Reviews by missmoon
Come Undone by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She took a risk that didn't pay off, and it left her with nothing. How do you tell someone to come home when you're the one who sent them away in the first place? How does Bella break the news to her ex-husband that the baby she's carrying is his?


 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12753 Read Count: 3304
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: missmoon Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wish it would work like this in real life. You really did a great job writing this story. I'm going to check out your other fics :)



Author's Response:

I wish it would work like this too; I think that's why I love fic so much - I can make it happen! LOL 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! 

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: missmoon Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've been reading this story since the beginning but I'm not really a big reviewer... shame on me. But I think you deserve more feedback because you're a great writer and I always look forward to the next chapter. 

I enjoyed reading the first chapters about Bella and Edward because honestly, they are so sweet together. The way Edward adores her.. Bella is a lucky girl. 

Now I can't wait to read what happened to Bella. Is she a vampire too? Did she forget about Edward? When are they going to meet? 

I hope you'll update soon!

xx 

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: missmoon Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : Shame

I like the first chapter :) And i have no clue in what kind of relationship they both are... looking forward to read more!

 

 




Author's Response:

Thank you! A bit of an unconventional beginning, I suppose, but Edward is anything but ordinary.

Reviewer: missmoon Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior

I stumbled upon your ff, read it and it's already one of my favorites!

I really want to know how Bella and Edward know each other and why he thinks that he can't have her... and I'm not sure whether I missed it or not but how old are they in your story?

Well I'm looking forward to the next chapter, can't wait :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You'll get a lot (but not all) of answers in chapter three, and I hope you don't find them to be a disappointment. As far as their ages, I'll tell you that Isabella is 23. Edward is a bit... older. You'll see.

Dying To Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

FBI coroner Masen, tries to find evidence to stop the Necromance Killer. With the newest ‘victim’ really alive, will her information help him catch the killer? One-shot for Halloween. Joint collaboration of: Weekitty and TeamAllTwilight.

The wonderful banner is SoapyMayhem Fanfiction.  You can find her on facebook under that name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16554 Read Count: 3369
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: missmoon Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot For Halloween: Dying To Love

What a great one shot! But Edward probably won't be able to enter a morgue ever again. That part was really scary... happy halloween for you guys! xx



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and I are very proud of this oneshot and how it turned out.  Watch for our up coming multi chapter story that will start within the next couple of months.  We just started out outline for it and it should be ready to roll by the first of the year.  we will also be posting a revised and beta'd copy of Nikkys story I am helping her with called Year of Hell.  I have written two stories for the fan fiction called My Sisters 3 and A Sub Search both are completed and on here as well under the author name of TeamAllTwilight.  I am also co-writing another story with another author called Lipstick Kisses and Inked Virtuoso, the author name for that story is JessAndTAT.  Thank you from the bottom of our hearts, Kasi (& Nikky).

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263192
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: missmoon Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches

I love the story :) I can't wait for Edward to learn about Bella's real age.. and I'm looking forward to the Halloween chapter :)



Author's Response:

Well we knew that you all would have some sharp feelings about the behavior of Alice, Rose, and Siobhan.  We were excited to see that a few of you mentioned the seemingly difference in Esme and her attitude.   Have faith in Jasper and Emmett, they will be having words with their wives.  As for Siobhan, I think she has worn out her welcome around the table completely.  So what did you all think of Charlotte?  She will be important in the coming story.  A lot of you are guessing that the witch in the next chapter will be Sue Swan, but I assure you that it is not her.  There is a lot of super exciting chapters coming soon.  We want to tell you all just how much you reading and reviewing our story means to us.  This is the first story for either of us, that is getting this kind of attention.  It is completely amazing to us that we are averaging over 100 reviews per chapter.  We want to be very clear in saying that each and every review you have left for us mean so very much to us.  Thank you for taking time to not only read our story, but to also leave us your thoughts.   Thanks, Nikky (&Kasi)

Teaser for Chapter 14: Subject to changes, during Beta Process.

She looks perplexed. “Edward, aren’t you expected to be at the college; I mean, I thought you have classes today?”

I chuckle.  “Yes I do, but I got this morning off.  I am using some of my vacation time.  I would like to take you to see Charlotte today.  She is the one that sells the girl stuff; remember I told you I would take you to see her?  She was sitting on my right at the ball.”  Bella nods her head at my explanation, but I see she is biting her lip again.  I know she is worried, so I do my best to reassure her.  “I will be there with you. I am not going to leave you, I promise.”  Bella nods again as we begin walking to the bus stop.  We take the bus and arrive at Charlotte’s store a little after half past nine.  Charlotte had texted me earlier and asked that we enter through the back entrance.  She was going to leave it open for us, as she had the front locked up so that no unexpected customers arrived.  I hold onto Bella’s hand as we walk thought the door. 

Charlotte sees us as soon as we enter; she smiles and makes her way toward us.  “Edward, Isabella; come on in.  I already have a bunch of stuff laid out for you.  I have done this for a few years, so I am pretty good at guessing sizes.”  I rub Bella’s hand and smile at Charlotte’s obvious excitement.  “Isabella, I am so sorry, sometimes my mouth runs away with me.  It’s very nice to meet you.  My name is Charlotte, but you can call me Chas; all my friends do.”  Charlotte gives Bella a big smile, but keeps her distance from Bella for now.

“It is nice to meet you. I am Isabella, but you can call me Bella.”  I squeeze Bella’s hand, trying hard not to jump for joy.  This is the first time that she has openly asked someone, apart from me, to call her Bella. 

Charlotte smiles at her.  “Well, I was thinking that this stuff would be perfect for you.”  I look at the collection of bras and panties that Charlotte has picked out.  They are mostly plain white ones.  There are some with lace, but none them are overly sexy like the stuff that was in Alice’s bag.  I am both relieved and somewhat disappointed about that.  “Come with me, Bella, so I can take your measurements to ensure that we will have the correct size.” 

Bella looks at me and I nod my head at her.  “Bella…” I clasp her face between my hands.  “Baby, I’ll be right here. I will not leave you.” Bella whispers a low thank you, and strokes my hand before giving it a squeeze at the end.  I watch as she walks away with Charlotte.