters you're planning on writing, but you could go on forever like that... There are still soooooo many things to discover and soooo many people to meet *hint hint * :D Rest assured that I'll be along for the ride!!!
And I love the Q&A at the end, so entertaining ;)
I hope to hear from you very soon.... Happy New Year, X Cecile